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posted by sawfan13
Chapter 1



"Excuse me?" He said quietly, staring at this woman with confusion. She got on all fours, crawled to him, and said,"I
wanna keep 당신 forever." He furrowed his eyebrows and asked,"What? What 당신 mean? What the hell is going on here?" She leaned down to his ear and whispered seductively,
"This can go either way, Criss. Promise and I can be your slaves, or," she continued, even quieter and scarier than before,"you can become ours." Criss shuddered in a bad way. No human being on this earth had ever been this way before. Sure, his 팬 base was pretty insane and he's met a few less than sane Loyals, but never like this. He heard
the front door open and close, as the blonde got up and ran downstairs, as he heard yelling;

"What the hell, Prom? 당신 were supposed to be here earlier!"

"I'm sorry Gabby, I just-"

"Shut up! Just shut the f-k up! He's awake now and 당신 totally missed it! Some true Loyal 당신 are!"

"Gab, Professor Sims wanted me to stay after class because-"

"Because 당신 two could make out?"

"No! Just because Ginny's professor was like that, doesn't mean all college professors are like this. Now shut up! You'll wake the other girls and if they know this, they'll probably call the police."

"Especially Shawna. She hates Criss and us. Ginny might like him."

They started walking up the stairs, as their conversation went on;

"We should have never done this! We're ruining his freedom and patience. This is cruelty!"

"No, this is his chance for us to sleep with him."

"You're a sicko, Gabby! A real sicko!"

"Quiet down! He'll hear us."

They both walked in the bedroom, as Promise sighed at
him in a dream-like way. She walked over towards him slowly, as Gabby forced her to 옮기기 closer, saying,"Go on! He won't bite. Well, not until we....you know." Promise hit Gabby's arm, as she knelt down. She whispered,"Are 당신 okay?" Criss shook his head "no", as tears formed in her eyes. She whispered back,"I'm sorry. I'll find a way to get us both out. Gabby scares me." Gabby pulled her 의해 the 칼라 of her 셔츠 and said,"What are 당신 telling him?! Get the hell away from him! 당신 may see him, only when I say it's okay for 당신 to see him! Now, unlock his handcuff from
the pipe and cuff it to my head board on my bed. Then, go to your room and go to sleep, before I put 당신 to sleep!"
"Yes ma'am." Promise said meekly. Promise did as she told her to do, as Criss whispered in her ear,"Why do 당신 take that shit from her? You're so much better than that." She replied,"You have no idea how dangerous this woman is."
She left after cuffing Criss to the head board, as Gabby changed into her pajamas right in front of Criss. Criss looked away out of respect, yet at the same time disgust.
Not that Gabby was ugly, but she was psychotic.

Gabby crawled on the 침대 in a tiny yellow floral print teddy.
She said to him,"Let's have fun, but we have to be quiet. We don't wanna wake the other girls." Criss pressed his foot against her stomach and said,"No. I don't want to." Her facial expression changed from a happy/seductive to a scary/mean/hurt/blank expression. "Yes, 당신 will." "No I won't. I'm not gonna let 당신 get whatever 당신 want." She gulped, lying to herself, saying that it was too soon for her and Criss to get together right away (though deep down the truth is, she knew Criss didn't want her.) "Fine. We'll cuddle. I will, however, get 당신 to change your mind someway, somehow." Criss smirked in an angry sort of way,"Try me." His voice was cold and hurt. How dare she do this to him! She crawled beside of and wrapped her skinny little lanky arms around him. He shivered, as she pulled the blankets over him, thinking he was cold. He wasn't cold, he was uncomfortable. He felt suffocated, and he barely spent five 분 with her. He didn't want to go back to sleep, but his eyes spoke differently. He drifted off, hoping that he would wake up back 집 in his own 침대 without any psychos clinging to him.


