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posted by khfan12
Chapter One
A discovery
Two years later
"Come on, 당신 three, hurry up! We have to get this project done fast!" said Lori. "Lori! Slow down! We aren't as fast as you!" said Jesse. Lori Lopez, Jesse Martin, Nina Boyce, and 레이 Martinez are four best freinds who are all 14, and have superpowers. "Finally! We're here!" Said Nina. For their summer project, they were going to explore the old factory on the 상단, 맨 위로 of Higgins hill. Once they were inside, they found a room labled 'freeze room' they looked inside the window. "There are people in here!" said Ray. Lori pushed the 'defrost' button. They could see that it was getting warmer. Vialo, Jasper, Ella, and Steve came to life. They walked out, Vialo and Jasper holding hands. "Who are you? What 년 is this?" asked Vialo. "My name is Lori Lopez, this is Jesse Martin, this is Nina Boyce, and last is 레이 Martinez. this is the 년 2007. School just got out." said Lori. "Oh man,... guys, we've been 겨울왕국 for two years! It looks like we've grown during that time, also!" Said Vialo, noticing the change in height. "Oh! My name is Vialo Wilson, This is my boyfreind Jasper Talley, This is Ella Newbie, and this is Steve Hawks. Thank 당신 for defrosting us." said Vialo. They turned to leave."W-Wait where are 당신 going?" asked Nina. "Home." said Jasper. "Can we follow you?"asked Jesse. "Sure, but be quick, we go fast." said Ella.
* * * * *

At Jasper's house, their parents and families were 더 많이 than glad to see them. They explained what happend and introductions were made. Lori and the others were rewarded. Vialo was talking to Lori in private. "So where is your family?" asked Lori. "They all died in a 불, 화재 when I was 12 years old. ever since, I've been staying with Jasper's family ever since. Our families were close. Jasper's family gladly took me in. Me and Jasper started going out when we were 13." said Vialo. "Wow. I'm so sorry. I wish there was sometihng I could do." said Lori. "Yeah, if only 당신 could." said Vialo. All of a sudden, there was a scream. "What was that?" asked Lori. "Don't know. Let's go check it out." Vialo said. When they got to the others, every thing seemed normal. Jasper was holding a paper, his face hard as stone. "Vialo, a brick wrapped in a paper came through the door when we opened it to go outside. Look who it's from." he said. Vialo took the paper, her hands trembling. In bold letters, it said: Jack and Jess. She read the letter aloud. It says: Dear Vialo, we knew 당신 losers got unfrozen. We saw the news. We will take someone dear to 당신 losers, and the rest... is a surprise. Losers. Jess and Jack. "What do 당신 think they mean 의해 'someone dear?" asked Ella. "I don't know, but I don't think I want to find out." Steve said. "Well, we should at least try to find Jack and Jess. Lets go to the secret place and get ready." said Vialo.
* * * * *

The 다음 day, Vialo, Ella, Jasper, and Steve went to the most unexpected place for Jack and Jess to hide: The construction site. "Well, we're here. Lets check it out." said Jasper. They 스플릿, 분할 up into two teams. Vialo and Jasper, and Ella and Steve. When they were inside, Vialo spotted something glimmering in the darkness. She walked over to it. Then suddenly, a door came down right behind her, and she felt the area move. "What's happening? Jasper help me!" Yelled Vialo. She heard cables moving, then heavy footsteps above her. "Jasper! Get me out of here!" yelled Vialo. Jasper opened a door above her, and pulled her out. She grabbed the object. "What did 당신 find?" Vialo handed him the object. "A locket? T-That looks like..... Jack and Jess?!" said a surprised Jasper. Ella and Steve somehow found them. "Well, we didn't find anything." said Steve. All of a sudden, Vialo screamed. "VIALO!" excliamed Jasper. Vialo was being dragged away. "H-H-HELP ME! SOMEBODY HELP!" Vialo yelled. A giant machine appeared controlled 의해 [of course] Jack. His robot held up a screaming Vialo. "Let her go, Jack." said Jasper, going into his super mode. Vialo, Ella and Steve also went into their super mode. Vialo was able to break the robot's hand that held her up. All of a sudden, Jess burst through the wall. "Jack!" she exclaimed. Jess stomped over to him. "I thought 당신 said we would do the plan together! What's wrong with you?" asked Jess as she yelled at him. "I changed my mind! Got a problem with that?" Jack shot back at her. As they fought, Vialo and the others snuck away. "Ah, young love." whisperd Steve. Ella giggled. Later, they were at the secret place. The secret place is their base of operations, 당신 know, where 당신 talk and see what's happening. In this case, what will happen.
* * * * *

