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f I had to identify the most important step in 글쓰기 an essay, I would probably say it was the organization. Coming up with a thesis is a big part of essay writing, but it doesn’t mean anything if 당신 do not have the proper support for it. That is where organization comes into play. If 당신 can put your thoughts in the right order, 당신 can get people to feel a certain way as they read your work. It’s like taking them on a journey through your mind.

Here are some tips to help 당신 effectively organize your essays in the future.

The Pyramid Method
This is my 가장 좋아하는 way to write essays, and I feel it is the most effective. 당신 start 의해 barely introducing what 당신 are going to talk about, and then 당신 build a pyramid of support from there. In the conclusion, 당신 make your big, powerful assertion that makes people go “Wait, what just happened? I just got 암캐, 암 캐 slapped 의해 brilliance!” This method is great for persuasive essays, but I use it for everything. It just makes sense.

The Inverted Pyramid Method
This is the exact opposite of the method above, where 당신 start with a big idea and then support it afterward. I don’t like this because it lacks progression. It doesn’t keep people hooked. It may work well for a web 기사 또는 a news story, but not a college essay. Nevertheless, some professors 사랑 this method, so 당신 just have to test it out and see what they think.

The 샌드위치 Method
In this method, 당신 start with something big, provide support, and end with something equally big. Basically 당신 have a thesis at the beginning that poses a 질문 또는 a problem, and then 당신 have a conclusion that 답변 it. I have used this method a few times, and it has worked well. I would recommend using it at least once 또는 two.

General Tips for Essay Organization
In the case of a compare and contrast essay, don’t do one paragraph for one story and then another paragraph for the other story. Try to mix the two together and compare them point 의해 point. Each point would be an 기사 all its own.

Try to talk about events in chronological order so your readers can follow them. If 당신 jump all through a book 또는 resource, 당신 may lose track of your focus and fluidity.

Don’t be afraid to use small paragraphs if 당신 have different topics in each of them. It is better to do that than to have a long paragraph that no one wants to read through.

If 당신 follow my tips above for your 다음 essay in college, 당신 should be able to wow the professor and get your point across at the same time. Good luck!
It’s the color of you
당신 always wore it
It’s the color we shared
As we hid form them

With it we showed our true selves,
Though no one cared
Our 주황색, 오렌지 book bags
Saved us from some pain

We protected each other
But it wasn’t enough
We were like two 주황색, 오렌지 crayons
When everyone else was green

Then 당신 left me alone,
All I had was our color orange
As they hit me
I took peace in knowing
당신 were in the 주황색, 오렌지 field in the sky
당신 always said was there.

The 주황색, 오렌지 of the sun set
Is your smile
Even though 당신 left too soon

Orange…

Now it’s my color
My way of remembering you
Now I am the lone 주황색, 오렌지 in the rainbow
Without 당신 here


I protect my own
Though I wish 당신 were here

Now 주황색, 오렌지 is my color
A color for 당신 bravery
A color for my survival

주황색, 오렌지 will forever be our color
Even though death took 당신 away

Forever 주황색, 오렌지 for you,
Sweet Cassidy.
posted by StarWarrior
CHAPTER ONE
    “I’ve got it!” Shade squeaked.
    “Hurry!” 에메랄드 barked, trying to keep up with him.
    “Corner it there, quick!” Kitmira barked.
    Shade turned the rabbit toward the thick thorn bushes. It was getting tired. Shade pounced; he landed perfectly on its back.
    “Bite it!” Neko commanded.
    Emerald lunged 앞으로 and sunk her teeth into its neck.
    “Good catch!” Mamma called.
    “Did we hunt...
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posted by LaDispute
She was obsessed with the idea that tragedy is beauty and death is immortality.

He would watch her when she opened her mouth in class, watch the way she flashed smiles when she spoke. He swore to commit the crinkles at the corners of her eyes to memory, the freckled valleys lit up 의해 her eyes.

He soon found that he could be the cause of those valleys, a Creator building up his own world from the base of her narrow satisfaction. She soon found that his convictions in tandem with hers had the power to endlessly pursue the edge of the universe in its expansion.

And when they first kissed that cold...
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posted by darkling_menace
(I have thought of a bunch of characters over the years, but since I suck at making stories for them to be in, I can only make the character itself with a bit of back story. Today is going to be the first 일 that I'll be posting these characters on here, since this is the 글쓰기 club, and I don't want my mind to be cluttered with character ideas. This character came to me when I was rethinking an idea for an old character.)

