A Death in his Family

(Part 2)

Previously on Red Revenge...

"All units, murder suspect on fifth and third proceeding north on foot. Pursuing. Require backup. Suspect is heavily armed and protected. Female, mid-twenties. White hair, black clothes, sword and possible body armor." the radio crackled.

"She cut them in three pieces and set 불, 화재 to their car." Revenge replied, and swung off.

"I assume 당신 did your homework?" Revenge asked.

"Yes." Rose replied, untying her snow-white hair from its ponytail. She was dressed simply. White tank top, skinny jeans, white eyepatch. Her hair hung loosely behind...

Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. 의해 no means am I forcing 당신 to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless...

Name: Amara Thompson 

Age: 6

Appearance: long straight black hair with grey eyes and fair tan skin.

Powers/Skills: she has the ability to feel others pain and hurt feelings, usually stronger with the ones she loves. ( will not have powers when born)

Relations: biological parents are Bentley and Aryess, niece to Rene, granddaughter to Declan. 초 cousin to Jet.

Personality: very bubbly and cute to be around, she's a sweetheart and usually always giggles 또는 smiles unlike Bentley.

Civvies: a black 또는 grey 치마 with leggings and a long sleeved 상단, 맨 위로 with little brown boots.

Past: DNA was collected...

LAYER ONE: THE OUTSIDE
Full Name: Devin Sera Adams
Nickname: Dev
Reason 또는 meaning of name: Devin; 엷은 황갈색, 폰은 또는 divine depending on the tongue. Sera means heavenly 또는 winged angel. Adams from my marriage
Eye Color: Bright blue
Hair Style/Color: Long and black, often straight
Height: 5’11”
Clothing Style: Modest, long dresses, usually white
Best Physical Feature: My face

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: Failing my family...
Your Guilty Pleasure: Foot rubs
Your Biggest Pet Peeve: Demons
Your Ambition for the Future: To keep my family safe

LAYER THREE: THOUGHTS
Your First Thoughts Waking Up: What should I make...

3:45 AM Paris, France AmourCafe
Cross has been sitting at the 표, 테이블 closest to the exit for about 5 분 now.
"Where is that idiot?"she sighs aloud drumming her black fingernails against the table. She looks at the clock and sighs again.
"Hey there toots,I'm here now." Bart stands 다음 to her in formal attire.
"Don't call me that. Why are 당신 late?"she gives him a dirty look.
"I was freshening up. Do 당신 know how hard it is to find a cheap tux in France?" he sits across from her. 십자가, 크로스 rolls her eyes annoyed 의해 Bart.
"Where's Artemis and Wally?"she asks,and just then they come in.
"Right here."Wally...

"Jaime! Wake up!" Naliak shook the sleeping winged child that was sprawled out on Hitachiin twins couch. Jaime reached up and put his hand on Naliaks face, pushing him away. 
"Five 더 많이 minutes..." he rolled over pressing his face into the 침상, 소파 cushion. 
"Get up! Unless 당신 want Dariyn to burn to death, I SUGGEST 당신 옮기기 IT!" Naliak jerked Jaime off the 침상, 소파 as he snapped himself upright blurring off, still keeping a tight grip on Naliak.
"Gah! 당신 could've gave me heads up!" Naliak hit the ground with a thud and Jaime blurred towards the burning building only to be tackles 의해 the Hitachiin...

Updated 6/3/14
I'm bored, so I thought I'd share with 당신 a few websites online that 당신 can 디자인 your characters! There are tons of websites out there, these are just a few.
link
This website is 의해 far the best superhero generator I've found. Basically 당신 use it to make your character in costume. They have endless options of costume parts for both male and female characters, and they even allow 당신 to 옮기기 parts around, resize them, and color them. 당신 can save the character to the game, and then load it later, but if 당신 want to save an image to the computer, 당신 have to take a screenshot....