When Vialo opened her eyes, she saw that she wasn't in her room. "Where am I?" she wondered aloud. What will happen now? Vialo asked herself. "Oh, it's you, Mari, 당신 scared me." a voice said. "Heh. Well 당신 have to be sneaky if 당신 are a ninja as high ranked as me. Any word about Vialo yet?" asked Mari. "No. We know she's still alive, we can sence it. She is my sister, after all. " said the voice. "Okay. Good luck, Taylor." said Mari. Taylor? My sister? She's alive? Vialo thought. All of a sudden, Vialo was pulled back to reality. "Vialo? Did 당신 have another vision?" asked Jasper, shaking her awake. "Yeah, I-I'm okay. Jasper, my family is alive." Vialo said. "That's great news, Vialo!" said Ella. "Yeah, but where are they?" asked a voice. The four turned around. They saw a girl with black hair and blue highlites. She had on black clothes, fingerless gloves and combat boots on. She had a black choker with a amulet on. "My name is Serina Salas. I have come to help protect Vialo from the shadows." said the girl. All of a sudden, there was an explosion. "Gosh Nate, what did 당신 do?" asked Serina. A boy, covered in smoke walked in the room. Vialo blew the smoke off him."Thanks. Hey, you're Vialo!" He turned to Serina. "Did 당신 tell her about the shadows yet?" said Nate. "I was about to when 당신 made that explosion!" Serina yelled at Nate. "Anyway, the shadows are monsters controled 의해 an unknown evil. They steal hearts then trap them, then a shadow is created. Our job is to find Vialo and help her destoy the shadow master." said Serina.
posted by Bella_Swan3
Taylor had never shadow-walked with no destination in mind. Shadow walking was something she was slightly afraid to do. It made her feel unbalanced, as if she had been given too much control. Like standing on the edge of a cliff, the wind pushing 당신 to jump, and some part of 당신 secretly wanting to succumb to it's persuasive power.

She opened her eyes to the flat, glassy expanse of water in front of her. The tiny sliver of the moon was distorted 의해 the waves.

Granted, shadow walking allowed her to appear wherever she wanted, but to her, it also served as a constant reminder that she was not...
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slowly climbing

inch 의해 inch

bringing me closer

to my doom

나비 of

anticipation

flutter nervously

in my stomach

knuckles whiten

jaws clench

what have I

gotten myself into

the suspense

is killing me

I'm going to hate it

I'm going to 사랑 it

I might lose my lunch

but I don't care

heaven help me

here it comes...

...

I hold my breath...

...

and then
I scream
my stomach
drops
my breath
is stolen
my heart
is pounding
adrenaline
courses
through
my veins
amid screams
of sweet terror
I fling up
my hands
and ride on
the wings
of Thrill!
posted by gossipgirlxoxo
I walked in and saw Dawn and Thor. I walked over and gave them both a look. “Where are mom and dad” I asked looking around the house. Dawn smile. “Still in Australia” I looked at Dawn with a confused smile. “Well then what’s going on” I asked. I was angry at Thor and Dawn and not because of Liz 또는 that mom and dad were still in Australia, but because they weren’t telling me anything. “Well?” I asked. Thor looked at me but he didn’t smile he just stared at me. “We were told to go home, we don’t know anything” he said in a 대합, 조개 voice. I heard a bang, I turned and saw...
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posted by CheeryDavis
Hi, so this is my first story put on here! It's in poem style so i thought what the 건초 i'll post it! so here it is:

the sky turns black and gray
all the color withers away
but in your arms i will stay
come what may

the lights could dim
the sky could fall
the world could stand still
but your arms are all i can feel
and in them i will stay
come what may

the waves come crashing
pulling me into the deep
but your arms are all i can feel washing over me
and as 당신 pull me up and hold me close
i know that 당신 will never let go
in your arms i will stay come what may

the sky shines bright for the first time is...
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posted by iluvtheshow
I remember the 일 I fell in love.
Not just simple love.
No, this was head over heels, I'd die for 당신 love.
I remember where I fell in love.
A small middle school in a small town.
A place 당신 could easily miss.
I remember the my matchmaker.
A short women, but with 더 많이 불, 화재 then 당신 could ever imagine.
더 많이 passion for what she does then I had ever seen.
I remember my girlfriends who were with me.
My athletic, sassy, fun-loving chicks.
My flirting consultants.
I remember him.
Good God, he was beautiful.
Yes, I remember the 일 I fell in love.
True Love.
Head over heels love.
With..................
Basketball.

