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 Once upon a....you know what, forget this cliche starter!
Once upon a....you know what, forget this cliche starter!
To me, one of the hardest things to do is the begginning. How exaculy do we start it off? What do we say? I'm not a complete genius on writing, but I have written my fair share of stories. Then thrown them away and started over. Then throw them away and start over again. 당신 could say i've kind of become gifted in the art of the first chapter. Here's an 기사 to help my fellow writers out!

1. Start Off With Someone Saying Something!
This would be what my annoying language art teacher called a "Grabber." Get the readers attention 의해 introducing a character through dialouge. For example;

"Hey Caleb, do 당신 need a ride?" Caleb 모건 turned to see his friend Chikara Wang cruising beside him in his car. Chikara was really the only one of his 프렌즈 who knew how to drive. He himself was stuck walking.
"Sure, why not?" He climbed into the passenger side beside him.


2. The Good 'Ol 설명 Scene!

Every now and then, we come across the decription scene. A paragraph of "It was a bright and sunny morning. Birds were chirping in the sky." While it's not my 가장 좋아하는 way to go, some people manage to make it work. Try describing the town 또는 where the story takes place, 또는 the building your characters are currently in. School? Thier house? The bowling alley?


3. The "Code Red" Alert!

Try to get the reader's attention 의해 saying something urgent. For example, in Maximum Ride, the main chacter, Max, starts off 의해 saying your lives are in danger if 당신 don't read her book. The book is about a group of children who were genetic experiments. So if your trying to breach to a teen/pre-teen audience, it really hits close to home. I wanted to include the opening on this 기사 but I couldn't find it. Poo! Many times, these "Code Reds" could be used as prolouges.


4. The Action Scene!

The action scene. It's a part of the story where something really big is happening. Usually a battle 또는 major drama. Take the first chapter of Maximum Ride for instance!

The funny thing about facing imminent death is that it really snaps everything else into perspective. Take right now, for instance.
Run! Come on, run! 당신 know 당신 can do it.
I gulped deep lungfuls of air. My brain was on hyperdrive; I was racing for my life. My one goal was to escape. Nothing else mattered.
My arms being scratched to ribbons 의해 a briar I’d run through? No biggie.
My bare feet hitting every sharp rock, rough root, pointed stick? Not a problem.
My lungs aching for air? I could deal.
As long as I could put as much distance as possible between me and the Erasers.
Yeah, Erasers. Mutants: half-men, half-wolves, usually armed, always bloodthirsty. Right now they were after me.
See? That snaps everything into perspective.
Run. You’re faster than they are. 당신 can outrun anyone.


The Dream Sequence!

Now, picture that same scene above and picture the next. Max sitting upright in her bed. It was all a dream. The dream sequence is commonly used in today's media. 당신 see it all the time in 텔레비전 and movies. It could also be used to start off the 초 chapter!

5. Introduce The Character!

Another way to start off, introduce your characters. This way the reader will get a first hand experience of what your characters are like, and maybe gain a little 더 많이 information about them.

Do your Own Thing!

It's always important to do your own thing, no matter what other people think. Your story. Your mind. Your imagination. Nothing in my silly little 기사 should tell 당신 how to write correctly. It's merely here to give 당신 ideas. There's no right 또는 wrong way to write a story.

With this last little word of encouragement...I bid 당신 farwell. Happy writing:)
My 초 super hero story. There are five characters and they meet the same person on different days. It takes five days for everybody to meet everybody. Keep in mind some of the powers the kids have are stupid but I tried to get powers that kids wouldn't have. Enjoy 또는 not.

Preface (Very stupid now that I reread it)
In the 년 3112 a few adults had children that had super powers. I tracked them all down and they joined me in the battle of keeping the world alive. I tracked down the five children and they all have different powers. How do I know? I'm Physic and my name is Scott Bering.

Chapter...
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posted by gossipgirlxoxo
I woke up in Ethan’s arms, which was 더 많이 comfortable than it should have been. I didn’t want to 옮기기 또는 wake him, he looked peaceful and it was better when he was quite. I sighed and then saw his eye flutter. ‘Crap!’ I thought to myself, is eyes fully opened and turned to me. “Morning” he yawned, I smiled. “Morning, sleepy head” I giggled. He then signed. “Come on we have to get ready for school” he said, I moaned and got out of bed. I looked back and saw Ethan getting up. I opened my mouth to say something but was cut off 의해 Gloria barging in. “Morning sleepy beauties’”...
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Tayce’s p.o.v

Belinda’s face was full of horror as she glared down at Ruby’s limp body on the floor. “I didn’t choose her!” She screamed I gave her a questioned look. “What do 당신 mean 당신 didn’t choose her?” I asked, she ignored my 질문 and knelled down to Ruby. Kale did the same; he had a worried expression on his face. “Shit, get Bobby” I did as he asked and ran downstairs, Bobby for some reason didn’t run up with us when we all heard Belinda scream. I motioned him to come upstairs, he followed. His face softened when he saw Belinda and Ruby. “What the hell...”...
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Ms.Christina:Ok!Everybody ready?

