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posted by DietCokeGirl
I wrote this about my (now ex) boyfriend, but still felt something about the poem, if not him. I'd 사랑 some criticism on it (hopefully constructive) :).


Treacle dripping from our scars
Pooling on a jagged floor
당신 are gone, still I know
From clustered trees and homemade vows

That we are one. And as 당신 lead
Your life of promise, graft and need
Know that we are one the same
Intertwined are 심장 at name.



당신 may notice that only the 초 verse rhymes, this is an attempt to show the idea of a one-sided relationship in its form in it's one-sided rhyme scheme. This is probably quite stupid- let me know.
added by vampiress015
Very funny... because we all used to think that's how things worked.
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What hast thou done unto my heart?
Unto my soul what hast become?
When I met thee at the very start,
I knew I could not tell my mum.

Thy language foul, it bothered me,
But I saw through thy ettiquit.
I had seen thine sincerity.
Our conversations my 일 lit.

What hast thou done unto my heart?
Unto my soul what hast become?
When I met thee at the very start,
I knew I could not tell my mum.

For hours we would sit and talk.
Secretly I admired thee.
My pain I let thee block.
I wanted to know if thou didst too 사랑 me.

What hast thou done unto my heart?
Unto my soul what hast become?
When I met thee...
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posted by Free_Spirit
Me: I'm back lol. Did anyone miss me. *hears no applause sniffs and cries* lol. Sorry i just had sugar. Anyway, ummm, yeah people who read this (Very few then lol) Sorry thats my attempt at a true but very bad joke. ANyway people um with these, it depends because each chapter we'll probably be about her time in the dream 또는 in the hospital. so if 당신 don't like that I'm sorry. So lets begin.
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It didn’t take long for me to fall asleep and I was momentarily floating in darkness when I felt a rush of wind. I gasped as I felt that familiar painful sensation of all my injuries being combined...
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posted by Free_Spirit
ME:Um, yeah people 당신 might find this a bit wierd but each chapter sory of goes from her time in the hospital and then in the other world. Sorry if 당신 don't like the way its done but you'll just have to live with it. Um anyway enjoy. And I'm sorry if this is long. Cough rate cough please cough soory i got a bit of a cold

I sat up gasping and sweating. The moonlight shone through the window giving the hospital room a dim light. I remembered the dream as vividly as if it happened yesterday. I put a hand on my back and felt along the skin. I almost fainted. There was blood there and scrapes across...
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posted by harold
This 기사 presents the concepts of the 팬팝 Writer's Group, and was last edited on 6 July 2009.

Session Information
The third session for 2009 is 게시됨 link. Please participate!

Previous sessions
* Session 2, 2009: link
* Session 1, 2009: link

What is the 팬팝 Writer's Group?
It's a group of 팬팝 users who are committed to writing, sharing, reading, discussing and critiquing their work. At a minimum, this involves a monthly session (though it could be twice monthly). Each session involves the following:

1) One member starts the 다음 session 의해 starting a new 포럼 thread labeled "Fanpop Writer's...
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posted by BellaSwan636
Serena

I sat with Tia and her friends, but I could feel Shaun's stare.

After school, I was in a hurry to get in my car, so I didn't see him coming as I fumbled for my keys.

"Serena, how strongly are 당신 opposed to seeing a movie with me this weekend?" he asked.

I looked up, at first not believing what I was hearing. I was aware that it was Thursday. Very aware.

"Unopposed," I said, so happy. Inexplicably happy, as I met his eyes. They weren't black, just a very dark brown.

"I'll pick 당신 up," he said.

"Come to this address," I said, scrawling my 거리 and house number on a piece of paper my...
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I store deeply into his eyes as he slid his hand close to mine. the heat in the air around me began to heat up, my 심장 pounded rapidly against my chest and a feeling of anxiety rushed through my body.

His hand moved too hold mine, he moved it slowly, continuing to gaze into my eyes. The twinkle in his eye turned to a bright shine as the twilight began to rise, Hypnotized, i joined his hand with mine, the burning tension in the air, the smile that arose on his lips, this was perfect.

" I 사랑 You" he whispered softly in my ear, his breath warm. He brushed his lips against my face and kissed...
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posted by BellaSwan636
Serena

The 다음 day, I sat at the same table.

When I glanced up at him, he was looking at me too, indecision and frustration written all over his face.

I looked down quickly, and went back to deciphering the laminated wood grain.

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The rest of school dragged 의해 very slowly, and 의해 the final bell, I was already hurrying out of the Biology lab.

As I exited the main building, I immediately felt someone was staring at me. I'd always been able to tell when there was someone was looking at me, I was weird that way.

I turned, and in the 스플릿, 분할 초 that...
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posted by BellaSwan636
Serena

He looked up and I wasn't sure, but I thought his gaze softened a little.

"Can I sit here?" I asked cautiously.
"Whatever," he said, sounding bored out of his mind.
"My name's Serena," I said.
"Shaun."

We sat in silence for the rest of lunch, I was eating nothing. The 초 the 벨 rang, he stood up, abruptly and left.

I was left staring in confusion at the doorway I was mostly certain he'd disappeared down.

Shaun

I didn't want to hurt her, yet I didn't want her to be sucked into my depressing world of suffering. What was I supposed to do?

