Hi! I was 글쓰기 a novel a while back, but I got distracted. I have only written the first chapter. I feel as if I need better names for the characters. I believe I'm going to 편집 the first chapter a lot and bring in some other characters. For the main 2 characters I was thinking I would name them something foreign that has a meaning to do with love, to be a little cutesy. Also, 제목 suggestions would help! If 당신 choose to follow the link below the female character's description, let me know if 당신 have any names for the 2 cheerleaders mentioned.
Edit: For 'Jo'/female I was looking up names that meant 사랑 and I found: Elin 또는 Eleen means most beautiful woman 또는 light. I also found Zuri, which is Swahili and means beautiful.
편집 2: × For the female again: Eiltine, an irish name meaning lively. I still could use name suggestions, however. Please, tell me which of the 3 I found 당신 like best for the female.
The novel is about a guy and a girl and the chapters switch back and forth from each of their POVs.
Rundown of what happens: Ever since Josepheenah said the words "I wish you'd just die, Eli," she has never stopped regretting them. Jo and Eli really got along until he decided to fall in 사랑 with her. Maybe they had loved each other all along, but it had never been said so it was never an issue. Eli loved the way the bright blue of her eyes could either pierce 또는 invite 당신 in 또는 even both at the same time. He loved that reddish mess of hair that she had always hated. Eli found her laughter to be 음악 to his ears. Her voice was melodic and always on key. Jo always knew what to say to him, until she says the last words Eli ever heard her say. She was confused. He knew she was dating his best friend. She was angry that he would even put her in that position. Yet, Eli would do anything Jo wanted. They were at her house at the time, so when Jo got up to get them a snack, he gave her what she asked for. Jo comes back to her room to find a note. She can't believe what she reads. She climbs over the windowsill after Eli, grabbing his shoe that must have fallen off on the way out. She runs to his house down the street. The door is wide open and his parents are not home. She rushes up the stares to his room but it is too late. On the mirror, painted with his own blood, were the words "I told 당신 I would do ANYTHING for you, Jo. I 사랑 you.". Most of the time, things like this are permanent. Most of the time, there is no 'undo' button in life, but can life make an exception for these teenagers who were obviously meant to be?
Female 설명 (Name that I used: Josepheenah/Jo)
Age: 17
Hobbies: anything artsy, making people smile and laugh
가장 좋아하는 Subject: Art
Seen as the: Optimist, artist
Something she would like people to know that they don't seem to get: She's 더 많이 than just a ball of sunshine, and sometimes, she's unhappy too.
Physical description: short, ginger, long wavy red hair normally pulled into loose pigtails, a bit of freckles around her cheekbones, bright blue eyes, not stick thin but not fat
To see the first chapter, written in the female (temporarily named Josepheenah)'s POV, link.
Male 설명 (Temporarily named Eli)
Age: 18
Hobbies: Sports - especially baseball, soccer, track
가장 좋아하는 Subject: Math (and sports, of course)
Seen as the: Jock
Something she would like people to know that they don't seem to get: He's not stupid! He gets straight A's, and he's no where near a jerk. The male temporarily named Eli is the sweetest guy 당신 will ever meet. Athletes are not always jerks 또는 idiots!
Physical description: average height, blonde with a 'Beiber flip' hairstyle, he has a 몰, 두더지 below his left eye, orange-ish eyes, light 올리브 skin tone, skinny
If there are any 질문 about the characters that I have failed to answer, I'll be happy to answer them. Thanks in advance for any advice! I'd be adding some drawings of the characters to the 기사 soon ;D
Edit: For 'Jo'/female I was looking up names that meant 사랑 and I found: Elin 또는 Eleen means most beautiful woman 또는 light. I also found Zuri, which is Swahili and means beautiful.
편집 2: × For the female again: Eiltine, an irish name meaning lively. I still could use name suggestions, however. Please, tell me which of the 3 I found 당신 like best for the female.
The novel is about a guy and a girl and the chapters switch back and forth from each of their POVs.
Rundown of what happens: Ever since Josepheenah said the words "I wish you'd just die, Eli," she has never stopped regretting them. Jo and Eli really got along until he decided to fall in 사랑 with her. Maybe they had loved each other all along, but it had never been said so it was never an issue. Eli loved the way the bright blue of her eyes could either pierce 또는 invite 당신 in 또는 even both at the same time. He loved that reddish mess of hair that she had always hated. Eli found her laughter to be 음악 to his ears. Her voice was melodic and always on key. Jo always knew what to say to him, until she says the last words Eli ever heard her say. She was confused. He knew she was dating his best friend. She was angry that he would even put her in that position. Yet, Eli would do anything Jo wanted. They were at her house at the time, so when Jo got up to get them a snack, he gave her what she asked for. Jo comes back to her room to find a note. She can't believe what she reads. She climbs over the windowsill after Eli, grabbing his shoe that must have fallen off on the way out. She runs to his house down the street. The door is wide open and his parents are not home. She rushes up the stares to his room but it is too late. On the mirror, painted with his own blood, were the words "I told 당신 I would do ANYTHING for you, Jo. I 사랑 you.". Most of the time, things like this are permanent. Most of the time, there is no 'undo' button in life, but can life make an exception for these teenagers who were obviously meant to be?
