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NIGHTFALL: A NOVEL 의해 AXEL MCCORMICK
Copyright: 2013

CHAPTER ONE:
CRYSTAL FALLS, MICHIGAN
FEBRUARY, 1850

The 년 is 1850. My name is Ashley Garland; I live in the small town of Crystal Falls, on the west coast of the United States. At the moment, I am being hunted, 의해 what I do not currently know. All I know at present about my foe is that I fear for my life. In fact this whole ordeal has been about a week in the making. About a week ago, the people of Crystal Falls were gathered in the town hall, when a man suddenly began pounding on the door, pleading for help. After some of the citizens finally overcame their initial shock and opened the door, the man outside had collapsed to the ground, and was bleeding profusely from his neck. My father, the town’s doctor Richard Garland, immediately brought him 집 to give him a look-over. As my mother and I waited in the living room anxiously wondering if the man would be all right, my father worked tirelessly before coming out to tell us the man suffered from a neck wound, and was lucky to have survived at all. Yet at the same time, he was at a loss to explain what would cause such an epidemic like this. Ultimately, as the man did not regain consciousness, we decided to leave him in my father’s clinic overnight. However, after the incident, I had trouble sleeping, I had the suspicious feeling I was being watched, and I didn’t like it one bit, yet I could not for the life of me figure out what it was that was giving me the feeling. The following day, my father left early for the clinic, his night watchman had nothing to 신고 on the unconscious man who lay on a 침대 in the back of the clinic. The man did not regain consciousness for the rest of the day, but the whole town was anxious to know what it was that had attacked him. My father made a leap of logic that said the bite mark appeared to be human, but this information caused somewhat of a panic. The town was wondering who in their right mind would attack a man like it had happened. The answer, it seemed, would remain a mystery until the man regained consciousness, if that ever would occur, which according to my father was doubtful at best. Still, he had rationalized, it was only a guess. And the area that had been bitten had two marks that would be too deep for human teeth to break the skin without the others following. For the moment, people seemed to calm down about the incident, but still curiosity remained amongst the townspeople. That night, I got the sensation once 더 많이 that I was being watched. I kept telling myself it wasn’t so, but I still felt the feel of eyes creeping over me. The following morning, I awoke to find the window of my bedroom wide open, despite knowing that I had shut it the 이전 night, I shrugged it off, thinking against hope that the wind had blown it open. The 일 went 의해 uneventfully, and my father tended to his other patients, however it was becoming increasingly evident at 집 that he was fascinated 의해 the wound’s origin, and as the man had still not regained consciousness, it was still very much a mystery what had happened to him, except that he had 로스트 a lot of blood over a short period of time, still, this news only made the townspeople 더 많이 uneasy, although it would turn out to be nothing like it would be over the 다음 few days. That afternoon, I walked down to the coast, and spent the entire rest of the 일 hearing rumors from the townspeople about what had caused the bite, and human 또는 not, was the attacker still around nearby? All the rumors made me somewhat uneasy, as dusk finally arrived; my mother came and got me from the coast, telling me my father would be working in the clinic overnight, and that she didn’t want me out after dark until there was an explanation for the attack. As we walked back home, I felt a pair of eyes locked on me, there was nobody nearby, so I decided that that was impossible. Still, I couldn’t shake the feeling. Once we got home, I said goodbye to my parents and before climbing into my bed, closed and locked the window. That night, I began having dreams where I was being chased 의해 something; much like the situation I am in at this very moment, however in my nightmares, the thing chasing me was VERY inhuman. Once I awoke the fourth morning, I immediately checked my window, and found it was closed this time, but one thing still remained, the lock was not latched as I had made certain of the night before. I immediately decided to let my parents know of the incident. Once I went downstairs however, my mother explained my father was at the clinic, as it seemed that his latest patient had finally responded somewhat to treatment. 의해 somewhat, it meant that he had not yet gained consciousness at present, but it could mean his full recovery was not far off, and in a way, it wasn’t. After another sleepless night passed, this time without incident, my father came 집 early, telling my mother that the man had finally regained consciousness. The three of us walked to his clinic, and the first thing I noticed was the crowd outside the building. It seemed that everyone in town was there, anxiously awaiting any news from the patient. My father walked into the clinic, and motioned for us to follow him. Before shutting the door, he addressed the crowd. “My patient needs rest. Any news on his situation will be revealed whenever he feels he is able to talk about it. Good day.”
