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 Once upon a....you know what, forget this cliche starter!
Once upon a....you know what, forget this cliche starter!
To me, one of the hardest things to do is the begginning. How exaculy do we start it off? What do we say? I'm not a complete genius on writing, but I have written my fair share of stories. Then thrown them away and started over. Then throw them away and start over again. 당신 could say i've kind of become gifted in the art of the first chapter. Here's an 기사 to help my fellow writers out!

1. Start Off With Someone Saying Something!
This would be what my annoying language art teacher called a "Grabber." Get the readers attention 의해 introducing a character through dialouge. For example;

"Hey Caleb, do 당신 need a ride?" Caleb 모건 turned to see his friend Chikara Wang cruising beside him in his car. Chikara was really the only one of his 프렌즈 who knew how to drive. He himself was stuck walking.
"Sure, why not?" He climbed into the passenger side beside him.


2. The Good 'Ol 설명 Scene!

Every now and then, we come across the decription scene. A paragraph of "It was a bright and sunny morning. Birds were chirping in the sky." While it's not my 가장 좋아하는 way to go, some people manage to make it work. Try describing the town 또는 where the story takes place, 또는 the building your characters are currently in. School? Thier house? The bowling alley?


3. The "Code Red" Alert!

Try to get the reader's attention 의해 saying something urgent. For example, in Maximum Ride, the main chacter, Max, starts off 의해 saying your lives are in danger if 당신 don't read her book. The book is about a group of children who were genetic experiments. So if your trying to breach to a teen/pre-teen audience, it really hits close to home. I wanted to include the opening on this 기사 but I couldn't find it. Poo! Many times, these "Code Reds" could be used as prolouges.


4. The Action Scene!

The action scene. It's a part of the story where something really big is happening. Usually a battle 또는 major drama. Take the first chapter of Maximum Ride for instance!

The funny thing about facing imminent death is that it really snaps everything else into perspective. Take right now, for instance.
Run! Come on, run! 당신 know 당신 can do it.
I gulped deep lungfuls of air. My brain was on hyperdrive; I was racing for my life. My one goal was to escape. Nothing else mattered.
My arms being scratched to ribbons 의해 a briar I’d run through? No biggie.
My bare feet hitting every sharp rock, rough root, pointed stick? Not a problem.
My lungs aching for air? I could deal.
As long as I could put as much distance as possible between me and the Erasers.
Yeah, Erasers. Mutants: half-men, half-wolves, usually armed, always bloodthirsty. Right now they were after me.
See? That snaps everything into perspective.
Run. You’re faster than they are. 당신 can outrun anyone.


The Dream Sequence!

Now, picture that same scene above and picture the next. Max sitting upright in her bed. It was all a dream. The dream sequence is commonly used in today's media. 당신 see it all the time in 텔레비전 and movies. It could also be used to start off the 초 chapter!

5. Introduce The Character!

Another way to start off, introduce your characters. This way the reader will get a first hand experience of what your characters are like, and maybe gain a little 더 많이 information about them.

Do your Own Thing!

It's always important to do your own thing, no matter what other people think. Your story. Your mind. Your imagination. Nothing in my silly little 기사 should tell 당신 how to write correctly. It's merely here to give 당신 ideas. There's no right 또는 wrong way to write a story.

With this last little word of encouragement...I bid 당신 farwell. Happy writing:)
The 다음 일 at school they had an athlete tryout at lunch time in the stadium. “Alec, there 당신 are I’ve been looking all over for you, why are 당신 watching the tryouts, man” Said Marley. “Nothing, just supporting people” Said Alec with a big smile on his face. “Your perving on the girls aren’t you?” Said Marley. “You know me too well man; take a sit, perv with 당신 fellow friends” Said Alec with the same smile. ‘I’ll 가입하기 당신 guys” Said Nathan while watching a girl sprint. “You guys are such pervs, man” Said Marley even though he was sitting right 다음 to them...
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I'm the real writer of this story, my siter a.k.a gossipgirlxoxo 게시됨 it for me but now i have my own....

15 years ago, mankind found that there was 더 많이 than the world showed us. There was another world where creatures of all appearances were hiding, the creatures made a deal with the humans that if they let them live in the human world as normal citizens they would help the humans deal with deceases and technology. They agreed but the humans decreed that all monsters must hid in a human form, this was no shock to the creatures and it was agreed that man and monster would live as one, as...
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Chapter One-

