This is the other version I thought of. Honestly I like the other one better but it's good to think of two versions for a chapter. I think this version is shorter because I didn't want them to have the same dialogue.
I drag Elliot outside with such great force that he almost ran into me outside. I stop and let go with his arm
"What the hell was that all about? What is wrong with you?" I demand glaring at him
"Wrong with me? What is wrong with you?" he damands
"What do 당신 mean?"
"I saw 당신 in there drooling over serge like he was a plate of nachos,"
"Yeah so? I like him and he likes me. He even told me so!"
"He was being nice Starr. He feels bad that he doesn't like 당신 so he's being nice. He doesn't like like you,"
My face burns "That is so not true! He does so like me!"
"Yes it is. I know it's true. He has a girlfriend Starr!" Elliot yells at me
My eyes widen and my pulse quickens "Liar! That's not true!"
"Yes it is! I heard him talking on the head phone with some girl. Face it Starr Serge doesn't like you," Elliot says
Tears fill my eyes and I run over to Elliot and pound my fists into his chest "No! Stop lying to me!" I scream
Elliot grabs my wrist and pulls me closer towards him "I'm not lying Starr," he says looking into my eyes
"Yes 당신 are," I say looking into his eyes
"No I'm not,"
"Yes 당신 are,"
"No I'm not,"
"Yes 당신 are,"
"No I'm not,"
"YES. YOU. ARE." I growl nostrils flaring.
Elliot leans into my face......What the hell is he doing? He kisses me.
"Mmph! Mmph!" I whine trying to get out of his grip. He kisses harder and releases me
"YOU KISSED ME!" I screamed flailing my arms
Elliot takes a 우주 back "Is that fine with you?"
"'NO IT WAS.....actually nice but I hated one thing about it," I say quietly
"Really what?" he asks getting closer
"That I didn't 키스 back," I say I get closer to him and 키스 him back. He picks me up and carries me into the house and puts me on the bed. I lean out "Oh I'm sorry I didn't believe 당신 about Serge,"
"Really?" Elliot asks
"Yeah I am. Will 당신 believe me if I told 당신 that a boy and I never really kissed?" I ask
"Really? What about Serge?"
"Screw him he never did. He never liked me," I say smiling at Elliot "What about you?"
"Nope. Girls were never interested in me," he says
"They have no idea what they are missing," I say 키싱 him on the nose
"Yeah. 의해 the way I was right," he say putting his hand on my cheek
"Right about what?"
"About being your lover," he says pushing me down on the 침대 and 키싱 me
I have no idea what's happening now but it feels nice
I drag Elliot outside with such great force that he almost ran into me outside. I stop and let go with his arm
"What the hell was that all about? What is wrong with you?" I demand glaring at him
"Wrong with me? What is wrong with you?" he damands
"What do 당신 mean?"
"I saw 당신 in there drooling over serge like he was a plate of nachos,"
"Yeah so? I like him and he likes me. He even told me so!"
"He was being nice Starr. He feels bad that he doesn't like 당신 so he's being nice. He doesn't like like you,"
My face burns "That is so not true! He does so like me!"
"Yes it is. I know it's true. He has a girlfriend Starr!" Elliot yells at me
My eyes widen and my pulse quickens "Liar! That's not true!"
"Yes it is! I heard him talking on the head phone with some girl. Face it Starr Serge doesn't like you," Elliot says
Tears fill my eyes and I run over to Elliot and pound my fists into his chest "No! Stop lying to me!" I scream
Elliot grabs my wrist and pulls me closer towards him "I'm not lying Starr," he says looking into my eyes
"Yes 당신 are," I say looking into his eyes
"No I'm not,"
"Yes 당신 are,"
"No I'm not,"
"Yes 당신 are,"
"No I'm not,"
"YES. YOU. ARE." I growl nostrils flaring.
Elliot leans into my face......What the hell is he doing? He kisses me.
"Mmph! Mmph!" I whine trying to get out of his grip. He kisses harder and releases me
"YOU KISSED ME!" I screamed flailing my arms
Elliot takes a 우주 back "Is that fine with you?"
"'NO IT WAS.....actually nice but I hated one thing about it," I say quietly
"Really what?" he asks getting closer
"That I didn't 키스 back," I say I get closer to him and 키스 him back. He picks me up and carries me into the house and puts me on the bed. I lean out "Oh I'm sorry I didn't believe 당신 about Serge,"
"Really?" Elliot asks
"Yeah I am. Will 당신 believe me if I told 당신 that a boy and I never really kissed?" I ask
"Really? What about Serge?"
"Screw him he never did. He never liked me," I say smiling at Elliot "What about you?"
"Nope. Girls were never interested in me," he says
"They have no idea what they are missing," I say 키싱 him on the nose
"Yeah. 의해 the way I was right," he say putting his hand on my cheek
"Right about what?"
"About being your lover," he says pushing me down on the 침대 and 키싱 me
I have no idea what's happening now but it feels nice
'It was March 1957 and I was taking photographs in Paris.1 afternoon I went up the Bastille and I saw 2 연인들 on a balcony.They were standing very near each other.They were talking.I took just 1 사진 and they didn't hear me.I called it 연인들 at the Bastille.Luckily for me this 사진 became very 인기 in France.Soon posters and postcards with my picture of the 2 연인들 were everywhere.But I never knew who the 2 young people were.They never contacted me.'
'30 years later I had an exhibition of my 사진 in Paris.I was talking to some 프렌즈 when suddenly a man came up to me and said,'I know your 2 lovers.They live near here.I can take 당신 there if 당신 want.'I immediately decided to go and meet them.This was their story.'
'30 years later I had an exhibition of my 사진 in Paris.I was talking to some 프렌즈 when suddenly a man came up to me and said,'I know your 2 lovers.They live near here.I can take 당신 there if 당신 want.'I immediately decided to go and meet them.This was their story.'
