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posted by Pixalfirebolt
My name is Max. I'm 14. Right now, you're probably thinking, "Okay.. What type of opening is that?" Well, it's mine. Deal with it. I've been through a lot, so cut me some slack. Let's get to the point. I'm different. Not like, I have a purple Mohawk and over 50 piercings different, 더 많이 like I have 14' of bird wings stuck to my upper back, different. I know, no need to think it, IT ISN'T MY FAULT, OKAY? There is 5 더 많이 like me, Fang, Iggy, Nudge, Gazzy (The Gasman), and Angel. We are all... Well, unique like that. We each have our own, original, personality. Me, I'll get to that later. Let's start with Fang.
Fang is... For lack of a better word, goth. No, he doesn't cut (I think), because that's emo. He's the "Strong but Silent" type. Well, he has dark hair, dark eyes, dark 16' wings, and, to your surprise, he wears dark clothes. He has the power to blend in with things. Also, sometimes I think he has a "thing" for me.... (Ick!)
Iggy is blind. Now, if he read this, (More like: Had it read to him,) I would probably get punched in the gut for putting this first. But, he is very important in The Flock. He is tall, thin, and very caring. He has sandy blonde hair, blue eyes, and did I mention the if he touches you, he can see colors? Yeah, it's pretty cool. And no, he wasn't born blind, I'll get to that.
Nudge is a chatterbox. Asking her a detailed 질문 is suicide. She is a fashionista, and very pretty. Now, she may be black, and may seem innocent, but Nudge can have a bad side. NOBODY wants to be on her bad side. And did I mention that 의해 touching and electronic object, she can see the past history? Not 의해 like, clicking the "View History" button, but actually what happened around the computer/electronic device thingy. I must say, it's pretty cool.
The Gasman is an... Interesting character. Why would 당신 name a kid Gazzy, 당신 ask? Well, we are pretty sure he has bowel issues. He seems to act as if he is Iggy's sidekick, but not an average sidekick. A bomb-making sidekick. Yeah, he's pretty good at gadgets. Gassy has blonde hair, blue eyes, and he is quite a little trooper. As for superpower, I'm not sure he has one, except for Noxious Farts, and imitating us. Those are killer.
The last, and certainly not least, Angel. I tend to think of her as my daughter. She can read minds, control people, breathe underwater, and talk to fish. She has a dog, named Total, and a stuffed bear, Celeste. Other than superpowers, she has blonde, curly hair, and she is related to Gazzy. They are the only ones that are actually blood related.
So... That's the Flock. We are all Avian-Americans, (2% Bird, 98% Human), and all created 의해 Whitecoats. We all were created in the School, a lab where normal humans create monsters. We escaped, and have been living 의해 ourselves ever since.
We were led 의해 Jeb, a Whitecoat that claimed that he was good. He gave us a house, trained us, and acted like a father, until he left us. To go back to that horrible place.
At the School, when we were young, Iggy was tested on, to see if they could improve his vision. They failed, resulting in blindness.
Well, we all have superpowers, wings, and... I think I'm forgetting something.. My bio!
Max is awesome. She is the coolest thing alive. Max has blonde hair, and brown eyes. She can flying over 200mph, while the rest of the flock can do around 120mph. She relies on snap decisions, and is the leader of the Flock. Max also has an annoying Voice inside her head.
Okay, so, 당신 probably think our life is perfect. Well, all stories have as bad side. Ours are Flyboys and Erasers.
Erasers are Man-Wolf hybrids that are meant to kill us birdy kids. They pretty much are what 당신 humans would call "Werewolves". They want to kill us, mainly because they were ordered to. That's the Whitecoats' job.
Flyboys are simply Erasers with wings. since Erasers are so heavy, they don't fly as well as us. To bad for them.
Moving on, I believe I forgot to mention some things.
1. We don't have parents.
2. We all are/have tall, thin, excellent eyesight, and a quick heartbeat.
3. Fang, Iggy and I are 14, Nudge is 11, Gazzy is 8, and 앤젤 is 6.
4. The Flock's worst enemy is Ari. He is a Flyboy that hates me, right down to the bone. Don't worry about us though, we'll be fine.