Promise cried herself to sleep. She wanted to be strong and brave, like Criss and his stunts on Mindfreak. She couldn't. She had known Gabby since their freshman 년 of college and she knew how dangerous this girl was. Yet, she had to make a private plan to help Criss return home.
posted by Problematic129
*Thanks for the 코멘트 and 팬 :) I just noticed I put Ch.3 for Ch.2, my mistake I can be so dumb sometimes. But! I fixed it. Please read, review, and don't copy*
Chapter 3
    We all 사랑 the great Beth
    Back to the story, Ali was right, the new substitute was HOT, 의해 the time class was over the girl sitting 다음 to my had drowned in a pool of her own drool. We make our way to the cafeteria and listen to one of many of Beth’s crazy stories, it’s basically this lame story that she recreates improvising as she goes along.
    That’s...
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posted by rory2011
two years later ...
kevin took his father's part of making money for this family and David stood in the house to take care of the others ,and to brought 음식 and other needing for his family

Jack hated school so much ,but David refused to let him without education ,jack taking drugs and stealing money from other people ,he's not a good guy like Kevin and Paul ,so all David caring is around jack ,David couldn't understand that his son is a bad guy , cause jack look like his father so much with his black hair and his skin , his face shape ,he took his green eyes from his mother but he look nothing...
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posted by Problematic129
*Chapter 2 up! Thanks for all the 코멘트 and 팬 :) Please read, review and don't copy*
Chapter 2
    Evil takes true form
    So right now I’m talking to my best friend, Beth, as were walking to our class. As we were talking Grey Callister interrupted us.
    With his flawless gold-blonde hair and warm brown eyes, it isn’t a surprise he’s wanted 의해 most girls. I hate to admit when I first laid eyes on him, my legs turned jello and I didn’t want to look away, but later on I realized he was a conceited jerk.
    So...
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posted by Problematic129
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Chapter 14
        A deadly experience
    The girl in the bag was whimpering now, and Dorothy and bubble gum hair started to look worried.
    “Your sure she won’t suffocate.” My sister asked, doubtfully looking at the tie in the bag.
    “Of course, I tied my brother in that bag so he would shut up, he’s still alive.” The leader told her, with a roll of her eyes, and a flip of her hair.
    “And...
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posted by Problematic129
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Chapter 13
        Payback and revenge, a bad combination
    It was a few hours after the doctor showed me my gray hair, and I felt spooked. I couldn’t have been that stressed, could I?
    I ate extra 더 많이 음식 than my normal amount, and went to sleep earlier than just staring at the clock willing time to run faster. I closed my eyes and felt the calm relaxation of sleep grab me quickly, I opened my eyes and saw that I was lying down in a beautiful...
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posted by alicia386
Chapter Five
Book Two- Sophie

SECRETS ARE MEANT TO BE KEPT SECRET. DON'T GO LOOKING FOR THEM BECAUSE YOURS COULD BE AS EASILY EXPOSED. -Emma

       I studied myself I'm the bathroom mirror. I was pretty, no 질문 about that. I had dark black hair and gorgeous brown eyes like my sister. I kept my hair shoulder-length while Zoe liked hers long and covering most of her face. She once told me that it gave her a mysterious vibe. I liked my hair short because it showed off my roundish face. It was odd. Zoe and I are twins but my face always seemed a little 더 많이 round and cutesy then Zoe's face. ...
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posted by alicia386
Chapter Four

WHEN I NEED 당신 WILL BE THE SAME 일 I DIE. -Erica

      For the last two days, Sophie hasn't said one word to me. She was either locked up in her room 또는 going to the mall with her new friend, Madison. It seemed like she was never 집 and when she was home, she would never come out 또는 her room. I have literally heard her whispering and if I stood there too long, everything would get eerily silent. It was bizarre. Dad would probably notice if he wasn't too busy sucking face with Carrie.
      I had spent most of my time in the 도서관, 라이브러리 looking up 더 많이 information on ghost and...
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 The Yarn....
The Yarn....
(Sequel to the A Cat Chasing Yarn (Yarn's Point of View) (This cat is going to be really perky and hyped up and energetic.))

