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posted by Funnygirl77
After a long 일 of school and making new 프렌즈 Kisa is tired, but happy. She starts on her 집 work and is finish with in ten minutes. Then she starts on math her hardest subject, it takes her fifteen 분 to finish. When she is done she text Erick and a bunch of her other friends, They all agree to meet at the mall. Kisa asked Zack if he wanted to come and he shook his head.
"NO thanks моя влюбленность"(my love) "I am fine" Kisa smiles and turns to leave "goodbye принц ночи" (good bye prince of the night)Zack was not shocked that Kisa knew about him. "she is very intuitive for a human." he thinks to himself. Kisa is picked up 의해 Erick and his volts wagon. Zack watch as she leaves,Erick smiles at Kisa and starts talking in Russian. "Я реально люблю вы" (I really like you), Kisa smiles. "и I вы" (and i you) Erick smiled. Kisa felt guilty, she dose like Zack, in fact she loves him, but she knows Zack is to good for her.
As if Zack can read her mind he sent her a text, "I will never be good enough for you, be safe, моя влюбленность" (My love). Kisa smiled, down at the phone. Erick took her hand thinking the smile was for him.Zack gets in the car and drives, he finds Erick's car and parks near it. He gets out and looks for Kisa.
When he spots her, he tries to get her eye, it works, she smiles at him. Erick and the others are unaware of his presents, except for Emily. She looks him in the eye, she knows he is something evil. Kisa looks at Emily begging her not to say anything. Emily nodded, "so Kisa" Josh said, "you never told us what your name means."
"Yeah" Eliot and Emily say at the same time. Kisa looks a Blake, Blake smiles, "It means Kitten" He answer for her. "so what about are names what would they be in Russian, Erick answered aging. Emily and Eliot didn't like his answer and decided to push him, over the bike rail.
Kisa laughs and Erick chases after her. They run all the way to the lake and Erick is pushed in, he comes up and grabs Kisa, Kisa grabs Emily and Emily grabs Eliot. They are all dripping wet, Eliot and Emily have to go home, and say there goodbyes.
Erick and Kisa stayed a few 분 longer, then went to his car. Someone was there waiting for them. Before they could get to the car the Man hit Erick in the head. He went unconscious Kisa yelled, and start to run towards the mall. The man grabbed her before she could.
She hit him in the grind and he let go, She start to run aging and he was on 상단, 맨 위로 of her. Kisa was fighting for her life. She looked around, but there was no one in site. The man pulled out a gun, and Kisa stopped fighting, "Scream" he said "and you'll die".
The man told Kisa to get up and she did. He lead her to the darkest part of the 거리 and pulled her into his car. Kisa took note of his, car. She also had the sound of his voice and how he looked imprinted in to her brain just in cause she gets away.
"Where are 당신 taking me?" she asked, he put the gun to her head, "No talking" Kisa remained quite. He speed off, "I have to go to the bathroom" Kisa said still trying to escape, he coked his gun and Kisa, stop trying to push him.
The police pulled up behind him, He looked at Kisa, "Who'd 당신 call?" he yelled, "I didn't do anything!" She said, he hid the gun. "Don't say anything" he said. After the police drove off the guy speed up.
He took Kisa down a desert street, and stop in front of a small house with no trees in the yard and no harbours. He got out and the went around to Kisa's side and pulled her out, he cuffed her hands and then took her inside the house.
Kisa tried one 더 많이 time, and asked him where he was taking her, what he wanted from her and who sent him. He slapped her hard in the face, kisa reached up with her hand and wiped away the blood. He told her to be quite and that if she made another sound he would shoot her in the leg.
He grab her hair and took her in side, he lead her to a room with no windows and only one way out, Kisa sunk to the floor and thought of Zack, then she thought of all the things that guy might want from her, that scared her so she went back think of Zack.
Mean while Greg the man who kidnapped her went down stairs all he had to do was wait, until then he can do what ever he want to do with the girl, and he had a lot of things in mind. With out knocking he went threw the door where Kisa was, he was just about to start messing around with her, when a knock on the door made him stop. He held the gun to Kisa's head, while he went to open the door.
Zack was there, he took one look at Kisa he tried to tell her everything will be okay with his eyes, but all he saw when he looked at Kisa was fear, even though she had only been here for a few minutes, it scared her to death. Zack turned to the guy and took the gun from him with easy, and then in one quick movement twist the guys head and snapped his neck.
Kisa looked away, Zack came towards her and she scoot back. Zack understood, he knew Kisa wouldn't like him if she found out what he really was, (a murder). Zack traced Kisa's check, "I understand if 당신 don't want to ever see me aging" he stared out.
Kisa had already beginning to come down, "Don't ever want to see you? what are 당신 talking about?"
Zack frowned "aren't 당신 scared of me?" Kisa laughed "No, why would i be?" Zack looked away, "You moved away from me why?" Kisa stood up and held her hands out to Zack so he can remove the cuffs.
"I didn't want 당신 to see me the way i was, I was scared i want 당신 to think that I am strong and not just weak and human." Zack's eyes lit up, "Your not scared of me?" Kisa shook her head, "even after what 당신 saw?" Kisa nodded, they sat there for awhile, "Kisa?" she turned to Zack.
"Yes" she said resting her head on him, "I don't think your weak, 당신 are strong than any human out there. Your 더 많이 then 당신 think" Those words echo in Kisa's head, they sound familiar to her.
Zack stood up, "Let's go home" He took Kisa in his arms and helped her walk out the door, then he burned the house down, and vow that he will never let anything hurt her ever. Zack knew all about why that guy took Kisa, and he wold do ever thing in his power to help her.


