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posted by Elizabeth90luv
I, Stella Bonasera, criminologist from New York’s crime lab have to inform 당신 that due to a severe medical problem I won’t be able to present on today’s court and testify against Antonio Vasquez, the primary suspect for Anne Blaire’s murder. Responsible for my absence is Mr. Vasquez, who shot me with a machine gun right outside the back entrance of the crime lab. The video of the security cameras can 확인 it.

As a matter of fact, I want to present through this letter all the evidence that I have collected with the help of my experienced team. I swear to the bible that I will tell the truth, the whole truth and nothing but truth. For further information, the other crime investigators who are present on this court can answer all your questions.

On June’s 16th, a left arm was found in a rubbish bin on the east side of Central Park. At first place, the victim’s DNA didn’t have any hits in CODIS (Combined DNA Index System) and its fingerprints weren’t in IAFIS (Integrated Automated Fingerprint Identification System), so we weren’t able to identify the victim. The only thing that we were able to learn out of this arm was that it belonged to a white female. The other hand was found in a recycling bin in Chelsea University. Finally, after searching the whole building, the rest of the body was found in a cupboard inside the university’s library. The victim was identified immediately after finding its ID card in one of its pockets. The official cause of death according to the lab’s forensic surgeon was asphyxiation due to strangulation. The two arms were cut after the death of the young lady with a special chain saw. The defensive wounds and the bruises on the victim’s arms were post mortal too. Also, traces of saw dust were found on our crime scene and drops of blue paint were found on the vic’s clothing. However, any of our evidence indicated that the cupboard was the primary crime scene. In addition, some drops of paint were found in all the way from the library’s entrance to the cupboard. Also, the door’s lock was broken and all those evidence showed that the body was transferred to the library. After processing the evidence found, the team realized that only the “MNYL Furniture factory” was using the specific chain saw, paint and saw dust.

In the factory, everything was normal except for the president’s office, where drops of the victim’s blood were found, as well as the chain saw, perfectly cleaned but positive for blood. The president had a strong alibi, but on the chain saw, we found a fingerprint of our suspect, Antonio Vasquez. The security cameras can 확인 the fact that he was on the factory on 02:30, near the time of death. The security camera inside the president’s office confirms that our suspect met the vic but it was destroyed 의해 Mr. Vasquez, just before the victim was killed. The suspect was an employee in this factory, so he knew how to use this chain saw and as the family of the vic said, he was recently dating with the victim. The fingers of our suspect were a perfect match with the bruises on Anne’s neck. The dead body was transferred to the 도서관, 라이브러리 with a red truck which belonged to the suspect, that was found positive for blood. However, we couldn’t find out how the dead body was transferred to the cupboard without leaving any blood on the corridors of the library. One of the arms was found in the garbage bin and the other one in the Central Park, just because the killer wanted to trick the police. “Without a body there is no crime, so no punishment” said the suspect. Here in New York’s crime lab we take this as a confession.

I hope that my testimony will be helpful for the dispensation of justice. The 비디오 from all the security cameras and all the evidence will be given to the court 의해 other crime scene investigators, who can 확인 what I have just said and of course they can answer to your questions.


Yours faithfully
Stella Bonasera
CSI 과학수사대 Level 3
CSI 과학수사대 Assistance Supervisor
 Kat.
Kat.
Prom Night
By: fatchick and moolah
Chapter three: Best ending ever!!
    Luke was lying in a hospital 침대 the whole time Ashlynn gave birth. He missed the birth of his little premature little girl. He was upset and also dreaming about what his baby girl looked like. Ashlynn was aloud to come see Luke. She started crying when she saw him. She was sad that he was in a temporary coma. She thought he was cute in a weird way. She went to lie down. On her way back she fainted. She fainted because she thought she saw Luke trying to hug her in the hall. The nurse screamed, “HELP,...
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posted by mitchie19
11. M E E T A A R O N


At exactly 3 pm, Mario, our house guard beeped through the telecom.
“Mr. Riley?” Mario asked. He used his British accent. I shifted my weight near the front door which the telecom was hung beside it. I pressed the button. “Yes, Mario?” “There’s someone at the gate, looking for Ms. Marhion.” I wonder who it is. I looked out the window. A silver BMW was parked in front of the gate. Weird.
He might not be a bad guy. “Send him in,” I told Mario then I saw the gate opened.
I approached the guy looking for Mariah. “Hi, Riley Cruz,” we shook hands. “Aaron...
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posted by mitchie19
8. C O N C E R N E D H E A R T


