I was tired so I went crazy and didn't do anything for grammar. Hehe...
Ok, this is my first fan-fiction, no negative 코멘트 please
"Look, in the pool," Rumblefoot said.
"I see it, its a prophecy," Hollyleaf said.
"Brumble will concour 불, 화재 and Bramble and blood will run through the forest," Hollyleaf recited.
"The pool has spoken!" Jayflight said.
"Tell the medicine cat! A NEW HERO WILL BE BORN!" Rumblefoot shouted.
And a hero was born....
Hope 당신 enjoyed that grammar corrected version!
Ok, this is my first fan-fiction, no negative 코멘트 please
"Look, in the pool," Rumblefoot said.
"I see it, its a prophecy," Hollyleaf said.
"Brumble will concour 불, 화재 and Bramble and blood will run through the forest," Hollyleaf recited.
"The pool has spoken!" Jayflight said.
"Tell the medicine cat! A NEW HERO WILL BE BORN!" Rumblefoot shouted.
And a hero was born....
Hope 당신 enjoyed that grammar corrected version!
The Warriors series is good for early teenagers, Especially
Cat fanatics it has 판타지 elements, and something interesting happens each arc.HOWEVER,it's not good for little kids and those who are sensitive to blood, animal death and violence.
Darknightprincess says that it was a great series the grew up on
Goldfish the Furry said it should be 13 plus which I disagree
I think this book should be 9 plus.
MisakiBeans said that it's ok for teens but to violence for kids.
Binkyhorse said that it has good 글쓰기 the violence is emotional y impactful, depends on the kid.
Cat fanatics it has 판타지 elements, and something interesting happens each arc.HOWEVER,it's not good for little kids and those who are sensitive to blood, animal death and violence.
Darknightprincess says that it was a great series the grew up on
Goldfish the Furry said it should be 13 plus which I disagree
I think this book should be 9 plus.
MisakiBeans said that it's ok for teens but to violence for kids.
Binkyhorse said that it has good 글쓰기 the violence is emotional y impactful, depends on the kid.
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Hello, warrior 고양이 of the world! I wanted to talk about this Warriors roleplaying game. I think it is very fun and 당신 can create your own cat, train to become a warrior with mini games!, train an apprentice, decorate your profile, make warrior 고양이 팬 fiction, have a kit, do this clan 퀴즈 to see which clan 당신 are in 또는 even become leader 또는 deputy of a clan!! Almost all leader spaces are open and it's really awesome! Here is the link to it: link
Please at least look at it!
Please at least look at it!
My name is Thrushpelt. Ever since Bluepaw caught that squirrel, I admired her. When she became the young warrior,Bluefur, I was overjoyed. I became a warrior a week before she was born, and now that we finally shared a den, I had hopes that we would become closer. When Pinestar took her to the Moonstone, i made her nest for her, hoping she'd appreciate it. But when she got back, all she did was murmur a few words to Snowfur and fall asleep.
Every day, she seemed to grow 더 많이 defensive.When Snowfur died, killed on the Thunderpath, the only cat she seemed to care for was her nephew,Whitestorm.Thistleclaw
seemed to hate her, for whatever reason,and she was so wrapped up in hating him back she didn't pay any attention to me....
When dhe realized my feelings for her, she seemed to be trying to avoid me.Then she was haviong Riverclasn kits!
Every day, she seemed to grow 더 많이 defensive.When Snowfur died, killed on the Thunderpath, the only cat she seemed to care for was her nephew,Whitestorm.Thistleclaw
seemed to hate her, for whatever reason,and she was so wrapped up in hating him back she didn't pay any attention to me....
When dhe realized my feelings for her, she seemed to be trying to avoid me.Then she was haviong Riverclasn kits!