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"Dig in, everyone!" I yelled.
The mainroom of the cheap appartent was full of 6 kids, eating pizza. A normal sight, is it not? Unless they're mutants and looked as if they hadn't eaten for months.
Earlier, Fang and I had robbed a 피자 man of 4 pizzas. Well, us bird kids, we could eat 2 each. But that wouldn't stop us from eating what we got.
"Did 당신 get any Hawaiian, Max?" Gazzy asked.
"The 피자 man only was carrying 2 cheese, 1 pepperoni, and 1 sausage," Fang replied, while stuffing his mouth with a slice of sausage.
"Max, can we order some 더 많이 pizza? I'm still hungry," Nudge said, giving me Bambi eyes.
Fang looked at me, as if to say, don't give in, Max. We can order 더 많이 피자 later. But I couldn't help it.
"Who knows the number?" I heard cheering from the entire room.
"Uhhh.. Can't we just go to the store and get it?" 앤젤 said.
"I guess. Since it was Nudge's idea, I'll go with her to go pick some up. What do 당신 guys want?"
"Cheese." 앤젤 replied, simply.
"Hawaiian!" Nudge yelled.
"Sausage!" Fang and Iggy screamed, with their mouths full of pizza.
"Pepperoni, steak, chicken, and sausage, please. All on one pizza." Gazzy said casually.
"Okay. Give me a 초 to write this all down, and we'll be on our way!" I said, searching frantically for a piece of scrap paper, and a pen.
앤젤 approached me.
"Uh...Max?"
"Yes, sweetie?"
"Where do we get the money?" She said, innocently.
I halted. It hadn't occurred to me.
"Anyone got some loose change?"
"I have a dime, a nickel, 5 quarters, and chewed up bubble gum," said Gazzy.
"That's not going to pay for your wacked-up pizza," Iggy said.
"Well bite me." Gazy went to pout.
"I have a twenty, 2 quarters, and a fifty. Will that work?" Said Nudge.
"Where did 당신 get that?" We all said, befuddled.
"I gave it to her," 앤젤 said, as she walked in to the room.
"And where did 당신 get that?" I questioned. 앤젤 was 연기 mysterious.
"A kind man that lived on the 거리 gave it to me."
"Why?"
"I don't know. He just... Gave it to me." She walked back into the kitchen.
"Okay... Then we will use Nudge's money." Fang said, looking very hungry.
We headed down the hall. Turned left, and hit the "Down" button for the elevator.
"Can't we take the stairs?" Nudge said, nervously.
"Those are emergencies only. We have to take the elevator." We mutants were raised in very small cages. Now, we all have extreme claustrophobia.
The elevator doors opened up. I cautiously stepped inside, followed 의해 Nudge.
"Which level?" 의해 now we were both shaking.
"*1." She pressed the button. The elevator slowly climbed downward.

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Alright, so if 당신 think that it's impossible to be attacked in an elevator, it's not.
The thing that gave the erasers away, is the multiple thumping on 상단, 맨 위로 of us while we were going down.
"Max, what is that?" Nudge was scared. It must be the fact that we were trapped in a small space, and being attacked at the same time. An average 일 of being a mutant bird kid.
"Uhh... The elevator is probably have a technical difficulty. If it stops, the 다음 plan is up, up, and away." The thumping continued. It seemed as if there were at least five erasers on 상단, 맨 위로 of the elevator.
I started to unscrew the panel on the to of the elevator without a screw driver. Don't under estimate the power of Max.
The elevator stopped to a halt. he lights went out. I kept unscrewing.
The panel finally fell, and three erasers fell through the roof.
"Max..."
"Not right now, Nudge. 당신 take the one on the left, I'll take care of the others."
She nodded, and stepped to the side. I roundhouse kicked the one in the middle on the side of the head, and blood dripped out off his nose.
I looked over to see an eraser take a swipe at Nudge but she easily evaded it and caught him in an arm lock. He yelped, and dropped to his knees.
I threw a few punches at eraser #3, and a spinning side kick where it counts. He grunted, and plopped down to the ground.
"Good work, Nudge."
"Max, uhh... There's a bit of an issue..."
"What??"
"There's no way out."

