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posted by Epismatic
The Man With No Eyes Collection (5): The Director



When the curtain rises, all is forgiven.

Shielding our thoughts, so we just keep on living.

I happened to wander backstage one dark day.

And passed through the veil after losing my way.


Then, in the director’s chair, to my surprise,

There sat a tall man, dressed sharply in lies,

His smile was beaming; his face had no eyes.


I fled from the room, where my mind was left reeling

The image I’d seen left a deep, queasy feeling,

A creature of darkness, inhuman and wrong,

But the truth is, I had known him all along.


For this man and that man are one and the same,

One born from intentions of dodging the blame,

And one burning bridges to hide from his shame.


I think back to that day, to the director’s chair,

And before I realize it, I see myself there.

The actor, the liar, in over his head,

His dreams are alive, but his reason’s long dead,


This role will be perfect, a way to shine bright,

A less obvious way, pulling strings, out of sight,

But still, I’ll be cloaked in that radiant light,


When the curtain rises, all is forgiven,

To hell with that now! I’ll become the villain,

If I can’t be acknowledged the way that I am,

I’ll make it so I can’t be lonely again!


I’ll course through the hearts of the crowd like thunder,

Take all of my agony, tear them asunder!

If that’s what it takes to get them to wonder.


If that’s what it takes for them to...

Now I wonder.

Is this a mistake, 또는 some terrible blunder?

Am I a 로스트 cause, who was doomed from the start?

또는 was I at fault for the state of my heart?


The director’s chair has become like my cage,

Ensnared 의해 my power, consumed 의해 my rage,

My only chance now

is to exit the stage.



Phew! This is easily the one I've worked the hardest on, as it is meant to be the largest change in character. Went through several rewrites to communicate the ideas I wanted. Please let me know your thoughts; I am an amateur poet, after all!
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posted by JohnnyCadeskid
Music: Shattered

Keaira’s dad Johnny killed a soc when he was 16
This made many soc’s that already hated him for being a greaser hate him more
His parents had beat him making him have a horrible childhood
His best 프렌즈 were all he could count on
He then met his future wife Kim
He had Marshall
Then Keaira who care along with Reeve and Kaden
Then Kyra
Then Johnny Jr.
His friend Dally didn’t have a much better life
Dally grew up in New York on his own
He came to Oklahoma when he was 13
He there had a reputation as a criminal
He then became 프렌즈 with Johnny, Ponyboy, Sodapop, Steve, Darry, and Two-bit...
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A/N; AHAHAHAHAHA! And 당신 thought i wouldn't dare ;). Anyways, here's something weird i don't even understand. Seriously. But I'll post it here because I feel happy. Yeah, even I don't believe it. Anyways I'll stop talking 'cause this font is making me feel stupid.

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Breathe. 당신 need to breathe.

“I can’t.” I whimpered “I can’t breathe. It’s too hard. If I breathe, the numbness will go. I can’t let it go.”

You need to. People are counting on 당신 to have a heart-beat. And 의해 심장 beat I mean they count on 당신 to be here. To have a-little...
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posted by Hermione-Fan361
This is a true event. It happened on 1/22/12. I just rewrote it as a short story.



I was in the snow. 
Kevin, Noah, Mackenzie, and Jake were there too.
Kevin wanted to play Ice Yeti, a game in which some people are tackled, and the others are the tacklers. I was a tackler along with Kevin and Jake. Kevin said he and Jake would go after Mackenzie, and that I should get Noah. I blushed a little. I like Noah. A lot. We started out, splitting into two groups. Noah was fast, but he got tired quickly. He suddenly turned around, and we collided. We were in the snow, me on 상단, 맨 위로 of him. He grinned up at me, his brown eyes shining. I knew at that moment how much he liked me too. I could see in his eyes the longing. He wanted to 키스 me, right then and there. But the others were still around... watching. He sat up, and I was then in his lap. He helped me up, giving my fingers a squeeze, and we continued our game.
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posted by problematic124
****Originally The secrets within but changed title, also I own all rights to my story :)****
Prologue
Look at the world, yeah go on and look at it. Now tell me, What do 당신 see? Home? Life? Secrets? Death? Anything? Well most people always see it differently. But they never see what’s right in front of them.
When 당신 look at the world 당신 always see the small things. 당신 never see the big obvious things that lurk in the shadows of every dark corner .
Well some of us see it, others… don’t. You’d be surprised 의해 ever secret, every hidden thing yet to be discovered… 또는 never will.And I...
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posted by peacebaby7
This is for those who have just begun writing, 또는 for those who need helpful advice. I hope this 기사 helps you.

1) Spelling and Grammar

Spelling and grammar is the first thing 당신 worry about. If there are many spelling/grammatical errors, the story doesn't flow very well. 당신 don't have to be an expert, but 당신 at least should have a dictionary nearby and know the basic rules of grammar. You'll pick up on 더 많이 the 더 많이 당신 write.

2) Know Your Topic

First and foremost, after spelling and grammar, 당신 must know what you're 글쓰기 about. And I don't just mean a topic in general. For example,...
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posted by VampirePrinsess
Mommy... Johnny brought a gun to school,
He told his 프렌즈 that it was cool,
And when he pulled the trigger back,
It shot with a great crack.
Mommy, I was a good girl, I did what I was told,
I went to school, I got straight A's, I even got the gold!
But Mommy, when I went school that day,
I never said good-bye,
I'm sorry Mommy, I had to go, But Mommy, please don't cry. When Johnny shot
the gun, He hit me and another,
And all because Johnny, Got the gun from his older brother.
Mommy, please tell Daddy; That I 사랑 him very much,
And please tell Chris; my boyfriend; That it wasn't just a crush.
And tell...
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posted by ballaholic
I am broken.
    My body is broken.
        I limp down the sidewalk.
        People stare. Are they concerned? 또는 disgusted?
        I wish I was invisible.
    My family is broken.
        My father disowns me.
        My mother is disappointed.
        I don’t know my brother at all.
    My life is broken.
        My 프렌즈 are gone.
        My job can’t support me.
        I have nowhere to turn.
    But my soul is unbroken.
        I still believe in good.
        I still have hope.
        I still think the world can change.
I may be broken.
But my soul is not.
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 Lee Sanchez
Lee Sanchez
I like to sing. No, scratch that. I love to sing. Just... not in front of people. It's not really my cup of 차 performing for everyone who wants to hear me. How would I be able to sing when people are screaming my name?

"LEE! LEE! LEE!"

What a nightmare that'd be.

When I'm alone I can hum a sweet tune to myself, but never when there are a couple of people around. Someday, I'm gonna get over my stage-fright and when I do, I'll be able to sing in front of millions of people as I become a 별, 스타 around the world. Unfortunately, I believe my phobia of the spotlight will keep me from getting to my goal....
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