I need some serious help!

Ok so I am going to try and answer this as best i can (its a hard Q.)....

So usually in 글쓰기 levels connect, something that happens seemingly meaningless at the start of the story comes back at the end 또는 middle. If 당신 try and find the layers that connect 당신 can cut them (2 또는 more) out without rupturing the story line.

Planning might also help. If 당신 plan the layers at the start then 당신 don't get the end and have to (try) cut something out. If 당신 plan the layers at the beginning then 당신 also don't have the chance of adding 더 많이 in from the original idea.

Hope this helps....

Hm, this is a complicated question, because 당신 would go about it differently for each story. Since I don't know anything about your story, I can't give 당신 specific examples.

Sit down and look at what 당신 have, and I mean really look. Is there anything that doesn't add to the conflict, plot, 또는 general story arc?

Also, talk to your teacher. See what he/she thinks is so complex about your stories. What he/she thinks maybe completely different from what 당신 think.

youve got so much to say its almost bursting, the teacher doesnt want to be inthralled 의해 your stories; your good, but- teacher got to work on the other 로스트 sheep,mmm simpler sucks,= that wouldnt sell! [and your in training!!!!!!!] will a note from Saint Nick help? id allow your 100 pages, the rest in colour ha he hi ho hu later;-}