My vision was black. Just plain black. It’s like I’m falling into a deep dark room where I can’t see but the darkness and falling into nothing. It felt cold. The deep dark room was cold.
I slowly opened my eyes. All I can hear was the sound of the 심장 monitor beeping. I was in a hospital. What happened to me?
Beside me, Norah—sleeping with her head tilted down the side of the bed.
“Norah,” I heard me whisper. I felt the IV dripped into my arm.
Norah had awoken. Her arms around me and sobbed. “Thank God, you’re okay,”
I managed to rub her head...
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posted by mona_me
i am looking for the star, our star, but this time i am alone, 당신 aren't standing on the port 다음 to me..
i feel i am 로스트 now, i can't find this star. 당신 remeber what did i descoverd that night? i found only one 별, 스타 in the whole Portsaid's sky..
당신 didn't belive that one 별, 스타 is exist.. 당신 said: which star? the sky is felling of the stars!
i thought 당신 was kidding, i was very sure that there's one star.. yeah, sure as the blind is sure that there's nothing around him!
now i see what 당신 were talking about, i loved you, so i couldn't see anyone else but you..
당신 was my heart's only love..
it was Portsaid's only star..
but 당신 .. 당신 didn't point to the same star, 당신 saw all the stars but mine..
now i am alone, seeing many stars, can't find my star, am i blind? 또는 ..was i blind?
twinkle, twinkle, my littel star..
Portsaid's only star, which one is you?
_________________________________________________
*Portsaid is an Egyptian port.
So Tom Closes The door...and heads back into The bathroom With bill.
"That was Gustav" Tom said.
"what did he want" bill asked
"he was Wonderin if we was Ready" Tom Replied.
"Well mabye we..." bill said but got inurupted 의해 Tom Saying
"Shh." He said as he licked The 상단, 맨 위로 of his Nips softly.
"mmmmm Tomi u Gustav." bill moaned.
"and Wats The point Wats n america 4 us?" Tom Asked
"i dont know but u should stop" bill said.
"mmm o billy u Know u Want it," Tom moaned. bill looked at the 샤워 head as Tom Took off his pants. Tom Then looked billnin his Eyes.
"is This Wrong?" Bill asked
"im not sure. but i...
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posted by house_of_nightx
THE LEGEND OF THE VAMPIRE PRINCESS:
THE LEGEND COMES TO LIFE

CHARPTER1:STARSTRUCK

STAR
16 YEARS LATER

I woke to a brisk summers morning in a small town just outside of New York City in my parents best friend Kachiri and her daughter Quinns apartment.Kachiri has been looking after me since i was a baby since my parents had died in a car accident when i was very younge and i had no other family,Kachiri said my parents wanted her to look after me anyway.

As i got out of 침대 to go downstairs i made my way into my bathroom brushed my hair,cleaned my teeth and examined the sapphire dragon that streached...
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posted by Charlieminster
Charlie Hawkins had always felt different to the other girls in her school. They were all really skinny, wore tight clothes and make-up and every boy who pasted them in the corridor would quite simply drawl all over them. Charlie was different to the girls in 더 많이 ways than looks. She could do something that none of them could do which was influence people to do what she wants them to do.
The way Charlie looked different to the other girls was that she was very pale for someone who lives in LA, she had long dark black hair that came down to her hips, her eyes were a very strange cloudy yellow...
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posted by Percysclique
Chapter 2 – A Pain in the Night

Queen Amati sat up in 침대 with nausea sweeping through her body, causing her to jerk forward. The black haired woman grabbed her thin waist, as she doubled over in pain. Her breathing came out short and raspy.

She looked over at her husband who was sleeping soundly. A gentle look was plastered his handsome face and Amati wished she could have another peaceful night sleep. But those nights seemed like they were so long ago.

Amati reached for the golden goblet she had been keeping 의해 her 침대 lately. She took a sip of the strong 주스 and forced it down her throat....
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posted by Dogluva363
My freind wrote a story wat do 당신 think about it?

J+K Forever and Always


            Chapter 1
The final 일 of summer was a normal one. The birds were singing, the sun was shining, and Juliet steerages was at my house [since I am her best friend] thinking of the days to come when school would start. She thought of her classes, her teachers, but most of all she was thinking of Kaleb Wese.Kaleb wese was the brother of her other friend Kara. All she wanted in the world was to be his girlfriend! Truth be told I never could figure...
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As I weave through dark allies, trying to make my way home, everything feels wrong. It's 일 time and there is crickets chirping. The moon is shining along with bright stars while the brilliant sun sleeps. Annabella was not there. This time, it wasn't Annabella and I running away from one of our idiotic but awesome stunts. I was running for a different reason. I needed to get 집 so I could cry. I needed to sit there in my crying corner and let the tears flow. I did not make it 집 in time. I collapse onto the harsh cement and burst into tears, right there in an alley.
Hours pass. I lose...
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Elena’s POV
    The night got colder as I walked further away from the Founder’s 일 party. Just a few 더 많이 steps and I’ll be at the school.
    I reached the school’s front door but when I tried to open them but they wouldn’t budge. I gave up and sighed. I crossed my arm’s trying to keep warm. Looking around trying to find another way in, though the only way I knew of was the doors in the back of the school.
    I slowly walked my self to the back doors. I grabbed the frost bitten door handle and pulled it open. Once I walked...
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posted by Liisamyts
CHAPTER 2
A picture of a young blond man was shining on the screen, it was Jacob, their brother, the one who always held it together when everything was falling apart. 아델 snuggled closer to her brother. And for once, he didn't push her away, instead, he just held her, not speaking a word.”He promised! He promised he would come 집 early tonight!” she managed to say between her sobs. Then she burst into tears again. Simon held her until she fell asleep, tears still on her cheeks. He carried his sister up to her bed, where she could be far away from the pain. Dreaming, seeing mom, dad,...
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posted by Funnygirl77
Where am I? What happen to me? Who are you? What have 당신 done to my sister and brother? These were the first 질문 that popped into my mind when I came to. The Boy who looked to be about 18 looked at me and smiled.
He took my hand, "all shall be answered in time." Is what he said, he sound older than I had thought him to be. He lead me to a room told me to sit and then close my eyes. I did as I was told, "You still haven't told me where I am, and where my sister and brother is, what happen to me, and WHO 당신 ARE? I said in a tone that sound way to irritated.
He nodded, "I am Mark Lane."...
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posted by starwarsfangirl
I wrote this is five minutes. Not that good, I know.
It's in the point of view of a fire.
It's in a fireplace in a living room.
Hope 당신 enjoy.
Read to the rhythym 당신 would
'The Night Before Christmas'


