저기요 there.
I like to write 시 and short stories. My friend turned me on to this site and I've decided to post some of my writing. I'm just a kid, so none of my 글쓰기 is as high quality as I'd imagine the other submissions would be. I really haven't read much so far. Maybe this isn't the best way to introduce myself to the other fanpoppers, but I couldn't find my friend to tell her about it. I also can't figure out how to add myself to this club. Oh, well. uh....here I am. Here's a little sample of my writing:
UNTITLED
Watch me twirl
with my feet on your toes
away from the darkness,
away from our foes.
See how I smile
as the 일 comes and
goes.
Look down at my eyes
reflecting your life;
leave the door open,
I'm afraid of the night.
Now watch me twirl,
all alone this time
without your toes
to help me stand.
Stare into my eyes
but 당신 can't see your
face in them,
watch as they fill up
with tears 당신 never shed.
Can 당신 hear my footsteps?
So light, but
so heavy,
watch as I dance around
in my frenzy
because I don't have your arms
to hold me in place.
I look into the night,
and I'm so afraid,
so afraid,
oh dear parents,
what a coward you've raised.
So I'll dance here,
in the light,
where everyone
can see me.
My 치마 catches the wind
and what do 당신 see?
Tell me,
What do 당신 see?!
I can't see anything;
only me.
Put down your glass,
step out to the floor.
Teach me to dance,
and I'll cry
no more.
I like to write 시 and short stories. My friend turned me on to this site and I've decided to post some of my writing. I'm just a kid, so none of my 글쓰기 is as high quality as I'd imagine the other submissions would be. I really haven't read much so far. Maybe this isn't the best way to introduce myself to the other fanpoppers, but I couldn't find my friend to tell her about it. I also can't figure out how to add myself to this club. Oh, well. uh....here I am. Here's a little sample of my writing:
UNTITLED
Watch me twirl
with my feet on your toes
away from the darkness,
away from our foes.
See how I smile
as the 일 comes and
goes.
Look down at my eyes
reflecting your life;
leave the door open,
I'm afraid of the night.
Now watch me twirl,
all alone this time
without your toes
to help me stand.
Stare into my eyes
but 당신 can't see your
face in them,
watch as they fill up
with tears 당신 never shed.
Can 당신 hear my footsteps?
So light, but
so heavy,
watch as I dance around
in my frenzy
because I don't have your arms
to hold me in place.
I look into the night,
and I'm so afraid,
so afraid,
oh dear parents,
what a coward you've raised.
So I'll dance here,
in the light,
where everyone
can see me.
My 치마 catches the wind
and what do 당신 see?
Tell me,
What do 당신 see?!
I can't see anything;
only me.
Put down your glass,
step out to the floor.
Teach me to dance,
and I'll cry
no more.
This is written about the perfect silence only found in the dead of night, and the feelings it inspires.
The 제목 comes from the 설명 a friend of mine gave when we were stuck in the middle of nowhere at midnight and I found it sort of beautiful.
Enjoy (I hope) :)
Weighted air and winking stars,
darkness draped, tension wrought.
This night, this hour, is ours.
Silence chimes unspoken thoughts
that choke my mouth.
Silver moonbeams in glittering outline
surround you, and in our youth
this night, this hour, we intertwine.
I'd 사랑 to hear what 당신 like 또는 hate.
Thanks for reading.
DietCokeGirl
The 제목 comes from the 설명 a friend of mine gave when we were stuck in the middle of nowhere at midnight and I found it sort of beautiful.
Enjoy (I hope) :)
Weighted air and winking stars,
darkness draped, tension wrought.
This night, this hour, is ours.
Silence chimes unspoken thoughts
that choke my mouth.
Silver moonbeams in glittering outline
surround you, and in our youth
this night, this hour, we intertwine.
I'd 사랑 to hear what 당신 like 또는 hate.
Thanks for reading.
DietCokeGirl