She is a pest, a scourge, a CURSE upon the world of fiction; a dull, cliche character who mostly invades the 팬 fiction universe (especially in fandoms like Lord of the Rings 또는 Harry Potter), but can also be found in original work, TV shows, books, movies, etc. In 팬 fiction, she's usually the fangirl's way of inserting herself in the story and pairing herself up with the cutest/hottest character. This infamous evil can be identified 의해 the following traits:
1: She is stunningly/unusually beautiful. Oh she may deny it, claiming to be a "plain Jane" and modestly deflecting any compliments on her looks, but everyone else in the story will be sure to drool all over her. Mary Sue is perfection incarnate - perfect hair, perfect eyes (the kind that "sparkle like jewels" 또는 "pierce into your soul"), perfect skin, perfect figure, gorgeous gowns/snazzy leather warrior outfits, cool-looking weapons, etc...though she may 곰 a striking resemblance to the author of the story. And she sometimes shares the author's name (that includes middle, last, nicknames, acronyms, etc.) Mary Sue could easily be described as an "author's pet" 또는 a self-insert.
2: She has multiple special abilities 또는 skills (like she can somehow "wield a blade" really well without years of training and experience...unless, of course, she's been trained 의해 the best since age four). There's nothing she can't do 또는 excel at, everything gets handed to her on a silver platter, and her Speshulness knows no bounds. She could be a shape-shifter with Super Powerful Shiny Magic and a wow-the-crowd 노래 voice, 또는 a genius computer hacker who can play the flute and violin, has a black 벨트 in karate AND can recite encyclopedia excerpts on a dime, 또는 a half-angel warrior princess who sends the Bad Guys buggering off just 의해 going all "echo-y voice and holy light"...you get the idea.
3: Going hand in hand with the above, she's always being uber-heroic, rescuing 랜덤 people and saving the day. The fate of Life, The Universe and Everything depends on her. Without her Speshulness to aid the Good Guys in the epic battle, the Bad Guys are sure to win and the world is utterly DOOMED.
4: She's kind and virtuous (unless she's an EVIL Mary Sue) and has no big character flaws of any kind. (And no. Clumsiness and/or a feisty temper do NOT count; they're far too generic and only serve to make her look "cute".) She's usually either a "sweet angel" type, "mysterious woman" type 또는 the "rebellious princess" type.
5: At least one character falls immediately/insanely in 사랑 with her, and vice versa (usually the hottest guy. Go figure.)
6: All the good characters in the story just seem naturally drawn to her (especially children and fuzzy animals). She's 인기 where it matters. EVERYONE likes her. Except the Bad Guys, of course...as well as any unimportant characters who serve no other purpose in the story than to be annoying and/or jealous of her utter perfection.
7: Sometimes there is a prophecy 또는 legend about her. Usually it says something about her Speshulness, an all-important destiny, Twoo Wuv written in the stars, blah blah blah...
8: She is portrayed as being cooler/more mature 또는 더 많이 important/powerful than everyone else in the story. Though on the flip side, she could also be portrayed as the poor, defenseless, yet ever courageous damsel-in-distress. Everything's always either about her 또는 her love-interest. She doesn't know the meaning of "teamwork" and she steals the spotlight from everyone else.
9: She often has a tragic/angsty/mysterious past and her 사랑 interest has to "heal her wounded heart" 또는 something. If she doesn't have a tragic/angsty/mysterious past, she always finds SOMETHING to angst about...and of course, her Twoo Wuv always rushes to comfort her. Oy.
10: She is so darn perfect and 2-dimensional that it's annoying and boring. She's either so perfect, so weird 또는 so lacking in personality that the readers can't relate to her 또는 grow to truly care about her as her own character. Strip away the beauty, the magic powers, the all-important destiny and the 사랑 interest and what do 당신 have underneath? Virtually nothing.
Now that we've met Mary Sue, let me introduce 당신 to her lesser-known cousins! Yeah, that's right...she has relatives.
Meet Gary Stu, the boy version of Mary Sue! He can be all of the above, as well as being the muscular, uberly-hot guy who's always saving the damsels in distress, bravely fighting the Bad Guys, hacking into computers like an expert and diffusing the bomb that's hidden in the wedding cake with the pair of pliers he just happened to have in his pocket.
Last and definitely least, there's Marty Sam. He's closely related to Gary Stu, only he's a lot 더 많이 sensitive and angsty. Usually he has a dark, super-tragic past (like his alcoholic dad beat him as a kid 또는 something) and he's always throwing melodramatic pity parties about how miserable and wretched he is. He swoons over the beautiful girl of his dreams and goes on and on about how he's such a HORRIBLE MONSTER who's oh-so-unworthy of her. He can be every bit as hawt as Gary Stu, 또는 he can pull a Hunchback of Dotredame routine, i. e. so ugly that his beautiful 사랑 interest can't help but take pity on him and fall in 사랑 with him for his "beautiful, broken heart".