Everyone:Yes.

Ms. Christina:Now,we all know that the school's 음악 mania 음악회, 콘서트 is held this Friday.And I will choose the perfect groups for the 음악 mania concert.Ok?First up,Sora!

Sora(singing):Remember the feelings,
Remember the day,
My stone 심장 was breaking,
My 사랑 ran away,
This moment,I knew I would need
someone else,My 사랑 turned around
and I fell,

Be my bad boy,be my man,
Be my weekend lover but don't be my
friend,
당신 can be my bad boy,but
understand that I don't need 당신 in
my life again,
Won't 당신 be my bad boy,be my man,
be my weekend lover...
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The Chipmunks and Chipettes:I......
I mean you....

Eleanor:You guys are in drama club too??!!

Simon:You girls are in drama club too??!!

Brittany:We never noticed even 당신 guys were in
drama club too!

Alvin:Well,we never even noticed 당신 girls were in
drama club too!

Ms.Christina:Everybody,please quiet.Now,I have some good news for you.Ok,next week,you will all be taking audition for the school's 음악 mania.There's a note on the notice board.Those who are interested for auditioning,please sign your name on the note.OK!!!That's all for drama club.Goodbye,club.

(At the school entrance)

Alvin:Isn't it...
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posted by joe-edwardfan
1. "True 사랑 can blind 당신 but at the same time if 당신 let it, it can also open your eyes."
-Unknown
2. "Love and electricity are one in the same, my dear. If 당신 do not feel the jolt in your soul every time a 키스 is shared, a whisper is spoken, a touch is felt, then you're not really in 사랑 at all."
-C.J. Franks
3. "Neither a lofty degree of intelligence nor imagination nor both together go to the making of genius. Love, love, love, that is the soul of genius."
-Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart
4. "Love is composed of a single soul inhabiting two bodies."
-Aristotle
5. "I have found the paradox that...
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“Guys like that just get under my skin” Said Nathan. “They always come in shout, ‘who’s the strongest’ beat some guy up, claim the class, 옮기기 on, man” Marley Said. Nathan, Marley, Alec and Lindsay were close to where Grito hangs around. “Alec, why didn’t 당신 just take care of them?” Lindsay Asked. Alec signed and shrugged his shoulders. “I can’t get in anymore fights, and if I do, I have to make sure I don’t get caught, fighting in a classroom is too public” Said Alec. After Alec finished talking, he noticed the West-side Dogs, walking past them. No eye contact...
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The 초 beast ran past Opal and headed for Alec laying on the ground and Marley bandaging his arm. Marley was too slow to react, Alec jumped up from under the Karkadann, only to have the other one slam into his chest. At least four ribs broke, as he landed onto the ground, moaning in pain, Marley aimed to stab his nail into the beast’s eye, but was knocked back, only to be saved 의해 Mia again. Grito watched as the four of them were getting trampled 의해 the three Karkadann. Parvulo was leaning forward, with a worried look on his face. “I didn’t think they would meet up with four of them....
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I am Izabel Louise Dasha. I like to be called Izzy cuz Izabel does not suit me. AT ALL! Ya see i was dropped on my head when i was a baby. TWICE! Then my parents got arrested for child abuse and robbing banks and old people 또는 something. Then my aunt took me,my two brother and sister in. She got maried a 년 later. (me and my siblings were about 2 when she got married.) Through the first few years of her marriage stuff was hard. She was not use to the kind of thing where 당신 have a kids. (Me and my siblings are quadurplets) They started to argue a lot. Sometimes they would forget to feed only...
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뱀파이어 are known in both human and monster worlds. 뱀파이어 who are born from a family of 뱀파이어 are known as pure bloods, these are the main group of 뱀파이어 in both worlds. Pure bloods are the most powerful vampire whose blood has not been tainted (Other species blood) Half bloods are either humans 또는 other creatures who a pure blood has injected their blood into 또는 has a past history of 뱀파이어 and has gained vampire blood in their generation. Only creatures of no special ability of their own can gain vampiric power, if the creature has an power of their own the blood will act as an...
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I still remember the 일 I saw you. I never thought that meeting 당신 would destroy me, would leave deep wounds that no one is able to heal not even you. 당신 looked like a beautiful 앤젤 walking between your tow friends, carrying your books, ready to start a new 년 in collage with arms wide open. 당신 laughed and the whole world laughed in my face. 당신 waved to us, me and him. When he pointed to 당신 I could hardly listen to him. I could hardly see anyone but you. 당신 참드 me with your beauty.Your silky, long, black hair. Your big blue eyes, their look full of 사랑 and passion. Behind those...
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posted by livethislifeup
It's harder to forgive than to forget,
vice-versa, either way, it's still a threat,
time passes, memory flashes,
you're rememberin'
thoughts are coming in
no way to escape it, its a no win.
drives 당신 insane, 당신 try to up your game,
tell yourself they'll regret it and they'll live in shame,
just cause they dragged your name,
across every damn lane,
and 당신 got hurt every time, yeah 당신 still in pain,
and it ain't the same, 당신 all tense around them,
and 더 많이 anger do 당신 gain.
Deep down it's still hurtin' you
like every wound would,
it's like a throbbing cut
that keeps your eyes tight shut,
and 당신 sound out...
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Chapter 1- Star
On a warm summers evening, (all that once upon a time thing makes me feel sick, I swear) the secret Hultimore 거리 was silent, with exceptions of course. The crunch of gravel under the feet of a lonely traveller was amiss.
The One.
People would do anything to be away from him. This man was different. He was the type of person that hated to be thought the same as anyone else so he made sure everyone knew he was different from every single being, he was most powerful. But that was about to change.
Carol Beech was expecting a baby in any minute. She was sat in a red armchair...
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posted by gossipgirlxoxo
Belinda’s p.o.v