OKAIZ, SO TODAY I SAW THE MOST AWESUME-Y THING EVER! A BASKET OF YARNZ!! I SAWZ MEH 초 가장 좋아하는 CULUR IN THERE, TOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MEH 가장 좋아하는 CULUR IZ GREEEEEEEEEEEN AND MEH SECUND 가장 좋아하는 IZ PINNNNKK. SO I WUZ LIKE, POUNCE! SWIPEZ-Y! I'M SO AWESUMEZ! AND SO, I LIKE, CHASED IT DOWNZ DA STAIRZ, AND IT WUZ SO EXHILARATIN' AND STUFFZ. AND SO, LIKE, IT MADE IT TO THA HUMANZ AND DEY THREW IT SAID, "Go get it, Daisy!!" SOZ, I WENT AFTER IT AND 굴, 덴 I SAW SOME GREEN YARN, SOZ I RANZ PAST THA 담홍색, 핑크 YARN TA GETZ DA GREEN..... I LURVVVVVVVVVV GREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEN!!!
 Me (right) and my brother (left).
Me (right) and my brother (left).
 Mom (left) and Dad (right).
Mom (left) and Dad (right).
Chapter Seven

    Since the death of Gwendolyn, Mr. Bulks cut the field trip short and gave everyone an A for the day. The Daltons were the most upset so they left a few 분 after Reese was arrested. Gwendolyn's body was not found. Police suspected that Reese had probably hid the body somewhere. She probably didn't want anyone to to find it. There was still an unsettling feeling in the air as everyone remembered what Reese last said. If she truly wasn't the one who killed Gwen and Abby then that meant that the killer was still loose and probably planning their 다음 attack. If they were...
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posted by Sinna_Hime_chan
 in dedication to Mina
in dedication to Mina
The ocean may overtake me and 제비, 삼키기 me- yet it will not bury me.
The whole of the mountain will crash down and roll over me - but it does not crush me.

Human physical strength has limitations and it weakens in time. 'Inner strength' knows no bounds!
The confines of this earthly realm have no bearing.

Let it be done!

Let the horns sound that shake the foundation.
Call forth the titans. Summon up the dread that lies buried deep within the 심장 and mind.
Let the godless fear when they face the charge.
The 로스트 will flee 또는 loose heart.

'And in the darkening late hours when the ground rumbles like an oncoming train...I will draw from deep wells what cannot be poisoned 또는 tainted 또는 overturned. I will stand, though the tides rise and the clouds threaten...and there I will remain, even if I show signs and cracks of care and hardship.
I will not be broken.

I may grow weary.

Though all the elements come against me
and tear at flesh and bone!-I WILL STAND!
카카시 선생님
KAKASHI
Why can't the world become a fairytale book?
It wouldn't be as mean
But it may be much 더 많이 green
용 that can be your pet
Princesses with hair for rope climbing
Pumpkins that can turn into horse carriages
And 고양이 that wear boots and fight mice.
The people in reality aren't always very nice
But even the ogres and giants can say hello and give 당신 nice things
Princesses aren't snobby 퀸 bees at school
Princes aren't egomaniacs
And money is in gold, silver, 또는 copper 또는 even magic beans!
Hens lay golden eggs
Poverty can end in five seconds
당신 can get your own fairy and wish for whatever 당신 want
And have your any desires
But I guess this is all in the mind
But the world can be kind at times
It isn't always bad and cruel
But imagination makes it go around
posted by sawfan13
Lily knocked on the door to her mother and father's mansion, wanting to ask them a simple question; if it was okay to allow her to take her best friend, Roxy, to her and her sister's trip to Africa.

Lily's mother answered,"Hello there! I wasn't expecting 당신 to come over." Lily came in and said,"Mom, may I talk to 당신 about this whole trip to Africa?"

"Sure thing, dear! Ask away!" She and her mother sat down and Lily asked her,"Mom, is it alright if my friend and roommate Roxy can come with me on the trip?"

Her mother sighed and replied,"No." Lily's eyes widened, as her 심장 broke into a million...
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posted by Dhampires
"Katlen!" Eric stepped 앞으로 ready to rush to my aid.

"Whoa whoa whoa." Jarred said placing a hand over Eric's chest pushing him back.

