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This is the other version I thought of. Honestly I like the other one better but it's good to think of two versions for a chapter. I think this version is shorter because I didn't want them to have the same dialogue.

I drag Elliot outside with such great force that he almost ran into me outside. I stop and let go with his arm
"What the hell was that all about? What is wrong with you?" I demand glaring at him
"Wrong with me? What is wrong with you?" he damands
"What do 당신 mean?"
"I saw 당신 in there drooling over serge like he was a plate of nachos,"
"Yeah so? I like him and he likes me. He even told me so!"
"He was being nice Starr. He feels bad that he doesn't like 당신 so he's being nice. He doesn't like like you,"
My face burns "That is so not true! He does so like me!"
"Yes it is. I know it's true. He has a girlfriend Starr!" Elliot yells at me
My eyes widen and my pulse quickens "Liar! That's not true!"
"Yes it is! I heard him talking on the head phone with some girl. Face it Starr Serge doesn't like you," Elliot says
Tears fill my eyes and I run over to Elliot and pound my fists into his chest "No! Stop lying to me!" I scream
Elliot grabs my wrist and pulls me closer towards him "I'm not lying Starr," he says looking into my eyes
"Yes 당신 are," I say looking into his eyes
"No I'm not,"
"Yes 당신 are,"
"No I'm not,"
"Yes 당신 are,"
"No I'm not,"
"YES. YOU. ARE." I growl nostrils flaring.
Elliot leans into my face......What the hell is he doing? He kisses me.
"Mmph! Mmph!" I whine trying to get out of his grip. He kisses harder and releases me
"YOU KISSED ME!" I screamed flailing my arms
Elliot takes a 우주 back "Is that fine with you?"
"'NO IT WAS.....actually nice but I hated one thing about it," I say quietly
"Really what?" he asks getting closer
"That I didn't 키스 back," I say I get closer to him and 키스 him back. He picks me up and carries me into the house and puts me on the bed. I lean out "Oh I'm sorry I didn't believe 당신 about Serge,"
"Really?" Elliot asks
"Yeah I am. Will 당신 believe me if I told 당신 that a boy and I never really kissed?" I ask
"Really? What about Serge?"
"Screw him he never did. He never liked me," I say smiling at Elliot "What about you?"
"Nope. Girls were never interested in me," he says
"They have no idea what they are missing," I say 키싱 him on the nose
"Yeah. 의해 the way I was right," he say putting his hand on my cheek
"Right about what?"
"About being your lover," he says pushing me down on the 침대 and 키싱 me
I have no idea what's happening now but it feels nice
posted by Epismatic
The Man With No Eyes Collection (3): Mask




When the curtain rises, all is forgiven.

I’ll brush it all off with a movie-star smile,

A genuine laugh, but my eyes must be hidden,

The truth they contain is considered too vile.

My voice is a song that will play through your ears,

And invite 당신 to dance to the sound of my tune,

I take a bow, deeply, and drink in your cheers,

I’ll always remain here,

You’ll come see me soon.

A new 일 is dawning,

“Quick, put on your mask!”

And hurry outside, meet the crowd.

“Where’ve 당신 been?”

With fanciful 답변 to all that 당신 ask,

I’ll always wait here for...
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posted by WritingBookWorm
So, one of my New’s Years Resolutions this 년 it to write more. So, I decided to make this:

The goal is to write something every day.

Starting on the 31st of January, every 일 there is a vague word, idea, object, question, statement 또는 anything. 당신 can take it anyway 당신 want.

Then each 일 당신 should write what it tells 당신 too 또는 something inspired 의해 it. Whether it be a poem, a small scene, a character description, journal entry, short story 또는 even just one really well crafted sentence.

Even if the prompt confuses you, 또는 당신 have no ideas just write something! It’s a great exercise...
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This guide was inspired 의해 a 질문 recently 게시됨 의해 link on this spot. The user was looking for ways to put a twist on fairytales. I began to write an answer, but my answer soon developed into an article. So here it is.

Note that these aren't specifically for fairytales; they can be used on any old, well-known stories. After listing some ideas on how 당신 can put a twist on such stories, I'll give a few examples of 영화 that have done used one 또는 더 많이 of these ideas.

1. Swap the genders of the traditional characters.
Do any of the characters behave especially "typical" for their gender?...
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posted by floraisbest1
Ms. Farogonda asked for the winx to come down to her office. when the winx reached ms. farogonda's office she told them that diana wants to speak wth one of you. she didnt tell me who but she told me to pick two extras. ms. farogonda can i go, bloom asked her. flora will be going along with musa and aisha ms farogonda told them. hmph bloom pouted, can we at least go with them bloom said quikly. fine all of 당신 girls can go and im bringing the specialist. ok stella said in a sing song voice. lets go said the winx. they met the RF boys outside and went in the owl. winx: WINX BELIEVIX
AT THE 아마존
flora: let's get going
aisha: see ya winx
bloom: meet back here in an 시간 k
ok bloom musa said
( diana appears in front of them)
GUARDS take them away
what??!
(to be continued)
posted by LunaNotLoony
Anna flicked the T.V from channel to channel, bored: there was nothing worth watching. Sighing, she left the news on and flopped back on the sofa, not really intending to listen.
'The war in Iraq-.'
'Oh no, 당신 don't,' Anna muttered, grabbing the remote. Her Dad had joined the army after her Mum had died of an overdose. Anna didn't really blame him, she'd have got out of the house as fast as possible too if she was an adult. The whole house was contaminated with the memories of Mum, of her laugh, of her accident... suicide... whatever it was. Even so, Anna missed Dad like it was painful. She'd...
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posted by Ichigo127
An Amuto one-shot
hope 당신 enjoy!

