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posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, mystery and 판타지 :)~
Chapter 31
        The worst form of betrayal
    I think I woke up, it still painfully hurt to breathe. But I was still in the woods, 또는 at least 다음 to it. Witnessing the moment.
    The moment my sister died.
    I hadn’t been able to hold the tears ever since I appeared here, leaving my sister behind, I still couldn’t believe it. I missed my one chance, I remember what she had said, though I didn’t understand most of it, but I do now.
    Now that I remember.
    I couldn’t identify the person, I couldn’t even keep up with them, until they ran out of the woods. A bat, one I saw before and heard about from the police. The bat that hit Dorothy’s head. I flinched when it collided and I followed the person to the car, a van. And I gasped when I noticed 더 많이 people in it.
    It was half of the girl’s in the drowning man group, they were all here. Even Meredith, who right now was tying Dorothy’s hand to the weights. Dorothy was muttering something, but her hurt head made it sound garbled, and the girl’s suppressed their giggles.
    They stopped the car, and the one in dark clothing gently pushed Dorothy out, and steered her to the river. The other girl’s didn’t say a word, it was if they weren’t there at all. It felt like slow motion when the person pushed Dorothy into the water, and she fell in with a big splash, the person and I, watched as she started to struggle. I felt my 심장 breaking in piecies at the sight, and then she stopped.
    The person, which I realized was wearing a black hoodie nodded. “She’s dead.”
    I recoiled at the voice and nearly jumped back…I knew that voice, but it couldn’t be, I wouldn’t believe it.
    “Now we won’t have to worry anymore,” the too famialiar voice says, rasing her hand, and a ring flashes on her finger, a ring I’ve seen just not too long ago. “That’s what she gets for messing with my man.”
    It couldn’t be, it can’t, I won’t believe it. I trusted…I loved…that was my-
    My thoughts were caught off as the girl took off the 후드 revealing her black and white hair, which was a wig obviously. The girl’s may have thought she was a natural blonde 또는 black ,but I knew her real hair, I knew who she was.
    “Let’s go ladies.” Jessica said, going to the car.
    She was my best friend.
*Thanks for reading! Please review, fan, and don't copy. Really appreciated :)*
Prologue


Beep Beep The monitors from the hospital 침대 were rapidly going off. The violent shaking and movements made
them go faster and faster. "We're losing him! We're losing him!" They cried out, trying to turn the boy to his side. The
violent shakes stopped, as the one continuous beep on the monitor showed one never ending line.


It's been a year, since the arachnophobia slowly developed into agoraphobia. How, 당신 may ask? It had developed from extreme arachnophobia, slowly and slowly growing so irrational that the kid won't even leave his room. His parents look at each other with misunderstanding,...
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posted by alicia386
Last weekend, Ciara, Zaria, and I, Teresa, traveled from Hollywood, California to Paris, France. We planned on living there for a 년 and see how it goes. Zaria wanted to study fashion, 시애라 wanted to study art, and I wanted to study the french boys there.

We bought an apartment about a 월 before we started packing. 시애라 is the organized one so of course we had our plane tickets, some snack because airplane 음식 is cheap and disgusting, and we had our suitcases. Unfortunately, I am the complete opposite of Ciara. I forgot my suticase in my mom's car. Luckily for me, she didn't drive off...
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posted by alicia386
Wednesday

First 일 of summer and I'm already bored. I'm not bored enough to want to back to school. I'm just lonely bored. L. J called me several times this morning wondering if I was okay and if I wanted to go some place with him. I kindly rejected him. If it wasn't Jennifer 또는 Tammie calling then I don't want to hear. Velvet signed me up book club thing. I do like to read 책 and she thought that maybe I could meet some new 프렌즈 that have something in common with me. I think she is full of baloney. Velvet made me promise to go to the first meeting tomorrow. I don't know. We'll see how my mood is 의해 tomorrow.
After much debate, I have decided to try my hand at 글쓰기 a mystery novel. I've always loved mysteries, especially the original "Sherlock Holmes" stories, and shows like "Monk" and "Twin Peaks". The summary for the story I'm 글쓰기 is in the in the section below. If 당신 like the idea, let me know, because I'm really excited for the story!
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Summary:School's out and fifteen 년 old Harold McCormick is headed for his annual summer getaway at Science Camp, but when an accident occurs, Harold is detirmened to prove it is murder, despite the doubt of the police and everyone around him believing otherwise, and in order to save the camp, Harold must find someone who believes him, crack the case, and bring the culprit to justice before he strikes again.
I got dressed and slipped my 재킷, 자 켓 with badge on and went down the hall. And then someone bumped into me. 저기요 watch where you’re going! “Sorry 당신 Agent Montezz?” Yes who are you?

