yea i made the 제목 to be something a little less opinionated, and 더 많이 open to other peoples opinon. so if 당신 agree, say why, and if not, give some examples of her good side! all i did was her bad side cuz thats my opinion. :)
These are from the first chapter of Eclipse.
pg. 14-Charlie to Bella"You're hurting Jake's feelings, avoiding him like this."
response: HOLY CRAP listen to your father Bella!!! 당신 have got a serious problem, and 당신 are hurting poor Jake in the process! WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU?!?!?!?!? GET..A..LIFE, and leave Jacob out of it
pg. 17-in Bella's mind"I wrenched the door out of my way--ridiculously eager--and there he was, my personal miracle."
response: ok Bella, 당신 may think he is your own "personal miracle" and all, but hey, GUESS WHAT?? he loves 당신 UNCONDITIONALLY. and what do 당신 do? OBSESS NON-STOP, NOT LETTING HIM HAvE HIS OWN LIFE, and HANGING ON HIS EVERY WORD! give him some breathin 우주 girl!
pg. 18-Bella's mind "It made me sad that he had to try so hard. I comforted myself with the knowledge that I wouldn't be causing him pain much longer.
response: so the part i underlined, wouldn't be causing him pain much longer???? Bella, honey, 당신 ARE ALWAYS GOING TO CAUSE HIM PAIN. NO MATTER WHAT 당신 DO, HE WILL BE IN PAIN. so dont lead yourself in the wrong direction, thinking that 당신 are so perfect
Yea haha so ok now im done with the very short pointless ranting. PLEASE COMMENT!
These are from the first chapter of Eclipse.
pg. 14-Charlie to Bella"You're hurting Jake's feelings, avoiding him like this."
response: HOLY CRAP listen to your father Bella!!! 당신 have got a serious problem, and 당신 are hurting poor Jake in the process! WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU?!?!?!?!? GET..A..LIFE, and leave Jacob out of it
pg. 17-in Bella's mind"I wrenched the door out of my way--ridiculously eager--and there he was, my personal miracle."
response: ok Bella, 당신 may think he is your own "personal miracle" and all, but hey, GUESS WHAT?? he loves 당신 UNCONDITIONALLY. and what do 당신 do? OBSESS NON-STOP, NOT LETTING HIM HAvE HIS OWN LIFE, and HANGING ON HIS EVERY WORD! give him some breathin 우주 girl!
pg. 18-Bella's mind "It made me sad that he had to try so hard. I comforted myself with the knowledge that I wouldn't be causing him pain much longer.
response: so the part i underlined, wouldn't be causing him pain much longer???? Bella, honey, 당신 ARE ALWAYS GOING TO CAUSE HIM PAIN. NO MATTER WHAT 당신 DO, HE WILL BE IN PAIN. so dont lead yourself in the wrong direction, thinking that 당신 are so perfect
Yea haha so ok now im done with the very short pointless ranting. PLEASE COMMENT!
게시됨 의해 Twilight_News - 28/01/10 at 09:01 am
At the opening of their new 런던 department store, Selfridges held a survey to find out the 상단, 맨 위로 kisses of the past decade. Coming in at number one on their list was the 키스 between Edward and Bella in “Twilight.” Considering the current 팬 frenzy and media hype surrounding the “are they/aren’t they” relationship of Robert Pattinson and Kristen Stewart, this shouldn’t be a big surprise. Other kisses on the list include the upside down Spider-man 키스 and the 키스 from Brokeback Mountain. Entertainment Wise has the details including a slide show of 사진 of Kristen and Rob
black moon 팬 im so sorry im not 글쓰기 very often hope your not mad!
i cant write every 일 cause of my 집 works :(
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Regarding Kayla.....
Guys, I regret to inform 당신 that my internet had committed technical suicide. I have stolen someone's laptop to write this and I hate to tell 당신 that until someone revives my internet no further Kayla chapters can be posted.
This is an unforseen event and I will kick as many asses as I can to get the internet working agan.
I will continue to write the chapters and try to steal as many laptops and PCs as possible to post them.
I hate that I leave my story with 당신 at such a critical point. Unfortunately this post is just a spur of the moment thing and I don't have my memory stick with me 또는 I'd shove a chapter on at the end of this message.
Very sorry my peeps. 당신 can verbally abuse me, my internet 또는 BT broadband 또는 all three!
Emmii-Luu
Guys, I regret to inform 당신 that my internet had committed technical suicide. I have stolen someone's laptop to write this and I hate to tell 당신 that until someone revives my internet no further Kayla chapters can be posted.
This is an unforseen event and I will kick as many asses as I can to get the internet working agan.
I will continue to write the chapters and try to steal as many laptops and PCs as possible to post them.
I hate that I leave my story with 당신 at such a critical point. Unfortunately this post is just a spur of the moment thing and I don't have my memory stick with me 또는 I'd shove a chapter on at the end of this message.
Very sorry my peeps. 당신 can verbally abuse me, my internet 또는 BT broadband 또는 all three!
Emmii-Luu