    I screamed as loud as I possibly could (well, screaming to the lyrics.). I was screaming to Paramore. They were my 가장 좋아하는 band of all time. I and my best friend Alexia won tickets to see them and a bunch of other bands on the Vans Warped Tour. After the show, I could go and meet everyone who played there. I was so excited, also because I could meet my other 가장 좋아하는 band, All Time Low. So, yeah. I was pretty excited about that. Right now, my 가장 좋아하는 song: Where the Lines Overlap was playing. Alexia was using the bathroom, she doesn’t really like Paramore....
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posted by VampirePrinsess
I read this and had to pass it on.
my name is sarah
i am three
my eyes are swollen
i cannot see
i must be stupid
i must be bad
what else could have made
my daddy so mad
i wish i were better
i wish i werent ugly
then maybe my mommy
would still wanna hug me
i cant do a wrong
i can't speak at all
or else i locked up
all 일 long
when i wake up
im all alone
the house is dark
my folks arent home
when my mommy does come home
i try to be nice
so maybe i'll just get
one wipping tonight
i just heard a car
my daddy is back
from charlie's bar
i heard him curse
my name is called
i press myself
against the wall
i try to hide
from his...
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Chapter 1.
    I had just moved into forks, Washington, me and my brother Eddie were
close so after our parents died Eddie didn't leave me out of his sight.
I was unpacking and going through my things when I heard the door 벨
ring. I knew who it was because every time I moved the people 다음 door
would come and welcome us. Well I figured it was our neighbor.
    I heard the door open and heard talking. I looked like a slob in my
baggy t-shirt and my shorts. So I changed into jeans and a long 담홍색, 핑크
tank top. I walked down stairs and said my hellos I let...
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Elena's POV

"Why don't 당신 sit down and we can talk." I was pressed tightly up against the counter. "No need to be scared." Katherine was smiling as she took steps towards me. "Katherine this is between Damon, Stefan and 당신 not me." Katherine tilted her head and shook it tell me no. "Honey this is about you."

Damon's POV

"How the hell could 당신 do that? Damon I asked 당신 to do this for Elena." Stefan was furious. I just rolled my eyes. "Your just upset because she may also have feelings for me to, just like Katherine."

Stefan sat there shaking his head. "Don't 당신 get it Damon Katherine never...
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This chapter is dedicated to another great friend, PC..x Thanks for being so supportive.

There were people rushing about everywhere but I could distinguish the difference between my vampire family and my werewolf family but the almost invisible flashes of light and the 더 많이 slow galloping thuds of my werewolf’s footsteps. Kate stood in the middle of Alice’s massive bathroom whilst Rose, Alice, Mum, Tanya and I all applied her makeup, pulled her hair up into an elegant bun and literally made every surface of her body look even 더 많이 beautiful than usual- which is extremely hard with a vampire....
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 "You know... I'm not...the one 당신 love...so...that's why...it's time for me... to leave......" -Zelos
"You know... I'm not...the one you love...so...that's why...it's time for me... to leave......" -Zelos
There have been so many things that have happened to me in the past, present, and future, that I have had a hard time remembering them all. For a vampire, that would seem unbearably stupid; I mean, we live forever, so our brains should be 더 많이 adept at handling the hardcore memories. At times I actually thought I remembered my childhood, 또는 even WWI if I took a deep thought into it. But no, the only thing that came into my mind as clearly as the darkness that surrounds me now is this:
Chloe's eyes.
Chloe Cassalani, the one person I knew from the start upon meeting, was a threat to me. The instant...
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모건 Sterns was sipping up the last drips of her coffee. She was going to need every last drop if she was going to work late enough to finish all of her reports. She had reports on all kinds of things. Serial killers, counterfeiters, asassination attempts, the list went on and on.
Why do the FBI get handed everything, she wondered. But what she really wanted to know was why she was the one always stuck with work when most of the other agents and anaylists were just standing around telling jokes and drinking coffee. 모건 got back to her 좌석 and pushed her 아몬드 hair out of her eyes and...
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"Why would 당신 want to any way?" Hellena asked.
"She's cute." Ash answered his sister.Ellen went to her first class.
"Alright every one we have a new student starting to 일 who would like to show her around?" The teacher said.A bunch of guys raised there hands.
"Miss.Terra would 당신 like to show her around?" The teacher asked.
"Alright teacher." A girl with long green hair put up in small pig tails said standing up she was wearing a green dress,She walked over to Ellen.
"Hi my name is Hana." She said.
"I'm Ellen."
"I know." She said the went back to her seat.
"Miss.Collins please take a seat."
"Yes...
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The guards walked back and forth in their normal sweeping motion that they always used. This made Joseph smile watching them through his hotel window with his state-of-the-art night-vision binoculars. just routine as usual, at least that's what the guards thought. Joseph looked at his watch, 12:23a.m. only seven 더 많이 분 till he had to go. Joseph grabbed his bag of ammunition and various other things. His small, light smg. He also put on his body armor, his cammo, and grabbed his combat knife. And of course his baby, he'd never forget his baby. His baby was a 9.mm beretta. Aims like a dream...
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Okay, so this might sound boring, but its been on my nerves for a long time and this is the only place to spill it out so here it goes.