I waited in the graveyard for something to happen, anything. “Oh come on” I moaned, being a slayer and all 당신 think I’d be all Buffy, come on let’s get them, but really it’s terrible, 당신 never get to sleep at night, all your best clothes get blood on them and the hunters are always late to meetings and graveyards. There are 4 hunters: Rocco was the big one, the one who handle the muscle, he had brown and blue hair and pitch black eyes, his figure was a lot like a wrestler...big. Max was the badass one, he was good looking, that’s all I could say was good about...
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posted by CullensFinest13
This is how 당신 breathe; this is how 당신 look; this is how 당신 understand; this is what 당신 need to live; this is how 당신 laugh; this is how 당신 smile; this what makes the world go round; this is what makes 당신 cry; this is what takes 당신 places; this is the beauty of the dreams; this is how 당신 sing; this is how 당신 breathe; this is what 당신 feel; this is how 당신 dream. Don’t be the victim; be the strong one; be the back bone; be the things all 당신 want to be. Never doubt; never question; never stop believing; please understand. This is how 당신 scream; this is how 당신 play; this is how you...
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posted by gossipgirlxoxo
I was holding it in my hand; this man’s 심장 well not actually his 심장 but his pendant it was a dark rouge colour so pretty, how he felt for this woman his passion for her. My name is Sadie and I am a goddess of love, I have been for the last 400 years, but I have always had a problem with my place, I don’t understand it, 사랑 I mean it sounds like some club in L.A that everyone needs to go to and when they do they either get kicked out 또는 stay and even some times they stay and then get kicked out. I lived in California with my family who are gods to, and they all have a place that...
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She watched them as they moved down her street.
They never saw her, took great care in looking away before she noticed their shamelessly wide eyes were glued to her body... or, 더 많이 importantly what she embodied: this world they lived in wasn't perfect.
Her presence there seemed to pollute their pretty city and just like the odd 맥주 can 또는 stray McDonalds bag, they ignored her. She wasn't stupid though... she knew she was just as much an ornament as the ribbons that decorated the streetlights at this time of year, that she in fact blended in with the rest of the pavement and she herself was...
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Chapter 3

Jeremy POV
Every thing was getting dizzy, I didn’t understand any thing that happened at the house, all I know is Uncle John is dead, there’s two Elena’s and I’m turning.
I could here the car running things were heightened. I could here all the gears moving to a rhythm. Elena was breathing hard I could feel her body heat radiating off of her.
“Elena, I need it now 또는 its over.” My throat was dry I turned towards Elena and could see her veins flowing with blood. Every thing then went black.”

Elena’s POV
I pulled the car over and took a deep breath. The last time I did this...
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As I weave through dark allies, trying to make my way home, everything feels wrong. It's 일 time and there is crickets chirping. The moon is shining along with bright stars while the brilliant sun sleeps. Annabella was not there. This time, it wasn't Annabella and I running away from one of our idiotic but awesome stunts. I was running for a different reason. I needed to get 집 so I could cry. I needed to sit there in my crying corner and let the tears flow. I did not make it 집 in time. I collapse onto the harsh cement and burst into tears, right there in an alley.
Hours pass. I lose...
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Elena’s POV
    The night got colder as I walked further away from the Founder’s 일 party. Just a few 더 많이 steps and I’ll be at the school.
    I reached the school’s front door but when I tried to open them but they wouldn’t budge. I gave up and sighed. I crossed my arm’s trying to keep warm. Looking around trying to find another way in, though the only way I knew of was the doors in the back of the school.
    I slowly walked my self to the back doors. I grabbed the frost bitten door handle and pulled it open. Once I walked...
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