this is an English sonnet I had to write for my English class and I need to know if it is good 또는 not before I 제출하기 it, thank you. also the rhyme scheme is ababcdcdefefgg
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My dear 사랑 당신 once were a shining ray.
In my eyes 당신 meant the whole world to me.
Now everything about 당신 is a shade of gray.
Like your beauty, your emotions, and your 사랑 is what I see.
However we must part onto our new paths.
Because our 사랑 is coming to its new close.
색깔 were a beauty but now gray spreads its wrath.
I would 사랑 to feel again but now it’s a ghost.
Our 사랑 has left this earth for old times’ sake.
But when our 사랑 left it took 당신 along too.
Sadly it left me with all this heartache.
Dying 사랑 was something I wish I had clues to
If someone told me 사랑 would never be easy
I would have chosen another path that’s breezy
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My dear 사랑 당신 once were a shining ray.
In my eyes 당신 meant the whole world to me.
Now everything about 당신 is a shade of gray.
Like your beauty, your emotions, and your 사랑 is what I see.
However we must part onto our new paths.
Because our 사랑 is coming to its new close.
색깔 were a beauty but now gray spreads its wrath.
I would 사랑 to feel again but now it’s a ghost.
Our 사랑 has left this earth for old times’ sake.
But when our 사랑 left it took 당신 along too.
Sadly it left me with all this heartache.
Dying 사랑 was something I wish I had clues to
If someone told me 사랑 would never be easy
I would have chosen another path that’s breezy
Bullets fly through the air at a man behind a car. He rolls from the car to an alley avoiding the gun 불, 화재 and makes a run for a motorcycle on the other side. Once getting there he pulls a .44 out of a saddle bag on the side and takes off as fast as it can go. No sooner than he hit the throttle the force was on him once again with heavy 불, 화재 whizzing past his head. With them picking up speed he starts avoiding the incoming traffic hoping they continue to miss. He pulls the .44 from the 권총, 홀스터, 권총 집 and fires a few shots back. He turns back and holsters the gun and tries to stay ahead. After a few 더 많이 blocks a 순양함, 크루저 gets beside him and shoots his back tire. The bike loses control and as he tries to turn it flings him off into the side of a parked car. With some broken ribs and a banged up leg and tries to run but hits the ground as an officer tackles him.
Well,he walked up to me and he asked me if I wanted to dance.
He looked kind of nice so I said I might take a chance.
When he danced he held me tight
And when he walked me 집 that night
All the stars were shining bright
And then he kissed me.
Each time I saw him I couldn't wait to see him again
I wanted to let him know that he was 더 많이 than a friend
I didn't know just what to do
So I whispered " I 사랑 you"
And he said that he loved me too
And then he kissed me.
He kissed me in a way that I've never been kissed before,
he kissed me in a way that I wanna be kissed forever more.
I knew that he was mine so I gave him all the 사랑 that I had
And one 일 he took me 집 to meet his mum and his dad
Then he asked me to be his bride
And always be right 의해 his side
I felt so happy I almost cried
And then he kissed me.
He looked kind of nice so I said I might take a chance.
When he danced he held me tight
And when he walked me 집 that night
All the stars were shining bright
And then he kissed me.
Each time I saw him I couldn't wait to see him again
I wanted to let him know that he was 더 많이 than a friend
I didn't know just what to do
So I whispered " I 사랑 you"
And he said that he loved me too
And then he kissed me.
He kissed me in a way that I've never been kissed before,
he kissed me in a way that I wanna be kissed forever more.
I knew that he was mine so I gave him all the 사랑 that I had
And one 일 he took me 집 to meet his mum and his dad
Then he asked me to be his bride
And always be right 의해 his side
I felt so happy I almost cried
And then he kissed me.
Home of the freely and Justified
Sleep was improbable
Emerging from my bed
Like a delicate butterfly
Raindrops pouring on my smooth, darkened window.
Pondering miraculous thoughts
About being a teen in America
Freedom to express myself as an individual
I want to relinquish my profound story
Being a teenager with freedom is
Hopeful
Rewarding
Honorable
Desirable
The past is behind me, the future is just beyond my grasp
Learning to be flawless through life's experiences
Having the pleasure to persue my ambitious talent
Being a teen in America simply is my stepping
stone to future greatness.