I know no one is 읽기 these, but if some one is I'm sorry this story is so 랜덤 i was running out of ideas so 당신 know how it goes. 다음 time it will be better. and if some is 읽기 this i could use your help tell what i can do to make this better.
posted by TeamRosalieHale
9: 당신 and Me

“So Tristan, how do 당신 fit into all this?” Alice asked him. He was sitting on a chair closest to the front of the carriage. He looked up from his book and sighed.
“Well, I was created in 1408, 의해 two warlocks known as Magna and Dejan. They took me and molded me into the perfect creature-a creature with the ability to change into anything at will-human, animal, whatever-telepathy, soothsayer, I was the perfect creature. But there are some limits even the could not look past though they are few: I can’t grant wishes, not the way a genie can, I can’t kill anyone at all,...
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posted by TeamRosalieHale
10: Hero

의해 then, the two had stopped fighting, though Alice was still fuming, not that Rosalie could really blame her. Once again, Alice was unsure what came next: half of her wanted to just run and run until she had left it all behind and the other wanted to stay though this was mostly to see what Rosalie meant 의해 Jack meaning so much to her.
Tristan, Jack, Michael and David waited inside the carriage. Tristan was in no hurry and Jack would have jumped off and followed Rosalie in a second. That 키스 had sealed the deal and answered the 질문 that had plagued him so many years: had she...
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posted by TeamRosalieHale
5: Remember Me This Way

After the initial shock had worn off, Rosalie and Alice had spent most of afternoon outside, neither finding it in them to function. Alice had gone inside the house-Rosalie still could not bring herself to do it-and after quickly gathering some clothing and other practical items for them she had quickly returned. She had silently placed a small bag at Rosalie’s feet and sat down 다음 to her again.
A short time later, the two looked up as Sam, Embry, and Jared came through the trees just in front of them. Sam simply looked at the girls before saying “so, everything...
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"this cant be!" Vanessa screamed.it was so loud,the walls began to shake.

"Vanessa,"her mom said."Come down! 당신 need to learn to use 당신 powers,and to control them.

"bu,bu,bu------This is all a dream!yeah,in a second,ill wake up,and not be a vampire."

She blinked 3 times,but she was still there.Not in bed.

"but,but,but,but,vampires aren't real!"

"thats what i thought,too.But,its true,its all true.You are a vampire,Vanessa,and 당신 cannot tell anybody,ok?"her mom said with wide eyes.

"ok,"vanessa said."i understand. but really,she didt.



the 다음 day,Vanessa didnt want to go to school.This was becuase...
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posted by Fangirl99
Izzy POV

It was about 12:01. I was going out to howl at the moon. When i walked outside, i saw a note. Iread it aloud.
Meet me in the woods at midnight.
love,
Your secret admirer
me:Wow,i have a secret admirer. maybe its owen. No wait, cody! no no, JUSTIN!!! 또는 trent. What about Geoff?
I wondered all the way there. then, i tripped on a leg.
me:AHHH!
duncan: 저기요 there babe.
izzy: what? oh, hi duncan. now, whos the secre admirer?
duncan: your looking at him.
me*laughs*okay, okay. 당신 got me. now, who is it?
duncan:me.
me:oh, really?duncan: uhu!
3rd person
izzy: oh, okay then are 당신 sure?
duncan; yes babe.
izzy: okay then
duncan: so,
izzy: 당신 wanna make out.
duncan:okay
*2 hours later*
*2 더 많이 hours alter*
izzy: okay well that was fun
duncan: yeah, uh, so, see 당신 later.
izzy:okay
duncan: yeah.cool. okay then, bye!
izzy: bye.
*15 min later*
both: I 사랑 U! *start making out*
posted by Free_Spirit
me: sorry the name is kinda weird. Okay well i wrote this for english class, and my teacher didn't have enough room to write a proper 코멘트 just that it was very busy. so um yeah tell me what 당신 think. Please i honestly don't mind the harsh truth. Okay here we go.
ps.Its about ancient greece, and sorry if the names are to weird

