f I had to identify the most important step in 글쓰기 an essay, I would probably say it was the organization. Coming up with a thesis is a big part of essay writing, but it doesn’t mean anything if 당신 do not have the proper support for it. That is where organization comes into play. If 당신 can put your thoughts in the right order, 당신 can get people to feel a certain way as they read your work. It’s like taking them on a journey through your mind.
Here are some tips to help 당신 effectively organize your essays in the future.
The Pyramid Method
This is my 가장 좋아하는 way to write essays, and I feel it is the most effective. 당신 start 의해 barely introducing what 당신 are going to talk about, and then 당신 build a pyramid of support from there. In the conclusion, 당신 make your big, powerful assertion that makes people go “Wait, what just happened? I just got 암캐, 암 캐 slapped 의해 brilliance!” This method is great for persuasive essays, but I use it for everything. It just makes sense.
The Inverted Pyramid Method
This is the exact opposite of the method above, where 당신 start with a big idea and then support it afterward. I don’t like this because it lacks progression. It doesn’t keep people hooked. It may work well for a web 기사 또는 a news story, but not a college essay. Nevertheless, some professors 사랑 this method, so 당신 just have to test it out and see what they think.
The 샌드위치 Method
In this method, 당신 start with something big, provide support, and end with something equally big. Basically 당신 have a thesis at the beginning that poses a 질문 또는 a problem, and then 당신 have a conclusion that 답변 it. I have used this method a few times, and it has worked well. I would recommend using it at least once 또는 two.
General Tips for Essay Organization
In the case of a compare and contrast essay, don’t do one paragraph for one story and then another paragraph for the other story. Try to mix the two together and compare them point 의해 point. Each point would be an 기사 all its own.
Try to talk about events in chronological order so your readers can follow them. If 당신 jump all through a book 또는 resource, 당신 may lose track of your focus and fluidity.
Don’t be afraid to use small paragraphs if 당신 have different topics in each of them. It is better to do that than to have a long paragraph that no one wants to read through.
If 당신 follow my tips above for your 다음 essay in college, 당신 should be able to wow the professor and get your point across at the same time. Good luck!
Here are some tips to help 당신 effectively organize your essays in the future.
The Pyramid Method
This is my 가장 좋아하는 way to write essays, and I feel it is the most effective. 당신 start 의해 barely introducing what 당신 are going to talk about, and then 당신 build a pyramid of support from there. In the conclusion, 당신 make your big, powerful assertion that makes people go “Wait, what just happened? I just got 암캐, 암 캐 slapped 의해 brilliance!” This method is great for persuasive essays, but I use it for everything. It just makes sense.
The Inverted Pyramid Method
This is the exact opposite of the method above, where 당신 start with a big idea and then support it afterward. I don’t like this because it lacks progression. It doesn’t keep people hooked. It may work well for a web 기사 또는 a news story, but not a college essay. Nevertheless, some professors 사랑 this method, so 당신 just have to test it out and see what they think.
The 샌드위치 Method
In this method, 당신 start with something big, provide support, and end with something equally big. Basically 당신 have a thesis at the beginning that poses a 질문 또는 a problem, and then 당신 have a conclusion that 답변 it. I have used this method a few times, and it has worked well. I would recommend using it at least once 또는 two.
General Tips for Essay Organization
In the case of a compare and contrast essay, don’t do one paragraph for one story and then another paragraph for the other story. Try to mix the two together and compare them point 의해 point. Each point would be an 기사 all its own.
Try to talk about events in chronological order so your readers can follow them. If 당신 jump all through a book 또는 resource, 당신 may lose track of your focus and fluidity.
Don’t be afraid to use small paragraphs if 당신 have different topics in each of them. It is better to do that than to have a long paragraph that no one wants to read through.
If 당신 follow my tips above for your 다음 essay in college, 당신 should be able to wow the professor and get your point across at the same time. Good luck!
Always running
All the time,
Chasing a dream
As I follow the signs.
Out of breath
I miss a turn,
I wander the paths
Ready to learn.
I start to get impatient
I'm working so hard,
So how come I'm not there yet
I've played all my cards.
Life is like a rollercoaster
Mine never stops,
It takes me round in circles
Back to the start.
There are so many highs and lows
Yet they''re all the same,
I need a change of track
Something different to my name.
