Do 당신 Think She is Good Now?

My Oc Dani was used to be called a Mary Sure for being most perfect, most beautiful, most talented, had a super tragic past, has like E cups x3 always wore slutty clothes x3 but recently I changed her up quite a bit. Now she has C cups, she has her flaws, she isn't the most beautiful but she is still attractive c: to some people x3 not all guys fall for her, she's 더 많이 of a tomboy! and when she was a Mary Sue she was also a 'tomboy' not really xD didn't seem like it x3 Do 당신 think she's better now? x3 Mary Sue Dani is on the left, normal Dani is on the right? x3
 Do 당신 Think She is Good Now?
 16falloutboy posted over a year ago
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BlondLionEzel said:
Yes.
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egyptprincess7 said:
Kinda. I don't understand though why having E cups though is a mary sue but okay. What flaws though because if 당신 have the standard cutesy type flaws well then 당신 didn't do much to her. 당신 do need to change the super tragic past part. She still has mary-sue qualities.
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Yeah I do like E-Cup breasts
BlondLionEzel posted over a year ago
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Doesn't have one now what? Explain.
egyptprincess7 posted over a year ago
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Oh she doesn't have a tragic past anymore
16falloutboy posted over a year ago
sieluvzsoul said:
Sure
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x-Yumi-x3 said:
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misscindyspice said:
Well, she is much better now (not that she was bad before), but I honestly find being a stereotypical "tomboy" character is almost as bad as being a stereotypical girly-girl character, as the whole "Tomboy bad-ass chick who thinks that all girly crap is horrible and needs to die", is pretty overused. If 당신 don't make the tomboyishness too overblown, I feel that Dani could be a very good character. :)
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neonClouds said:


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MineTurtle5 said:
Yes! Totally!
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KissKissHannah said:
I think the changing of breast size wasn't necessary. I think your OC is good now anyway. :3
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misscrazel said:
Great improvement, good job! ♥♣☻☺
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E-Scope90 said:
Am I the only one that thought this was about Miley Cyrus?
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