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The Wish of Eternity: The Magiwar. Chapter two

posted by kingcesar67

It is now my sixteenth birthday and like on tenth birthday, I received a life-changing surprise. But unlike my last surprise where Delilah... Well, 당신 know what happened, but anyway back to the current events. Unlike the last one, my surprise was that was being relocated. I went with a new family 의해 the name of the Wilkonsons. "Welcome Cesar!" Said Mary, my new foster mother. "Thanks, miss..." I started before she cut me off. "Please. Just call me mom." Mary said. "Okay mom." I responded. "Allow me to introduce 당신 to our family." Mary motioned me to follow her up the stairs. When we arrived...

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The Wish of Eternity: The Magiwar. Chapter one

posted by kingcesar67

Hello! I am Cesar. I'm a being of infinite power, who just wants to fit in with the crowd. Anyway, being really powerful is really cool, but it also means I have to fight those who want to use my powers for numerous purposes, which I will discuss along the way. Anyway, my story began when I was 9 years old. The 일 I entered foster care was the best 일 of my life. But, I would soon find out that my whole life would change on my tenth birthday.
"Not so fast Cody! Slow down!" I said, trying to keep up with my foster brother. "Try to keep up Cesar! 당신 don't want to lose for the third time do...

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How I Feel About Stefan, Elena and Damon's 사랑 Affair

posted by daisymae1

Disclaimer: *I am on Season 3 Episode 16 and I have not read the books*

I'm going to hope you've read my other 기사 "How I Feel About Stefan, Elena and Damon" so that I can skip the detailed introduction. I have become so aggravated 의해 the messy 사랑 'V' going on between the three main characters on The Vampire Diaries. So much so I've decided to write (vent) about it. Obviously the best thing to happen would be the three of them getting over each other and moving on with their lives but we all know that's not going to happen. For argument's sake, I'm going to discuss who I think should be...

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The Individual Problem in Racism

posted by LadySilverSoul

This is my opinion. It is not meant to offend, 또는 disrespect anyone.

I'm still in my twenties, yet I am tired. I am tired in the deepest marrow of my bones. As I type this, I find myself taking long pauses between sentences. It is like my mind and body knows my intent to use expressive vocabulary, will still fall short of the actual circumstances of which I write.

Many of us, at least on the outside, believe that racism is wrong. Many of us, at least in the face of others, shake our heads at it. I'm not talking about the racism that causes physical pain for others, but the racism that is perpetuated...

글쓰기 a story and hope that 당신 like the start

posted by Jinx_Strangeman

The lingering light was obliterated 의해 the rapidly falling night. The once 연어 and purple sky transformed into a vast expanse of jet-black that engulfed the town. A canopy of luminous stars materialized amongst the ocean of blackness. Some were dull, merely flickering into existence every now and then, but there was an adequate amount of shimmering stars to illuminate the dark, moonless night. The lake glistened, mirroring the dazzling assemblage of glittering stars and the luminescence from the moon. The faint wind brushed against the water's surface, the ripples ruffled the stillness of...

Diana's wrath chapter 3

posted by floraisbest1

Then the guard gives (flora, musa, aisha, nabu, riven, and helia food).

diana's guard: here is some 음식 (specifaclly leaves)

flora: dont 당신 think diana was way to specific, she told her friends.

(everyone starts eating except for flora)

helia: whats wrong flora arent 당신 going to eat something.

flora: dont 당신 guys think that guard was way to specific with our food.

nabu: your right but why would diana put something in the food? she obviously wants to talk to us and we need our strength 또는 we'll starve to death.

flora: im still not eating

aisha: flora please dont be stubborn

flora: im not being stubborn...

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The Mistress of Mid-September (A Poem)

posted by zanhar1

“Bow before oh bow before the Mistress of the Blade.”

She dances in shrouds of silk scarlet.

Heel over heel in spinning in time.

Fabric twisting ‘round her delicate ankles.

“Praise oh praise the Mistress of the Blade.”

The sword an extension of her graceful arm as she twirls it about in Mid-September air.

Crisp September air.

The blade slashes through leaves as they fall.

Hilt of gold adorned in ruby and diamond.

Gleaming and glistening as it slides from her grasp. Wailing through that oh so crisp Mid-September air.

“Watch in wonder oh watch the Mistress of the Blade.”

By night she finds...