‘You know, Amu…,’ he was sitting there again, on the ledge of the window, staring wistfully outside. ‘All of them think you’re gone. But I know better. 당신 are alive, I know it. Somewhere out there, you’re thinking about me too, aren’t you?’
He was talking again, talking to the moon. ‘You’ll never admit it but 당신 have already fallen for me,’ he smirked at the moon. No, not the moon. It was Amu’s blushing face that he saw and it was her voice that he heard, ‘Shut up!’ he didn’t know it was the echo of his memories because he thought...
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A shadowy figure silently brushed the silken curtains aside as she slipped through the open window and stepped into the dark chamber. Passing a small 표, 테이블 and a bed, the 여우 quickly headed towards a cabinet that stood against the far wall.
Beaded necklaces hung above a oval mirror that was set in the center. Her eyes rested on a miniature strongbox half hidden behind the mirror.
Paying no heed to the deafening clatter coming from the oblivious guest downstairs, she skillfully picked the tiny lock and raised the lid. It was hard to tell what was what in the darkness, so she emptied it into...
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posted by Ichigo127
Yo! this is the first poem i wrote with a sane mind xD do tell me if 당신 like it =)

Tears,
a combination of helplessness and anger,
a combination of joy and gratitude.
what different meanings it holds!
sometimes of love,
sometimes of hate.
with what different feelings we cry!
but those tears are the same.
they dwell inside the eye,
ready to attack,
the peace of our heart.
to flood the face,
with undoubted 사랑 and care,
with undoubted anger and hate,
with undoubted pain and despair.
pain? yes, and despair too!
the breakdown of our heart,
the dawn of the truth,
leading to flood the face,
with our sentiments undoubted.
Act like you're not
okay when 당신 are and
that 당신 are when you're
not. Run barefoot in
the snow. Stand out
in the rain for an hour
and think about anything
and everything 당신 can.

Fall in 사랑 with
riddles and things that
aren't real and the
way some stars
shine. Cry when
you realize that life is
just one big sham and write
one hundred cliché poems
about it, and then write one
that 당신 actually mean.

Use profanity. Be the
one fucking introvert
in a room full of
extroverts and scream
shit just for the fun of
it. 제비, 삼키기 every goddamn
metaphor 당신 ever dreamed
of and write them down
with your own blood.

Eulogize...
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Hi Everyone!
I've been working on a book for a while now. Im not gona post all of it at the same time, but I Will post the Prologue. Please tell me what 당신 think! I invite constructive criticism to make it better! THX!


Prologue
    “Tanya! I don’t understand what’s so different about this kid! He’s done nothing to make me see him as special!” Tanya glowered at her obnoxious boyfriend. “Don’t 당신 see?” She said icily, “He isn’t like us!” Virgil and Tanya looked at there new child. He wiggled around in his 어린이 침대, 침대 and giggled happily. The child crabbed...
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What do 당신 want from me?
A tortured body?
A broken soul?

What do 당신 expect to happen?
As 당신 kick me down
As 당신 rip me apart

Tell Me!!!!!!!!!!

What do 당신 want to happen?
As I close my eyes
And take my last breath

I said I would stay
Till I took my last moment
But now I'm leaving
A victim no more

I lived with your love
The 사랑 당신 showed with your fist
I died because of that love
Your 사랑 was only Hate

Now someone else will take my place
Will live with your kind of love
Now someone else will receive your lies
Will know your treachery

What did I expect?
That you'd change?
That you'd learn to love?

What did I ever...
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One afternoon, Sapphire sat in her room, on her bed, quietly 백일몽 with her headphones in. Her eyes were glazed over, and she was in her own magical world.
Sapphire entered the sparkling cave in the middle of the forest. Her blue dress was tattered, and her misty 담홍색, 핑크 fairy wings were damp from the moist, warm air. But she was feeling fine.
Sapphire took a few steps into the sparkling cave. It was made entirely of ice and crystal. Trickling water could be heard as miniature streams fell continuously from the ceiling. Icy stalagmites stood firmly in the cold crystal floor. Icicles hung from...
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posted by Attirox2
The air was still as if it were holding its breathe waiting for me as I approached the ledge. I could feel myself pushing back tears as I clutched the fragile locket in my hands; I traced its dainty designs with my finger. "So mom and dad are getting the divorce after all. I guess 당신 were right E. I don't know why I ever doubted 당신 about that one I mean it was obvious! I guess I tried to block it out like what happened......" I muttered looking up at the milky white moon. It seemed to look down at me with sympathetic beams of light. My hands gripped the marble ledge tighter. "Eliza it's been...
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It’s the color of you
당신 always wore it
It’s the color we shared
As we hid from them