Darcel was once the leader of a tribe of ancient humans in what is now known as modern England, he was a sorcerer who used his magic as an advantage over everyone else,...
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posted by terra_rocker
Chapter one –
Unlike the last few months the last three days had broken out of the tedious routine my days had grown tired and used to. My 일 took the same route as every other one that was until I had to show the new girl… Briara, where her locker was. Briara was cheerful and happy, dressed in an array of exotic bright colours that not only made me want to vomit but shield my eyes, her outfit an extreme contrast to my alternate altered clothing. My plain black vest top, freshly ripped into a V-neck with added buttons and a tie, matched only with skinny jeans in a dark grey. My dress style...
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Thế vận hội Olympic năm 2012 sẽ tổ chức tại 런던 nước Anh từ ngày 27/7 đến ngày 12/8
Theo danh sách yêu cầu nghệ sĩ sẽ biểu diễn phần khai mạc được tổ chức trên mạng gồm có
1.Hurts
2.Jin Akanishi
3.Within Temptation
4.Alfie Boe
5.Alex Sparrow
6.Blue
7.Morning Musume
8.Anastacia
9.X Japan
10.Jang Geun Suk
11.Coldplay
12.Rain
13.U-KISS
14.Il Volo
15.Jane Zhang
16.Paul McCartney
17.Beyonce
18.L'Arc-en-Ciel
19.Lena Katina
20.Megurine Luka
21.f(x)
22.Infinite
23.Jedward
24.Ho-kago 차 Time
25.Jolin Tsai
26.Sonohra
27.T-ara
28.Thalia
29.Nelly Furtado
30.Tiziano Ferro
31.Rihanna...
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posted by fiestagirl12345
Kaylie's P.O.V

i was running in the woods hoping they wouldnt catch me. the scientist who were trying to test me. cause i was super natural. i didnt know i was. until they had me tied down. i dont know what happened i lit it on 불, 화재 then drowned the guys. i was shocked my self. i was runnig trying to climb the trees. i found the perfect one. i ran and climbed it to the top. they were shooting lazers i was doging them. they were supposed to numb 당신 then knock 당신 out. they finnally gave up and walked off. they droped some weapons. i smile and get them all. i keep runnig ti'll i heard the most...
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posted by stellamusa101
Caitlin is a 17-year old girl who likes socialising. She is very fun but doesn't know her family secret, her family was servants to the king of the 불, 화재 Kingdom,Hudson, 17 years ago. But Caitlin has her very own secret she doesn't know..

Caitlin is turning on her phone to chat with Nina. Just as her phone turned on, an incoming call from Nina appeared. Caitlin press green button. "Caitlin! Caitlin! Here this, Dean, your crush, has a crush on you!!" shouted Nina as Caitlin turned on dial. "Now I know why people call 당신 the joke master," sighs Caitlin.

"I am serious talk! He told me not to...
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posted by para-scence
"Ready, Jack?" Cat asked again. I sighed impatiently and nodded.

"Yeah! Just do it already!" She'd never done this before. Normally I would've done this myself, but I was too high right now, and despite that, I was still smart enough to know I shouldn't do this to myself right now.

"Okay..." Cat spoke warily. She got ready.

"Don't close your eyes!" I warned. She whined for a bit, then took a deep breath.

"Okay. Ready? One... Two... Three---" Cat shoved the needle through the side of my right nostril. I winced a bit. Cat freaked out 더 많이 than I did. "Oh my gosh! Are 당신 okay?!" I took the needle...
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posted by Albina21
Tell me if 당신 like it! If people do, I'll post 더 많이 of it here. If not, I'll leave it on Quotev. Or, tell me if 당신 want the link to the Quotev chapters.

Iggy stood in front of her bathroom mirror and checked her hair roots. Good, she didn't have to do any last 분 touch-ups. She shrugged on her tote bag and ran outside, flying to the bus stop. Derek was standing at the stop, waiting for his friend. "Hey Ignis, how'd 당신 sleep?"

Iggy sneered at Derek, "Ha ha, your hilarious. 당신 know exactly how I slept! And stop calling my Ignis, it's been Iggy since the third grade." She folded her arms...
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posted by alicia386
Prologue

      It was your typical sunny 일 in Los Angelus. 6 년 old Sophie and Zoe Mallory were having a 차 party with their best 프렌즈 Emma and Erica. Even though Emma and Erica were unnaturally pale and wore very ancient types of clothing, Sophie and Zoe didn't notice. They were just thrilled to have friends. Emma was as pale as her sister Erica and their clothes looked like something from the seventeenth century. If Sophie and Zoe were any older, they might have thought this was puzzling 또는 strange but they looked at it as if it was something everyone wears.
      Their mom peeped...
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Your 심장 is sore, crippled up like paper.
Your voice is weak, barely passing 의해 you.
Your body is tired, let it lay for tonight.
당신 are but you- a stranger to much.
No one cares to know you.
They do not wish to after all.
And all those times 당신 told everything-

It was a lie, I 사랑 당신 became a lie. A horrible lie not one can ever take back to you. How could they, breaking your very soul to the apple's wrinkled core? It shook and broke, just like that. Lonesome and ever so exhausted of even thinking it would be different this time around.