Eric looked at Jarred with a 사워, 사 우 어 face then turned his attention to Eliza she looked down at the girl then at her blood on herfinger tips she smiled and as she turned to Eric she slowly ran her younger over her bloody fingers.

Eric pushed past Jarrred and rushed up to Eliza he took her 의해 the 셔츠 and yelled "You bastard what did she ever do to you."

"The girls tired ya know. She doesn't even know what she is, such a pitful thing it's ashame she went on...
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posted by Problematic129
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Chapter 5
    Let’s get started
    We were standing in front of a big boat, but it wasn’t the one Dorothy visited, I knew that for sure. We were at the docks, were a lot of boats are at, I’m surprised there’s so many. But as I inspect all of them, none of them were the one I hoped.
    The 보트 smelled like a ton of fish, and on the corner I could just make out a small pile of dead fish, whoever owned this 보트 must be careless.
    “This...
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posted by SweetHoneyBunny
Tears were rolling down my face. My 심장 hurt, and my thoughts were scrambled.
It was a 일 that reflected my emotions. The clouds covered the sky completely and were threatening to rain, the wind was howling and my family was being ripped apart.

My parents were both suicidal, and were always having what they call “accidents”. One week, I found my mother cutting her wrists in the bathroom. Her blood was puddling on the floor, and she was crying. I called her therapist, who talked her out of it. Again. My father was no better. He tried to thrown himself out the third story window of our...
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I flinched before he hit me I could already feel the nails from the 벨트 on my skin exactly where he'd hit before he really did. He hit that same spot at least five times—it was right above my butt bone.

I cried out in pain as he went up and down my spinal cord with the 벨트 he moved it to my arms that clinged to the 상단, 맨 위로 of the heater. Tears poured out of my eyes "Dad stop please dad!!" He whipped me harder saying "What did I tell 당신 all about calling me Dad I'm your master 당신 little runt!!" he changed to the other arm and and gave me a fine blow to the left jaw bone I fell on my back...
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posted by wantadog
Chapter 4


Juliet quieted. It was apparent that she was too weak to break the grip, and if this person really was friendly, fighting and screaming would only complicate matters. After a 분 of her staying limp in the person’s grip, he let her go. She took a deep breath to steady her nerves and twisted around to see who it was. She couldn’t contain herself.
“Steve, 당신 bastard! What the hell!”
“Quiet! They’ll hear you,” he whispered frantically.
“Wait, so this is…real?”
Steve looked down. “Sorry, but yes, it’s real.”
Juliet clapped her hands to her mouth. “It can’t...
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posted by SweetHoneyBunny
I backed up slowly, not wanting the she 늑대 to feel threatened and attack. “Nice wolf, I'm not going to hurt you.” I got up off the ground with my hands out, facing the wolf. She had white 모피 with a small gray 별, 스타 on her chest. Climbing off the small 언덕, 힐 she had been standing on, she began walking towards me. I stood still. If I ran, she would pin me down and attack; and if I stood here there was no telling what she might do. “Please don't kill me. I didn't want to be brought here.” She was circling me and sniffing. Suddenly, she stopped. “I can smell his blood.” Her voice was...
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 Saukerl
Saukerl
We were anxious to find out what was going on with the Jew. The Saumensch and I walked out and onto the streets, apart at a distance, careful of any danger around us. As we walked over onto Pariser Platz, we saw that there was a public execution today. A couple of Nazis were gathered around a feeble man, short and skinny, who appeared to be a Jew. The Saumensch and I stepped closer, seeing that it wasn't our Jew, but only to be halted 의해 one of the Nazis on command. "HALT! What brings 당신 here?" I answered calmly, "We've just come 의해 to greet 당신 fine men. Heil Hitler." The Nazi nodded briefly,...
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posted by Problematic129
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Chapter 20
    Let the games begin
    “What are 당신 doing here?” I ask.
    “I could ask 당신 the same thing,” America 답변 crossing her arms and giving me a pointed look. “Zyanna.”
    Now right then, my 심장 did stop. “What?”
    “Oh, don’t act stupid Zy, I know who 당신 are.”
    “How…?”
    America looked confused. “You mean 당신 didn’t send me that...
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