True Writers Article: Revamp of Vamp Out

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posted by Knowitall123

half a 년 이전 my friend wrote a story called Vamp out ,but after receiving some mean 코멘트 she gave up on it and when I asked to do a revamp she agreed.

I have,a pretty much normal life, well not quite as normal as 당신 think.
당신 see I'm a Vampire. All of 당신 who just started running in panic 당신 can relax. I don't kill people, I'm Vegeterian. I almost never drink blood. When I need to drink blood I drink animal blood. I live in the UK, to be 더 많이 precise in London. Maybe 당신 want to know how I look like. I'm a normal girl, who's a Vampire. I have long curly brown-blond hair and blue eyes (I know I look like a mary sue). I live with my little blond sister Emma who is a bit annoying, my mom who is a normal "killer" Vampire and my dad who is..just your ordinary mean Vampire dad. Maybe 당신 are asking yourself how can I stay in the sun. Well, every Vampire family has it's own protection sign. Our family`s sing is the cat. So I have a bracelet on my right hand. It's a cute, little, silver bracelet with a Cat charm on it. I have a pet. Not a dog 또는 a cat 또는 a bird, even tought it can fly. I have a dragon. Sounds wierd, but she is really cute. Her name is "Striped Diamond", but I call her Dia. She can be very small and very big. With the help of my bracelet I can turn her into a little pocket charm. Now let`s talk about my past . My familly turned into 뱀파이어 in the 년 1690. So we still look like the time we turned. I was turned when I was a teenager so I still look like 16 and I will for a long time and after like 500 years I will look like 18, then 20, then 22 and so on. I 사랑 to get on the roof of our huge house. Did I say it was Huge?It is! And watch the night and the sky. Sadly there aren't any 뱀파이어 in our town beside us, better said we are the only 뱀파이어 in the whole Country. Every country has is own Vampire family. We are all from Romania. But In 1700 every 뱀파이어 had to leave the country and go into a diffrent one. So why am I telling 당신 all this? Well, 2 weeks 이전 I got a mail from a High School in the USA...

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alicia386 Pretty good, are you going to continue the story. I would love to read it. What exactly is a mary sue? Pretty good. I like it.

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World of Shadows- Chapter Nine

posted by alicia386

Chapter Nine

IF WE WERE ALL PERFECT, LIFE WOULD BE BORING. -Emma

Forgetting the fact that my old friend is now going to be the enemy's snack, I tried to focus on the words that Erica was telling me. After a lot bickering, she has agreed to teach me how to reach my sister. "Just focus your eyes onto that blank wall. Remember do not become dizzy while staring at the wall. It happens to me all of them time." I ignored that last part and focused my eyes onto the 벽 ahead of me. "Now imagine Sophie." That is what I did. I imagined the way Sophie would look like and 믿을 수 없는 it worked....

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Sneak Peak of My Book/Novel "Remembering You"--Chapter 2

posted by PonygirlCurtis7

Chapter 2
Three Months Earlier

There was not much bright where I was. Just dull, cheap lamp-light. Ya know? The cheap light that bulbs give off. Not until I stepped out into the golden hue of this evening’s sunset could I get a good picture with my eyes. I had been in a bar with my 프렌즈 or, as it’s usually called, my gang. It wasn’t a real rough bar, the one I had been in. there were a couple fights every so often, but not much. Gavin, the owner, was good about that. He didn’t want the fuzz showing up all the time, so when he wanted a fight to stop, it stopped. He could persuade...

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프렌즈 Until the End- Ch.5

posted by alicia386

Reese Kingston

Chapter Five

Reese invited her inside and they got to work on Reese's couch. Her mom was currently cooking them oysters for 공식 만찬, 저녁 식사 which was Dakota's favorite. Reese really wanted Dakota to like her. It was so obvious. "Our project is on Recyclable Art. Do 당신 have old newspapers 또는 something?" Dakota asked. She flipped open her binder and read the list. "We can use paper, soda cans, and everyday household items like paperclips and bottle caps. Things like that."
"My Uncle Kenny use to be a hoarder and he is always giving away his 정크 so he might have some useful things," replied...

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프렌즈 Until the End- Ch.4

posted by alicia386

Hazel Portwood

Chapter Four

Dakota glanced at herself in her long vanity. She had chosen to wear the white skinny pants, a 담홍색, 핑크 고삐, 홀 터 넥 top, and a 스파게티 strap 셔츠 underneath the 고삐, 홀 터 넥 top. She had on her 담홍색, 핑크 high tops. Her hair was down and curly. She looked decent but she didn't want to be decent. She wanted to be extraordinary. The 목걸이 with the red lips at bottom would be the perfect accessory to make her outfit great. She turned back to the mirror to only find a pale figure standing behind her. Dakota whirled around to face the intruder.
'Hmm,' thought the ghost. 'I like it....

