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posted by mari_giovani
This is a short story, based on a song. The song's kinda spoilerish so i'm gonna put its link at the end.
Ps: i just finished this so it probably has some typing and pontuaction mistakes...I'll review and 편집 later! :)

There he was once again, holding his knees in his arms, on the corner of that 침상, 소파 that he often tries to forget, and across from him, his terapist sat, cleaning her glasses with a tissue as she had his file on her lap, tried to, for the yet unknown, last time, understand and help him.
"So how are 당신 today, Jason? I'm glad to see that you're looking for the help that 당신 need." - she started, and she actually was happy to see him, little did she know that he didnt come out of his own will, but still, he was there, somewhat facing his fears.
"I dont need help" - he replied with a shaking and kind of sulky voice - "They made me come here, they-they did" - He still kept like an eight 년 old, even though he was almost twenty. Almost like the words that he wanted to say wouldnt come out right.
"Your parents did?"
He nodded, still hiding his face between his knees - "Because, i visited her, i did it, this morning, i went to where she's at."
"Really? these are good news then. Any reason for 당신 to have been able to overcome this today?"
"Today's july 5th, i needed to see her."
"So it's been one 년 already, did 당신 went alone?"
"Hm" - he agreed - "But my parents found out, and made me come here."
"How did they found out?"
"Because today's july 5th" - he paused - "And cause my eyes wouldn't stop" - he raised his head just enough for her to see his red eyes, full of tears."
"I understand. But 당신 did a big step today, all 의해 yourself, i'm proud of you."
"But i couldnt see her, she wasn't there, her beautiful face, i couldn't see it"
"I know." - she took a pause and analized his face - "Do 당신 think 당신 can tell me what happened on july 5th last year?"
"But 당신 know what happened."
"Yes, but i would like 당신 to tell me yourself what happened."
He hesitated.
"Just tell me about that day, how did it start? What 일 of the week it was?"
He sighed - "It was a friday, so i woke up at the time i normally did, i dressed up and went to school, i was happy cause there was gonna be a 음악회, 콘서트 and she would go with me, we were celebrating our 13 months together."
"13?"
"Yeah" he smiled like he was remembering a inside joke - "She always hated conventional things and because i liked them she said that we'd celebrate a 13th 월 not a 12th like everyone."
"I see."
"When i got to school she looked pissed, and sad, i didn't see her like that very often. She told me that her dad had grounded her for some stupid things and that she wouldnt be able to go"
"And how did 당신 respond to that?"
"I...I was disappointed. but the fact that i could see on face that she was also sad, made me somewhat happy. I told her it was fine, and we could do something another day. She wasnt very happy about it, but agreed with me and we both went to our classes"
"But 당신 two went to that concert, isnt that correct?"
"Yes, later that day, at lunch, i asked her i she couldnt sneak out of her house, i would borrow my dad's car and pick her up."
"And she agreed with that?"
"Yes, i guess even 더 많이 than the whole celebration thing, she wanted to see that concert" he gave a humorless laugh
"Then at what time did 당신 went to pick her up?"
"I guess it was around 10pm, cause the 음악회, 콘서트 would start at 11pm. So i drove to her house, and stopped at the corner so the neighbours woldnt see, and i called her. She met me after 4 ou 5 minutes, and was laughing at the fact that she jumped out the window, she had a few scratches on her arms, but she just smiled and laughed like this was the best thing ever. We went to the concert, and it was amazing, i watched her as she sang all of their songs and we even bought matching t-shirts. Halfway through the 음악회, 콘서트 rain started to pour, and a lot of girls arond us, started complaing but she only smiled like it couldnt get any better than this. after the 음악회, 콘서트 as we made our way to the car, i noticed that she was shivering from the rain so i gave her my coat, i remember her surprise face as she asked me why i gave her my 코트 and i told her that she was shivering. She laughed at the fact that she didnt notice that she was cold before i told her."
"Ok, now tell me what happened in the way back home."
He started shaking a little and holded his legs tighter"at the car, the rain had diminished a bit but it was still there, i had a cd that she liked, so i put it on so that i could keep on hearing her 노래 all the way back. I drove for a little while and straight ahead, i... i saw it."
"What did 당신 see?"
"A car, there was a car, probably stalled...yes, the engine was dead, but it was in the middle of the road." - his breathing started to get heavy.
