글쓰기 Article: He's Gone... But I hear Him

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posted by GabbyRaptor

There I am... Gabby Raptor.... " I miss him" I say to myself standing on a montain... alone. Then I hear a voice..." Mike...?" I say.... Nothing there... Mike was an old family friend... He was like a father to me.... The father that left me when I was five... My mother she went after him and eventuly died... I found that out 3 years later after the acedent.... Mike was a good friend.... All I have left of him is his horse "Boxer". It was my fault the killer got to Mike... It always is my fault.... I'm nothing but trouble... But what sadens me 더 많이 is that I'm rejected...My 3 brothers and my grandfather... The only people I have left..... The 사랑 of my life.... The only person I will ever love" ... I bet he doesn't notice me at all... To busy with training" I said... Then I hear someone calling my name... I turn around quickly... Still nothing there.... I fall on the floor... Then begin crying....." Why do I even live? " I said Then the same voice that called my name said " Because in life there's always something to live for..." I jumped to my feet... A bit startled actully. Then just start thinking about my life... Mike .... and the 사랑 of my life.... Even though I'm 16... Life is very complicated....

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War for the freedom chapter 1

posted by juliet98

In the 년 4125 the Earth was still turning on itself. Apparently everything was the same as it was two thausand years ago. But it wasn't so. The democracy we got fighting was distroied 의해 a man. After 15 years of wars, in 4025 Cyrus defeated free people and he established the tyranny. The whole world was controlled and the freedom dind't exist anymore. Everyone 로스트 trust in everything, in love, in courage, in God. Most of people didn't know that there was a prophecy. It said that the humanity had to pass through a century of pain and fear to realize how important freedom was. But then in...

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True Of The Unforgotten Past: Chapter 4 kidnap For The Deal

posted by MadagascarGirl

After Skipper and Katherine told the story to Kowalski and Rico, they went to theirs beds. But when penguins went inside to their HQ, they noticed Private wasn't in his bunk. The TV was turned on.
"Hello peng-you-ins" said a familiar voice. Penguins lookes at the TV.
"Blowhole!" said Skipper in angry.
"I kidnaped someone, do 당신 who?" asked Blowhole and he laughed evilly.
"Private..."said Skipper "If 당신 hurt him I'll kill 당신 Blowhole!"
"Oh, I'm scared" said Blowhole and laughed again "If 당신 want save him, 당신 must come here, alone, without your team"
"I'll came"
"But Skipper..." said Kowalski.
"You...

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Sneak Peak of My Book/Novel "Remembering You"--Chapter 2

posted by PonygirlCurtis7

Chapter 2
Three Months Earlier

There was not much bright where I was. Just dull, cheap lamp-light. Ya know? The cheap light that bulbs give off. Not until I stepped out into the golden hue of this evening’s sunset could I get a good picture with my eyes. I had been in a bar with my 프렌즈 or, as it’s usually called, my gang. It wasn’t a real rough bar, the one I had been in. there were a couple fights every so often, but not much. Gavin, the owner, was good about that. He didn’t want the fuzz showing up all the time, so when he wanted a fight to stop, it stopped. He could persuade almost...

short murder story wroten 의해 me 초 CHAPTER

posted by juliet98

the first part: www.fanpop.com/spots/true-writers/articles/171410/titl...ter

SECOND CHAPTER
Paul Dock was bent with the nose that pratically touch the floor. He studying the crime scene, as usual. He isn't convinced that the assassin is Elvira Gorrige. It would be too obvius. He doesn't find nothing intresting on the stage, so he goes behind of that.
-Can i help 당신 sir, are 당신 sick?- asks a female voice, seeing the detective with the nose on the floor.
-Oh, no thank 당신 i'm good, i'm detective Dock, i was looking for something here.- replies Dock with a smile on his face
-may i ask 당신 some question...

American and British English

posted by ZekiYuro

If you've learnt British English and you're travelling in the States,or if you've learnt American English and you're travelling in Britain,you'll notice some differences.An obvious difference is the accent,but most travellers find that they don't have too many problems with this.There are some grammatical differences,but they shoudn't make it difficult to understand people,or to communicate.That leaves differences in vocabulary,which can cause misunderstandings.Sometimes the difference is only the spelling,for example,in British English 'center','colour',and 'travelled',and in American English 'centre','color',and 'traveled'.But sometimes the word is completely different in British and American English,and it's good idea to be prepared.

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The Holy Robbery (oneshot)

posted by thetscfan121

Please comment, I need the comments, writers feed themselves from comments, so if 당신 don't want to kill me of starvation, please comment.

