글쓰기 Article: Sorrows BTW THIS IS 6 YRS OLD,

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posted by CullensFinest13

당신 hurt me I hope 당신 die I cant belive I trusted 당신 I cant belive I loved 당신 I cant belive I stayed up and worried that 당신 wouldnt call. I cant belive that i loved 당신 i trusted 당신 and cared for you. im tired of 당신 its time i let 당신 go but your always there 당신 wont leave me alone...its time for 당신 to leave so never come back walk out of my life i am going to lock my door and never let 당신 back in stay out so i can be happy 당신 need 당신 need to die let me live my own life 당신 shouldnt be controlling me anymore im not property im a human and i dont belong to the likes of you, 당신 were a waist of my life. and apart of my 심장 im locking 당신 out never letting 당신 back in 당신 should never say anything to me afain i cant belive 당신 said that about me i cant understand why i let 당신 in the firdt place makes me sick to my stomach i hate life i hate everything about 당신 i cant ever talk to 당신 normally anymore 당신 live far away but i couldnt take it anymore...i used 당신 and i got hurt in the process but i dont understand who 당신 are anymore ive let 당신 go so im going to lock 당신 out never come back again...I want to be alone and so i am and im very happy...

im dying inside cause i miss the way 당신 spoke in my ear...

Bibelot, rockzsanders and 3 others like this

Dearheart You should have listened better in English class. Your spelling and grammar are atrocious! Tsk tsk tsk... And the content itself is a bit...melodramatic? Splashy? Cliche? Repetitive? Redundant? Whatever the adjective is, it lacks power and true emotion (for the reader at least. I'm sure it felt real to you, but it's just not working for me as a reader. I'm not feeling it). But keep your chin up and keep working on it. Everyone has room to improve, both you and me. And the more we practice, the best we'll get. :-) Good luck!

r-pattz i guess dearheart didnt like it, but i think it was awesome. 5 out of 5. dearheart, i think it being repetitive was part of the point.

CullensFinest13 dearheart. btw this is about 6 yrs old. thanks asshole =]

Dearheart Thanks for telling me it was 6 years old in the first place, lol. You're welcome! (Ooh, never been called that one before...I kinda like it, actually. It's spicy.) =D How about we stop the name-calling and over-critical comments, cease fire and go sign a peace treaty? What do you say? *offers a chocolate chip cookie? And a handshake? And a cute smiley face?*

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Duett ( part 1)

posted by inexplicable

It was my turn re-one time far too late.
The dress rehearsal already had started a quarter 시간 이전 and I arrived panting and completely breathless in the test room.
yes, 당신 are, finite since Daniela, our rehearsing leader, shouted to me, ".
> > excuse me, I could not get away from the musicschool earlier<<, I answered still struggling for breath.

Yes, if there was something I really loved, then it was the theater and the music.
Unfortunately, I did not manage to get both things under a hat here so that I paint,
it was late there. The dress rehearsal proceeded despite my late arrival...

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Darkened Bliss: First page to Chapter One

posted by Heya

Chapter 1
Negative stranger

“Have a backbone . . . wait, your an arthropod.”

The sun was burning my eyes as the world spun around me. When I opened them, my eyes burned and then i thought I heard a sizzle, which, of course, was my imagination. I could feel the burning sensation on my upper arm from the shot last night. Crazy. The sunny burn kept burning my pupils until I opened my eyes fully. Then I notice that it’s just my light in my room.
Bummer.
I sat up and rubbed the sore spot on my upper arm area. Shots hurt 더 많이 than 당신 think. When...

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Kingdom Hearts: Ansem's Return 1. The Run

posted by DestinyGirl

Okay, so.... hi! My name is Serenna and I'm a huge 팬 of Kingdom Hearts! ^_^ I've been 글쓰기 for years now and I've made lots of different KH fanfics so here's one of'em! Hope 당신 all like it!:)

Summary: In Kingdom Hearts: Chain of Memories, after Riku defeated Ansem, he said he would someday return. And now he's back. But what is Ansem after? And who is this new, mysterious, strong girl?

~1. The Run

I jumped a good ten feet in the air, arriving softly in the dense forestry. I looked behind me, checking to make sure the shadows weren't following me anymore. I'd been running non-stop for a good...

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this is made for my ISB colleagues please ignore (script)

posted by nessienjake

so...her it goes:P

Actors:~Ecem
~Sari
~selen
~sara
~rumeysa
~sevde
~sevde
~dursun
~sufian
~firas
~roberto
~alex
~anthony
...
Scene starts off in class,the first 일 at school,everybody looking tired,waiting for they're form teacher to be presented.
(a moment of silence as the door slowly opens...I'll be helping on that one!...and a creepy looking teacher steps inside the class-room)
(ACT 1)
Radu:(low and dark voice) Hello....everybody Im your new teacher as we all~~

Alex: yeah,yeah we know,we know

Radu:(laughs sinisterly)you'd wished 당신 didnt say that.NOW...you've been..."disrespectful" to the teacher,come outside...

