Help with an essay I'm writing?

Hmm

I wouldn't say the children themselves really fully develop an individual personality on their own, it is something heavily influenced 의해 parents and social interaction with 프렌즈 또는 teachers/classmates. Children learn quickly, they're like sponges just absorbing all sorts of information, behaviour included.

As a child the personality is pretty much shaped 의해 those surrounding (not entirely, but for the most part they're easily influenced).

But as the child grows into late teens/adulthood, their personality is much 더 많이 formed 의해 the individual themselves as they grow to analyse and develop their own behaviour and quirks that make them comfortable rather than blending in with a school crowd/family crowd.

So long story short, the true colours of an individual show when independence kicks in (adulthood), but as a child their personality is heavily influenced 의해 parenting and school/friend environment. Kids are blank slates, they kind of bounce off each other rather than really work it out all on their own. Because as I'm sure many experience they say that their 프렌즈 change and they grew apart because of differences, this is mainly because of independent personality changes once maturity comes around where all kids are no longer the same, their personalities change as they impact their own personality in later years rather than being all similar children.

Hopefully that absolute mess of text made sense. Too scared to even read over what I just wrote lmao.