I flickered and jumped
and sat on the logs
and watched as the human
kicked off his clogs.

The dog soon followed
and sat 의해 his side
and they soon were asleep
and my flame soon died.

But a flicker did linger
and I wondered a bit.
When would be the 다음 time
that I would be lit?

-starwarsfangirl
5/4/10
posted by Funnygirl77
 사랑 bites
love bites
Kisa woke up, when she rolled over it was 12:00 at night. Zack laid in his bed,Kisa smiled and went over to Zack. "Are 당신 asleep"? Kisa asked Zack, he rolled over and smiled at her. "No, are 당신 still mad at me"? Kisa frowned, she racked her brain to see why she should be mad at Zack. Then she remembered.
"No, I was never mad at you. So where did 당신 go?" Zack turned away, he didn't want to tell Kisa that he was out feeding on humans, he didn't want to scare her. "I was just out for a walk" Kisa smiled, she knew Zack was lying, she also knew what he was, she just never wanted him to know...
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posted by EmoKidSteven
당신 hurt me,
Both externally,
And internally,

당신 twist a pin into my heart,
And gather my flowing blood onto a cart.
당신 think 당신 can hurt me,

Just because 당신 gave me money,
당신 think 당신 can make my life like hell,
Just because I am the one who made 당신 fell.

I wish 당신 have never given birth to me,
I wish I can expose what 당신 are for all to see.
I hate you,

And I hate 당신 to the heart's core,
I want 당신 to hear my vengeful call.
I respect 당신 because I must,

Yet 당신 blame me for not giving 당신 my trust.
How can I love, 또는 trust, a person like you?
Who makes me feel I'm feebler than cotton wool?

I am forever imprisoned to 당신 의해 blood,
For as long as I live,
The relation between us cannot be cut,

But soon I will take my leave,
Hoping that forever 당신 will grieve
Hey..x
Sorry it's been so long (been on holiday and trying to like choose all my exam choices for 년 10)lifes been pretty hetic but enough of my life!!! Last time I left off Nessie and jake were going to keep their baby and now we visit them 9 months later. No one actually knows what to expect but the exact being of Aimme (youll know who she is when 당신 read the chapter) will be discovered in the 다음 chapter. Also 당신 would have noticed that this chapter is from Jakes point of veiw I had a fab time 글쓰기 it and I hope 당신 enjoy 읽기 it eaqually as much! Thankz for 읽기 and please...
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posted by Flana_2
The forest was so beautiful. Even though it was raining, I thought of the sun peering through the trees. There were 동물 all over. It was like 일본 only slightly less busy. Lots of unfamiliar 동물 gave Minrough high-fives and hugs. After a moment, I scanned his mind. Patients? I thought he said he was a soldier not a healer! After a minute, I demanded to know who they were.
“Patients”. Just like I thought.
“I thought 당신 said 당신 were a soldier at the war”!
“Yeah, a war of diseases”.
“But you’re only a kid! How could 당신 be a doctor”?
“Not a doctor, healer”.
“How...
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posted by Fangirl99
ok,this was my FIRST 기사 i wrote when i joined fanpop.i just copy and pasted it. the characters are from Total drama action *a show*,so 당신 may not understand to well if 당신 dont know the show.but,hopefully,you'll catch on.







Gwen
It was a normal day, most likely for Chris any 분 now to announce the challenge. "I hope there's no challenge today" said Lindsey.
Beth: I know, that way we can do your hair and nails and stuff.
Lindsey: Oh i know, right?
Chris: Morning, everyone! I know 당신 expect us to think of a way to torture you. But Union rules we have to take a break.
Heather: What?
The rest:...
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posted by I_love_Mikey
They say 당신 are only supposed to trust yourself, and build few reliable allies, and get to know everyone 당신 trust. They say that only time will tell if 당신 follow that advice. They say that 당신 are supposed to make yourself happy first, for if not 당신 cannot make anyone else happy. But what if 당신 don't know yourself well enough to trust yourself? What if 당신 can't get allies? What if you're dead before time can tell? What happens when 당신 stay behind, and give up on happiness for the sake of others. What if they're moving on before they even realize you're sad?

They say that world peace...
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