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Dark Satisfaction

posted by EmoKidSteven

when i just have been through the worse in my life
my eyes turn black,my skin turns white
i'll be like a ghost
life has been sucked right from me
i feel my skin tearing apart like it's going to shred
i'm shaking and lonely and cold
but it's funny that my only savior is just a little sharp metal thing
just a small razor can heal me that much?!
better than anybody i have ever known
i slide my left arm just a little as a start and i feel like i need 더 많이 and 더 많이 and more...
until i can not get enough
but then i feel so good,almost satisfied
watching my blood spilling on the floor,drop after drop very slowly
that's just the hottest painful pleasure i have ever experienced
i feel so unbalanced,so numb
i don't know if i need someone to touch me 또는 to shoot me to know that i'm still alive
but i know i won't stop
i'll cut myself and fuck the wound
i'll lick my blood for all my pain

Lisa and Minrough chapter 2

posted by Flana_2

    “Do 당신 realy think we’ll catch a shooting 별, 스타 with all the lights”?
        “Sure we will” Gina said, “I hope”. I was laughing at her when she called out, “Make a wish”! I turned to a long, 담홍색, 핑크 faded.
        “Like I didn’t see that coming”!
My mom came outside.
     “Gina, your mom is waiting out front” Her smile came back.” At least we saw something”!! She trough her messenger bag over her shoulder. I smiled...

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Still of the night ch.25

posted by TeamRosalieHale

25: Freewill

They walked up the metal staircase, stepping on a solid metal platform that extended from one 벽 to the next. This room was much brighter, lit 의해 dozens of lights, one area tucked away in a corner was nearly blanketed in darkness. Jack walked half-way across it before he stopped and looked down. “What is this?” she asked though she suspected she knew the answer.
“It’s where the magic happens.” She looked down, several people in white lab coats walked around two people on separate hospital beds, they were motionless and were hooked up to life support systems. They moved...

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Still of the night ch.23

posted by TeamRosalieHale

23: Run to the Hills

IT had caught the right trail, was following it again, swiftly passing into Indiana, Ohio followed 분 later. Yes, IT was getting closer to what master wanted-and this time nothing would stop IT.
Nothing.
Already the carriage had passed into West Virginia, Tristan and Jack were both tense as to what was waiting at home, though they hid it from Rosalie as well as they could. “Are 당신 sure 당신 don’t need to hunt?” Jack asked her for the billionth time.
She sighed but smiled. “I’m sure. The 일 I found 당신 again we had hunted.” She made a face as she said...

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Still of the night ch.18

posted by TeamRosalieHale

18: Home

The 일 was nearly over, 의해 now they had reached their destination: Springfield, Illinois. Several times the carriage had stopped, Tristan leaving for short periods of time, always returning silent, the carriage marched on. He had retired when they were almost in Illinois, coming upon the border between Iowa and Illinois. David had remained with Jack and Rosalie, though he kept to himself, For Whom the 벨 Tolls had been replaced with A Tale of Two Cities. Eventually though he too went to his room, leaving Jack and Rosalie alone.
They were on the couch, Rosalie’s head on Jack’s...

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Still of the night ch.8

posted by TeamRosalieHale

8: Sickness

IT was having a great time, trampling through Mexico, killing 더 많이 undead creatures, then up-wards through Arizona where they were much harder to find. Nevada was not much better so IT turned to California and had so much success there IT considered never leaving.
Until the master spoke to him again. “That’s enough.” IT looked up and growled, having just finished off two IT was craving more. “I need the girl. 당신 must not lose her.” IT rolled IT’s eyes and grunted, sprinting off to show master how fast it could go. “I’m well aware of your talents-I created you....

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Still of the Night Ch.2

posted by TeamRosalieHale

2: The Hunter

The nightmare started on January 13, 2009 and did not end for nearly twenty years. In those twenty years, it is estimated that the extinction of 뱀파이어 became the closest in nearly three centuries. The first 년 alone over 2,000 of them were reported as M.I.A. 또는 deceased.
No one is quite sure what IT was 또는 where IT came from 또는 if IT will come back again. The physical characteristics of IT also changed though those that saw and lived to tell the tale keep their lips closed for fear of starting an unnecessary rouse. Despite the different circumstances in which IT was seen,...

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the search-chapter 1

posted by Fangirl99

As i walk down the street,i wish i was still in bed.Dreaming about the 일 that just ended.Summer vacation

"back to hell,"i said.When i say that,i mean school.
in my books,its basically the same thing.

"hey jamie!"my friend izzy calls from across.

i run down t otalk to her

"hey,"i said,putting my hair back form my face."
"wheres Ashlee?"

"umm,i gotta go,bye!" she ran out of site.

"at lunch,i treid to fine izzy and ask her what the hell happened earlier

"hey,izz"i said,sitting 다음 to her.
"wheres ashlee?"

"um......"she looked like she was gonna vomit 또는 something.i didnt understand why.

"ive been wondering...