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Daredevil's Vs. Murderer's Ch.19

posted by Problematic129

*Please don't copy and please read and review*
Chapter 19
    A messed up version of a family reunion
    The woman smiled, “Zyanna.” She held out her hand. I stood up, brushed off my jeans,and took her hand.
    Now, it may not have been the smartest idea, but she was my mother. She came for me, and after having years of her out of my life, I wasn’t going to let an opportunity like this pass up.
     She had this lithe grace, like I knew she would, and maneuvered her way through the forest. When we left it, the...

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The Wings Trilogy: Wings of Death

posted by alicia386

Poor Vincent Matherly was pushed to his death. Poor, poor, Chasity the girl who pushed Vincent to his death. The tears of the parents and the sad looks of passing citzens. Chasity examined the scene once more. Was that the right thing to do? After she had done it, it truly didn't look like the right thing.

Chasity was summoned from the big guy in the sky. He had seen the terrible thing she had done. Chasity wasn't ready to face him not after that. he stared down at her while she looked down at her toes. The big guy in the sky wanted to send her to the big guy below the ground but decided against...

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re-playing dreams (chapter 1)

posted by rory2011

chapter(1)

chapter(1)

my life turn to a disaster after my parents divorced
my father is always busy with his new wife and his little stupid son
and my mother is busy with her work to make for us a life better than the life that she had ,but sometimes she angered me cause I can't talk to her and I'm 17 ,she doesn't treat me like I'm her oldest daughter ,she treat me nice to take care of my younger brother and my younger sister ,and to do her job while she doing her hard work

it's morning ,I was laying in the 침대 watching the sun raising to say "hello" to my green eyes ,I was a weak but I didn't...

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another song 당신 can choose the name cant think of oneXD

posted by hugebleachfan1

[verse 1]
you called me the other night and i didnt know wat to do so i answered the phone and said hel-lo
you said 당신 were sorry and that wanted to come back to me but i told no cuz

[chorus]
i cant take it no 더 많이 당신 break my 심장 then 당신 say 당신 wanna come back i put up with this 황소, 불 crap enough of times

im sick of 당신 and im sick of the way 당신 treat me and im sick of your 사랑 and oh how i've been able to live my life the way i wanted to

[verse 2]
i moved on from 당신 i forgot about 당신 당신 never come to my mind your out of sight and out of mind i dont think about 당신 anymore

[chorus]
i cant...

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The Deadly Escape Ch. 2

posted by alicia386

Chapter Two

"Look at this view!" screamed Sidney. "Can 당신 believe that this architecture dated all the way back to 초 world war. It still stands today!"
"Blah! Can 당신 see these malls! Now this what 당신 should be screaming about," said Simone. She snapped a picture with her old blackberry. It wasn't as cool as Brooke's iPhone but she wasn't complaining.
"Think about something other then malls," said Sidney.
"Is that even possible?" joked Lauren.
They were all riding in a used car that Mr. Rivers had bought. Simone's Aunt Tracey lived in Paris and...

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The Inevitable Fate 21

posted by rory2011

David crawled towards Kat
" what's going on ? " David asked Kat
she moved her eyes looking at him and said , " remember why mom died ? ,Mac want to kill Hayley for the same reason ........ in the same way "
Hayley was sitting right 다음 to Kat ,what she heard hurt her so much ,but she knows that she is a girl without a father loving her 또는 caring about her
" I want to get out of here " said David
the door opened , that was Mac carrying a chair with his hands and there was a man of his guards standing near him
" spread them up " Mac told his guard ,the man pulled Hayley strongly ,Hayley tried...

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Thinking of Someone Special (ME)

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글쓰기 Begins with 당신

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Daredevil's Vs. Murderer's Ch.17

posted by Problematic129

*Thanks for all the comments, and thanks for voting for my story!!! Please don't copy and please read and review*
Chapter 17
There is a huge difference between wrong and right
    “Did 당신 really think,” Azerien paused. “That I wouldn’t notice? That everything would blow over? It’s why 당신 were crying wasn’t it? I’m not stupid, Zy, 당신 knew and didn’t tell.”
    “If father hadn’t killed anyone we wouldn’t be in this mess!”
    “Father did nothing wrong!”
    “Killing is wrong and so is...