"And what did 당신 do?"
"I, ...i couldnt stop...." - he closed his eyes - "so, i swerved to the right...the sounds, i still remember all of them, like it's happening over and over again, right beside me: the screaming tires, the bursting glass, and her voice in a painfull scream" - he seemed to be going into a state of shock so she asked him to breathe.
"Jason, deep breaths, you're are hyperventilating, 당신 have to breath, i need 당신 to tell me what happened next" - she sat 의해 his side as she tried to push him where he wasnt able to go to until now.
He hadn't calmed down, but kept on talking, 더 많이 like his mouth was moving 의해 itself -
"After that, i passed out, i dont know for how long, but when i woke up, the rain was heavy again, my face was on the asphalt and there were people standing all around, just staring. I realized what happened, so i tried to get up to look for her. My body hurt, and there was something warm coming from my eyes, so everything was blurry, but somehow i found my baby that night. She was lying ten feet away from where i initially was. i dragged my body until i was 의해 her side, she was half conscious" - he once again took deep breaths and continued - "I lifted her head, she smiled as she looked at me and she told me to hold her just for a little while." - he paused and put his hands in his eyes - "Then i held her close and i kissed her," - he began to sob - "our last kiss... She told me that she'd always be with me if i held her close, but now she's gone even though i hold her tight." - his red eyes now faced his terapist - "i 로스트 my love, my life, that night... and it's all my fault." - his hands had moved from his eyes to his chest, and his breathing was uneven, he kept shaking his body, back and forth, back and forth, as to shake the feelings away from him.
"I told 당신 this before, but it wont matter until 당신 realize it for yourself: it was not your fault. Deep down, 당신 know it as well. 당신 told me that she really wanted to see that concert, so let me ask you: if 당신 hadn't taken her, do 당신 think she'd go 의해 herself?"
"What does it matter?"
"Just answer me."
"Yes, she would, ok? Thats's just how she was." - he answered angrily
"So that could've happened with 또는 without 당신 being there, isnt that right?"
"Oh, if she'd been alone, she would've gone through that pain 의해 herself, i cant even... no, i cant..." - he panicked
"Do 당신 understand what i'm saying?" - she camly says but he doesnt answer, his mind was clearly somewhere else "jason!" she calls
"Yes! I do, but now it's too late..." he holds his stomach, she senses a dual meaning to that statement.
"What do 당신 mean?" - she asks, but before she could say anything else he started convulsing right in front of her "Jason, Jason!" - she kept calling, as she did an emergency treatment, but he was already out "Jason, what did 당신 do? What did 당신 take?" - she called for help but it was already too late. What she didnt know right from the beginng of the session, is that after his parents found out that he visited his girlfriend grave he took a deadly medicine, something that took a while to take effect, longer than he expected... When he arrived for his therapy, he thought he wouldnt go back 집 alive, but he was unsuccessful. He only got himself in a induced coma for a couple of days.
When he woke up, however, he was somewhat a different person. His parents and doctors tried to understand, but couldnt, so they assumed that the near death experience had scared him. The truth, that only Jason knew, was that while he was in the coma he had a dream, a dream about her. In his dream he held her once again and asked her where she was, and why would the lord take her away from him? She just smiled and told him to be good so that she could see him when he leaves this world. He cried and asked to go with her, but all she did was 키스 him one last time and repeat those words: be good! That's what changed him: the thought of meeting her again, someday. Maybe it was just a dream, 또는 it was just wishfull thinking, but it was something for him to hold on to. And he did, he held on to that, and put his life back on the tracks. That dream gave him a ladder to climb up, out from the bottom of the well that he was stuck in.
Two years later,in a normal day, for his now, ordinary, life, he was crossing the street, after buying 13 flowers, he didnt see that approaching him, was bus, completely out of control.Before being able to fully turn his head to see it, he was hit. Jason died on that day, lying once again on the asphalt, before help could come, with the 13 꽃 smashed 의해 his body. The last thing he saw was a bright light, a familiar song at the background, a smiling face looking only at him and open arms asking him to come. That was just an afternoon, on a 5th of july.


