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I peaked though the crack and saw nothing but blackness. Carefully I lifted the led and managed to slide it sideways I stood up. I swung my legs over the edge and hopped down. Ok Alex now all I have to do is find out where I am sneak out without the nut job that kid napped me knowing. I started to walk off when I thought about the create. When they see it open they will know I escaped. I quickly ran back and slide the led shut. Hopefully they won’t notice me gone and I will have 더 많이 time. With the led perfectly back on the way it was. I started to walk away again when I heard voices. Are 당신 sure she can’t get out? Said a deep voice yes sir and there is no way she can get untied too. 당신 did not harm the girl right I promised the boss she would not be harmed. Fear overwhelmed me. I quickly ducked behind some boxes.

질문 so many 질문 ran though my head. Who is the “boss” why did he send people to kidnap me? Does my mother know I am gone? Is anyone looking for me? What do these people want with me? The door opened then interrupting my thoughts.
Where is the crate? Asked the man 다음 to the one who tied me up. Over there he pointed at the 나무 상자, 상자 I was in. shouldn’t she be awake 의해 now. I believe so. Both of them walked past me without seeing me. I quietly backed away from my hiding place and ducked behind a different crate. I was almost to the door. So, so close. And where do 당신 think 당신 are going? I froze unable to think 또는 move. This can not be happening. BANG. I staggered 앞으로 taking what looked like a dart out of my solder.
The vision started to blur. 다음 thing I know I am on my knees holding the create trying to get back to my feet. Then something fell on my head.

I blacked out again. I really wish they would leave my head alone I mean really do they have to keep hitting my head. This time when I woke up I was handcuffed to a pole in a white spotless room. There were no windows. There was a 표, 테이블 way to heavy to lift and two chairs I was in one of them the pole behind the chair to the side a little to my left. 표, 테이블 in fount of me and the other chair across from me. Nothing else was in the room it was bare and small. I felt like a helpless animal trapped in a cage at a zoo waiting for well I don’t know what. What did I do to deserve this?

I don’t remember dozing off but then again when there is nothing to do 또는 look at what is there left to do? I woke up when I heard a door open. I sat up to see a middle aged man walk in. He gave me a creepy knowing smile. Like he was playing a game that he hold all the cards to. Witch I guess he does but I wasn’t going to give him that satisfaction of him planing my life. And he would be the last person I would trust my life to.

Who the heck are 당신 and why the h*** did 당신 bring me here? Well someone woke up on the wrong side of the table. I am not in the mood to play games. The man had a smile like I was an amusing dog that barked at him 또는 something. That made me mad. Wipe that smile off your face and stop this 황소, 불 crap. Who are 당신 and what on earth could 당신 want from me?

당신 nothing he said as he sat casually across from me. As for who I am names Blake he reached his hand out to me. I just stared at it. My eyes narrowed I find it every hard to believe that 당신 don’t want anything from me when 당신 kidnapped me tied me up and shipped me to god knows where in a BOX! My voice rose with every word. I meant 당신 no harm and I am sorry my workers got a little carried away. Carried away I stood up he slammed my head into a brick wall! I took a deep breath and sat down. I am going to say this one 더 많이 time so even your 완두콩 sized brain can understand skip the B.S and get to the point why am I here!?

I am not interested in 당신 I am interested in your father and I know 당신 two were close so … I cut him off there wait this is some kind of sick joke that I don’t want to be a part of. I stood up. And what makes 당신 think I would help 당신 anyway. Because we both wouldn’t want your brother to get hurt. And what has he done for 당신 I understand he left he doesn’t care about 당신 he never loved 당신 또는 your family so why keep his secretes for him. Doesn’t sound fair to me. That is where I snapped I was already upset and outraged about him kidnapping accusing tying me up locking me up now he was threading the only person I have left that I 사랑 and trust. That is going across the line. But I hate to ament it but he does have a point about my father but that doesn’t mean he can threaten me and my family like this!