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I stared at her, in awe.
"What do 당신 mean? The erasers had to come from somewhere," I said.
An eraser struggled to speak. "We tried to ambush 당신 a 일 ago. Ari told us to climb through the air vent in the shaft, and that we should wait there until 당신 guys used the elevator. Well, it worked until someone clogged the hole and we've been stuck here ever since."
"We weren't asking you, furbrain. I am very aware I am stuck in an enclosed 우주 with absolutely no way out." I used my foot to push him back down, unconcious.
"Max, we have to get out and warn the others about the ambush. The erasers are going to wake up soon," Nudge said quietly.
"I have a plan."
I jumped up through the hole where the panel used to be. All we had to do is fly up, and somehow open the doors.
Somehow.
I helped Nudge up, and told her the idea. She nodded, and we began to flap our wings. Now, I'm sure your like, "Now they are just going to fly up at extreme speeds and somehow get themselves out." But no. Instead, we were stuck in the shaft for 4 hours screaming at the 상단, 맨 위로 of our lungs.
"Fang? Iggy? Angel? Gazzy? ANYONE THERE???"
No answer for 3 1/2 hours. HOURS. Until finally, someone came to fix the elevator, and opened the elevator doors. Believe me, They probably thought they were going crazy. 2 kids rushing out from the middle of NOWHERE and heading straight into a room. The poor guy.
"Where were you? I'm starving! Where are the pizzas?" Gazzy exploded.
"Oh, don't blame us, just stuck in an elevator with three unconscious erasers for 4 hours!" I retorted.
"Didn't 당신 hear us screaming?" Nudge asked.
"Nope. We were watching the Superbowl and popping popcorn," said Iggy.
"It was torture..." Fang murmured. I snickered at his comment.
"Well, I'm surprised nobody else did," Nudge said harshly. "You aren't the only one that's hungry. Why can't 당신 think of others instead of just yourself?"
Before Gazzy could continue,"Guys, break it up. We're all hungry. But the important things are staying together, and getting out of this joint. Erasers know where we are."
"Good talk, Max. Now everybody, gather your packs and let's head out," Iggy gathered the troopers, and left me and Fang, alone.
"Sooo... Who won the Superbowl?" I asked.
"Why does anyone care? It's just over payed jerks tackling one another for a living. I can 'Play' better than that," he smirked. I almost smiled back. Almost.
"Okay guys, get packed. We're moving out," Iggy said, herding us to the other room.

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We have been flying for 5 hours now. The Flock was starving 의해 now.
"Max, I'm extremely hungry. Can we stop and get 음식 somewhere below?" 앤젤 asked innocently. Awe, I 사랑 that girl.
"Okay. Guys, start losing altitude. We're going to get a midnight snack," I said. Everyone cheered.
"Unless 앤젤 has something to tell us, I don't think we have the money," Iggy stated.
"Nope, I gave it to Nudge," she replied sweetly.
"Wait, if we never spent it on pizza, where'd it go, Nudge?" I asked.
"Uhh... If I remember, the last time I saw it was... Uh-oh."
"What?"
"It's still in the room." We all looked at each other. Nobody knew what to do.
"Just kidding! It's right here!" She pulled out 2 green dollars and 2 coins out of her pocket.
"Uh... What's wrong?" Nudge questioned, as if nothing ever happened.
"Nothing. Let's go to the Waffle House below, around 1500 yards ahead. I think they're open."


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Sometimes I feel bad for Waffle House. I mean, they're open all 일 and night (Even though they're a breakfast joint), and I really feel bad for this one, because six hungry mutant bird kids were walking into it.
We sat down in a booth. 앤젤 Nudge and I shared one side, the boys, the other. Our waitress approached us.
"Hello guys. My name's Farrah. I'll be your waitress for today," She handed out some menus. "What can I get 당신 for drinks?" Fang started.
"I'll get a 초콜릿 milkshake, and a 카푸치노 please." Farrah scribbled down the order.
"Can I get a glass of OJ and an iced latte?" I asked.
"Sure can. What about you, miss?" She asked Nudge.
"Well, I'll take a hot coffee with three creams and two splendas, a glass of OJ, and some 담홍색, 핑크 레몬 에이드, 레모네이드 please?" Farrah scribbled the orders down.
"Ditto," Gazzy added.
"Excuse me?" Farrah looked up.
"I'll take what she had, but with three splendas in the coffee please."
"You, sir?"
"Iggy..." He looked up at me.
"Yeah, he'll have a Dr. Pepper and a iced tea," Fang answered for him.
"What he said," Iggy chimed. Farrah then nodded, and walked back towards the kitchen.
"She forgot me!" 앤젤 yelled.
"Uhhh... She probably didn't mean to. It's late and she's gt to be really tired. 당신 can have my 주황색, 오렌지 주스 if 당신 want,"I said, trying to lighten the mood.
"Okay! Thanks Max!" 앤젤 grinned happily.
posted by Dearheart
Josie ran.

