당신 can change three things in Harry Potter and Twilight.

Harry Potter: Dobby didn't die, 퍼지 wasn't so annoying, and Drarry happened.

Twilight: I only have one thing I would change - that it was never written.

Twilight:
1. It needs a better plot.
2. All the characters are Mary-Sues. That should be fixed.
3. It should just be completely rewritten 의해 somebody who is not Stephanie Meyer.

Harry Potter:
1. Fred, Remus, Tonks, and Dobby don't die.
2. Hufflepuff gets the glory it deserves.
3. Luna is the new Ministress of Magic and everybody realizes the existence of Nargles and Crumple-horned Snorkacks.

Twilight: Get a plot. I would change many, many things, but most of all it needs a plot.

Harry Potter: The entire Epilogue. I would explain 더 많이 what happened to the characters after the story ends.
Luna and Neville would get married. :)
And lastly, I'll voice what we all wish: 프레드 wouldn't die! He SHOULDN'T die! That's what needs to be changed.

Harry Potter:

1. Add another chapter right before the epilouge that covers the events following the battle, and explains 더 많이 about the characters in their adult lives.

2. Dobby and 프레드 survive.

3. Include a a scene where Dumbledore announces to the school Gryffindors are superior to all the houses, especially Huffelpuff.


Twilight (only three?)

1. Give it a plot

2. Give the characters a personality

3. Have Rowling re-write it.

some pairings, death of hedwig :(, and the 19years later thing was a bit weird i reakon it should have been like 3years later