“Doesn’t matter Kyle said for 당신 to meet him in the shooting arena.” Where is that? “Take this hall straight down then make a right 당신 will see a stair well go all the way down then make a left first door on your right.” Thank you.

He walked away then leaving me alone in an empty hallway. I followed the guy directions and stepped into a combat arena compete with targets bows, arrows, guns, and many...
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posted by alicia386
Chapter Twelve: Small Rooms Makes for No Escapes

      Their headquarters was nothing 더 많이 then a room with monitors everywhere. They had enough in the budget to get a bigger 우주 and tons 더 많이 gadgets, they just chose not to. Some of the monitors showed different views of the outside building. One monitor was showing a desert somewhere in Africa. It is odd how they got one out there and why they have he out there. I didn't ask questions. I wanted to appear as if I knew everything about everything in the room. Marlo wasn't going to get the best of me. 
      Darrell stayed 의해 my side...
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posted by IlovePatch97
Sorry it took so long, school is crazy. i hope this makes up for it.
don't forget to 코멘트 :D


Chapter 6




“Wait! Wait!” I said, needing a moment of processing. “This is real? I’m not dreaming, I’m not hallucinating and this isn’t an extremely well executed prank?”
“No Alana I’m sorry to say but this is real, unbelievable, but real” Chris replied. I turned to look at Patricia, her face unchanged like stone.
“So then what are we going to do? Are 당신 bringing me to this Zerokenum guy so he can cut out my heart!?” I exclaimed in sudden alarm. I didn’t think Chris 또는 Patricia...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, fantasy~
17
    Iris
    It felt like being hit in the gut, I just couldn’t believe it. Not saying I’m bossy 또는 anything, but I didn’t want to walk alone in a deserted park, but I did anyway.
    What I was not ready for, however, was the real pain in my stomach when I was pushed to the ground, hitting my fragile head in the process. Ready to let people hear my screams all the way from China, I turned around, and was startled to see a black thing passing us, flying on the wind.
    I knew going...
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Orion woke up with a dark black aura slowly disappearing from his body. Libra hobbled into the room and saw Orion quickly waking up," Orion your up I have been waiting for hours, now quickly outside," he said hurriedly as he hobbled out through the other door that lead outside into a small arena. Orion stood up feeling fresh and powerful and ran through the door into the arena. Libra stood looking younger than he actually was at the other side, wand writhing about in his hand ready for a fight," come on Orion dont be afraid," Libra shouted out. So Orion stepped into his 원, 동그라미 and drew his...
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posted by Dhampires
The most beautiful creature is the most deciving creature. Foul, cruelness, and haterid are the only things that makes it's 심장 whole. The rest is pit of darkness not one hearty emotion lurks in it's body, it feeds off fear- the fear of it's prey.
It was only a few nights eariler that she wore an white silk ballgown to the Ball-wearing matching gloves that came just above the wrist and glass heels. She'd had that beautiful blond hair flowing behind her back, her crystal blue eyes showed off her hair very well and her rosey lips placed together her face perfectly-not to mention her slim...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, fantasy~     
9
    Zaria
    We came to an agreement, if anything…unusual happened, we’ll check it out. If it happens to be another thing then we’ll comw to the conclusion that we and the book caused this. So on the 다음 day, sadly where school wasn’t cancelled, I’d kept an open eye for anything weird.
    “Status report?” Stilere asks as she walks with me around school.
    “Nothing,” I sigh. “You?”
    “Same.” Stilere shakes her head....
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posted by alicia386
Chapter Three: New School, New Worries

