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posted by amutokitty
Just a horrible short story with hardly any plot whatsoever... Don't kill me because of my awful work, please! Constructive criticism needed!

She sat 의해 the ocean, mesmerized 의해 the constant flow of the ocean.
Back and forth, back and forth.
He was standing on the cliff, watching her in her daze. The picture was peaceful and calm, and he wished it would stay the same forever, just like the motion of the ocean.
Back and forth, back and forth.
She stood up and picked up a seashell. It was a pale blue color, a truly beautiful shell. She walked out towards the ocean.
Back and forth, back and forth.
His eyes followed her. 'So beautiful...' he thought, watching Kassandra on her way into the ocean.
Back and forth, back and forth.
Kassandra scooped up a bit of the salty water and let it run through her fingers. She turned around and sat back on the white sand.
Back and forth, back and forth.
He noticed her drawing something on the sand. He leapt down from the cliff, and began walking towards her, wanting to see what she was drawing.
Back and forth, back and forth.
She drew a 사랑 umbrella. An 애로우 pointing up, a 심장 at the top. On each side of the line, she wrote a name: Kassandra | Peter
Back and forth, back and forth.
He walked up to her and sat down 다음 to her. "Hey." he said, startling her. "Wh-what are 당신 doing here, Peter?!" she asked. "What are 당신 making?" Peter asked, looking down at her creation.
Back and forth, back and forth.
She blushed sharply as he looked down on her creation. She looked away until she felt a warm hand on her cheek.
Back and forth, back and forth.
He pulled her face so she was looking him in the eye. "I 사랑 you, Kassandra." Peter said, his stormy blue eyes peering into her mint green ones.
Back and forth, back and forth.
She smiled and leaned in to 키스 him. He wrapped his arms around her as they kissed, forever remembering the sound of the waves on that 일 at the beach.
Back and forth, back and forth.
posted by HarryPLover
 "Overall, I can say that I do 사랑 him.."<3
"Overall, I can say that I do love him.."<3
I was still in his tight embrace. I never noticed how warm he was. Well maybe because I have never really hugged him like this before. I was just happy to have him back.
"Mmmmm. I missed you." I heard him whisper in my ear.
"Mmmm...No I'm pretty sure I missed you." I manged to whisper back. It felt a little weird saying that too him. I didn't want to be all rude and not say it back, but I just.. I still haven't decided whether I actually wanna go through with this 또는 not.
Granted, I did say that I do 사랑 him like 사랑 him, 사랑 him, but at the same time I 사랑 him as my best friend and right...
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posted by rAsberrStrarS
He took my face in his hands, so normally-as if it were a natural instinct to be doing something like this with me.
My breath caught in my throat,as we inclined our heads towards each other in perfect unison.
His lips were warm and soft and sweet,all at the same time,the sensation blinded me.That he was 키싱 me,not other better girls who'd had 더 많이 experience.My 심장 was beating like a birds wings fluttering together in my chest.
Taylor pressed his forehead against mine ans sighed,his breath warmed my face.
We pulled back form each other but still twined our fingers together like we were never...
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posted by 4evercherylcole
It was a cold, breezy Autumn evening while Anna Brown, a reasonably fair girl, was watching EastEnders. She loved this programme and never missed it.

Anna, like I said, was a reasonably fair girl. Her kindness and helpfulness would sometimes flatter people. When she was a little girl, people used to 'oooh' and 'aaah' at her cuteness.
    
Soon Anna's Mother put her to bed. Her Mother told her to go to 침대 early that night for her Mother had a surprise in-store for her the 다음 morning. It was for Anna's 9th birthday and she was extremely excited.
    
During...
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posted by woowie
Isabella and I were driving through the darkness of Florida. We had gotten married a 년 earlier, and decided it was time we got a pet. Finally, we came to the adress we were looking for.

At the door, there was a woman, and 다음 to her was a large, purple, alien. "I'm Charlotte, and this is Penelope, the proud mother." said the woman. Penelope happily greeted us. "Where's the dad?" I asked.