Mindy,Spy Spectacular Chapter Two

posted by mermaidgirl1010

When I woke up I was on a cement floor. My head felt terrible pain and I saw that I had some black and blue on my leg.
''Finally, 당신 woke up. I have been waiting for your name.'' A voice said behind me. I turned around and screamed the sream that sounds like a dying llama. ''Billiam Fergunsun!'' I yelled in rage. ''Yes, tis I ,Billiam Fergunsun."
He is such an idiot. I stood up and brought my knee to his pee-hole and he screamed like a little girl. "Girl power!" I screamed. I didn't notice his friends.
They almost hit me when I heard someone scream now! and I felt light headed and everything went dark again.

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The Death Contracts, Vol. 1: GLIMPSE [The Story of Astrid Marker] -- An Original Novel 의해 Me.

posted by BuffyFaithFan1

Hello Dear Reader,
I am 글쓰기 an original novel and I wanted people to at least hear the word of it before I tried to get it out in the world. It's called "The Death Contracts, Vol. 1: GLIMPSE" and it's the story of the main character named Astrid Marker.
The reason why I'm posting this link everywhere I know possible is because I want fans. Desperate? No. 더 많이 like curious to see how many people can review what I have so far and tell me what they think. I have the first 8 Chapters 게시됨 on my 프로필 at the website figment.com, the link to it plus the synopsis is straight below, but I wanted...

Adventures of the Sea ( Chapter 2, Revenge of the Octopus)

posted by lilly0102

Ariel the mermaid got hurt. She can't swim 또는 eat 또는 anything. We were going to call the 물고기 fins animal emergency call, but they would think we were full of it. We are really sad to see that mermaid hurt, but what could we do. "I have an idea," said Ashley! "What is it? Tell me already. Don't 당신 want to help the mermaid?" " Okay. We need to make a plan," said Ashley. "What type of plan?" "You go up on 육지, 쇼 어 and call for help, and if they think your lying go to the store and get coconut oil, a fake mermaid tail, and a knife. After 당신 do that we are going to do some surgery."

" Are 당신 okay Ariel," said Ashley? "No, I am hurting really bad." "Well, don't worry help is on their way I promise we will help you." Who's we?" "My friend, Victoria, and I, so don't worry. Just try to take a nap and everything will be ok." "Okay. I am counting on 당신 too protect me." "I know just trust me."

Redemption Cemetery: Curse of the Nightingale - chapter 1

posted by Flora_Swift

Veronica

"Look Bob! I found them! I found them!" a boy about 20 years old shouted, and pointing to a huge old willow tree. Another boy about the same age as him sprinted towards the boy, "Oh! Finally! Now the villagers will believe our little Veronica now. Good job Sky!" Sky, the boy that had just pointed out the tree, beamed with pleasure.
Suddenly, the willow 나무, 트리 which was green, turned bright red, then white and at last pink. The two boy gasped and ran towards the tree. All of a sudden, the 담홍색, 핑크 나무, 트리 let out a shriek, that pierced the boys ears. Then, tons of 담홍색, 핑크 birds flew out of the tree. The...

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Nightfall #1 COMPLETE REWRITE: CHAPTER THIRTEEN

posted by adamk

CHAPTER THIRTEEN:
OCTOBER 30, 11:22 PM
I feel nothing but fury towards 단창, 파이크 as I continue on towards Harold’s house. Danny, of course is against the idea, however, I have not told him I healed Harold’s condition, and unless I can find a way to make it with everyone surviving the 다음 twenty-four hours, I decide that information is best left secret. As I near the exit that will take me back into the suburbs, I realize is less than an 시간 until Halloween, I drift back off into my memory of that fateful night all those years ago.
ALBANY,OCTOBER 31, 1850:
We are less than a mile from exiting...

Afterlife Chapter 1 part 1

posted by FURRY

Death, death is a beautiful thing, it allows new beings to be born, death is needed and shall always be around... However there was one who tried to defy death, he said that it was not needed, that people could go on with out it, this mans name was Deluch ruler of a mighty kingdom off to the east. One of three greater kingdoms, but our story does not start there, no our story starts in another realm where everything is peaceful and death is accepted.

Beings of this realm know that death is a good thing, death paves way to new life, so why try to stop it? Maybe some people wish to live forever?...