Lots of bad things happen these days. War, violence, corruption, people confusing SFX for SEX, drugs, death, car accidents, etc,etc,etc. Peter knew of them and said that 인기 line in puertorrican youth language, "ME IMPORTA UN BICHO!!!" Literally translated, "I care a dick." That's the way things are and that's the way I tell you. Well, Peter had one point against him: he was a catholic. Confirmed, conbined and sealed in paper, he was supposed to be the...

How to Avoid Common Grammatical Errors

posted by IloveMyLord

using correct grammar will make a difference between appearing professional and educated 또는 uneducated and ignorant. Many people make common grammatical errors when they write and when they speak. Use these steps to avoid the most common errors and sound intelligent and well informed

Tips:

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Make sure that verb tenses match. If the subject is present tense, then the verb must be as well. The same principle applies to past tense subjects and verbs.

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Think about whether the subject is single 또는 plural. Words like don't, aren't, were, are and were belong with plural subjects. For example, "It don't...

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A Blood's Tale: Part 2

posted by DarkGirl23

The 일 my sister died, was the 일 I, myself, died as well.

She may not have knew it, but she was my hero.
I guess, however, all big sisters were kind of like that.

I remember seeing it, the body, the blood, the note she left in her own form of representation.
It was written, all across the wall, the note she left behind was in her own blood.

Hatred.
What a word, so different from hated; just a different form.
Which one am I? I should be described as both.
I hate you, and I know 당신 hate me too. Everyone does.
Here are my final words to you:
Pain is welcoming
Crawling down my arm so slow
Blood that leaks...

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Suji No Shi (Death In Numbers)

posted by narlyvamp1234

Suji No Shi
A girl stands in her home; a hole has been ripped in the wall. She stares at her father in horror, he is covered in blood. At her father’s foot lays her mother, a huge hole ripped in her stomach, and she is dead. Blood drips from her father’s hands… she looked up at her father and, in an instant, he is gone. The girl falls to the ground and starts crying… that’s when she feels a tap on her shoulder. She turns around and sees another little girl, with 담홍색, 핑크 hair and green eyes. They stare at each other silently… not saying a word. The first girl whose mother had been...

The Sinners' Saint (a short story and contest entry)

posted by Aisuanime

Zoeiz took a subtle relaxed deep breathe. And held it just for a moment.

Christ, 의해 highest heaven adored…

The cold blistering air nipped at her exposed cheeks and the tip of her petite nose. A perfect atmosphere for the winters most important day, Christmas.

It was only 7:55 in the morning. Children throughout the modest town would be up 의해 now, pouncing on their drowsy parents, eagerly anticipating on opening the wrapped gifts and stuffed bags.

She breathed out, the vaporous air revealing her breath.

Christ, the everlasting Lord…

Naturally, fresh flakes of snow began to fall from the...

Majestic Magic: Chapter 2

posted by StarWarsFan7

Rosella arrives at her high school and opens her coral locker. "Ugh. I hate hauling this stupid messenger bag!" she says as she tries to get the bag off of her shoulder. "Her? Are 당신 sure?" A group of boys say just not far away from Rosella. "Yeah. I'm plannin' on askin' her out." The tallest one says out of all three. Rosella secretly had put a spell on her own wand to transform it into a beautiful ring. Anytime she needed it, all Rosella had to do was slip the ring off and chant the code words to unlock the enchantment. "Why do 당신 want to ask Rosella Karst out? She's a total weirdo. Who...

Vanished- my progressing novel.

posted by ashleigh-jadee

It was a winter’s morning when Nicola realised something strange. It was a peculiar morning, yet she didn’t understand why.
    Nicola called her mum from her bedroom, but she got no reply. She tried a 초 time, and even third time lucky. Yet Nicola still got no reply.
    Finally, after a few 분 of what was an eerie silence, she jumped out of her 침대 and ran across to her mum’s bedroom. She flung the door open with such force that it made a loud bang, scaring herself at first for sure.
    Nicola took a glance at the bed....

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My Crazy Bounty Hunter Life Ch. 2

posted by tigerseye43

Once I was finally out of the hospital I was afraid to sleep in my own apartment. Kyle asked me if I would like to sleep at his house but then I remembered that last time spent the night at kyle's house. It involved no clothes and a lotnof dirty things I don't want to mention. But I said yes anyways, I had nowhere to sleep.
When we got to kyle's house I remembered I had not bottom any clothes. So for pajamas I wore one of kyle's t-shirts and my unferware. For 공식 만찬, 저녁 식사 we ordered pizza, delicious. After 공식 만찬, 저녁 식사 I brushed my teeth and combed my hair.
I didn't knowtice when Kyle came in the bathroom....