With that, the townspeople reluctantly returned to their homes 또는 work 또는 wherever they were needed. My mother and I followed my father into the back of the clinic. The only other person in the room was my father’s assistant Perry, who smiled upon seeing us. “He’s 로스트 consciousness again Dr. Garland. But this time it seemed it was because of exhaustion.” “Thank 당신 Perry. Did he say anything?” Perry nodded. “It didn’t make any sense. He said a man attacked him, but… it wasn’t human... exactly…” My father nodded. “Thank 당신 Perry. But you’re right. That doesn’t make any sense at all.” Perry nodded. “I’m sorry. Maybe he’ll remember 더 많이 when he wakes up.” he replied. With that, Perry left the room. “It really is nice to see 당신 again Mrs. Garland.” He said, addressing my mother, before turning to me. And of course 당신 too. Ashley. 의해 the way, I’m sorry I didn’t make your birthday party. How old are 당신 again?” he asked. “Seventeen.” I replied. Perry nodded. “Well happy birthday. I’ll send 당신 your belated birthday present soon. I insist.” Before I could say anything, he had left the clinic. My father examined his patient again. “What happened to the marks on his neck?” I asked him. “They’re gone. I’ve never seen anything like it. They disappeared when he woke up this morning.” ”It’s bizarre.” My mother noted thoughtfully. After awhile, Perry came back to see us. “Dr. Garland, another person has been attacked!” My father immediately stood up. “What do 당신 mean?” he asked.
Perry hesitated before answering. “Same marks in the neck, except…” he struggled to find the words. “Except what?” asked my father. “He’s dead. Completely drained of blood.” He trailed off again before speaking. “It was Douglas.” He replied. “You’re telling me that Douglas Groves, the MAYOR of this town, is dead?” he asked. Perry nodded. “They found him just after dusk.” My father looked positively spooked 의해 this news. “Wait here.” He said to my mother and me before turning to Perry. “Perry, keep them safe. I’m begging you.” Perry nodded without a word. My father turned to us. “I’ll be back as soon as I can.” He said, before walking out the door. I noted Perry lock it before he left. My mother suggested I go to sleep, until my father came back. Seeing as it was now around ten o’clock, I agreed, not knowing that it would be the last time I would see her. Around one I awoke in the 침대 my father kept in the back for Perry, who did not have a 집 of his own in town. I immediately felt that something was wrong. I called for my mother. No answer. I called again, no answer. I called for Perry. No answer. Feeling helpless, I climbed out of the 침대 and walked out into the hall. I immediately noted the blood on the floor near the entryway. Racked with fear, my mind was unsure of what to expect as I walked down the hallway dreading what I already guessed what was on the other end of the door. My fears were realized as I looked into that room and saw two bodies on the ground. My mother on the right, her neck torn into and bleeding out, Perry’s to the right, basically torn into so bad I was amazed that there was still blood dripping from his neck, and 의해 that I mean that there was any blood left to drip out at all. My mother stared into my eyes, attempting to speak. “Asssshhhllleeyyy…” she gasped, it seemed to me she was pleading. “I’ll get dad.” I yelled frantically, and to my surprise, she beckoned me to come back. “Don’t let him get you…” I watched in horror as her eyes closed for the final time, and she went limp. I turned and looked at Perry, lying motionless in a pool of his own blood. He was already dead, I realized. I got up to leave, when I saw someone blocking the door. Their eyes were yellow, and the teeth… my god, the teeth… I’d never seen anything like them. I knew I was in immediate danger, and that I wasn’t getting out that way. Blindly, I turned and ran back through the hallway I’d just come through a moment ago. I ran to the back room, and blocked the door with a chair, before climbing out the window in the room. As I raced into the woods behind the building, I heard the chair I’d used to block the door smash into pieces behind me. As I got deeper into the woods, I thought I’d 로스트 my pursuer, only to hear the footsteps still following me. This pretty much sums up how I got into this situation in the first place. Do I glance behind me? I ponder. Ultimately, I decide to take a look. This is a poor choice, within 초 I crash into a tree. I collapse to the ground, filled with pain, I lose track of how long I lay in pain there on the floor of the forest. For all I know, I 로스트 consciousness at some point. I am not sure. After awhile, I realize I have to try to get moving again. I try and fail to pull myself to my feet; I nearly try again before I hear the footsteps again. “Ashley!” calls out a voice. A familiar voice. Yet at the same time, I know it is not possible, for the person the voice belongs to is dead… Suddenly, I hear a snapping sound. A screech I know I’ll never forget fills the night. Then, I hear the footsteps again, this time at a slower pace. “Ashley!” calls the voice. I look up, and wonder if I’m still lying in the 침대 in the backroom dreaming, because the person I see is Perry. He offers me his hand. I take it and allow him to pull me to my feet. “You… How’re you?”
I stutter. Perry shrugs. “He just knocked me down is all.” He replies. “Who? Who was it chasing me?” I ask him. “Your dad’s patient.” He says. But don’t worry about him now. He’s dead.” I am at a loss for words. “But you… 당신 were dead! Your neck, I was ripped open I saw it!” Perry’s smile fades. “You saw that?” he asks. When I nod, his expression turns dark. “Dang it.” He mutters. “That patient, what WAS he Perry?” Perry turns to me. “You want the truth Ashley?” I nod, and he sighs. “You know what Ash? I’m not hungry anymore, so I guess I’ll cut 당신 a break. But at the same time, I can’t let 당신 go. Not after this. See where being nosy gets you?” I stutter. “What do 당신 mean ‘hungry’?” I ask. Perry sighs, and before I can do anything, I am pushed back against the tree. The pain from before returns, and I find myself unable to move. As I gasp for breath, I feel an even worse pain in my neck. Then everything goes black…
posted by rory2011
some people think if 당신 did something good to someone ,one 일 the person will takes your hand from your problems hole ,but that won't happen this time, that low is only in the 판타지 stories ,not in the real life , Kat was very stupid to believe that she would reward for what she did and realize she must stop being that nice girl who does everything people tell her and she can't say no to anyone

