this is an English sonnet I had to write for my English class and I need to know if it is good 또는 not before I 제출하기 it, thank you. also the rhyme scheme is ababcdcdefefgg
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My dear 사랑 당신 once were a shining ray.
In my eyes 당신 meant the whole world to me.
Now everything about 당신 is a shade of gray.
Like your beauty, your emotions, and your 사랑 is what I see.
However we must part onto our new paths.
Because our 사랑 is coming to its new close.
색깔 were a beauty but now gray spreads its wrath.
I would 사랑 to feel again but now it’s a ghost.
Our 사랑 has left this earth for old times’ sake.
But when our 사랑 left it took 당신 along too.
Sadly it left me with all this heartache.
Dying 사랑 was something I wish I had clues to
If someone told me 사랑 would never be easy
I would have chosen another path that’s breezy
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My dear 사랑 당신 once were a shining ray.
In my eyes 당신 meant the whole world to me.
Now everything about 당신 is a shade of gray.
Like your beauty, your emotions, and your 사랑 is what I see.
However we must part onto our new paths.
Because our 사랑 is coming to its new close.
색깔 were a beauty but now gray spreads its wrath.
I would 사랑 to feel again but now it’s a ghost.
Our 사랑 has left this earth for old times’ sake.
But when our 사랑 left it took 당신 along too.
Sadly it left me with all this heartache.
Dying 사랑 was something I wish I had clues to
If someone told me 사랑 would never be easy
I would have chosen another path that’s breezy
of your destiny
are dreams
that still shine
in the haze
of your memories.
These dreams
are so distant
and invisible,
though your eyes
still stare into them.
Everything is so foggy
like your thoughts.
당신 sit alone
trying to reach that
small piece of happiness,
trying to find
a purpose of life.
Dreams that still
live in you
are smothered by
the cruel reality.
But, they still live
inside,
feeding the memories,
reviving the soul.
Dreams,
even if they are
condemned to oblivion,
live within your heart,
in hope,
in remembrance,
shining in
the haze of
your memories.
Everyone was 글쓰기 it down on their calenders as alerts of it popped up on the news, internet, and in big bold letters, on a newspaper! The time has come for it to be known to mankind and liked! The movie, Brenda and Luci's Night, was premiering on that weekend, the 25th of November.Everyone wanted to see it! There had been commercials of it since August, and the stars had been anxious. Speaking of the "stars" Whose names were Hillisia Jones, and Ponya Kricketiz. They were bff's since the kindergarten, and now they were in 7th grade. They auditioned for the movie without the other knowing! They were astounded when they learned they were auditioning for the same movie. They were mad, but when Ponya got the letter she was Brenda, and Hillisia was Luci, they were overjoyed, and began screaming with cheers! Now they were in New York being filmed for the movie... wait for more!