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Boy of Soul chapter 1 part 3

posted by FURRY

Simba sat me down on the floor as he pulled a chew toy out of his 코트 pocket and started chewing it *squeak squeak squeak* I opened my eye's, I was hopeing it was all a dream "Mother...." I said as I sat up slightly, as I looked around I knew I wasn't it wasn't a dream, I looked over at Simba "....Simba" I said as I started cring, I grabed Simba and held him tightly, as my tears rolled down my face Simba put his arm's around "Max...." Simba replied crying a little as well, as we sat there crying over what had happen my chest started to glow again but this time it wasn't purple it was blue...

My Best Friend Is Trying To Set Me Up With My Enemy [01] (slash/boyxboy)

posted by Insight357

Hi, I’m Rayne White, and 당신 just got a free pass to my inner thoughts, and things going on at the moment. I’m seventeen, hyper, and gay. I’m incredibly sexy with my ice blue eyes, and my long black hair. I’m around 5’9”.

I have a best friend, her name is Lilah Devins. She is like my fag hag. Lilah is a bitch, but I 사랑 her anyway. She has long brown hair and brown eyes. Lilah is 프렌즈 with most of the gay guys at school, which is all good and well, but she was 프렌즈 with my nemesis, Remy Clarke.

Remy Clarke had tormented me since kindergarten. Lilah wouldn’t have me saying...

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Unforgivable Ch. 10

posted by para-scence

I didn't know which way to run. One foot went this way, the other went that way. My knees faltered and locked. I fell to the ground in a mess of tears. I wanted to keep myself open, but instead I cowered in fear. I whimpered when two strong hands grabbed the tops of my arms and lifted me up to my feet. My cries came out in staggered breaths; I hyperventilated. The strong arms pulled me into a hug.

"Oh my fucking...." the voice said, but didn't finish. "Kodi, I swear if I wasn't so happy to see you, I'd kill 당신 right now." I peered up through my blinding tears at him. Even though I could barely...

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Unforgivable Ch. 3

posted by para-scence

It was when they handed me the motel room key that I realized I was way in over my head. The place was called Big Dan's Motel. It didn't sound great, but it was only thirty dollars a night. I went to the room they had for me, and contrary to the Motel's name, the room was not. The kitchen, living room, and bedroom were crammed into one room. Maybe this is usual for a motel, but I've never been to one. Ever. The carpet was a mossy green, and the tiles in the 부엌, 주방 were white squares with four black diamonds surrounding the center. The bathroom was a decent size, but it reeked. Mold was growing...

Hell's Outlaw--Chapter 11

posted by HouseMindFreak

Chapter 11

The dry hot air inside the 차고 was almost unbearable and the smell of motor oil and tires wasn’t helping. Bone usually did not drink a can of 맥주 while in his 샵 but there were no customers and it was just too damn hot to do anything.

Dropping himself onto his 샵 침상, 소파 and cracked open his Miller Light; he closed his eyes to try and ignore the stuffy heat.
He remembered calling Koda’s house and left a message when no one answered. It was odd for no one to be 집 but he shrugged it off.
Taking a long swig he didn’t realize how tired he felt from the heat as he started to...

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사랑 is Wild: Chapter 5

posted by sawfan13

I began teaching him a little 더 많이 English. He knows 더 많이 words than I expected him to know, but I taught him a little more. He picks up very quickly! Howl is pretty smart for a person that has been in the wild parts of the jungle since infancy (my hypothesis, but he could have been here since a toddler 또는 a wee bit older) and has had no human contact what so ever (another guess from how he reacted when he first saw me)and can pick up just like that! He's also very sweet. So much sweeter than my stupid fiance' Adam. Ugh, what a dope he is! Howl isn't one. He's a sweet gentle animal loving guy...

The Secret of Moordale Mansion Chapter One Part One

posted by stevie_fan98

We sat there, tears falling from our eyes. We, being me and my sister Friday.We were sixteen 년 old triplets but our brother had left for boarding school, three weeks ago. We all had black hair. Friday's short and straight, Mitch's cropped and spikey, mine long and wavy. Friday's red face contrasted so much with her hair and I was sure that I looked almost exactly the same. Izzy the oldest of our younger siblings, age thirteen, just sat. Kate and Sammi, age eight, were twins. Kate rolled around restlessly and Sammi gripped her doll so tight that it almost seemed that it's one eye was popping...