So how can 당신 avoid turning your characters into Mary Sues/Gary Stus/Marty Sams?
Well, one thing I've found that leads to a Mary-Sue is getting too attached to your heroine. 당신 might have a brilliant back story for your girl, but does the audience really need to know every detail? 당신 might have designed every ounce of her clothing and styled her hair just right, but is it integral to the plot? Probably not. A lot of the time what makes a Mary-Sue so awful is that so much of the focus is on this character that no one 읽기 the story really cares all that much about her.
Another thing to keep in mind is to avoid having the character be too flawed. If 당신 have a character that has a terminal illness, a bad back, is blind, can't hear, and is wielding a sword in battle and totally kicking butt and saving the day, you've got a problem. It's fine to have a character with one of those "flaws" 또는 traits, but not all of them, and make them act accordingly. Make sure the flaws have something to do with the story and aren't just things 당신 stick in to make her appear less perfect. Too flawed is just as bad as too perfect.
AFTERTHOUGHT: It should be noted that there IS such a thing as a "good" Mary Sue, and that there are a few exceptions where characters can have a lot of the symptoms above and NOT be a Mary Sue (like the elves in Lord of the Rings, for instance). There are many examples of "good" Mary Sues out there, such as Nancy Drew, Sarah Crew from A Little Princess, Buffy the Vampire Slayer and other characters. What makes them different from other Mary Sues is that they are all believable, vibrant, well-rounded, likable characters that people can root for.
Having said that, DON'T get cocky. These kinds of exceptions are rare. Most likely, if 당신 have written a main character into one of your stories who possesses many 또는 all of these qualities, 당신 have created a Mary Sue (or one of her cousins). So get someone to look over your work, lest this infamous pest overtake you!
If 당신 would like to test your character for Mary Sue symptoms, I highly suggest visiting these sites:
The Universal Mary Sue Litmus Test
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The Writer's Mary Sue Test:
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Streetlamps, houses, gates, remotes, books, CDs and televisions. Brothers. Pairs. Each has a twin. In this chaotic place of materials the world has come to be, everything has a brother. But brothers are family. And family is connected somehow; if not 의해 blood, then 의해 what?
Energy.
Look hard. At everything that has a brother. A line of energy casts a connection between the two. The energy, with its harsh glares and cold looks creates the strongest and most complex bonds. Strong because of their brotherhood. Complex because of its invisibility. For there is power in invisibility. Cold, cruel power. The power to be a persecutor with no chance of being a victim. The power to twist and squeeze but not feel the wrenching pain of your twists.
Now, 당신 ask, what is left? Cruel, invisible energy. For a cruel, invisible world.
This is my first time 글쓰기 in stream of consciousness. I know it's short but don't judge me too harshly.
Energy.
Look hard. At everything that has a brother. A line of energy casts a connection between the two. The energy, with its harsh glares and cold looks creates the strongest and most complex bonds. Strong because of their brotherhood. Complex because of its invisibility. For there is power in invisibility. Cold, cruel power. The power to be a persecutor with no chance of being a victim. The power to twist and squeeze but not feel the wrenching pain of your twists.
Now, 당신 ask, what is left? Cruel, invisible energy. For a cruel, invisible world.
This is my first time 글쓰기 in stream of consciousness. I know it's short but don't judge me too harshly.
jamie is a beautiful girl. she has long ,blond hair,she has a 담홍색, 핑크 셔츠 and dark blue jeans. she was the cousin of lindsey.
she was walking her dog,sweetie,when,jamie tripped on a rock. she thn fell into the arms of trent.
'hell," he said.
"thnks for saving me,abd hi."
"you okay?"
"yeah,but,i,need to rest,and my house is pretty far from here.
"you can com,e over. i live across."
"thanks,um,"
"trent."
"trent."
they went to trents house,and they went up to his rom
"and this is my room."
i had a gray wall,with gutiar poster,and a bed.closet,drawers and other things.
"wow,thats a cool room."
"thanks."
"listen,do 당신 have a girlfreind?"
"no,why?'
"i dont,do 당신 wanna go out?"
"okay."
"so.."
then trent kissed jamie,and thats hat went on for the rest of the day.
she was walking her dog,sweetie,when,jamie tripped on a rock. she thn fell into the arms of trent.
'hell," he said.
"thnks for saving me,abd hi."
"you okay?"
"yeah,but,i,need to rest,and my house is pretty far from here.
"you can com,e over. i live across."
"thanks,um,"
"trent."
"trent."
they went to trents house,and they went up to his rom
"and this is my room."
i had a gray wall,with gutiar poster,and a bed.closet,drawers and other things.
"wow,thats a cool room."
"thanks."
"listen,do 당신 have a girlfreind?"
"no,why?'
"i dont,do 당신 wanna go out?"
"okay."
"so.."
then trent kissed jamie,and thats hat went on for the rest of the day.