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posted by Sweet_Pants
A/N: Ok, this is just a short, about 500 word drabble I came up with. It's about 7-year-old Alice and her drunk derpressed father, called, of course, 'Daddy'. It's not much, but I though I'd post it. Constructive critisizm is welcome.

Please rate and comment.
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The smell of his breath came off in waves of grief and alcohol mixed into what could be described as inner turmoil. Although Alice barely gave a thought to the bottle of whiskey in his hand, as she was 더 많이 preoccupied with not throwing up from the smell of her father she should have gotten...
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posted by harold
I looked up every few minutes, desperate to see 당신 standing there once more. My 심장 beat shrilly in my chest and my breath fluttered every time I thought of you, your cold hands grasping mine, the wonderful smell of your skin intoxicating me. I cursed, thinking of Amy and how she could be with Evan, could call him on the phone, hold his hand in public, and the simple problems she had with trying to 날짜 a normal guy. 당신 are so much beyond normal that it frustrates all my attempts to capture 당신 in poetry. Surrounded 의해 scraps of paper on which I've written your name over and over, filled...
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posted by Free_Spirit
me: This is just a preview, but can 당신 please give me your opinion. I've already 게시됨 this but i've actuallty edited, so from people who read it before it may bea little bit different. Now i actually can't start from the start but this is what happened before:
Alyria is a thirteen 년 old girl who is travelling with her adopted family somewhere. Her family is made up of her Mother who has a difernt hair colour every week, and he father who is a gentle soul and a passionate man. She has a five 년 old african sister who is very strange and a shy artistic 11 년 old Indian sister. They stop...
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posted by Katiegirl
        It was a cold, brisk day. Nightfall was upon the horizon. I strolled down the walkway towards a baron park. The park looked as if it has been around many generations. The park benches were rusted in a distinguished color clear to the solid ground. Keeping the park in existence, the 무화과 나무, 트리 leaves filled the surroundings like a flamboyant 무지개, 레인 보우 decorating the park. So bright, even in nightfall a person could find away through the darken park. Suddenly, beyond the benches, 무화과 trees, a young man stood steady as if withholding his emotions from...
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Long Way To Your Heart.

Verse 1
You left me all alone – F G D B C D
All 의해 myself – C C D A
There’s no turning back now – F G D B C D
You’ve made your choice – C C High A D
But I don’t know how – A A E D

Time starts to pass – F G G G
But I’ll keep moving on – D D E D C D
I doubt I’ll ever get over 당신 – D D C D E B D C A
Leaving, leaving – C D F E

Chorus
I’d finally found – G G (High) A G
Something true – C C A
But then 당신 left me here with no clue - G G (High) A G D E C D
What to do – D F G Lower G

It’s gonna take a lot to hold on
It’s gonna take a lot to love...
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I guess with me that day, I should have learned not to expect what was coming. I woke up, my side hurting like hell, but I was better. I was still lying on the stretcher, and the combination of dried blood on it and the smell of the dried blood made me feel the need to vomit. Looking up, I saw white ceiling tiles. I also saw two cold metal objects pushed into either side of my temple: guns.
    I sat up in shock and confusion and was pushed down 의해 two people; one with spiky hair and the other looked like a mouse. Oh yeah, David and Mike. It was all coming back to me: getting...
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랜덤 story I thought up. Please rate and comment! I hope 당신 like it! :)


I guess that 일 was just one of those days 당신 should have stayed 집 from school. 당신 should have faked an illness and lay in your 침대 all 일 while watching TV and eating 정크 food. 당신 should have.
    But of course with my sparkling record of having never been absent, staying 집 that 일 didn’t even occur to me as I got dressed and ready to go. To me, school was a punishment, a privilege, and a fun place. Some days I dreaded it, some I appreciated it, and some I loved it.
    That...
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posted by babina
저기요 guys! thanx for reading, and am sorry i was late to write this up its just because i had alot of school work to do, but now its over so i really hope to get the 다음 ones out soon.

okay here is a quick recap:
As i stood there i knew i had three options of what to do then:I could walk away,which would be hard to go through all the people around us now,i could change my mind about what i was going to do/say and maybe offer to do something which wouldn't turn out so bad 또는 i could keep up what i wanted to do in the first place. At that point i decided to follow my instincts which wasn't a...
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posted by jarik
I wish...
I could exorcise the demons in your mind
Remove the darkness from your soul
Take the pain from your
Wipe the tears from your eyes
And lessen the burden 당신 carry

But I live miles from you
And cannot be with you
But I can be with 당신 in spirit
And can only hope these words
Written from afar
Can help ease your mind and soul

Your grief and pain
Has touched me in a way
No has been able to

May 당신 find the peace 당신 seek
An the 사랑 당신 deserve

Your happiness is my greatest concern
And greatest joy
posted by Cutebutcrazy--
"Mom it's for the best.I couldn't risk hruting 당신 또는 anyone close," I say. I step on to the plane and take one last wistful look at my mom and home.
I woke to a bump.We must be landing.I couldn't beleive i slept through a 6 시간 filght to Londan.
"Sweetie," a stewardess says,"are 당신 ready to get off."
I nod and grab my only bag.My black prada tote bag. That's all the FBI told me to bring.I stumbbnled off the plane and into the termanl.Right away I see two guys in black 슈츠 and ear peices. They saw me too. They walk toward me and stop when they reach me.
"Claire Young?" one of the tall...
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