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Firewriter said:
It will depend if 당신 have your story in third 또는 first person view, but it mainly depends on if 당신 want the main character to be on the defense 또는 to be the attacker. If he/she is on the defense, mainly have the attacker come out of nowhere. Describe the best 당신 can how the main character is feeling. Emotionally and physically. Is he panting, sweating, going blurry eyed, fighting strongly 또는 weakly, is he/she feeling scared, emotionally numb, fierce, angry, etc. If your character is the attacker, mainly if 당신 want it to be dramatic, have the opponent appear unexpected of the main character/attacker. If 당신 want to be gruesome, describe things. The scene, is it dark, cobblestone ground, starless cloudy sky, etc. During the fight, is there blood? Are your character holding weapons? If so, what kind and how are they holding it? With a deathly grip, weakly, shakily, innexperienced... etc.
I'm sorry for the super long reply, but I hope i could help.
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