Kristen

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I don't know about everyone, but TOO many people type using net-speak and horrid spelling, grammar, and capitalization. Typos are perfectly fine, but when someone types something that looks like this:

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It completely irritates me.

Those few lines have many things wrong with it:

1) Lack of capitalization and punctuation.

Without proper capitalization, the sentences look very amateur. We don't know when a new sentence starts, and it shows lack of respect (excuse me for sounding cheesy) towards...

This a little short something I wrote in Edward's POV when he left Bella after her birthday party in New Moon. Enjoy, comment, rate, please!!


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"You . . . don't . . . want me?" she asked slowly. She was...

"Carlisle!" Jacob still called into the forest, begging for Grandpa to hear him. His voice sounded a little helpless; afraid to leave me here alone to go and get Grandpa, and also afraid if Grandpa couldn't come; if he was hunting somewhere. What would Jacob do then? The 질문 went both ways; I needed Grandpa here and didn't know what we'd do if he couldn't hear us.
"Jacob!" I breathed a sigh of relief through the pain when I heard Granpa's anxious voice at the door. "What's happening here?" "I don't know!" Jacob's voice sounded wild with worry. "She won't talk to me!" Granpa knelt down...

When Bella finally feel asleep I stoped humming and listened to the thoughts coming from down stairs.Alice was thinking of a song she really liked and Rosalie was thinking about how she couldnt believe Bella came back.Emmett was sing me a little song."Edward and Bella sitting in a 나무, 트리 if 당신 can hear this Eddy come and get me!"I slowly got up and left Bella with her dreams.

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