I sighed and leaned back against the wall, my hands were trembling, making it that much harder to read my book. Usually 시 calmed me down, but today was an exception. The sun was glinting through the clouds. Today was the 일 the Mykene men came to take me to Lukae...my...
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posted by KatiiCullen94
I remember the times of the i 사랑 you's
and times when it was i hate you.
But 당신 come back begging at me feet.
And when my pity defeated me.
and the sweet seranades, in our matching shades.
My rose collection, evidence of your effection.
The sheets unmade, from the nights 당신 stayed.
The child in me, from the times 당신 loved me.
The debt 당신 owe, from using the word borrow.
The times i was scared, was the time 당신 spared.
And this dress i wear, in which are people become aware, that 당신 are gone, and withdrawn.
The memories i hold, they are written in bold.
my broken heart, from when 당신 apart.
so rest now my love, up now from above.
posted by VAMPirella1997
This is a peom I wrote for a competition at my school. Tell me what 당신 think of it, please?


__________________________________________________



Have 당신 felt the torture of hate?
Like a poisonous cloud, it will wait,
Until 당신 burn in the flames of fury.
Then it will creep up and incapacitate.
Alas! 당신 will choke, and don’t try to deny your anger.
It is too late.

Hate is like grasping a red hot coal,
Intent on throwing it at another soul,
Instead it is you, yourself, who burns,
Then your own anger shall take its toll,
You’ll bring about your every mistake and failure.
You’ll be alone.
 "I could see the sorrow in his perfect blue eyes,something was wrong."
"I could see the sorrow in his perfect blue eyes,something was wrong."
Leonardo.....Leonardo....Leonardo.I just couldn't help but melt like an ice cream cone a on a Texas summer day, as I said his name over and over.He was just perfect.But I still had my worries about Lulu.Leo still hasn't explained the hug to me.But I don't want to be pushy with Leo.I wasn't exactly with Leo(yet) but we were 연기 like it.I didn't want to ask him,I wanted him to ask me.But I could tell he didn't want to break the ice.He knew I liked him but he still so nervous(it was so cute to me).I just wished he would ask already,what was holding him back from me?I certainly wasn't,so what...
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I was completely dreading the fact that I had another seven 더 많이 hours until I had to face Joel for the first time since that rain incident.I was looking up at Juan's guesthouse bedroom ceiling.It was completely pitch black but yet to me,it said so much.It said how my 심장 felt and how drained my brain was.The black ceiling stated exactly what I wanted to happen,for it to just stay night forever.Why did I have to go to school tomorrow?Why did I have to see that jerk and his perky,little,annoying girlfriend?I just want to stay here in this bed.

I sadly had three classes with Joel and two with...
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 "Jaslene's Dream"
"Jaslene's Dream"
"I don't feel like going anywhere at the moment Juaney."
The 일 after everything had happened with Joel was when the fact that he really was gone set in.I began my grieving I guess 당신 could say.I was now really hungry for anything I could find and very moody.I could tell my mood swings were definitely getting on Juan's nerves;but Juan wouldn't leave.Juan thought I was going to do something crazy as soon as he left my side so no matter what I did 또는 what I said,Juan wasn't leaving.
I enjoyed having his company but at the same time,I just wanted to cry and be 심장 broken just for today,but with...
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posted by viju
I'm talking to my friend,
She is my BFF,
And boy, are we having some fun.
We IM back and forth,
We sit on the front porch.
We talk about things on our minds.
We both hate the principal,
The staff and the admin.
At are very sucky school.
We talk about boys,
All our pets and our toys,
And what we wanna do in life.

(Chorus)
She's my BFF,
Well we hold some bets.
We smile while playing sports,
Our 가장 좋아하는 things are cool shorts.
We talk back and forth
We talk on that porch.
We are bestest friends,
And that will never end.

