this is an English sonnet I had to write for my English class and I need to know if it is good 또는 not before I 제출하기 it, thank you. also the rhyme scheme is ababcdcdefefgg
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My dear 사랑 당신 once were a shining ray.
In my eyes 당신 meant the whole world to me.
Now everything about 당신 is a shade of gray.
Like your beauty, your emotions, and your 사랑 is what I see.
However we must part onto our new paths.
Because our 사랑 is coming to its new close.
색깔 were a beauty but now gray spreads its wrath.
I would 사랑 to feel again but now it’s a ghost.
Our 사랑 has left this earth for old times’ sake.
But when our 사랑 left it took 당신 along too.
Sadly it left me with all this heartache.
Dying 사랑 was something I wish I had clues to
If someone told me 사랑 would never be easy
I would have chosen another path that’s breezy
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My dear 사랑 당신 once were a shining ray.
In my eyes 당신 meant the whole world to me.
Now everything about 당신 is a shade of gray.
Like your beauty, your emotions, and your 사랑 is what I see.
However we must part onto our new paths.
Because our 사랑 is coming to its new close.
색깔 were a beauty but now gray spreads its wrath.
I would 사랑 to feel again but now it’s a ghost.
Our 사랑 has left this earth for old times’ sake.
But when our 사랑 left it took 당신 along too.
Sadly it left me with all this heartache.
Dying 사랑 was something I wish I had clues to
If someone told me 사랑 would never be easy
I would have chosen another path that’s breezy
We decided to camp out 의해 a near forest with a small waterfall 의해 it. My burnt hair from the 불, 화재 was irritating me so I decided to wash my hair in the waterfall. The water was cold, but I didn't care. Bruno felt my hair. I smiled warmly. I said like I wasn't a helper " So, where are your parents?' He said " Well, after I was born, a witch 스톨, 훔친 my mother, killed her, and I have no dad. So I'm an orphan" I thought ' I wish he could tell, he wouldn't have to do this, he wouldn't have to tell me bad mermories.' " I 사랑 you." said Bruno. " I 사랑 a person for a person." 'Well, I'm not a person. Im a helper! Why can't 당신 tell? Im a helper! I 사랑 a person for a person too! But you're not a person! But I 사랑 you!'Bruno said he would go out to the forest to get get some food. After my hair was washed, I sat down. Why can't he tell I'm a helper? But then, I heard a scream in the woods. I could tell who it was.... Bruno.
this is a heads-up on a story im writing. its about this kid in highschool wh ogoes into this haunted house,then,she turns into a vampire,slowy,and people begin to notice. its awesome.
heres the charecters.
vanessa:vampire girl.
duncan:vampiers girls brother
kylie:vamps bfff.
susan:mean girl
katie:posse (mean girl)
ashle:same as katie
mom:vamps mom
dad:vamps dad
um:those are the main charecters. details i havent thought of yet.ok,so,now 당신 know.ok,bye!
gotta type more,you cn leave now.
jfgfgddfddfffff 뱀파이어 rule!
heres the charecters.
vanessa:vampire girl.
duncan:vampiers girls brother
kylie:vamps bfff.
susan:mean girl
katie:posse (mean girl)
ashle:same as katie
mom:vamps mom
dad:vamps dad
um:those are the main charecters. details i havent thought of yet.ok,so,now 당신 know.ok,bye!
gotta type more,you cn leave now.
jfgfgddfddfffff 뱀파이어 rule!