You're so hopeless. 당신 probably cannot 옮기기 away from the pain, the desecration left in the path at the end. Then again, in the end it probably doesn't even matter, does it?

Once a joy, now a misery forever scared, alone.
posted by TheKingsWard12
(Please do not take my story I have been 글쓰기 it for years! PLEASE!!!!!)

Ariana York who is the daughter of Richard the third has been taught at a very young age that she is in line to the throne. Her 사랑 for her father turns to hate when he kills her mother. One thing crosses her mind one thing she wishes to do 더 많이 than anything......Kill her father. Everything changes when a serving boy called Tristan Barter (The enemy) and his father are captured. The pair hate each others guts but can they look past it? Her youngest brother Will sends a Calick after his sister to try and kill her. Ariana,...
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posted by Potter-rulez
I could feel the rejection from halfway across the room, hear the laughter, and just knew they were talking about me. I tried to ignore it, but the tears threatened, exusing myself to go to the toilet I desperately fought for control. The tears overflowed, it was like a tap was turned on. I had absolutely no control over them, they just ran down, racing each other to my chin, when I was finished I walked off to my 다음 class.

On my way over, Mr Mofti saw me, said hi and asked how I was. I replied, saying I was fine, he almost looked like he was going to walk away, but, then he asked if I really...
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posted by fetchgirl2366
Someday...I will 옮기기 away from this place and settle somewhere where the past won't come back to haunt me. Someday...I will help my family get whatever they need. Someday...I will make myself a better me and make a difference in where I live now...

The name's Jane Moseby. Fifteen years old. It looks pretty bad around where I live. Everything seemed to have happened in one 초 at the least. There's darkness where the light's supposed to be. I can't even fully recover from the fact that the town of Cambodia has turned into a trash land after the war planes dropped their bombs on us. I'm glad...
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During state testing week, I had only one 일 where I saw all of my students. I had my students write a story and several of them said they didn’t know what to write. This student found a solution to her problem. I keep telling students if they can't think of anything then they just need to write whatever pops into their heads The following is printed with Chey’s permission. She did write a proper story after this.

I can’t find anything to write sitting in my mom’s car, where my bag was. I’m trying to figure out something to write and maybe after my little sister and older sister...
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posted by hgfan5602
I walk into
The Fields of Sorrow
Once again.
Why do I walk there
Almost everyday?

I stroll along the grasses
Thinking
Bearing a horrible pain.
I think of the world around me
And how much they have inspired me.

I start to cry once again.
All my teachers
All my friends,
They have always stood 의해 me,
When things went wrong.

I want a chance to repay them,
To show them that...
Their work was useful.
To show them that
I am truly thankful.

Why do I have to leave them then
Now?
No, now's not a good time.
But I know it was not intended
That I leave them now.

I want to show all those people
That they have been
The change of my life,
That they have made my life so much
Better,
That they were the flames
In the darkness.
posted by hgfan5602
Hey, 당신 know what? I 사랑 cake, just like any other ordinary kid in the universe. Well, that is, up until one particular day, when this strange incident occurred. I was sleeping in, like usual. Guess what. I was late today. But when I woke up, I saw a 대합, 조개 closing its mouth on my eyelids, forcing me to fall back asleep. I couldn't believe my eyes. I must be hallucinating. It was a strange-looking clam, all right. It had two googly eyes, a short tail, a large and sausage-like mouth, and a tiny little nose. Now, out of all the crazy things 당신 could think of, I'll bet 당신 anything that 당신 never...
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posted by PFEIFFER11
Run. It was the only thing going threw Leven,Evie, Matthew and Cameron's mind right now as the 개 and people chased them into the forest.They went as fast as they could as the 개 got closer and closer.

They weren't suppose to be running from the 개 right now. Then again they weren't suppose to be convicted of a crime they didn't do but it had happened.

"Hurry they're gettin' away!" A loud and gruff voice said behind them. The barking got louder. A sharp pain was in Leven's side as she ran. She had taken track at school so she was use to it but it was terrible. She could barely breath as she ran.

Matthew turned his head to look back at the others for a 스플릿, 분할 초 and had came in contact with something hard. The thing fell back and Matthew staggered. They all stopped then as the body picked herself up. They looked I to the eyes of a criminal. The most wanted person alive in america. Brig.