I would have leaped at him but the handcuffs got in the way. What have 당신 done with him! My tone ice cold full of hatred. That has it be a new record hating a person 당신 just meant in under a min. no scratch that I hated him the 초 he walked in the room. He wasn’t even fazed. Nothing yet. So will 당신 corporate 또는 not? I sat down closing my eyes. I didn’t know what to do? Jason has always protected me now I have to do the same for me. even if I wanted to help 당신 I can’t he left when I was eight. I don’t remember much form that time. Even if 당신 don’t 당신 could probably figure it out. I understand 당신 are good at guessing and hacking technology. It was true I was really good at figuring and all kinds of hacking when it came down to computers. Swear 당신 won’t harm me and my brother. Yes. How do I know 당신 won’t go back on your word? 당신 don’t.
This an except from the 기사 How to Get Out of Your Own Way When Writing. This is 조언 from an accomplished author named Elizabeth Knox

"I prefer reading, and writing, in the third person – “he walked along the shore,” rather than the first person, “I walked along the shore.” Many novice writers start 글쓰기 in the first person. There are some very good reasons for that. For a start, we’re all used to telling stories with ourselves at their centers. Also, using a first-person voice can be a kind of playacting. They narrator is a “not-you” you’re pretending to be.

Why I...
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posted by alicia386
Thursday

Kyle is the worst boyfriend ever! The party ended with me in a coma. Apparently there was alcohol in my drink. I had an overdose and it almost killed me. Kyle swears he didn't do it. I want to believe him. I really want to. I know Kyle had done it because I know saw him poor something in there. At first I thought it was water 또는 something to make it sweeter. It wasn't water. I couldn't go to school today because they were pumping the alcohol out of my system 또는 something. I'm not entirely sure what happened. All I know is that for a couple if 분 I was pronounced dead. My heartbeat soon started thumping again but I was in a coma. My parents were so worried. I thought for sure they would be dead from shock. Kyle is banned from coming near me. My dad implied that rule. My mom kept crying whenever she talked to me. All she could manage to get out of her mouth besides whimpers were muffled words. I don't think I'll be seeing Kyle for a while now.
posted by BlondLionEzel
Chapter 1

The 다음 day, a knock came on the door.

"Is it them??" Lucy asked frantically.

Emily went to the door, and answered it.

"Hello!" Nick Wolfe, a half 늑대 male said to the surprised Emily.

"Who are you???" Emily asked Nick Wolfe in a surprised manner.

"Well...I am Nick Wolfe, I go to every Hotel and free it's captured mutants" Nick answered in a very egotistical way.

"Oh?" Emily asked curiously.

"Is Nick Wolfe the god?" Lucy asked her mother.

"Well..." Emily tried to respond. Emily had felt that it would be right to talk to Nick Wolfe first, and then tell Lucy.

"You can think of me as whatever...
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posted by alicia386
What a change Such a dramatic change

Once I was small and ignored

Now I'm called when their bored

또는 looking for a friend

To talk to till the end I use to be invisible

Now I feel invincible

They can't hurt me

Look at what I can be

This is new

Something almost true

That great feeling

Was somewhat appealing

But soon disappeared

Whenever I neared

Now I am small

No longer tall

Completely ignored

Always bored

It happened so fast Invisible in the past

Then became invincible

And immediately back to invisible

It changes everyday I don't know what to say

Maybe it won't stay the same

I'll be forever lame
posted by BlondLionEzel
Prologue

It is the 년 2468, Half-Animal, Half Human beings have been captured and locked up in facilities called "Hotels". They are experimented on and live in small cages. But the mutants believed there would be a god who would bring them salvation. And in a place called Hotel 93, the legend would come true.

"Mommy...I'm really scared..." A young Half Snake Girl told her Half Snake Mother. She had 담홍색, 핑크 hair, a green tail and brown eyes.

"I am too Lucy..." The Half Snake Mother told Lucy. This mother's name was Emily, she had blond hair and a Diamond Rattleback snake pattern tail, and green...
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posted by BlondLionEzel
Chapter 3

Nick was now adjusted to his life as Melanie's sex slave. Last Monday, Melanie pinched his nipples and got on 상단, 맨 위로 of him. Today was different though.

"Nick...I was thinking..." Melanie asked Nick, "Do 당신 want to go hardcore?".