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This is dedicated to my first real 농구 coach. She taught me not just how to play basketball, but how to be part of a team. I have so much respect for her and I know I should thank her everyday for helping me fall in love. For Coach Joy.
posted by CullensFinest13
당신 hurt me I hope 당신 die I cant belive I trusted 당신 I cant belive I loved 당신 I cant belive I stayed up and worried that 당신 wouldnt call. I cant belive that i loved 당신 i trusted 당신 and cared for you. im tired of 당신 its time i let 당신 go but your always there 당신 wont leave me alone...its time for 당신 to leave so never come back walk out of my life i am going to lock my door and never let 당신 back in stay out so i can be happy 당신 need 당신 need to die let me live my own life 당신 shouldnt be controlling me anymore im not property im a human and i dont belong to the likes of you, 당신 were...
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posted by vampiress015
I presuming we all joined this spot 'cos we 사랑 to write, right? If so then 당신 all know what I'm talking about when I say that we all 사랑 our main characters and sometimes want to make them the best people in the world.

B-O-R-I-N-G

Yes, we want to make our main character gets the best out of the story, since it's their story. But if they're the best people in the world it doesn't really make them believable and then the reader just doesn't care about them (which is hard to understand cos we as the writer 사랑 em, but unfortunantley it's true)

So here is my step-by-step guide to make sure that...
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posted by Sweet_Pants
Just a poem. I hope it isn't much of a bother to rate.

I dream of all things

Uncertain of dark deeds and pasts

Within these thoughts as dark as sea

When once those wings of black

Hung over all

Shadowing but of the wretched white

That blinds me of all beauty.

I dream of all things

From happiness to highs

Let down these pills

또는 I’m gone, retreat inside my mind

Where none but the darkest thoughts

Swallowing twilight

I dream of all things

From the stories told 의해 hidden scars

Unable to show themselves

Under this intense scrutiny

That makes up this world’s attire

To the times that I could be happy

Without a drug to create

The much-needed illusion...


I dream of all things
No matter of their contents
Because, well,
Nightmares are still dreams.
posted by mrs-mindfreak
I decided to do a story where I put my iPod on shuffle and start writing. Lucky for me, all the songs were basically sad 또는 angry music. So this is what I came up with :)

The rain pattered on the windows drowsily, drowning out Alana’s choking sobs. She sat in her 가장 좋아하는 wooden rocker, and buried her face in her hands miserably. Her black hair clung to her sweaty face. Her clammy palms were wet from tears. She never wanted to 옮기기 from that spot again. Although she was filled with irrevocable remorse, she felt comfortable there. No one in the house, rain falling softly outside, and just...
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‘You shouldn't have shot the dog.’ That single thought reverberated inside my head, knocking from side to side, smashing at the sides of my skull until I had to put my hands to my temples in a futile attempt to stop the pain. The man sitting 다음 to me took a swig of his whiskey, the glass bottle knocking against his yellowed and rotten teeth. His other hand held onto the steering wheel, maneuvering the car down the winding and deserted stretch of highway. I leaned my head against the cool glass of the passenger side window, willing my head to stop pounding. From the radio, the soft strains...
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 The Writer Behind the Words
The Writer Behind the Words
Luck has little to do with link. A long lasting 글쓰기 career doesn’t just happen. A writer can burst onto the scene and quickly disappear. Another can have a series of hits then write a bunch of flops and never be heard from again. The difference between a long lasting career and one that burns out is strategy. Here are seven rules to help 당신 find the right strategy for 당신 and get 당신 started on your journey to long lasting success.

Learn the power of focus. For most of us, we have 더 많이 than enough to do on a daily basis. And when it comes to any 글쓰기 project the list can grow exponentially-...
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The fragrance of scotch pine and blue 가문비, 스프루 스 is pungent in the air, amplified 의해 the heat of late June. 또는 so 당신 think it is June. This place feels oddly void of time. 당신 open your eyes to see a sun hazed over 의해 stratus clouds. From all angles 당신 spy familiar wooden structures.
You are back.

You sit up with your legs tucked under your bottom and bask in the estival air and all of the scents that waft within it. 당신 furrow your brows, thinking that it is not as clean as before. Even so, the place hums with earthy energy. A stronger gust of wind picks up the hem of your 셔츠 and flutters...
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당신 wake up under a shady willow with a vague semblance of what 당신 had dreamt.
You have dozed off again. And no wonder, there is a good book in your lap and your 가장 좋아하는 songs are still crackling through your earbuds. 당신 ought to replace them, they are going bad. 당신 pull them out and decide to listen to nature’s 음악 instead. The soft gurgle of the pond coupled with catkins rustling against each other has always been your 가장 좋아하는 blend of sounds. Every now and again your ear is filled with the nearly undetectable buzz of a cicada humming past. 당신 aren’t quite sure, but 당신 think that...
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posted by Epismatic
The Man With No Eyes Collection (3): Mask




When the curtain rises, all is forgiven.