“Maybe I made a mistake thinking you’d understand!”

“Well maybe I made a mistake
marrying you!”

She ran, not heeding the tempest that tore at her clothes nor caring where she fled to as long as it was someplace far from home. Away from the chaos of her fighting parents and the hopelessness of the choice she was faced with.

“A tumor?”

“...it’s pressing on your brain stem and growing very rapidly. If it isn’t taken care of soon, it will be life-threatening...the surgery, however, would cost 당신 your hearing... Permanently...”


Her 심장 pounded in time with her feet;...
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posted by blossomyumyum
You’re keeping me up at night as 일 breaks
It’s all for you
Yeah that’s what 당신 do, got me feeling so blue
When will 당신 see
당신 have to let it be
When will 당신 see just how much 당신 really mean to me

Why is it just so hard to send that card
When do 당신 think you’ll be able to understand
My 사랑 might be killing me

I hope 당신 realize I’m just a fool
Damn! You’re so cool

When do 당신 think you’ll understand
당신 drove me to a far off land
When will 당신 see
I can’t just let it be
Come on try to set me free
When will 당신 finally understand
I care about you
I’ll tell 당신 that firsthand
당신 have my 심장 and my life
I hope soon I’ll get a chance to be your wife
I hope soon you’ll see, 당신 mean the universe and the galaxy to me
posted by -Universe_COLA-
 Daniel
Daniel
~"Rays of hopeless light beamed dim and pale through the dull orange, yellow, and auburn leaves of the fall's trees. But even where there is calmness in neutrality, there is always a prey, and always a predator. Humanity is no different."~

Daniel tore through woods at full speed, clothes torn, his small 주황색, 오렌지 backpack dangling across his back, his left arm carved with shredded flesh in the form of animalistic claw markings and lines of smeared crimson leaked slowly from the wound above his eye. The leg to his jeans on the left side, only hanging on 의해 a thread ripped itself away just above...
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posted by stephany1617
Race:half Italian Human,Otaku,Reader Fanfiction,I 사랑 my 프렌즈 and Respect them i Speak American English Fluent and i like the sound of the ocean and 바닷가, 비치 가장 좋아하는 animals:Dogs,Wolf,Dolphins,Horses,Panda,Tiger,Orca
Beluga Whales
아니메 i love:Naruto Shippuden,Swords Art Online,Inuyasha,Vampire Knight,Rosario+Vampire
my 가장 좋아하는 sports are:Basketball,Tennis,Swimming
I'm the youngest child my mother have I have a biological brother and mom also my brother is a electronic Engineering
I have one small cute Malchi dog
posted by MovieReveiw
This is an opinion so if 당신 don't like these logoff...now.
In my opinion the new Suicide Squad sucks. Harley Quinn is not even Harley Quinn any more, Deadshot has stupid movie lines, and no King Shark. WTF. I will explain this all for people who are not familier with The Suicide Squad.
Since the beginning of time Harley Quinn has had an accent and, guess what, no accent in the new Suicide Squad. And since when does Harley Quinn dress like a fucking slut.
Deadshot is normaly the main charecter in The Suicide Squad but now he has two stupid 나귀, 엉덩이 lines, "So we are some kind of Suicide Squad?" Yes 당신 are stupid it is the 제목 of your movie. "Let's go save the world." Fuck it I am done with Deadshot fully.
King 상어 is, well, a giant 상어 but now they have replaced him with a less cool Killer Crok.
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Sucky one
posted by Brittany6655
I really 사랑 to write.I've done it ever since I was only 4.
My mother used to write things like stories 또는 poems and letters.My mom inspired me to write things now.
글쓰기 is really fun to do and I 사랑 it alot!Sometimes I write things like my mom did.

Whenever I feel mad I usually write things in the Write 이메일 on the computer and write things that have been on my mind for a couple of days,then I erase them because I always feel better after I do that and I usually feel much calmer and I get it out of my system.

Since I really 사랑 글쓰기 so much I was thinking that maybe I could become an author when I grow up. :)
I wouldn't just write 시 또는 stories,I would also like to write 기사 for other people to read (just like I'm 글쓰기 one right now).But of course I would write it on a piece of paper.I would also like to write new 책 for kids.