So at my middle school whose name shall remain secret (La 별장, 빌라 Middle School), theres this kid whose name shall also be kept secret (jose guerro) and is real jackass. he smells horrible, he gets into fight with guys AND girls, says stuff that make us want to crack his neck, and he sent lots of people to the office for something he did, and the teachers dont do anything but tell him niclely tobehave and get after the people who he made pissed. the other day...
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It was Mia, the Rokurokubi; she was the head, the head connected to the very long neck. Opal looked with amazement as Mia knocked Grito to the ground. As her body started to walk 앞으로 as her neck retracted back to it. “Um... Ok, that was not expected” Said Opal. Alec and Marley were also in a great confusion, looking at each other trying to make something out of the situation. “Surprised?” Mia Asked. “A little” Said Opal, trying to make it as a joke. The three released that this was Mia’s power, she is a Rokurokubi and this is what they do, all four of them started laughing....
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“Damn nobody in sight yet, I hope Marley and Alec are doing ok” Said Opal. As she jumped from place to place she saw a young girl between the ages of 17-20, Opal didn’t even speak, and she didn’t need too. The girl was alone so Opal jumped behind her and as the girl turned Opal dug her fangs right into the girl’s neck. At first the girl’s eyes lit up with shock but then eased down into a deep sleep. Opal’s eyes turned the rose colour it does and when she was finished she through the girl to the ground, it has been too long since she drank so she didn’t really care about anything...
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posted by ashesandwine
Not much to say, just thanks to DxCluvr for the help....
Thanks to Just_bella for all the help as well...
Thanks to Patrisha727 for helping me find the banner and the 아이콘 for my spot...
And thanks to everyone for the support...
This time the lines are all mine... No song to inspire them



"Daniel's POV"

Can I fight when there's no hope? Can I smile when there's no happiness? Can I still 사랑 when the one I 사랑 is gone? Can I live when I hope for death?
I try to stay awake not wanting to dream of her, not wanting to see her eyes, her lips, her face begging to stay with me! I'm trying to go back...
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Ximena knelt down besides the majestic bed. She could no longer hold back her tears. Her hands were wrapped around the lifeless form of the Cid. The cruel wound had finally extinguished the light which had burned bright and guided the people of Valencia through the dark times. Their beloved Cid was no more.


Rodrigo Diaz de Bivar, El Cid had commanded the Spanish conquistadors against the invasion of Yusuf‘s Berber armies. A mighty leader he was, who fought with 수퍼내츄럴 vigour and whose energy was transmitted to all who fought beside him. Many legendary battles he had waged and won. Undefeated...
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posted by BiteMeCullen107
“Ouch!” last night I was out to long and 의해 the time I came 집 I was exhausted so I just slept on my mattress that laid on the floor.
    I woke to the waves crashing onto the 육지, 쇼 어 and the sun light touching my eyes. Not realizing I was on the edge of my bed, I stretched and landed on the cold floor to my two room apartment.
    I got off the floor grabbing my silk 목욕 가운 that was sitting on 상단, 맨 위로 of the box 다음 to my mattress. I walked over to my living room windows and opened the shades up to reveal a beautiful ocean. The sky was clear all for...
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HEY,
I DID NOT WRITE THIS STORY MY BRO DID, HOPE 당신 LIKE IT


15 years ago, mankind found that there was 더 많이 than the world showed us. There was another world where creatures of all appearances were hiding, the creatures made a deal with the humans that if they let them live in the human world as normal citizens they would help the humans deal with deceases and technology. They agreed but the humans decreed that all monsters must hid in a human form, this was no shock to the creatures and it was agreed that man and monster would live as one, as long as the monsters keep their true form a secret....
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I loved her.

As much as I hated her now I had loved her then.
But I had a problem now. The hate was getting in the way of my whole life. It was like this shadow that was always two steps behind me waiting to lash out. I did what I thought would help. Ignored it. And guess what? It just got worse. It got to the point where I was cold to everyone. My 프렌즈 tiptoed around me 또는 avoided me altogether. My hatred and anger were controling my life. I should have asked for help but I was way to stubborn for that. Why would I need to talk to a shrink? They were for crazy people. So, after a few weeks...
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I was sitting on the floor along the outside of the gymnasium. It was the night of the winter dance and I just had the most embarassing moment that anybody could ever experience. After being rejected 의해 Mr. Popularity, cheated on 의해 my date, and the nasty, rude encounter with Ms. Popularity, I never wanted to show my face at school again.

The tears were just coming down. They wouldn't stop. Each time I tried to hold them in, 더 많이 tears came down. I sniffled, hoping that they weren't so loud. They were just as loud as ever.

Suddenly, somebody was out of the door. I crawled into a mini hallway....
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