"Oh, Zapnis? I honestly don't know where he ran off to this time. I suppose 당신 want to see the babies?" she led us into a room. One ran forward, and crashed into my legs. She was light pink. "Boys are...
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posted by TDIlover226
Eddie just sat there in the plain dark room, looking at the many tubes coming from the floor to the ceiling. He wondered how far away he was from home, he wondered what his parents thought, and if they'd already called the police, trying to look got him. He estimated that it had been about 3 day's sence he'd been taken. Now he could tell that it was getting dark, he wasn't sure how though, the room was dark, had no windows and was cold and damp. He thought that he might starve down there, sence the mutants hadn't been down there for some time now. He really thought that they were just messing...
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posted by spikes_girl
There are things in your every 일 life that 당신 never take a 초 glance at. They're just there, noting to ponder over 또는 to think about. Here are two short tribute poems to some overlooked objects in life.

Fountain

The 울트라 마린 colored water
Dances down through a maze of marble obstacles
Creating clear rainbows across the sheer water's surface.

A carpet of copper and silver glints at the bottom
Coins
Lost with memory of young children
Wishing for new puppies
Ice cream cones
Hot 개 for dinner
For bedtime stories to become flesh
A cat in a hat to come skipping off the pages.

Everything is in this...
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posted by haileywithin
When I woke up Darla was sleeping 의해 my side. I silently slipped out of the 침대 and into the kitchen. There was a sudden knock on the door. "who is it?" Darla said rubbing her eyes. Shrugging my shoulders I opened the door. Outside was 2 two police officers. "goodmorning sorry to disturb 당신 but we are looking for someone". "oh who?" Darla said coming to the door in a robe. The police officers pulled out a picture of a young teenager. Her hair was short brown and cut in layers. Like Darla's. Her eyes were brown. Like Darla's. And she looked 19. Like Darla. "have 당신 seen her?" I replied "what...
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posted by I_DONT-KNOW
well here is the 다음 part of my story, hope 당신 enjoy x

Run, musn't stop running. Can't look back, it's too late now, he's going to chatch up any minute. She was going to get caught, she's going to die.

3 days earlier.

Alexis sat on her bed, in the dark holding onto a scrunched up piece of paper. It was a 일 after it had happened, after the secret was out.Her secret. She hadn't told her mother yet, she couldnt not again. Everytime she moved school something like this would happen, someone would ruin it, every time.Another tear slid down her face, then another, soon the balled up paper became...
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Creating a world, whether for 판타지 of sci-fi, is no easy task. Worlds contain wonders of all kinds, plus various cultures, climates, and creatures. From my own research, many writers use parts of this world, the "real" world, as the basis for their own worlds. I've compiled this guide from personal experience. Wherever possible, I've included examples. (Note: othe examples can be found in various places on this site. The avid user can find them with relative ease.)
LOCATION
The universe is a big place. Your world has to be somewhere. Its position in the universe could affect your characters...
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posted by Grintforever
Alone!

There once was a girl who biked and ran
with her best friend who had a bright 주황색, 오렌지 tan
But then one 일 she when biking alone
and thats when she fell along way from home.

She lay still on the ground
not makeing a sound,and thats when she found
that she could not talk
let alone walk

As she slowly made her way home
she wished that she had a phone
so she could call for help
insted of put up with the pain that made her yelp.

She pushed her bike down the dusty track
with a sore haed and an acking back
Then she came to the place where her and her best friend met
just as the sun was begining to set

The 다음 일 at school she was no where in sight
which gave her best frined a very big fright
but she was a 집 tucked up in bed
with a sore leg and an acking head

Thats when she remebered what her best friend had said
about not going out bikeing alone
along way from home.

What do 당신 think?(I think it is very bad) and sorry of the spelling.
posted by theanimemaster
You
It's the middle of the night,



And I can't sleep




Your face, planted with a smile



Are the only things I see




Your voice calling my name



Is the only thing I hear




I can feel your hand rubbing my back



Hearing 당신 whisper ''good night''




I jump and look around,



And soon realize 당신 are not there




I sob, tightly holding the gift 당신 once gave me



It's right here, on my bed, in perfect condition.