Name: Roxanne "Roxy" Conners
Age: 37 (age when she died)
Status: deceased
Relations: husband- Riley Conners (deceased), son- Daemian Weston (deceased), son- Declan Conners, daughter- Aryess Weston
Physical Appearance: fair hair, sky-blue eyes, 5'8", slim build- slight muscle
Personality: stubborn, kind, strong willed
Titles: Mistress of Revenge, 앤젤
History: Was born and raised in Venice, Italy as Roxanne Weston. Her parents tried to protect their only child from their family's secret: each generation of their ancestors had sent their lineage to the temple of the League of Shadows in hopes that...

LAYER ONE : THE OUTSIDE
Full Name: Marcus Antoni Wilhemovich Rurik
Nickname: Marcus, Saint, Marky Mark (reserved 의해 Cal only)
Reason 또는 meaning of name: named after Marcus Antonius, the Roman politician and general under Cesar who played a critical role in the transformation of the Roman Republic into the autocratic Roman Empire; Saint because of his allegiance to the Knights Templar
Eye Color: cobalt
Hair Style/Color: almost black, curly
Height: 6' 0"
Clothing Style: always in style, on the expensive side
Best Physical Feature: them cheekbones could cut someone

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: ......

Following Mafia's example and creating a 더 많이 YJ oriented OC~

LAYER ONE : THE OUTSIDE
Name: Fey
Meaning of name: fairy
Hero Name: Valkyrie
Eye Color: soft brown
Hair Style/Color: dirty blonde, curly
Age: 19
Special features: white wings that fold neatly under her clothes when in civvies
Abilities: flight (wings), fast healing, super strength and speed
Species: Amazonian
Birth place: Themyscira

Civvies: comfortable black leggings, grey converse, white socks, dark blue Gotham 대학 sweatshirt, golden bracelet with green gems and matching earrings
Hero suit: see pic at right

Background: Fey was born...

Notes: WELP its been a million years hasn't it? I started 글쓰기 again for my blog and i ended up with this from a prompt and since it's about Babs, Nes, and Esther..

Use these three things somewhere in your story: An angel. A sword. A daycare.

“You have her lunch box?” Babylon said quickly, jumping about in the 부엌, 주방 as she tossed bag after bag into Nereus’ arms. Nereus stood there, little Esther giggling in his arms, he smiled fondly at the brunette woman, fussing over things.
“Babs, calm down, we’ll be fine, you’ll be gone for two days. It’s nothing we can’t handle,” Nereus...

Because this girl doesn’t get very much attention.

LAYER ONE: THE OUTSIDE
Name: Alexandria Douglas.. used to be Michels. But 당신 can call me Alex, 또는 Nudge... I’ll 더 많이 than likely respond quicker to Nudge. It’s grown on me.
Reason 또는 meaning of name: “a beautiful person; that of which is consumed in greatness; usually has nice hair” tch, wish I could agree.
Eye Color: They're blue.
Hair Style/Color: It's naturally blonde, shocking I know. It’s pretty long, middle of my back, usually up away from my face.
Height: 5'8, I'm taller than Fang's kid, funny right? He's a giant.
Clothing...

LAYER ONE : THE OUTSIDE
Name: Blaine Wyatt Aldric
Reason 또는 meaning of name: Blaine-Yellow; Wyatt-Brave, Hardy; Aldric-wise ruler
Eye Color: Undefined (I haven't decided)
Hair Style/Color: Red
Height: 6'3"
Clothing Style: Formal
Best Physical Feature: Why does this matter? (His hair)

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: Loosing
Your Guilty Pleasure: Kisses
Your Biggest Pet Peeve: ...Loosing
Your Ambition for the Future: I wish not to disclose

LAYER THREE: THOUGHTS
Your First Thoughts Waking Up: When did I fall asleep?
What 당신 Think About the Most: That's Private
What 당신 Think About Before Bed: Not specific...