We struggle through stupid tests,
But we always try our best.
We eat at the lunch table,
We all tell...
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I was bored. I was very bored. There was nothing to do; not a single thing. I grabbed my iPod and turned on the Numa Numa song, but I was still bored. I turned on my laptop and begun 글쓰기 a short story, which 당신 may very well be 읽기 now, but my boredom was left uncured. Riding in the car was boring, and I wished I had a cell phone to text my 프렌즈 with, but alas, I was practically broke. I only had around seventy-five bucks, and that was from Christmas. If I had kept my twenty that I had used for IMVU credits, well, then maybe I’d have enough for a go phone at the least. But I had...
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posted by TeanRose424
have 당신 noticed when 당신 fall in 사랑 it feels like your flying? I have. It the most wonderful feeling in the world. But when do 당신 feel it? Do 당신 feel it when 당신 fall in love, 또는 when 당신 just are overfilled with joy?






Have 당신 ever felt it? 또는 have 당신 felt anything close to it? What does it mean? Does it mean that 당신 have to fly away from it before your 사랑 hurts you? 또는 does it mean that your body enjoys the joy filling your body?





Tell me what 당신 think...
posted by ashesandwine
I'm not sure if I'll keep this going but if I do, I'll post it on my spot and here:) I still remember posting my first story here! I after sent it to my spot where it's still going, but this was the first place and I thank 당신 all for receiving it:) Thanks! So I hope 당신 like this one too:)


"I 사랑 you..." Was the last thing I heard from him, as the blade went through his throat in one gracious move. That was it... All that I had ever fought for, all that I knew and loved, 로스트 in one single move! I was 로스트 in the darkness, trap in the sorrow and blood...
"I'm sorry..." Was the last thing...
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posted by emmett
A was an Artist who wasted his talent
B rode a Bicycle and was very gallant
C was a Conductor with a musical ear
D was a Drunk, addicted to beer
E climbed Mt. Everest and achieved his goal
F was a Fireman and slid down a pole
G was a Glutton and ate what he got
H was a Hunter, a very good shot
I was an Ice skater with brand new skates
J was called Jane and couldn’t pay the rates
K was a King who ruled all the land
L was a Lady, a white 장갑 on her hand
M was a Milkman who turned 우유 into cheese
N was a Nanny who made the children say please
O mined Opals and sold what he got
P was a Princess who bought...
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posted by Rob_patt_fan
hey... so this is my new story... I don't like the other one! So... I started this one! don't forget 2 코멘트 and rate!

Something was missing. Something big, like my heart! I couldn't find it. I got up from my own screams. I couldn't breathe. He wasn't there to hold me in his cold hands. He wasn't there anymore. I doubted if he would ever come back. I was thinking of everything I could do to get to him. Tears came down of my face and dropped on my 베개 as I tried to stand up and go to the bathroom. Charlie was already downstairs so I hurried and made him breakfast. I didn't eat anything like...
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posted by Office_001
A little peak of sun shone in his window, yes! It was Saturday; Jake Scott loved Saturdays because these were the days when his mom, Terri, and he would go to the park for a picnic. Jake was so excited for today that he slept in his clothes though the were now wrinkled but he didn’t care. Creeping down the hall way quiet enough as to not wake his mom Jake went and made himself his 가장 좋아하는 cereal. Jake usually had his mom help him get his cereal because he was seven and short that he couldn’t reach the cabinet, but he wanted to surprise his mom, he wanted to make his own breakfast today....
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posted by OneFoggyNight
(Please do note that these are poems I wrote in like two 분 so yeah they might not be that great...)



***You'll never be alone***



Even through the toughest times
Someone will always be there
If 당신 have 프렌즈
You’ll never be solo
Even if it doesn’t go right
Even if 당신 think 당신 might die
If 당신 have friends
You’ll make it to the end
Even though it all seems to fade
Receding in the darkest night
Having friends
Makes it all go away
Times may be bad
Times may be good
But if 당신 have friends
You’ll never be alone
______________________________

***No Going Back***





Believe not this lie ive told
I am not...
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For those of 당신 who didn't see my pick, I'm trying to decide whether I should reveal at the beginning of my book, that a main character is going to die at the end. These are three versions of opening paragraphs that I've written. If there's one that 당신 like the best, let me know in the 코멘트 또는 in the pick.

1. This one gives away the most information, including when she dies and how she's killed:
I had no idea when I started at Skip’s Burger Grill, that on October 22, 2009, sitting there in the walk-in refrigerator, huddled together with my colleagues for warmth, my life would be changed...
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