yea i made the 제목 to be something a little less opinionated, and 더 많이 open to other peoples opinon. so if 당신 agree, say why, and if not, give some examples of her good side! all i did was her bad side cuz thats my opinion. :)
These are from the first chapter of Eclipse.
pg. 14-Charlie to Bella"You're hurting Jake's feelings, avoiding him like this."
response: HOLY CRAP listen to your father Bella!!! 당신 have got a serious problem, and 당신 are hurting poor Jake in the process! WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU?!?!?!?!? GET..A..LIFE, and leave Jacob out of it
pg. 17-in Bella's mind"I wrenched the door out of my way--ridiculously eager--and there he was, my personal miracle."
response: ok Bella, 당신 may think he is your own "personal miracle" and all, but hey, GUESS WHAT?? he loves 당신 UNCONDITIONALLY. and what do 당신 do? OBSESS NON-STOP, NOT LETTING HIM HAvE HIS OWN LIFE, and HANGING ON HIS EVERY WORD! give him some breathin 우주 girl!
pg. 18-Bella's mind "It made me sad that he had to try so hard. I comforted myself with the knowledge that I wouldn't be causing him pain much longer.
response: so the part i underlined, wouldn't be causing him pain much longer???? Bella, honey, 당신 ARE ALWAYS GOING TO CAUSE HIM PAIN. NO MATTER WHAT 당신 DO, HE WILL BE IN PAIN. so dont lead yourself in the wrong direction, thinking that 당신 are so perfect
Yea haha so ok now im done with the very short pointless ranting. PLEASE COMMENT!
These are from the first chapter of Eclipse.
pg. 14-Charlie to Bella"You're hurting Jake's feelings, avoiding him like this."
response: HOLY CRAP listen to your father Bella!!! 당신 have got a serious problem, and 당신 are hurting poor Jake in the process! WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU?!?!?!?!? GET..A..LIFE, and leave Jacob out of it
pg. 17-in Bella's mind"I wrenched the door out of my way--ridiculously eager--and there he was, my personal miracle."
response: ok Bella, 당신 may think he is your own "personal miracle" and all, but hey, GUESS WHAT?? he loves 당신 UNCONDITIONALLY. and what do 당신 do? OBSESS NON-STOP, NOT LETTING HIM HAvE HIS OWN LIFE, and HANGING ON HIS EVERY WORD! give him some breathin 우주 girl!
pg. 18-Bella's mind "It made me sad that he had to try so hard. I comforted myself with the knowledge that I wouldn't be causing him pain much longer.
response: so the part i underlined, wouldn't be causing him pain much longer???? Bella, honey, 당신 ARE ALWAYS GOING TO CAUSE HIM PAIN. NO MATTER WHAT 당신 DO, HE WILL BE IN PAIN. so dont lead yourself in the wrong direction, thinking that 당신 are so perfect
Yea haha so ok now im done with the very short pointless ranting. PLEASE COMMENT!