      "You're lying," I said but then again, who would lie about something like this. "My father would have told me if he was in danger. We have a strong relationship."
      "That maybe, but would he really want 당신 to worry when your spy exams are coming up? Would he want to add 더 많이 to your plate of stress?" Darrell raised one eyebrow for my response but he didn't need one. He already knew what I was going to say.
      "You have a point but," I said. "What is the school going to do about it? Surely, they wouldn't let one of the most 상단, 맨 위로 notch...
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posted by 1999jacko
Ron was waiting outside the school building for the MI6 agent that was being sent for him. A small, black car turned round the corner, it slowed to a stop in front of him, the door slowly opened an instead of the small agent the commenter had told him would come 3 men in odd black suits, white ties and black sunglasses stepped out and shoved a 베개 case over his head, blocking his line of vision so he couldn't see what happened after that but he felt the smash of a cricket bat against his head while being roughly pushed into the back 좌석 of a car. Slowly his head started to hurt a lot and...
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just a warning every other chapter will be dark with a murder happening in almost all of them so if 당신 don't like dark stuff don't read this one

Jameson was rushing around the room his eyes blood shot with tiredness, he had received the results of the prints hours 이전 and had been working on it for the whole night. And when he had discovered who the killer and his little gang were he had instantly knew he was screwed, but tried to type it up so hopefully chief detective James would discover it and start arresting the people as soon as he was killed. When he finished his little message to James...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, fantasy
2
Alex
    “Are 당신 okay?!” I asked as I rushed to Zaria and Iris.
    “Somewhat,” Iris said giving me a shaky smile, while Zaria replied. “Define okay.”
    I helped them out of the water, they were soaked, and kept on slipping. Which led me to fall into the water.
    “Sorry,” Iris said, looking at my now wet clothes sorrowfully.
    “It’s okay let’s just get out of here.” I said, pulling them toward the ground.
    “Wait!”...
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posted by 1999jacko
Dark Fantasy(I think)

Drake and Sam stood at the edge of the road waiting for the cars to stop zooming past. 드레이크, 드레이 크 was starting to get really impatient so she started to shout," oh come on! how long does it take for us to be able to 십자가, 크로스 the road," his face going red and all the while Sam was laughing his head of at the rants that 드레이크, 드레이 크 was going on about until finally he said," come on man lets just go under the bridge it may be the long way but its easily quicker than this, so come on." Sam had already started jogging towards the entrance to the little path that lead under the bridge 의해 the...
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Through Her Eyes... Chapter One- Life No More?





Alice could still fell the warm breeze glide across her skin and through her blonde streaked 딸기 red hair, making it fly every which way. She remembered looking over at he father with his warm brown eyes and brown hair a shade litter then his eyes. His nose big as every. She would always make fun of him for that nose. She remembered leaning in to give him a warm 키스 on the check and saying, “I 사랑 당신 dad.” He looked down at her and said,”I 사랑 당신 two.” As he turned into the 다음 road, She gasp. He slams on the breaks but it’s...
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Chapter (13):
"So, are we gonna walk 집 또는 is Noah gonna pick us up?" asked Leo, as they descended the school steps, "I'm calling Noah" replied Abbie, "Okay then" said Leo, he shoved his hands in his pockets and started rocking back and forth on his heals, Abbie fumbled her messenger bag for her phone,and found it just before she could dial Noah's number, it vibrated lightly signaling that she had a text, "I got a text" said Abbie, "Who's it from?" asked Leo, "Noah" replied Abbie after she'd checked the name, she read the text, 'Stay where 당신 are I'm picking 당신 and Leo up, From ur 'Also...
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posted by hgfan5602
Run now. Run fast. We all have a place that we desire to be, and that place is not 집 for me, unlike most people. My parents have started to torture me since last December, and I have had enough of it. My 심장 is racing, and I know I have to get away now. I can't take any 더 많이 of this. My parents have been holding me in my room, locking me under chain and key, beating my head against the wall. Not your normal kid, the kid who thinks doing homework is torture. This is what I call real torture. Yesterday past midnight, I was thinking, "Why do my parents do this to me? Why? Why? I'm definitely...
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posted by Problematic129
*Thanks for all the review!!! :) Please don't copy and please read and review*
Chapter 9
    The Seven Deadly Sins
    Greed, gluttony, envy, lust, sloth, pride, and wrath. The seven deadly sins, we all know what they are. Commit one and 당신 are sinner, commit all, 당신 are very bad sinner.
    If I have ever believed I committed one it would be wrath, I have a good temper, believe me, but when it is broken. When I’ve met my breaking point, that is when I am at my most unpleasant.
    In the bible, it tells us about...
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