Each step I take aches my body
And I'm waiting for the day,
That a different train will come along
And take me a different way.
All the time,
Chasing a dream
As I follow the signs.
Out of breath
I miss a turn,
I wander the paths
Ready to learn.
I start to get impatient
I'm working so hard,
So how come I'm not there yet
I've played all my cards.
Life is like a rollercoaster
Mine never stops,
It takes me round in circles
Back to the start.
There are so many highs and lows
Yet they''re all the same,
I need a change of track
Something different to my name.
Each step I take aches my body
And I'm waiting for the day,
That a different train will come along
And take me a different way.
Dusty Streets
A blazing sun,
음식 and Water
There is none.
Living on hope
Crying out,
Helping others
Around and about.
Children Shouting
They wail and cry,
Willing for a change
A signal, a sign.
They're grateful for everytihng
Whatever comes their way,
They're constantly working
All night, all day.
The air is filthy
They cough and they weep,
They want to survive
They sniffle and sleep.
Begging off strangers
It's all they can do,
Someone to help them
It could be you.
-Emily Eaton (13)
A blazing sun,
음식 and Water
There is none.
Living on hope
Crying out,
Helping others
Around and about.
Children Shouting
They wail and cry,
Willing for a change
A signal, a sign.
They're grateful for everytihng
Whatever comes their way,
They're constantly working
All night, all day.
The air is filthy
They cough and they weep,
They want to survive
They sniffle and sleep.
Begging off strangers
It's all they can do,
Someone to help them
It could be you.
-Emily Eaton (13)
I have a secret: I'm afraid. I'm terribly afraid that I AM GOING TO DIE. I didn't ask for leukemia. Nor did I expect it. Especially not chronic myelogenous leukemia. Especially when chronic myelogenous leukemia tends to affect the OLDER males, and I'm only what, 14?
But do 당신 know why it has to be a secret? I have a family: my dad and Jae, my youngest sister. [Yeah, I have two more, but, they're out of my life at the moment.] They cried their hearts out once I was diagnosed. They were afraid that they'd lose another family member--after all, my mother passed away after a car accident. I promised to be strong. For Dad. For Jae. For Mom.
But if being strong means that I have to hold back all these tears, that I have to surpress all my fear in order to comfort my family, sometimes I wish I didn't make that promise.
But do 당신 know why it has to be a secret? I have a family: my dad and Jae, my youngest sister. [Yeah, I have two more, but, they're out of my life at the moment.] They cried their hearts out once I was diagnosed. They were afraid that they'd lose another family member--after all, my mother passed away after a car accident. I promised to be strong. For Dad. For Jae. For Mom.
But if being strong means that I have to hold back all these tears, that I have to surpress all my fear in order to comfort my family, sometimes I wish I didn't make that promise.
I was in the class the other day, and Mrs.Crosswaer was handing out new assignments. And he stared at me! Oh his name is Sam, and he was staring at me dreamly!!!!!!!!!!!
It was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cooooooooooooooool!
I am SO SORRY! It had to be lonfer so yeah!
It was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cooooooooooooooool!
I am SO SORRY! It had to be lonfer so yeah!
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One lonely sunday afternoon
I sit in my chamber and have nothing to do
My 사랑 is far away
I wonder if (s)he's already forgotten me
So I sadly watch the sky
See the raindrops passing by
One looonely sunday afternooon...
One looonely sunday afternoon
One lonely sunday afternoon
I'm even as my 꽃 still out of bloom
I find some old photos, covered with dust
I cannot forget 당신 although I know that I must
So I sadly let them fly
And this time I have to cry
One looonely sunday afternooon...
One looonely sunday afternoon
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당신 seek for spark of hope.
Your life held by
darkness thoughts,
anchor is
some place else.
Bad luck follows 당신
like a hook,
won't let 당신 go,
won't leave 당신 alone.
당신 smile today,
and cry whole eternity,
like that's your fate,
disturbing thoughts
to lie inside of you,
to take away everything
that 당신 hope for.
Devil is calling your name,
leaves 당신 not,
당신 don't see the 앤젤 on
your shoulder,
trying to give 당신 a strength.
당신 long for life
that 당신 don't know of,
당신 seek for peace,
trying to get away
from misty forest
that stains your heart
into black.