David start taking his medication ,he stood in the hospital cause Mac wanted to fix that old house and give it his soul again
Kat is very busy with her work ,but everything happening taking all...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre:realistic fiction, humor~
Chapter 15
        A Gal’s talk
    “Talia, I’m so sorry that 당신 have to leave so early, but my parents, not very trusting. Plus they already have a full plate…so…the gal’s are leaving soon, again sorry, looking 앞으로 to the 다음 sleepover.”
    Gosh, I almost believed myself!
    “Sure!” Talia beamed, clueless. “See 당신 later, Pal!”
    “Buddy,” I saluted her.
    Ryler shook his head as soon as the...
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posted by 1999jacko
action 또는 판타지 I am really not sure

Present Day
Leo,now 13, stood on 상단, 맨 위로 of the tall, sturdy 나무, 트리 looking for any sign of the kids who kill. Luckily he'd been there for 2 hours and seen 또는 heard nothing and decided to make the 그네, 스윙 back to the 나무, 트리 he lived in with Jason and Sarah, he ran down the branch and jumped onto the branch and pushed off from what they call the watch tree.

The swinging was the greatest thing ever in Leos mind, with the trees flying 의해 at unnatural speeds, the insects moving all around your head wondering whats going on and best of all the height your up at, because...
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posted by Problematic129
Chapter 12
    One messed up sleepover
    “So should I go with 산딸기, 라즈베리 yellow, 또는 remedy green?” Sage asks.
    “Sweetie, were doing nails not a Trix commercial,” I tell her.
    Sage sticks her tongue out at me. “Bite me, the one with brown hair.”
    “Cherry head!”
    Meredith rolls her eyes, but still comes to sit closer to us as Talia’s giving her the obsessed ‘let’s be 프렌즈 glance’.
    “So your one of Pamela’s friends!”...
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글쓰기 Tip #1: Put off editing

Each of us works at 글쓰기 on two levels:a creative, unconscious level and a critical, conscious level.

The unconscious produces creative and powerful words and images. It makes surprising and original connections. It shuts down if the critical "editor" part of your mind goes to work too soon.If your High School English teacher's voice runs through your mind as 당신 write, if 당신 worry about spelling, grammar, 또는 how to sell your book while 당신 write, 당신 are 글쓰기 with a dull pencil.