30 분 later, I wipe my face and go back to sleep…




I wake up once again



And the cycle starts all over again…
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posted by zutaradragon
your mistakes don't define you, now. they don't tell 당신 who you're not, 또는 who 당신 can never be. what's it take to get 당신 to say you'll try? you've got to live this life like it's the only one you've got. what would 당신 say, what would 당신 do, if this was your last day? so, 당신 found out today that life's not the same. not quite as good as yesterday.
and, yes, i know it hurts & i know your pain, but u never gave up this easily befor. such a beautiful thing to just throw away. i think 당신 need to know that, of all the 색깔 that 당신 shine, this is surely not your best, it's really not your style. 당신 should think about what 당신 do, befor 당신 do it, over and over again. i know 당신 feel alone, that know one can figure 당신 out, but 당신 sould know that we just 사랑 to see 당신 smile.i know 당신 feel like you're lost, feel like you've drifted way to far away, but we can help 당신 come back.
posted by alicia386
Shane Gildmen stared at the roaring waves. In just a couple of days his girlfriend would be back from her trip to Europe. He had no idea how he was going to deliever the tragic news. His girlfriend was so fragile. He didn't want to crush her feelings.
A week after she left, he cheated on her with Emily Tones. Emily was there for him. While his girlfriend, Trinity, went on vacation. Emily talked with him when he thought Trinity was cheating on him with some european dude. He kissed Emily. He daydreamed about Emily. He even wanted 더 많이 from Emily then just a kiss. Soon he depended on Emily....
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Source: Lindsay Reddick, axemnas
posted by madening_mahem
 Example of the Maiden
Example of the Maiden
At night, far away, in ancient Japan...
A fair maiden slumbered, only to be awakened 의해 blood curdling screams. She open her eyes to a frightening sight, the bodies of her most beloved servants and close relatives astray on the floor, lifeless, dead. She hastily slide open the doors to her room, and ran down the corridor, which was lit with the moonlight that seeped through the paper doors, which were now drenched in blood.
Though her limbs felt heavy, she ran as fast as her 심장 beat. Running away from the cries of her family still being slaughtered 의해 an unknown murderer, away from what...
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posted by Epismatic
The Man With No Eyes Collection (1): The Actor




Sundown, sunrise.

Big smile!

(Tired eyes.)

I vanish into thin air.

An actor never fails.

(Lies.)

To give the world a rousing show

(While begging to be recognized.)

To shine as brightly as the sun

Upon the 왕좌, 왕위 that we’ve devised.

A patchwork-quilt protagonist

A villain from the shadow realm

The work of the illusionist

When I, the actor, take the helm.

“Hey, wouldn’t it be cool to see…”

The whisper marks my story’s birth.

The audience will gather ‘round.

(The jury to decide my worth.)


"The Man With No Eyes" is a series of poems, all of which are unfolding from one character's point of view. They are meant to represent an ongoing journey. So if 당신 liked this one, stay tuned for more. :)
A/N: I finished 글쓰기 this about five 분 ago, lol. It's actually a song, but I figured it would fit as a poem as well.

This poem/song was inspired 의해 two things: 1) A few of my 가장 좋아하는 아니메 couples, namely Ed x Winry from Fullmetal Alchemist and Hoshino x Tanabe from Planetes (AWESOME series). And 2) while my dad was in Iraq, he heard "My Immortal" for the first time and said he loved the idea behind it...but it was too sad/depressing because "the chorus was in past tense instead of present tense." So he asked me if maybe I could take the same concept and do my own thing with it. I...
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posted by vanelandsisters
I remember your books
In the hallway
I remember 당신 cracking up
Microscopes in the garage
Those old parts
I 사랑 당신 더 많이 than anything

I remember your blue eyes
Looking into my emeralds
Like we lived in our own world
I remember 당신 chasing
Our brother
Then falling asleep in my lap
I can still feel 당신 curled up 의해 my side
Little man
And even through that night I knew
You fought it hard as 당신 could
Remember I
Held 당신 and whispered

Come on, baby
With me
I'm never gonna leave
You behind
You were
My best
Thirteen years

I remember the first night
When my hope
Turned to crying and screaming your name
Flowers pile up in the...
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