Female 설명 (Name that I used: Josepheenah/Jo)
Age: 17
Hobbies: anything artsy, making people smile and laugh
가장 좋아하는 Subject: Art
Seen as the: Optimist, artist
Something she would like people to know that they don't seem to get: She's 더 많이 than just a ball of sunshine, and sometimes, she's unhappy too.
Physical description: short, ginger, long wavy red hair normally pulled into loose pigtails, a bit of freckles around her cheekbones, bright blue eyes, not stick thin but not fat
To see the first chapter, written in the female (temporarily named Josepheenah)'s POV, link.
Male 설명 (Temporarily named Eli)
Age: 18
Hobbies: Sports - especially baseball, soccer, track
가장 좋아하는 Subject: Math (and sports, of course)
Seen as the: Jock
Something she would like people to know that they don't seem to get: He's not stupid! He gets straight A's, and he's no where near a jerk. The male temporarily named Eli is the sweetest guy 당신 will ever meet. Athletes are not always jerks 또는 idiots!
Physical description: average height, blonde with a 'Beiber flip' hairstyle, he has a 몰, 두더지 below his left eye, orange-ish eyes, light 올리브 skin tone, skinny
If there are any 질문 about the characters that I have failed to answer, I'll be happy to answer them. Thanks in advance for any advice! I'd be adding some drawings of the characters to the 기사 soon ;D
This is a story; my story. I am Damien Cole Demidov. My grandparents are full-blooded Russian. I am twenty-one years old, and I’ve been locked up in an asylum for four years.
I have black hair about four inches from my shoulders. I am vampire pale. I have crystal blue eyes. I’m 5’9’’.
I have met many a person in my time. Maybe you’ll meet some of the throughout the story.
Anywho, I live in the U.S. now, shipped over with my mom when I was twelve. I live in New York City at the moment. My mom is back in Russia with my father, and grandparents.
Now, let’s see what’s in store for us.
I have black hair about four inches from my shoulders. I am vampire pale. I have crystal blue eyes. I’m 5’9’’.
I have met many a person in my time. Maybe you’ll meet some of the throughout the story.
Anywho, I live in the U.S. now, shipped over with my mom when I was twelve. I live in New York City at the moment. My mom is back in Russia with my father, and grandparents.
Now, let’s see what’s in store for us.
Here I spread the 색깔 of my life
They sound like a tune of fife
They always closed me in a dark room
I put on my headphones, enjoyed & played the boom
It's so boring to just see the sky
Today I decided I'll go and fly
Eveyones mind is full of depressions
But mine is full of imaginations
I changed the dark night into shining sequins
And the heap into beautiful fragrance
I don't want 당신 to make my hair a mess
Cause I'm wearing the tiara to be a princess
My passion, my obsession, my desire
Don't interfere in between 또는 I'll blow 당신 up with flames of fire
They sound like a tune of fife
They always closed me in a dark room
I put on my headphones, enjoyed & played the boom
It's so boring to just see the sky
Today I decided I'll go and fly
Eveyones mind is full of depressions
But mine is full of imaginations
I changed the dark night into shining sequins
And the heap into beautiful fragrance
I don't want 당신 to make my hair a mess
Cause I'm wearing the tiara to be a princess
My passion, my obsession, my desire
Don't interfere in between 또는 I'll blow 당신 up with flames of fire
I wake up. It's early in the morning. A cool wind blows 의해 my face whispering sounds i don't understand. I look up at the sky and notice that it is a light blue color and it makes me feel that there is no problems in the world. Looking around i get a different story.
Blood everywhere. Bodies over bodies and not a living soul in sight. Who could have done this? My head starts to spin and my vision is going blurry. A creature appears from the wind that was flying 의해 my head earlier.
This creature starts walking torwards me speaking in a language that I have never heard before. I go to reach for my gun and find a giant hole in my right leg. It continues to get closer and closer and is staring at me as if to be a hunter and I am it's prey.
Knowing that this is the end I look up at the sky. Beginning to close my eyes the last of my sights are focused ont he Blue Skys.
Blood everywhere. Bodies over bodies and not a living soul in sight. Who could have done this? My head starts to spin and my vision is going blurry. A creature appears from the wind that was flying 의해 my head earlier.
This creature starts walking torwards me speaking in a language that I have never heard before. I go to reach for my gun and find a giant hole in my right leg. It continues to get closer and closer and is staring at me as if to be a hunter and I am it's prey.
Knowing that this is the end I look up at the sky. Beginning to close my eyes the last of my sights are focused ont he Blue Skys.