"Hardcore? What do 당신 mean?" Nick asked Melanie.

"Well...I'll show you..." Melanie responded as she took off her shirt, causing Nick to blush.

"Do 당신 like what 당신 see?" Melanie asked Nick, noticing his blush.

"Yes I do..." Nick responded shyly.

"Good!" Melanie said as she quickly took off her bra, revealing a pair of huge, green, D cup breasts.

"Oh my god..." Nick...
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posted by alicia386
Friday

L. J can make me so mad sometimes. Today he told me to stay away from Kyle. I asked him why and he said that Kyle was not the guy I thought he was. I told him to elaborate but he just shrugged his shoulders. How dare he tell me to stay away from the cutest guy ever? Besides, we have like 7 days left in school before summer comes. I probably won't ever see Kyle again. I need to make my 옮기기 soon. Forget what L. J said. With the thought of L. J in my head, I walked up to Kyle and kissed him on the lips! Yes, I know that was wild and crazy and stupid. Trust me, the 분 I realized what...
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posted by alicia386
Sunday

My mom and dad are atheist so I don't have to go through the constant struggle of attending church once a week 또는 those annoying pastor and church anniversaries. Today I decided to go to the mall with my 프렌즈 Jennifer and L. J. The relationship between my two 프렌즈 is a very complicated one. For starters, everyone thinks they hate each other. Then there are times when 당신 think they are flirting. I doubt they are ever going to get back together, but it is fun to watch their famous disputes. Today they were talking about Kyle. Jennifer was saying how much she believes that Kyle is...
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posted by alicia386
May

Wednesday

This is obviously my first blog. I really don't know what to write about. Maybe I can start with some identification. Hello, my name is Laurie Bailey. This is my last 년 in middle school. I won't go into too much detail about my location because I don't want creepy men looking for me. Well, anyways, I guess that is a good first blog. My sister, Velvet, thought I should express my feelings so I don't go walking around with unsettled feelings. I think she might believe I am going to strangle someone because I'm angry. Velvet bought me a journal and I was like blogging is so much...
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posted by sadiebugz00
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ROAD TRIP
Derek’s Perspective


A while later I call Jesse over so we could discuss Carter’s situation.
Jesse is quite attractive; she has ocean-blue eyes and long, flowy, bleached blonde hair, and looks much like a Barbie. However, she can be very fickle, so if I use the correct wording I could be able to keep Carter. But if she’s in one of her “moods” there’s no way on Earth that I’ll be able to keep him.
I hear a pounding hard knocking on my door.
Great… I think. She’s in a “mood”. I hurtle towards the door to keep her from waiting. She grimaces at Carter once she sees...
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posted by sadiebugz00
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TORN
Derek’s Perspective


I look down at the little rascal, soundly sleeping on the floor. I look around my extremely messy room with dirty clothes all over the floor. Carter happens to be sleeping on a few shirts of mine. My eggshell colored walls, which used to be white, are clearly covered in grime. There is a strong stench of wet dog, pizza, and some kind of rotting 음식 from underneath my bed. What a decision… I think to myself. I can’t believe that Jesse is making me get rid of him… I bend down to get Bailey, Carter’s old stuffed rabbit, so I can keep SOMETHING of his to remind...
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posted by alicia386
"Oh god," groaned Luca Edgewood. He glanced at his watch,. It was already past 8am. He dropped his skateboard, got on it, and rode away down the busy streets of Brunswick.

"Be careful today!" His mother shouted at him through the screen door, but he was to far to hear her warning. Lucas's mom was very suoerstitious woman who believed in witches, ghosts other 수퍼내츄럴 creatures. Luca thought all of this happened when his dad left.

