True Writers Article: The Inevitable Fate----part 1-------chapter 1

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The Inevitable Fate----part 1-------chapter 1

posted by rory2011

chapter (1)

it's raining outsaid ,david finished his work early today ,he took his sons from school and brought them back 집
mary was daivd's wife and the mother of four children (kiven,poul, jack and kat ),when david and his sons entered the house mary was surprised seeing them in the house in that time
"you're early today "mary said
"yea ,mary can I talk to 당신 in the 부엌, 주방 ?"david asked
"yea ,sure"mary said

mary and david sit on the sofa that their little where daughter sleep at night
"ok I don't know how to tell 당신 this ,but we should 옮기기 "david said
"move to where ? and why? "mary asked
"this place is no longer our home" david said
"you 로스트 your job today right ?"mary asked
"no ,it's not about the job ,it's your father" david said
"david my father can't do anything ,he's not even my real father , he intimidated 당신 that doesn't mean he's dangerous "mary said
"no ,listen your father want to..." david and mary conversation cutted 의해 ringing the bills door
"oh my god ,they're here "david said

poul opened the door ,it was his grandfather with tow strange men
"is your father in 집 kid?"george (the grandfather ) said
"yes ,he's in the 부엌, 주방 "poul answered
"then let me see him please" george said
"ok"poul said

when george entered the 부엌, 주방 with those strange men david was very angry ,he was looking in george's face but george was smilling and standing afront of him
"so did 당신 tell her? "george asked
"tell me what?" mary asked
"I was going to tell her" david answered
"tell me what ?,will somebody please explain what's going here ?" mary said
"I'll help your husband with make 더 많이 money 의해 make this family lower "george said
"so you'll take our kids ?" mary asked
"no I don't want your kids ,your pathetic husband can't make money and he can't take this family expenditure ,so your life is useless ,If we killed 당신 your husband can save 더 많이 money "george said
"but that's so overstated "mary said
"listen to me woman ,you're living in our money and we who decide who will live and who will die ,so 당신 have tow choice ,you can save your family and die 또는 당신 can die with your kids ,your husband will watching 당신 with the kids when you'll all die and we will let him live to make 더 많이 money for us ,and 당신 can't run away ,we have many men watching 당신 "one of the men said
"you son of a..."mary cutted what david will say "I'll do it alone " mary said
"mary...no please no "david said
"ok we will take 당신 after two weeks "the man said while he moving to the door

"are 당신 out of 당신 mind mary "david said
"we have no choice david " mary said
"I can save 당신 "david said"
"if 당신 saved me we will lose the kids ,it's ok daivd 당신 did your best "said mary sad
"so 당신 guys will still here 또는 what "jack said
"we're here hunny ,ok act normal for the kids "mary said
"ok"david said

the days ran fast ,five days left for mary ,she was sitting with her kids everyday ,talking and playing with them to forget that she will leave them after five days ,her dream was watching her children growing up but unfortunately she can't be with them
mary's sons were sleeping in one small room cause the house is very old and small ,mary knocked the door before she went to sleep ,keivin opened the door ,"mom is there something wrong?" kevin asked
"can I talk to 당신 inside ?" mary asked
"sure ,get in" kevin answered
mary sat down on kevin's 침대 ,"how old are 당신 kevin ?" mary asked
"I'm almost 15 ,why ?" kevin answered
"you're a man now kevin ,you have to look out for your younger brothers and your little sister ,I want 당신 to help your father "mary said
"yea of curse ,but why are 당신 telling me this ?" kevin asked
"cause someday I won't be able to take care of all of 당신 ,I just want 당신 to understand that I'll be with 당신 even if I'm not beside 당신 ,I just want 당신 to remember this " mary said wiping on kevin's hair
"don't worry mom "kevin said
"I know" mary said ,mary walking toward the door "good night hunny"said mary befor she closed the door
david heard what mary and kevin were talking about ,he can't take his life anymore ,he's almost losing his wife and he 로스트 his job today but he doesn't want to tell mary
"mary ,please don't be emotional in the last hours "david said
"I know I just.... can't "mary said crying
"I know it even harder for me but we can't do anything now ,I saw three men with 총 looking at our house they were sitting in the empty building that near us "david said
"yea I know ,I just want to tell 당신 something and please promise me to do what I'll say " mary said
"I'll do anything ,what 당신 want ?" david asked
"don't let this happened to kat too in the future and don't tell her that I'm dead tell she been in school "
"mary what are 당신 talking about do 당신 think I'll do the same thing that your father did to 당신 ?" david asked
"no ,I just think that she's just three years old girl but 당신 don't talk to her 또는 play with her just like when our sons were in her age ,don't hate her cause she's a girl and we are poor " mary said
"are 당신 kidding me mary ,do I sound like a girls hater ? " david asked
"no ,I'm sorry I just... feel very angry ,I'm sorry I don't want to fight with 당신 in my last days " mary said
"it's ok ,I think 당신 should take some rest now "david said
"ok "mary said

ITF, sadiebugz00 and 2 others like this

alicia386 Aww sad and very interesting. i have to say it really seems like a great book to read.