This short story was written 의해 me based on the song: Last 키스 의해 Pearl 잼 (originally 의해 J. Frank Wilson And The Cavaliers)

Link on YouTube (with lyrics): link
Stars twinkled and glittered in the night sky, they were numerous, infinite maybe. They were so beautiful, dazzling; sweet delicious 캔디 for my eyes. I was just absolutely mesmerized; I didn’t get times like this often. Not a single 구름, 클라우드 in sight 또는 마천루, 스카이 스크 래퍼 to hurt this scene of nature. Just pure bliss, no other words could describe it. I wished my days were always like this, peaceful, filled with joy and happiness but 저기요 one like me could only wish. It was all because of him.

“Hey there 당신 are.” My ears twitch, it was him. Great, I just had to push my luck and now he’s here....
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A/N: I finished 글쓰기 this about five 분 ago, lol. It's actually a song, but I figured it would fit as a poem as well.

This poem/song was inspired 의해 two things: 1) A few of my 가장 좋아하는 아니메 couples, namely Ed x Winry from Fullmetal Alchemist and Hoshino x Tanabe from Planetes (AWESOME series). And 2) while my dad was in Iraq, he heard "My Immortal" for the first time and said he loved the idea behind it...but it was too sad/depressing because "the chorus was in past tense instead of present tense." So he asked me if maybe I could take the same concept and do my own thing with it. I...
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Write hard and clear about what hurts.
-Ernest Hemingway

There is nothing to writing. All 당신 do is sit down at a typewriter and bleed.
-Ernest Hemingway

Everybody walks past a thousand story ideas every day. The good writers are the ones who see five 또는 six of them. Most people don’t see any.
-Orson Scott Card

For me, 글쓰기 is exploration; and most of the time, I’m surprised where the journey takes me.
-Jack Dann

The hardest thing about 글쓰기 is writing.
-Nora Ephron

If a writer falls in 사랑 with you, 당신 can never die.
-Mik Everett

Don’t try to figure out what other people want to hear from...
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posted by iHelloUniverse
Everyone is staring at me, I know from as I look up from my worn-out black converse, hearing them whispering and laughing to their friends. I pull up my Black Veil Brides's bag further up my shoulder, fearing of what I will be 읽기 on my locker this afternoon. In my tracks, I stop in the line of my locker, seeing insults that make me want to self-harm then and there.

Hang yourself
You're a fag
Overdose on pills
Worthless
Suicidal freak

My eyes locked on the notes. The words mocking me as they make me read them over and over until someone spoke, "Like our notes?" Laughter burst out as I turned...
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Emmanuel Ray, winner of Fashions Finest’s Fashion 아이콘 of the 년 award (2011), has been asked to officially open Gibraltar Fashion Week commencing on 19th April 2012.
Emmanuel will meet with fashion designers, press and a selection of important members of the Gibraltarian government.
Reene Weston, designer and organiser had the following to say about why she chose Emmanuel to officially open the event.
“Some people have to be taught to be fashionable…Emmanuel 레이 was born fashionable. Gibraltar is about real people and real lives. Emmanuel 레이 mirrors that!”
This exciting new event has...
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posted by r260897
Zean, the famous 별, 스타 of 음악 world came back with his Zeal (his guitar) and his famous UKK band after a live performance. He sat in front of a big mirror removing his make up. His ears were active with the chatter of his mates who were busy in talking about another band. He turned back with a big a smile as if he wanted to say something but he didn’t. he saw a small boy running and then he stood up and ran behind him he ran and ran and ran until he found himself surrounded 의해 white light and some noise in which he could hear “so 당신 are Zean…. Haaahaaaaa look at him his….” Zean,,...
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posted by para-scence
I slowly walked down the stairs in my pajamas, trying desperately not to make a sound. I peeked around the 부엌, 주방 corner. Father was sitting at the 부엌, 주방 table, sipping his coffee and 읽기 the paper. I silently turned around, and tip-toed back to the stairs.

"Cosette," he said in a deep voice. I squeezed my eyes shut and cursed quietly. I turned back around, and shuffled my feet into the kitchen.

"Good morning, Daddy," I said, trying to make him forgive me for last night. Even though it wasn't my fault. "How'd 당신 sleep last night?"

"Fine," he grumbled. "Don't think 당신 can make me forget...
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posted by HouseMindFreak
Again--I'm not the greatest writer nor do I aspire to be a great writer, this story is mainly for my entertainment so be kind with 코멘트 if 당신 read it.