Luca pushed back hard as he could with his right foot. He was already late. With all of his focus, he was barely able to dodge pedestrians, seeding cars, and occasionally,...
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Prologue

The sun is just 분 from rising and the night is growing lighter. An alter made entirely of blue marble, jade, and amethyst is illuminated. Two tiny 아기 lie on 상단, 맨 위로 writhing and screaming in discomfort. They are naked, only a few days old and the chill of the stone slowly seeping into their 본즈 will surely kill them. The larger of the two will not stop screaming while her twin just sobs quietly.
Their frail mother stands a few feet away determined to finish what she came here to do but her eyes are bloodshot and red raw from her constant tears. But she is not alone. Her husband...
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posted by juliet98
In the 년 4125 the Earth was still turning on itself. Apparently everything was the same as it was two thausand years ago. But it wasn't so. The democracy we got fighting was distroied 의해 a man. After 15 years of wars, in 4025 Cyrus defeated free people and he established the tyranny. The whole world was controlled and the freedom dind't exist anymore. Everyone 로스트 trust in everything, in love, in courage, in God. Most of people didn't know that there was a prophecy. It said that the humanity had to pass through a century of pain and fear to realize how important freedom was. But then in...
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Prologue
She never knew she had an uncle until her parents died. It’s strange how- sometimes in life when 당신 lose important people in your life 당신 gain some more.
Her mother and father died in a house fire. No one knew how it started except the one daughter who managed to survive.
But she was in no state to tell. She suffered mild burns but her mind suffered worst of all. She never spoke again.
She was kept in hospital for six months but eventually she was packed off to her uncle Scipio. She was thirteen years old and many said it was a crime sending a child off to such an evil man as Scipio....
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posted by riehlemarie
Once there lived a normal middle school girl, 또는 so she thought.She had long brown hair, green with a hin of blue eyes. Her name is Elizabeth. Elizabeth's mother, Rebecca, has blond hair, and blue eyes. Elizabeth always pondered about it.

When Elizabeth was 5 years old she asked her mom about it. Rebecca had to think fast so she made up a little story for Elizabeth so she wouldn't want to ask about it. So Rebecca told Elizabeth "Lizzie", [ Elizabeth's nickname] " 당신 look just like your daddy, but daddy left us." Rebecca thought Elizabeth would be fine without knowing the truth, that Elizabeth...
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posted by BlondLionEzel
Chapter 3

Lawrence and The Dragon Princess now were thinking about their relationship, as they heard screaming outside.

"How dare 당신 take Lawrence away from people!" 아델 yelled as the Townsfolk started to break down the walls!

The Dragon Princess had been taught Love, Compassion, and other nice things while with Lawrence, but now, she had just seen red. She attacked the Townsfolk.

"I shall destroy you, Bloodthirsty Beast!" 아델 roared as she slashed the Dragon Princess!

"No..." The Dragon Princess thought about her doom, and that she would really never have true love.

"Now...to finish what i...
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Zoë
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I stormed down the steps, into the closest empty classroom, and over to someone’s seat. Then I sat down, buried my face in my hands, and sobbed.
    “Why are 당신 such a jerk, Ash?” I yelled at the ceiling. There was a faint echo.
    I jumped to my feet. The chair crashed to the ground. I kicked it as hard as I could.
    “You okay?” someone asked.
    I jumped, spun around. Lisa.
    “I’m fine,” I...
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posted by Bluekait
If 당신 pick a type of horror story, I'll do a shout out. If 당신 haven't, here's a link:

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For any inspiring horror story 팬 can gladly vote here:

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Avery ran into the woods. Without looking back, she knew she was being chased 의해 an un-natural force. She ran to the hut and locked the door behind her. Avery heard a loud thud. "Phew," she sighed. She climbed into 침대 and slept. The 다음 morning, she was found dead at a gruesome sight.
Her head was found outside and the rest of Avery Wilson was nowhere to be found.
Her 프렌즈 followed her steps to see...
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posted by alicia386
I was sitting in a wooden chair surrounded 의해 strangers and my grandmother. The last thing I remember I was in my Alegebra class when I was called to the office. My grandmother was there with two other ladies. My grandmother said to get in the car and to not ask questions. I did what I was told and ended up here.

"Do 당신 think she has the power, Grace?" A short woman with dyed light blue hair looked to my grandmother for answers.

"I am postive," replied my grandmother. "She ahs been showing signs since she was baby."

"Her mother failed to cut her powers off." A man 다음 to my grandmother shook...
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