There are many 책 written on how to unlock your unconscious and let the writing...
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posted by dragonsmemory
(Dear Reader,
The story 당신 are about to read is another Eden book. "The Guardian of Eden" is part of the Encounter series. Please keep in mind that some parts may be spoilers for other Eden Chronicles books.
The following story was originally written spring 2011 under the 제목 "Hirach." It has since been changed. I hope 당신 all enjoy this tale from Eden.
Jo)
A 판타지 NOVEL


PROLOGUE
THE FIRST GUARDIAN

Centuries ago, when humans began to exploitthe dragons' Knowledge and power for themselves, something had to be done. A special meeting of Parliament was called to address the problem. The king, who,...
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posted by rory2011
David couldn't take all his pain since Jack has been taken to jail from three years 이전 ,witch made him very ill ,David now in 47 and almost to 48 years old ,but he looks older because of his illness ,he refused to face people after what Jack did ,all the people in the country knows who's David miller is ,he's the father of the most dangerous criminal in the country, Jack got crazy in jail ,because of a lot of things happening and happened to him
Jack was getting tortured every night ,which made him crazy and pushed him kill three of the cops and two prisoners ,plus he tried to escape so many...
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posted by alicia386
I am pretty sure everyone in the world has at least one phobia. I found two but I didn't go through the whole thing. This list is only half of what I found. Shocking!

Ablutophobia – fear of bathing, washing, 또는 cleaning
Achluophobia – fear of darkness
Acrophobia – fear of heights
Agoraphobia, Agoraphobia Without History of Panic Disorder – fear of places 또는 events where escape is impossible 또는 when help is unavailable. Fear of open spaces 또는 of being in public places. Fear of leaving a 안전한, 안전 place.
Agraphobia – fear of sexual abuse.
Agrizoophobia – fear of wild animals
Agyrophobia –The...
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posted by vampirefreak_26
My alarm went off telling me that my nightmare aka combat training with Dimitri was about to begin in a half hour. Although I wanted to go back to sleep like any other normal person in the neighborhood, I came out of bed, dressed and went downstairs to eat something light. I knew the consequences if I wasn’t on time, Dimitri would give me one hell of an 나귀, 엉덩이 whooping training and I would be the one who would get the post punches. Dimitri was one of my father’s best fighters and God knows how many battles he’d won, the guy was fast as hell. I could only guess what kind of training he would...
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posted by Problematic129
*I've gotten the first six chapters done, still working on it and Remember me. Please don't copy and please read and review*
Chapter 1
    Friends and my dream guy
    One thing 당신 need to know about me, is I am not normal. I tend to do things differently, right now, I am sitting on my bed, rifling through my awesome 아이팟 in my 가장 좋아하는 색깔 green, orange, and yellow.
    If 당신 have an ick face on, I’ll show 당신 my 가장 좋아하는 finger. I happen to like these colors, there eye popping, different. A color that most people breeze past to...
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posted by hgfan5602
It's sad
It's the truth
Fighting through what it is
But I'll be stronger

I've gone through
Mounds of pain
I've been through
The deepest waters

Nobody can change my past
It's the truth, and it changed me
Sad to even hear the truth
Sad to...say the truth

Reality's always sad
And no one's gonna escape it.
It's how I became who I am today
It's how I didn't brag.

Why does this have to happen?
Why did it have to end?
Why does the world have to be so confusing?
Why did the fun have to end?

The world's just a crazy place
And no one's gonna stop that thought
Cause I'm broken for good...
Because of...the truth.
posted by dragonsmemory
In Eden, there are many different races. As a whoe, they are called Kinds. Each Kind has a capital city, sends its rulers to the Ruling Council, and contributes its own history to that of Eden. In this article, I will be discussing the Ruling Council and draconian politics, as both are difficult to understand.

THE RULING COUNCIL
The Ruling Council is comprised of the leaders of each Kind (except demons) in Eden. The Council meets at the summit of Councilpeak, located in the 심장 of the Broadplain area. There is a single road spiraling up the mountain, as well as a landing ledge on the south...
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the first part: link

SECOND CHAPTER
Paul Dock was bent with the nose that pratically touch the floor. He studying the crime scene, as usual. He isn't convinced that the assassin is Elvira Gorrige. It would be too obvius. He doesn't find nothing intresting on the stage, so he goes behind of that.
-Can i help 당신 sir, are 당신 sick?- asks a female voice, seeing the detective with the nose on the floor.
-Oh, no thank 당신 i'm good, i'm detective Dock, i was looking for something here.- replies Dock with a smile on his face
-may i ask 당신 some 질문 mrs...-
-Samantha White- 답변 the girl -And of...
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 My terrifying enemy, Cat.
My terrifying enemy, Cat.
(Okay, so this is one of my weirder entries, but I just thought what it would be like for that yarn. This big thing pouncing on 당신 and stuff, anyway, here it is.)

