I know this isn't related to Justin Bieber but....

Can your read my article??
Actually its chapter 1 and 2 (still a draft):

www.fanpop.com/spots/writing/articles/59837/title/try-...r-2

www.fanpop.com/spots/writing/articles/59694/title/try-...r-1


The 제목 is Try My life.
Its not that really long.
It will keep 당신 reading.

Tell me what 당신 think.
Thank you!