I’ll brush it all off with a movie-star smile,

A genuine laugh, but my eyes must be hidden,

The truth they contain is considered too vile.

My voice is a song that will play through your ears,

And invite 당신 to dance to the sound of my tune,

I take a bow, deeply, and drink in your cheers,

I’ll always remain here,

You’ll come see me soon.

A new 일 is dawning,

“Quick, put on your mask!”

And hurry outside, meet the crowd.

“Where’ve 당신 been?”

With fanciful 답변 to all that 당신 ask,

I’ll always wait here for...
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posted by WritingBookWorm
So, one of my New’s Years Resolutions this 년 it to write more. So, I decided to make this:

The goal is to write something every day.

Starting on the 31st of January, every 일 there is a vague word, idea, object, question, statement 또는 anything. 당신 can take it anyway 당신 want.

Then each 일 당신 should write what it tells 당신 too 또는 something inspired 의해 it. Whether it be a poem, a small scene, a character description, journal entry, short story 또는 even just one really well crafted sentence.

Even if the prompt confuses you, 또는 당신 have no ideas just write something! It’s a great exercise...
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This guide was inspired 의해 a 질문 recently 게시됨 의해 link on this spot. The user was looking for ways to put a twist on fairytales. I began to write an answer, but my answer soon developed into an article. So here it is.

Note that these aren't specifically for fairytales; they can be used on any old, well-known stories. After listing some ideas on how 당신 can put a twist on such stories, I'll give a few examples of 영화 that have done used one 또는 더 많이 of these ideas.

1. Swap the genders of the traditional characters.
Do any of the characters behave especially "typical" for their gender?...
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posted by floraisbest1
Ms. Farogonda asked for the winx to come down to her office. when the winx reached ms. farogonda's office she told them that diana wants to speak wth one of you. she didnt tell me who but she told me to pick two extras. ms. farogonda can i go, bloom asked her. flora will be going along with musa and aisha ms farogonda told them. hmph bloom pouted, can we at least go with them bloom said quikly. fine all of 당신 girls can go and im bringing the specialist. ok stella said in a sing song voice. lets go said the winx. they met the RF boys outside and went in the owl. winx: WINX BELIEVIX
AT THE 아마존
flora: let's get going
aisha: see ya winx
bloom: meet back here in an 시간 k
ok bloom musa said
( diana appears in front of them)
GUARDS take them away
what??!
(to be continued)
posted by LunaNotLoony
Anna flicked the T.V from channel to channel, bored: there was nothing worth watching. Sighing, she left the news on and flopped back on the sofa, not really intending to listen.
'The war in Iraq-.'
'Oh no, 당신 don't,' Anna muttered, grabbing the remote. Her Dad had joined the army after her Mum had died of an overdose. Anna didn't really blame him, she'd have got out of the house as fast as possible too if she was an adult. The whole house was contaminated with the memories of Mum, of her laugh, of her accident... suicide... whatever it was. Even so, Anna missed Dad like it was painful. She'd...
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posted by Ichigo127
An Amuto one-shot
hope 당신 enjoy!

‘You know, Amu…,’ he was sitting there again, on the ledge of the window, staring wistfully outside. ‘All of them think you’re gone. But I know better. 당신 are alive, I know it. Somewhere out there, you’re thinking about me too, aren’t you?’
He was talking again, talking to the moon. ‘You’ll never admit it but 당신 have already fallen for me,’ he smirked at the moon. No, not the moon. It was Amu’s blushing face that he saw and it was her voice that he heard, ‘Shut up!’ he didn’t know it was the echo of his memories because he thought...
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A shadowy figure silently brushed the silken curtains aside as she slipped through the open window and stepped into the dark chamber. Passing a small 표, 테이블 and a bed, the 여우 quickly headed towards a cabinet that stood against the far wall.
Beaded necklaces hung above a oval mirror that was set in the center. Her eyes rested on a miniature strongbox half hidden behind the mirror.
Paying no heed to the deafening clatter coming from the oblivious guest downstairs, she skillfully picked the tiny lock and raised the lid. It was hard to tell what was what in the darkness, so she emptied it into...
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