So, today I was just lounging in the sewing room when this big 주황색, 오렌지 thing swiped a paw at me and caused me to roll out of the basket. The thing swiped at me yet again and I remembered what my parents were talking about one night. "That cat thing almost rolled me completely out of shape and into a completely flat string!"
"That must have been horrifying, honey!" My dad had replied. I wasn't paying much attention to the conversation...
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posted by Problematic129
Just a little uplifting, includes pictures that's funny, and things that I hope makes 당신 smile.
Because smiling and laughing are very healthy to your 심장 and your emotional being, if your down get happy.
Life sometimes gets hard, and when I smile I usually feel better, so if your feeling down this will be a great help to.
We all have problems, 또는 something that sets us off our course. Life was never meant to be easy, we just have to accept that and take that step forward. Let go of all our fears, because there’s nothing to be afraid of.    
    Your...
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posted by wantadog
The Succubus, Prologue!
Downsized


“You called for me?” the young succubus, Odessa, knelt before her lord. She knew that she was about to be chewed out, but she didn’t care anymore, she would take whatever punishment he deemed fit, then leave his presence until her 다음 one. Lord Arlon glared at her.
“You have some nerve, 당신 have repeatedly disobeyed me in the past, but now 당신 have gone too far. 당신 have broken one rule too many, and this one was a serious one.”
She kept her head bowed respectfully, but inwardly sneered at the fool. “You and I have differing opinions, my lord.”
Arlon...
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posted by IlovePatch97
Tell me darling why 당신 cry,
Your tears stain the 침대 당신 lay upon
Could it be 당신 miss the ones 당신 clung to so tight,
Nothing but a scared little fawn
The flames burnt away your past and future,
The hate did nothing but balance your grief
What now? That’s presents question,
Something so fragile like a branch being clung to 의해 a leaf
Where is your mother little dove?
What happened to those loving others who filled your empty nest?
How many word of the world can 당신 rhyme with love?
Perhaps someday we will know with, proper care and rest
When pursuing dreams take chances and strive for nothing less than best
Then only then can 당신 be sure you’ve completed life’s most demanding quest
posted by hgfan5602
Almighty eagle,
Soar, soar
Soar beyond your wildest dreams.....

There's no limit
On how much 당신 can soar
No one can
Break your wings and kill you

Soar for the skies,
Don't let the feelin go
Just soar, soar like never before
No one's gonna stop you
From believin

There wasn't a time
When nobody could never soar
But there was a time
When people never believed

And tomorrow
Isn't the 일 to fall
And nobody's gonna push 당신 down
Oh almighty eagle

We're gonna be the powerful eagles
We're not gonna let anyone
Be our ruler,
We're not anyone's slave

Almighty eagle
Oh soar, soar towards the sky's height
And soar toward your dream
Let nothing keep 당신 away

Almighty eagle
Soar beyond your wildest dreams
And we're gonna fly tonight
Let nobody keep us down.
posted by Problematic129
*Sorry for the wait, writer's block showed it's ugly head. Thanks for all the 코멘트 :) Please don't copy and please read and review*
Chapter 3
    A strange vision
    “Was he hot?” My best friend Jessica asked. I groaned, of course that would be the first thing she asked.
    After that introduction, I drove straight to Jessica’s house, knowing she would rebel and not go to school, because she said and I quote ‘Monday doesn’t count as a school 일 in my book’. Ever since the first 일 of eighth grade, she hasn’t attended...
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posted by sadiebugz00
Life can be hard. Especially for me, Lily West, your almost-average 16-year-old girl. Most people think it's weird I'm bald. Others think I'm going to die. Then there's the occasional person who tries to take pity upon me. I'd rather they not, because some say it like I'm a helpless little 터틀, 거북 on its back. Sometimes I wish I die already, and sometimes I wish that I was a completely different person. Yes, it's tough having cancer. I just wish that they would respect me for a person instead of a helpless little bug.