Nightfall #1 (Complete Rewrite) Chapter 12

posted by adamk

CHAPTER TWELVE:
Danny wakes up around noon; he seems dizzy the moment his eyes open. I close the blinds swiftly. “Are 당신 okay?” I ask stupidly, already knowing the answer. Danny is in unimaginable pain on the inside. The infusion I gave him was quick, thus the change was slightly different than most. “Horrible.” He mutters, grabbing his head. I lean over to look at him. The change has affected him, I note, and there may be different after effects. After all, his transformation into a vampire was as I mentioned before, highly unusual. “Ashley.” He says, finally placing a name to...

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Nightfall #1 (COMPLETE REWRITE) Chapter Eleven

posted by adamk

CHAPTER ELEVEN:
OCTOBER 30, 1995:
The sun rises over Crystal Falls; the chill of the autumn wind fills the air outside. 뱀파이어 hate the cold. As I ponder what to do, Danny lies asleep on the couch, still unconscious. The effects of my blood have taken a toll on him. I ponder whether to continue my investigation at the high-school. Doing so would put Harold at great risk. Yet, somehow I think 단창, 파이크 has plans for the students. I look at the calendar. It is the thirtieth, the 일 before Halloween. Halloween, the anniversary of the 일 I made my first kill. I reminisce once 더 많이 into my past.
ALBANY...

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Fifty shades of Grey 또는 Fifty shades of rubbish?

posted by nimone

I have just read a paragraph from what could possibly be, the worst book that I have seen in a long time. Fifty shades of Grey does not even have a good story line. The man Mr Grey is a complete pervert that is obsessed with SM. He meets this woman, warns her that he is a creep, and the woman stays!
WHAT THE HELL!
The novel apart from this is filled with parts where Mr Grey has sex with this woman practically everywhere in his house. Yet many woman seem to 사랑 this complete piece o rubbish.
And that is not even the worst part. The novel is full of the worst grammatical errors I have ever seen....

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Nightfall (COMPLETE REWRITE) Chapter Six

posted by adamk

CHAPTER SIX:
ASHLEY’S POV:
2:10 AM
OCTOBER 28:
It is only a little over a half 시간 later when I see a car pull into the parking lot. I note the driver pull out a flashlight and climb out. He has long dark hair, is skinny and wearing glasses. It is Harold. I motion him over to me. He walks over and hands me a pair of jeans and a sweater. “It’s all I could get in a hurry.” He said. We walk over to a restroom, and I ask him to wait outside while I change. 의해 now he notes I am covered in blood, but I promise to answer everything when I return. After about five minutes, I return and find...

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Nightfall #1 (COMPLETE REWRITE) Chapter 2

posted by adamk

CHAPTER TWO:
SANTA BARBARA, CALIFORNIA
OCTOBER 26, 1995:10:57 PM
It is nearly eleven when I pull to a stop outside of Saint Packie’s Bar in Santa Barbara. On this particular evening, I feel like doing some vigilante justice, if my sources are correct, which of course they will be, my victim will be inside the bar searching for his latest victim. Such irony, I think to myself. He will soon die in one of the most horrible ways imaginable, although this is only my plan A. If any problems proceed, there are always better ways of dispatching my victims. I show my ID to the security officer, and he...

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NIGHTFALL #1 (COMPLETE REWRITE) CHAPTER 1

posted by adamk

NIGHTFALL: A NOVEL 의해 AXEL MCCORMICK
Copyright: 2013

CHAPTER ONE:
CRYSTAL FALLS, CALIFORNIA
FEBRUARY, 1850

The 년 is 1850. My name is Ashley Garland; I live in the small town of Crystal Falls, on the west coast of the United States. At the moment, I am being hunted, 의해 what I do not currently know. All I know at present about my foe is that I fear for my life. In fact this whole ordeal has been about a week in the making. About a week ago, the people of Crystal Falls were gathered in the town hall, when a man suddenly began pounding on the door, pleading for help. After some of the citizens finally...

Pretty Little Nightmare Chapter 1

posted by Dreamcatcher26

Khloe, Caroline, a few other 프렌즈 and I flung ourselves down the 거리 to the hottest club in town devils lounge, I was thankful that the bouncers here were as dumb witted as everywhere else about fake ids.

Inside the club Icy, smoke lurked on the ground; coloured lights gave me a spontaneous rush of excitement. I looked at the seas of bodies that were grinding on the dance floor, an arm snaked around my waist before spinning me around to hold me in their grip.

'Scarlett 아기 당신 joining us tonight for a hit?'
I scoffed and pushed Eric of me.
‘Control your brother Khloe before the dog gets...