1st Chapter link

Chapter 2

Koda arrived at his uncle’s shop, parking his dirt bike behind the building and chaining it to the radiator. The sun was already high in the sky; beating down its unforgiving rays of heat down on him but the extreme heat never bothered him as it seemed his body was never affected 의해 the sun.
His skin would repel the rays like a duck’s feathers would repel the water.
Inside he could hear his uncle yelling something...
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Life is never easy alone.
But no one is ever completely alone, that would be impossible.
But if the only company 당신 had was the company of an enemy, what would 당신 do?
Well then, say that enemy was the only person 당신 could rely on?
But what if they were the person that made 당신 alone in the first place?
And what if it was the one 당신 were falling in 사랑 with?
What would 당신 do if 당신 were in this situation?
Here's what I did.






I was laughing my head off when the 벨 rang signalling end of school. I didn't even notice it. I was too busy trying to get Kyle to notice me. I mean, every damn girl in...
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posted by wantadog
Chapter 2!


Juliet retrieved the papers from the chicken pen, saying hi to a few of them while she was there, and made her way towards the road. She considered going back to ask her mother about dad again, but decided that it could wait. She would talk to her about it when she got back. Jessica reached the gate leading to the road and left, taking care to remember to close it. Her farm was about a mile away from the rest of the town, so it took her about 10 분 of walking to arrive. On the way, Juliet dropped a piece of paper. Her hands were pretty full, so she folded it and put it in her...
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As I awoke the 다음 morning Mother was already hard at work makeing breakfest and cleaning the house even though it was already spotless, "Mother are 당신 alright?" I asked comeing from upstairs still kinda dizzy from last night's ordeal, "Yes dear just doing some cleaning." Mother replied as she started to clean the bookshelf, "Mother it seem's something has spooked you." I said siting down at the 표, 테이블 "It's nothing Max!" she replied with fear in her voice I looked at her with great concern, *Barking* "What is it boy?" I said with a worried tone as I reached to pet him but something was wrong,...
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posted by breebree446
 To think, most of my character names come from a thrift store baby book!
To think, most of my character names come from a thrift store baby book!
Baby Name Books!

My #1 resource is the baby name book I bought from a thrift store. It's a lifesaver! Not only does it have over 5,000 names but origins, boy and girl names, and alternate spelling. But, if 당신 can't get a hold of a baby name book there's always...

Name Websites!

Just as good and pretty much the same thing. They have access to millions of names online! One website I find really useful;

link
link - Thanks ellie_bellie135^^

Symbolic Names!

Often, writers give thier characters a name that has a certain meaning. For instance, one of my characters is named Roni. Which is short for Veronica....
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posted by Cinders
Exercise: Sleep Deprivation: 4:00AM Tuesday October 7, 2008*

The black spiders of mania are crawling over my brain, searching for a plump place to sink their pincers into. It’s been four days. I haven’t left the house for anything, not even a tuna sandwich. The 우주 in my 침대 is empty, indented, as if something used to rest there, but I’m beginning to forget 더 많이 and 더 많이 what that may have been. Maybe it was a coffin, its contents shaken, risen, defeated, dazed, meandering around with its arms stretched out and a dull expression on its face as it mutters something indecipherable that...
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posted by WritenOnTheSand
Prologue

I have always hated how we never seem to change. Our town has been the same size since, well, since forever. Never changing, just remaining quaint and familiar. Some people don’t like to come here because they say we make our selves sound too innocent. To me, innocence is that last thing that is Sleepy Hollow. If we were innocence, then my story would have no meaning. And without meaning, there would be no story. I will admit that 당신 may find it to be sad 또는 empty, so I don’t blame 당신 if 당신 want to set it down, and never look at it again. Believe me, if only I could set it off...
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posted by thirteen_times
There he is just standing there, starring at 당신 with 강아지 dog eyes. He smiles briefly at 당신 breaking your heart. It’s all too much so 당신 so 당신 slam the door. Before the door shuts he sticks his foot in the door way stopping it.
“I just want to talk.”
“There’s nothing to talk about.” 당신 lie. 당신 don’t want to hear him apologize 또는 even see him. What he did hurt 당신 like nothing else could, still 당신 knew that 당신 loved him and 당신 심장 ached for him. 당신 wish 당신 could turn back time to when 당신 both were happy but 당신 know that what’s done is done.
“How about us…”...
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