이전 parts (I finally named the series to keep it organized because duh):
pt 1: link
pt 1.5: link

Deals After Midnight

Only pools of moonlight streaming down from the clerestory windows offered guidance down the long hallway. Callaghan's boots clicked loudly against the polished floors, making him tense at every step. He nearly jumped out of his skin at the whisper of air that signaled movement to his right.
"Fancy meetin' 당신 here," purred the feral cat that had materialized 의해 his aide.
"What do 당신 want, Casey?"
"I just wanted to ensure my 가장 좋아하는 big brother returned with his prize...which...

Name: Reyna (Ray-na) Jackson
Alias: Hyde
Occupation: Translator; vigilante; student
Powers: Levitation, magnetic fields, “wings” that can repel radiation, her voice can manipulate things and people for a small time
Weaknesses If she expels too much power, she will pass out. She is not invulnerable to weapons that aren't magnetic. She can only levitate herself and only for short periods of time. To use her vocal powers, she can not be in her other form
Skills/talents: She is fluent in sign language, English, and understands Myers in animal forms
Appearance: She has blue hair in both forms, brown...

Had this idea in my head for quite sometime, finally finished it yesterday on my way home!

Name: Daniel "Danny 또는 Dani" Clancy (whichever 당신 feel like spelling!)
Alias: Spectreo (Thanks! ^.^
Age:17
Powers: -ghostly powers: flight,intangibility, and invisibility.
-gains super strength and enhanced abilities and agility his human form does not possess
-ghost sense that manifests as a blue wisp from his mouth that announces the presence of nearby ghosts.
-ghost 레이 early on which has become one of his most frequently used powers;becoming an energy ball that can expand in size and corresponding area...

Name: Bloodcrawler

Species: Unknown ( was created in lab 의해 unnown resource)

Powers: Bloodcrawler is a goo material that can change and get into small places, he can make quick get aways if he goes through sewer drains 또는 any other drains. He doesnt always take a host but when he does he becomes 더 많이 powerful and he wishes to make Bloodmist his host forever. He can also morph sticky goo and 그네, 스윙 from buildings and crawl on walls and buildings.

Past: the mystery employer 또는 "big man" who was trying to create a new villian to destroy bloodmist it went completely wrong and exploded into this substance...

Name: Sable Thompson

Age: 15

Gender: Female

Powers/Skillls: Sable has the power to bend 불, 화재 that is light blue, she does not have any powers naturally but the power comes from an injection she got from her father when she was a baby. She has some skills in combat.

Relations: younger sister to Jet, and cousin to Bentley

Occupation: villian

Appearance: long Black hair and carmel brown eyes.

Personality: she has a temper at times and can get angry, she never talks to her brother Jet because she thinks it is " stupid" how he "plays" in the trees all day. Her anger sometimes gets the best of her and she...

Name: Jeremy Thompson ( Jet for a nickname)

Hero Name: Jet

Age: 16

Gender: Male

Relations: cousin to Bentley

Apperance: shaggy dark black hair that is actually brown and carmel brown eyes

Powers/Skills: he has no powers but is very skilled with weapons preferably his long hooks that he uses on trees to climb. He also has many skills in combat. He has many skills in nature calls and bird calls, he even made his own language in bird callls to communicate with his group who call themselves the Valley Heroians.

Personality: he is very outgoing when he wants to be and very caring for others, hes 더 많이 open...

Name:Dee Fy

Alias:Fever

Age: Looks 16, has been living for 506

Status: Villain (demon of death)

relationship to team: None

Appearance: tall, auburn hair reaching her back. red eyes. Lustful

Personality: angry, seductive,reclusive, backstabber, witty, 메리다와 마법의 숲

Powers:
She can willingly kill the person she is touching, sucking their energy. 의해 staring at any living thing,for a long period of time, it will eventually die. Her bite can turn people to dust. No immortality but has lived a long 500 yrs. Experts in Toxins, poisons, and has an arsenal of a whip, two daggers, and a pistol concealed in her...