Zero_Delta Interesting that the father wants to eliminate Mary because of David not making any money...And I'm not trying to be rude, but I think you should go back and fix the capitalization. Otherwise I think it's good.

rory2011 no ,not just because of her husband can't make money ,cause mary's father can't take enough money from david because of the family expenditure ,and it's also a tradition ,fathers have to choose if they want their daughters to live more or not and george hate his daughter so of course he will choose her to die the money thing is just an excuse for goerge to kill mary

SweetHoneyBunny It's a good story so far and I hope to read more soon. To point out two things, remember to check your spelling and your capitalization. Other then that, it's really good. Keep up the good work.

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ELEMENTAL <a metaphorical vent>

posted by Sinna_Hime_chan

in dedication to Mina

The ocean may overtake me and 제비, 삼키기 me- yet it will not bury me.
The whole of the mountain will crash down and roll over me - but it does not crush me.

Human physical strength has limitations and it weakens in time. 'Inner strength' knows no bounds!
The confines of this earthly realm have no bearing.

Let it be done!

Let the horns sound that shake the foundation.
Call forth the titans. Summon up the dread that lies buried deep within the 심장 and mind.
Let the godless fear when they face the charge.
The 로스트 will flee 또는 loose heart.

'And in the darkening late hours when the ground rumbles like an oncoming train...I will draw from deep wells what cannot be poisoned 또는 tainted 또는 overturned. I will stand, though the tides rise and the clouds threaten...and there I will remain, even if I show signs and cracks of care and hardship.
I will not be broken.

I may grow weary.

Though all the elements come against me
and tear at flesh and bone!-I WILL STAND!

KAKASHI

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Why Can't the World Become a Fairytale Book?

posted by sawfan13

Why can't the world become a fairytale book?
It wouldn't be as mean
But it may be much 더 많이 green
용 that can be your pet
Princesses with hair for rope climbing
Pumpkins that can turn into horse carriages
And 고양이 that wear boots and fight mice.
The people in reality aren't always very nice
But even the ogres and giants can say hello and give 당신 nice things
Princesses aren't snobby 퀸 bees at school
Princes aren't egomaniacs
And money is in gold, silver, 또는 copper 또는 even magic beans!
Hens lay golden eggs
Poverty can end in five seconds
당신 can get your own fairy and wish for whatever 당신 want
And have your any desires
But I guess this is all in the mind
But the world can be kind at times
It isn't always bad and cruel
But imagination makes it go around

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사랑 is Wild: Prologue

posted by sawfan13

Lily knocked on the door to her mother and father's mansion, wanting to ask them a simple question; if it was okay to allow her to take her best friend, Roxy, to her and her sister's trip to Africa.

Lily's mother answered,"Hello there! I wasn't expecting 당신 to come over." Lily came in and said,"Mom, may I talk to 당신 about this whole trip to Africa?"

"Sure thing, dear! Ask away!" She and her mother sat down and Lily asked her,"Mom, is it alright if my friend and roommate Roxy can come with me on the trip?"

Her mother sighed and replied,"No." Lily's eyes widened, as her 심장 broke into a million...

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The Demon Within Chapter Five

posted by Dhampires

"Katlen!" Eric stepped 앞으로 ready to rush to my aid.

"Whoa whoa whoa." Jarred said placing a hand over Eric's chest pushing him back.

Eric looked at Jarred with a 사워, 사 우 어 face then turned his attention to Eliza she looked down at the girl then at her blood on herfinger tips she smiled and as she turned to Eric she slowly ran her younger over her bloody fingers.

Eric pushed past Jarrred and rushed up to Eliza he took her 의해 the 셔츠 and yelled "You bastard what did she ever do to you."

"The girls tired ya know. She doesn't even know what she is, such a pitful thing it's ashame she went on...

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Remember me Ch.5

posted by Problematic129

*Thanks for all the 코멘트 :) Please don't copy and please read and review :)
Chapter 5
    Let’s get started
    We were standing in front of a big boat, but it wasn’t the one Dorothy visited, I knew that for sure. We were at the docks, were a lot of boats are at, I’m surprised there’s so many. But as I inspect all of them, none of them were the one I hoped.
    The 보트 smelled like a ton of fish, and on the corner I could just make out a small pile of dead fish, whoever owned this 보트 must be careless.
    “This...