Again I really 사랑 to write and it's sort of special to me in my life.
posted by erissajade05
저기요 guys.i wanna be in a group sooooo...... please be in my group 의해 erissajade05(me),so we have activites and we talk about different kinds of things such as:mermaids,t.v shows,and tell each other about our selfs so hope u wanna be in my group its fun a lot)its going to very fun too.so buckle up for the fun cause the is about to began 123 here we go .please subscribe and please write 코멘트 .If 당신 wanna be in my group add me and say yes in the 코멘트 box below.if 당신 don't want to be in my group don't add me and just say no in the 코멘트 box right below.no personal stuff guys just being me.
posted by Weasel1999
I. The Nursery

Ember lived in her nursery for the 다음 few months, only being let out occasionally to go to the toilet. All she saw were the four walls around her but it wasn’t all bad.
The room was painted a pretty sky-blue and the carpet was thick, fluffy and a deep midnight blue. There was a 침대 and a huge white wardrobe with the most beautiful, 구식 clothes inside.
Rich velvets cloaks, soft 모피 stoles, bright silk dresses, every item of clothing needed to make a young lady of society look beautiful.
But Ember was not a young lady of society living in Victorian times. She was a...
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posted by Insight357
    “Damien, I’m sorry,” his smooth voice said in my ear. I couldn’t face him. He had kicked me out, why would he be here? To apologize? It was a nice gesture, but it crippled me just to see him.
    “I don’t believe you,” my voice was shaking. Tears kept streaming down my face.
    “Listen,” he crept down the side of my face.
    “No, 당신 listen to me,” I said turning over to face him. Our faces were all of three inches apart. “You killed me! Now 당신 expect to come in here, apologize, and I’ll...
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posted by ZekiYuro
Most of us don't know what life will be like in the future,or even when we will be a 년 from now,but it's fun to speculate.So,what might the world be like in the 년 3000(or Y3K as it's now called)?Here's what one expert suggests:

Q:What forms will our bodies have in Y3K?
A:We will be bigger and we'll need 더 많이 food.The average adult male might weigh about 100 kilos.People will live for hundreds of years,and will have computers in their brains.

Q:Computers in their brains!What do 당신 mean?
A:We will soon be able to repair the human brain,and finally replace it completely.In the future 당신 might...
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posted by BellaSwan636
Shaun

I'm not sure why it had to be me. If I'm really honest with you, I hated myself.

I was fourteen when my parents died. I had no family left, so I became the unwanted foster kid.

I didn't want to have to think, 또는 care about anything. I wanted to die.

I wanted to be an inconvenience to the world. I wanted them to know how much I hated them for having their own happy lives. I shunned everyone.

I became the loner.

I look out of place, somehow. I'm the kid who's taller than the other sophomores 의해 a head. The kid with coal black eyes.

The foster parents I was living with now tried. They tried,...
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posted by ToastedRabbits
Someone once told me,

"Being a writer is like being a prostitute, really. At first you're only doing it for yourself, then 당신 decide to tell a few friends, let them in on the action, then 당신 decide to let a couple strangers in, pretty soon you're welcoming the entire world."

Such a very accurate quote. When I heard this, I was at a very formal luncheon with a few kids from my journalism class in which we produced the school's newspaper: The Jagged Edge. It was an awards ceremony for individual work as well as our newspaper as a whole to be recognized. Granted, it was a local newspaper that...
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posted by ballaholic
“Dream as if you’ll live forever. Live as if you’ll die today.”


I’m so sorry, Jimmy. I know I’m letting 당신 down. 당신 wanted me to dream big, live big, and be great. I’ve done none of that. I’ve settled for ordinary. I’ve given up on my dreams. I’ve all but stopped living. I don’t know how it happened. Time’s just been flying by, and I don’t know how the days have managed to slip past me so many times without my notice. Before I know it, I’ll be twenty-four, the age 당신 were at your death. Who knows if I’ll get much 더 많이 than that, 또는 if I’ll even get that far?...
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posted by jeweleryfan11
It has been 10 years since she learned how to be a real warrior. She had straight, long, golden hair instead of curly goldilocks like when she was 8. She had blue eyes that could be the ocean. And her skin was so fair she could be snow white. Except Snow White wasn’t like Allyson. She was 더 많이 rough than she was. She finally needed to know. “ Master light. I must speak to my parents,” she said. “You cannot,” master light said. “ Why not?,” Allyson, now asked. “Red star. The prophecy has come. 당신 must know. All of the youngins must know once they turn 18. But first 당신 must...
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