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Compassion: 사랑 At Its Highest Stake 1

posted by amethyst44

~Carmen~
I couldn't believe how real the dream felt: the ocean, washing over my skin; the sun pouring heat over my head; the seaweed tickling my feet. It felt 더 많이 of reality in the dream than in the actual 설명 of life, which scared me like hell. The vividness was choking my senses alive, but I was able to hear the cry in the background; yes, very angelic and begging me to come closer, to ease the pain. I tried turning, but my body willingly ignored me, and I flailed about desperately.
And then I saw him.
The black 후드 wrapped around him like a religious cloak, twirling farther down...

Sobriety

posted by I_love_Mikey

Sobriety is beyond a horizon for you,
One 당신 won't be alive to even get to.
Your mind is set to be dead in 10
Years, my fears, my tears,
don't matter, your emotionless, here.

My bothersome phone calls,
"I'm just checking in"
"Yeah, I don't care"
I can't ever win.

My eyes are taped open,
horrific 이미지 replay,
and even when I close them,
they're imprinted in my mind,
they're there to stay.

Blackness engulfs me,
like a whirlpool of nothing,
Your arch nemesis,
Your pal,
Your meaningless suffering.

Why do 당신 do this,
to yourself, and to me?
I don't get why 당신 mess around,
just let yourself be!

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사랑 bites ch. one

posted by Funnygirl77

love bites

사랑 sucks especially when the one 당신 love, couldn't possible 사랑 당신 back. When Kisa and Zack Finley get together, all hell brakes lose. Kisa finds out a striking secret about Zack, and that secret, can be the end of everything good as she knows it. Will Zack and Kisa work threw it? 또는 will it break them up as well.

"Kisa,kisa" 재스민 속, 재 스민 was waving her hand back in forth in front of Kisa's face, Kisa, shook her head. "huh, what?" 재스민 속, 재 스민 rolled her eyes, "I was trying to tell 당신 that me and Blake are going to whacth a movie, and i was wondering if 당신 wanted to go?" Kisa blanked "sure, what...

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Memory's Ch.one

posted by rose12345

I'm haunted by the memory's i hold

"No, NO"! I was having that dream, the one were my best friend drowned last summer. I was eight years old when I went to summer camp I didn't want to go but my mom said that it would be a good experience for me. Mrs. Jackson signed Jamie up, Jamie Jackson was and forever will be my best friend. When it was time to go to camp, we sat on the bus together, A couple of the girls from our school went too. They started to pick on me, and Jamie defended me.Towards the last 일 of summer camp the girls dared Me and Jamie to jump into the lake, I backed out, but Jamie took the dare.
"It's the only...

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Song - Impossible

posted by viju

Impossible

당신 just tear me down,
Throw me all around,
Treat me like a clown.
Hit me on the head,
Push me off the bed,
Keep the 햄스터 (But not me), Well fed.
I know what 당신 think,
And before 당신 blink,
I'm asking 당신 about it.....
You're not wanna answer,
You are such a disaster,
But 당신 have to answer me

(Chorus)
Why do 당신 do this to me?
What is the reason why?
What have I ever done to hurt you?
Why are 당신 abusing,
When my anger, my 사랑 are fusing?
You abuse to me,
But 당신 want me to stay with you.
I'm sick of the abuse,
Wanna turn 당신 onto mute,
Before 당신 blow up and shoot.
To be with u
its impossible

Taking deep breath...

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Vampire Bites and 사랑 Songs

posted by kacimay72293

Chapter One

My name is Kitty Prince. I was borne on July 22, 1809. I was the young daughter of a lord. I was loved 의해 all even though I was the third daughter.
My older sisters were Elizabeth at age twenty-one and Sarah Maine at age nineteen. they were both very beautiful. Elizabeth had golden brown eyes and deep brown hair that curled around her face. She loved 음악 and art. Sarah was very plain with brown eyes and hair. She loved to read hated parties.
I had fair blonde hair like my late mother's and ocean blue eyes. I loved to dance, sing, and grow a garden in the back of our manor. I was...

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Phase.[Poem]

posted by HarryPLover

Here I phase
Here in my old age
Here I run with no place to go
Here I stand with no purpose
Here I am with no show,
No lights,no cameras,no grace
Here I am with this world having me in it's tight embrace.

But I won't give in.
For God Loved me so.

Here I am in this place,
Here I am just watching the world race.
Watching the world fall apart,
Here I am just waiting for a new start.
As this breaks my heart,
I know I will 가입하기 God's cart,his army,his people and I will live in heaven above.

Here I am asking you,
What will 당신 do?
Here I am watching 당신 phase,
Here I am watching 당신 turn to old age.
With no place to go,
Here I am telling 당신 don't want to low.

As we change and as we grow,
This world will face judgment,This I know.
Don't turn to old age,
Don't get 로스트 in the world's maze.
Save 당신 self.
Don't let yourself phase.......

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Whisper: Chapter One

posted by amethyst44

I never knew. My whole life, no one had the courage 또는 the right to tell me what happened. I had to find out the hard way, and that nearly cost me my life.
Last December was an important time for me. I never moved before, and it was all brand new to me. Moving boxes wasn't the challenge. The hardest part was coming into school during the middle of the 년 and not having a clue what the people were like. So far, my only friend here was the next-door neighbor Joselynn, some seventy-year old lady that had her grandkids over as much as possible. My mom encouraged me to meet them and possibly play...