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Forbidden: Prologue

posted by SweetHoneyBunny

Tears were rolling down my face. My 심장 hurt, and my thoughts were scrambled.
It was a 일 that reflected my emotions. The clouds covered the sky completely and were threatening to rain, the wind was howling and my family was being ripped apart.

My parents were both suicidal, and were always having what they call “accidents”. One week, I found my mother cutting her wrists in the bathroom. Her blood was puddling on the floor, and she was crying. I called her therapist, who talked her out of it. Again. My father was no better. He tried to thrown himself out the third story window of our...

A Wish on the Northern 별, 스타 Chapter One

posted by Dhampires

I flinched before he hit me I could already feel the nails from the 벨트 on my skin exactly where he'd hit before he really did. He hit that same spot at least five times—it was right above my butt bone.

I cried out in pain as he went up and down my spinal cord with the 벨트 he moved it to my arms that clinged to the 상단, 맨 위로 of the heater. Tears poured out of my eyes "Dad stop please dad!!" He whipped me harder saying "What did I tell 당신 all about calling me Dad I'm your master 당신 little runt!!" he changed to the other arm and and gave me a fine blow to the left jaw bone I fell on my back...

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Missing; Chapter Four!

posted by wantadog

Chapter 4

Juliet quieted. It was apparent that she was too weak to break the grip, and if this person really was friendly, fighting and screaming would only complicate matters. After a 분 of her staying limp in the person’s grip, he let her go. She took a deep breath to steady her nerves and twisted around to see who it was. She couldn’t contain herself.
“Steve, 당신 bastard! What the hell!”
“Quiet! They’ll hear you,” he whispered frantically.
“Wait, so this is…real?”
Steve looked down. “Sorry, but yes, it’s real.”
Juliet clapped her hands to her mouth. “It can’t...

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늑대 Girl: Chapter 9

posted by SweetHoneyBunny

I backed up slowly, not wanting the she 늑대 to feel threatened and attack. “Nice wolf, I'm not going to hurt you.” I got up off the ground with my hands out, facing the wolf. She had white 모피 with a small gray 별, 스타 on her chest. Climbing off the small 언덕, 힐 she had been standing on, she began walking towards me. I stood still. If I ran, she would pin me down and attack; and if I stood here there was no telling what she might do. “Please don't kill me. I didn't want to be brought here.” She was circling me and sniffing. Suddenly, she stopped. “I can smell his blood.” Her voice was...

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Way to Go, Saumensch: A Note from the Saukerl: Chapter 3

posted by hgfan5602

Saukerl

We were anxious to find out what was going on with the Jew. The Saumensch and I walked out and onto the streets, apart at a distance, careful of any danger around us. As we walked over onto Pariser Platz, we saw that there was a public execution today. A couple of Nazis were gathered around a feeble man, short and skinny, who appeared to be a Jew. The Saumensch and I stepped closer, seeing that it wasn't our Jew, but only to be halted 의해 one of the Nazis on command. "HALT! What brings 당신 here?" I answered calmly, "We've just come 의해 to greet 당신 fine men. Heil Hitler." The Nazi nodded briefly,...

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Daredevil's Vs. Murderer's Ch.20

posted by Problematic129

*Thank for all the 코멘트 :) Please don't copy and please read and review*
Chapter 20
    Let the games begin
    “What are 당신 doing here?” I ask.
    “I could ask 당신 the same thing,” America 답변 crossing her arms and giving me a pointed look. “Zyanna.”
    Now right then, my 심장 did stop. “What?”
    “Oh, don’t act stupid Zy, I know who 당신 are.”
    “How…?”
    America looked confused. “You mean 당신 didn’t send me that...

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프렌즈 Until the End- ch.1

posted by alicia386

Abigail Dalton

Chapter One

The sudden death of Abigail Dalton casted a spell on the quiet town of Brunswick, Georgia. Everyone felt utterly dismal as they watched the reporter give the gruesome details. It happened so suddenly and out the blue. Who could have ever killed the sweet 17 년 old girl that made even the grumpiest of men smile at her beauty and charm. It was true that she was beloved 의해 her peers, family, and community. Who would kill her? Well, believe it 또는 not but there were some people who thought she was arrogant, stubborn, vain, and unintelligent. All of those 코멘트 may be true...

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World of the Shadows: parts one through Nine

posted by Zero_Delta

Okay, I'm positive 팬팝 messed up my formatting, and I don't feel like fixing 11 pages(nor do I have the time), but here it goes. I really would like Criticism please, All I've been getting is how much people like it on the 글쓰기 spot, good criticism is hard to find over there, So don't tell me what 당신 like, tell me what 당신 hate, as vehemently as possible.