With it we showed our true selves,
Though no one cared
Our 주황색, 오렌지 book bags
Were our shields from some of the pain

We protected each other
But it wasn’t enough
We were like two 주황색, 오렌지 crayons
When everyone else was green

Then 당신 left me alone,
All I had was our color orange
As they hit me
I took peace in knowing
당신 were in the 주황색, 오렌지 field in the sky
당신 always said was there.

The 주황색, 오렌지 of the sun set
Is your smile
Even though 당신 left too soon

Orange…

Now it’s my color
My way of remembering you
Now I am the lone 주황색, 오렌지 in the rainbow
Without 당신 here

I protect my own
Though I wish 당신 were here

Now 주황색, 오렌지 is my color
A color for your bravery
A color for my survival

주황색, 오렌지 will forever be our color
Even though death took 당신 away

Forever 주황색, 오렌지 for you,
Sweet Cassidy.
Hello to the cold world, I was named Max Lee Moore 의해 the parents who absolutely despise me. I am sixteen years old at the moment, will be turning seventeen on June 27th. But who gives a crud? 당신 know what I receive for my birthday every year? For how old I am, like sixteen. I get sixteen whips from a belt. My dad doesn't live with me anymore to whip me, so there's my mother. She gets a kick out of every whip. It seems to make her ecstatic. Each whip equals to one of her evil laughs. She whips me any chance she wants to. It pains me so much that I'm surprised I haven't committed suicide yet....
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I don't know about other people, but I've began to notice that we are relying on teachnology way too much!

Yes this 질문 has been suggested to most of us before (most commonly 의해 our parents). But this time it's different. It is normal for parents to think that teenagers are obsessed with our I-pods, i-phones, laptops 또는 other. This is normal because our parents didn't have things like this when they were younger.

Most adults where I live including my parents didn't have the internet growing up. They all had to either go to the librery for information 또는 have a collection of encyclopidias...
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posted by teamsalvatore98
Characters (just so nobody gets confused):
Keigo Shokuo- main character (Name meaning: roughly Prince's bodyguard)
Mikoto Kyuuketsuki- vampire prince/ eventually becomes Keigo's best friend and lover (NM: roughly prince vampire)
Blood Brothers/BB- this name is misleading because of the "blood" part, but they're actually a group of highly trained assassins who are hired to kill Mikoto. They'll come up in conversations.
Geretsu Kyuuketsuki- Mikoto's grandmother; retired vampire 퀸 (NM: Mean Vampire)
Riaru Kyuuketsuki- Mikoto's real mother [deceased] (NM: Real Vampire)
Katanashi Kyuuketsuki- Mikoto's...
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posted by Blue_Eyez_Chica
Hi my name is Blossom Utanium,Im 16 years old,i have an hourglass figure now and my body is fully developed but 더 많이 then most girls my age.

Im leaving Citiesville today and going back to townsville. Except,im going to wear a disguise,I wear a black curly haired wig and purple contacts.

I bought a house down the 거리 from my sister. Im moving my stuff in today.

I ride my 담홍색, 핑크 바꿀 수 있는, 컨버터블 to townsville and park it in my new driveway and begin to unpack my stuff.

(Bricks Pov)
I watch a 담홍색, 핑크 바꿀 수 있는, 컨버터블 go through the neighborhood,with butch,buttercup,and bubbles. We all calmed down after we hit...
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posted by minniemeg
Authors note: Hi, this is my first time publishing something that wasn't 팬 fiction but its what I've been passionate about forever. So please forgive the inconsistent rhyming.

If I never saw 당신 again.

How happy my life would be!

I'd be jumping up and down the walls so full of glee!

No 더 많이 nagging!

No 더 많이 griping!

No 더 많이 constant whining!

No 더 많이 rants about how dreadful your life is!

I could be free from the locks that is your torn up mind, no longer a prisoner in my own home.

Aw the very thought of never hearing your voice again fills me with so much joy!

No 더 많이 yelling!

No 더 많이 shrieking!

No more...
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posted by EmilyMJFan910
The fiction story I wrote EXCLUSIVELY for Fanpop. Read chapters 1 and 2 first. Thanks.

The girl living just around the corner.
Her name was Summer. She was eight years old and lived on a farm with her parents and often visited the 동물 on the farm. She had blond hair and blue eyes; she was very beautiful as well. She was a softhearted, adventurous girl who always found a way to brighten things.
That 일 Summer rode her bike down the path. She planned to ride to the pond and back, but once she got to the pond, she couldn't help but notice the two small 개 laying in a heap 의해 the pond. She...
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