“This world is lost…” The dragon’s words echoed in Karaza’s mind. She had been hiding near the gathering place, hoping for a chance to steal some of the dragons’ supplies before the great beasts flew...

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And she was gone.....(short story)

posted by LadyEmzy16

The rain was pouring as her bare feet touched the ground her black hair was stuck to her face ,she paused to realize that she was right in front of the graveyard gates she slowly walked into the graveyard while she was walking she found a bench, she sat on it and started to get tired ,she lay down and fell into deep sleep, waking up three hours later she realized it was it was past midnight with the rain coming to a stop ,she got of the bench and strolled through the graveyard , “where is it?” she kept asking herself while she was walking until she found what she was looking for, it was...

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Tears of Friendship

posted by hgfan5602

I hold tears back...
The thought of such a close friend
Leaving you
Is horrible.

It feels like life is over,
Like...there's no point in living anymore,
If your best friend is gone,
There's no one to keep the warmth
With 당신 anymore.

What's the point of life
If 당신 don't have any friends
To share it with?
It's all over,
All of it.

No one's coming to calm me down,
And I'm not going to let them either.
I want to remember my closest friend...
But it's not easy,
If 당신 have to leave them.

She will always be in my heart
She was an amazing friend to me,
She brought me so much joy
And happiness,
Even in the darkest of nights,...

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Way to Go, Saumensch: A Note from the Saukerl: Chapter 1

posted by hgfan5602

Saukerl

Like I said, it was a dark and foggy night. I thought my eyes were deceiving me. I think I saw a Jew. This time around, there are practically no Jews. They are either in concentration camps- awaiting their death, 또는 dead already. The Nazis are not being easy with the Jews. This Jew was covered with a black cloth, and he appeared to be standing over a cowering boy, twelve years old of age at least. I moved in closer, cautiously, with my Saumensch, and we were both suspicious. The Saumensch's eyes met mine. "Is that...a murder, Carls?" Matna, the Saumensch, was definitely suspicious. She never...

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Survived (on the perspective of Evan Gary)

posted by hgfan5602

I fought through the process,
And I was determined through it all.
I was 메리다와 마법의 숲 and strong
And now I survived.

At first I was worried to death,
When the doctor said that I had cancer.
I stayed strong
Cuz I knew that my family and 프렌즈
Would care for me,
And spread the word
So I would survive.

My 프렌즈 and I
Were always supportive of me,
And we could talk for hours,
Playing on our DSes,
Talking about Legos
Like great 프렌즈 ever should.

Later, I was cancer-free
And I celebrated
We did everything great
It helped me cheer up.

I found out
That many people have cancer
Not only me..
And I'm...

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Missing; Chapter 3

posted by wantadog

Chapter 3

Juliet muffled her scream as she saw what was standing on the other side of the door. It was Phil, but not any Phil she had ever seen. Phil’s skin was black and bubbling, steam was being emitted from what used to be his skin, his pupils were gone, and he was giving off an awful odor, even worse than the cigarettes. He wasn’t looking her way so she dived behind the bar. “Oh my god, oh my god, OH MY GOD!” She clamped her mouth shut as her whispering rose to a shout. There was a grunt from the other side of the door and she heard a rattling noise as he beat on the door, trying...

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wen were together original song please read

posted by hugebleachfan1

baby i want 당신 so bad but idk if 당신 want me to i think about 당신 everyday wen im around 당신 i feel soo 안전한, 안전 feel like no harm can be done to me wen ur here there the rain disappears to a bright yellow sun

[chorus]
wen ur with me i feel like were the stars lighting up the night sky were burning up inside i wanna make 당신 mine 당신 are the spark that ignites inside of me

youve been there for me for as long as i can remember now its time for me to be there for 당신 and tell 당신 how i trully and i hope 당신 feel the same just dont want to let 당신 go

[chorus]
wen ur with me i feel like were the stars...

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Unity of the Universe

posted by hgfan5602

Together, at last,
We sing in unison,
As the eagles zoom past us,
Symbolizing true freedom now.

We are together,
Not just our country,
But all the countries of the universe,
Syria, China, Germany,
Russia, Canada, Brazil,
And, of course, the United States.

I have never experienced
Such an amazing feeling
In my whole life,
As the soldiers of the universe
March past,
We are in utmost glory.

The unity of the universe,
We behold right now.
Never again, we shall quarrel,
Fighting with our steel rifles.

We will be free,
Not just blacks,
But all of us,
Together, at last.

We will be equal,
Women and men,
And we shall work together,...