So as of right now I'm haulting all of my fanfictions besides Unpredictable and Undeniable because I have writer's block. I have a new story swimming around in my head but I'm not so sure I should write it because my stories aren't getting as many 코멘트 as All for the 사랑 of Sin. I understand 당신 liked that one best but that doesn't mean 당신 should give up on my other stories. If 당신 are 읽기 them, PLEASE 코멘트 so I will know.
So this 다음 thing is a discription of the one that is swimming around. 코멘트 and let me know if 당신 would like to read it!!!
Edward Cullen is a Junior at Dartmouth along with Emmett Swan. Both are womanizers untill Edward meets Emmett's little Sophomore sister Bella. Something about this girl makes Edward want to change but if a relation ship blooms, will he actually to throw away his old ways, 또는 will Bella's 심장 be broken?
Prologue
I sat on my bed, my hands froze on the keyboard of my laptop. I couldn't think of anything else to write. Sure my paper wasn't due untill 다음 week, but better to have it done now and not have to worry, then keying it at the last minute.
"Ugh!" I groaned and diped my head.
"Just save what 당신 have and get up and do something productive! Go look for cute boys!"
Alice Brandon. My room mate and best friend since Freshman 년 of high school. Both of us were going into the teaching feild- I being a wanting to go into Literatur/English while she was going for Econ.
"How is the world is going to look for cute guys going to make me think about Shakespear?" I asked, saving my work and closing my computer.
"I don't know." She smiled. "I just wanted someone to come with me."
I smiled and rolled my eyes.
She went back to bobbing her foot up and down to the 음악 on her 아이팟 through one 담홍색, 핑크 headphone.
I got up and looked out the window at all the students bustling around campus on a late Saturday morning. Guys were throwing footballs while girls were laying in the sun gushing over magazines.
I was pulled away 의해 my cell phone ringing. I picked it up off the 침대 and saw it was Emmett. "Are 당신 really awake at 11 am on a Saturday?!"
"Har har." He scoffed. "Come down here. I got someone I want 당신 and Alice to meet."
"Kay. Be down in a sec." I hit end and opened my closet. "Alice!"
"Yeah?"
"Emmett wants us to meet someone down at his room. Get some clothes on."
"Kay." She smiled and skipped to her closet.
I put on a pair of short jean shorts with little rips and a loose white tank with sliver beading all over the front. I pulled on my gray ankle boots and turned to see if Alice was ready.
She was wearing 담홍색, 핑크 jean shorts, a white loose tank with 담홍색, 핑크 beading and her white ankle boots.
We both let out a laugh before grabbing our phones and keys to go down to Emmett's.
"After we get out of here, let's go get lunch. I'm starting to get hungry." Alice hit the elevatore button.
"You're always hungry." I laughed and hit the 3.
"Hold the doors!"
Both mine and Alice's hands flew out to stop the closing doors, forcing them back open.
"Thanks." The guy walked into the little room, running his hand through his bronze hair. It was the most stunning shade I had ever seen. It was red with a tent of brown and gold. His eyes caught mine and I had to remind myself to breath. His eyes were the color of spring. I could dround in the green abyss.
Alice nugged me with her elbow. "Y-You're welcome."
He smiled at me, causing me to unwillingly smile back.
"Alice. Alice Brandon." She reached her arm around me and shook his hand.
"Edward. Edward Cullen."
"Bella. Swan." I smiled and nodded.
"Swan? As in Emmett Swan?" He asked.
I rolled my eyes. "As long as you're not compairing, yes."
"I wouldn't think 당신 were a man whore." He chuckled.
"Well, thanks." I laughed.
The ding signaled we were at our floor and the doors opened.
"You live on this floor?" He asked.
"No." I shook my head. "The fifth floor."
"Ah. What are 당신 doing down here?"
"Beller!" Emmett's booming voice kept me from answering. "I thought I heard you."
"Hi, Emmett." I laughed.
"Hey, Em." Alice smiled.
"Hey, Squirt." Emmett's eyes wondered over to Edward. "Cullen. Step away from my sister."
Edward grined and brought his hand his. "I didn't touch her." He turned to me and smiled. "See ya' 'round?"
"Yeah." I smiled bit my lips.
He slapped Emmett on the back before dissapearing into the 3rd floor lounge.
"So." ALice piped in. "Who are we here to meet?"
So this 다음 thing is a discription of the one that is swimming around. 코멘트 and let me know if 당신 would like to read it!!!
Edward Cullen is a Junior at Dartmouth along with Emmett Swan. Both are womanizers untill Edward meets Emmett's little Sophomore sister Bella. Something about this girl makes Edward want to change but if a relation ship blooms, will he actually to throw away his old ways, 또는 will Bella's 심장 be broken?
Prologue
I sat on my bed, my hands froze on the keyboard of my laptop. I couldn't think of anything else to write. Sure my paper wasn't due untill 다음 week, but better to have it done now and not have to worry, then keying it at the last minute.
"Ugh!" I groaned and diped my head.
"Just save what 당신 have and get up and do something productive! Go look for cute boys!"
Alice Brandon. My room mate and best friend since Freshman 년 of high school. Both of us were going into the teaching feild- I being a wanting to go into Literatur/English while she was going for Econ.
"How is the world is going to look for cute guys going to make me think about Shakespear?" I asked, saving my work and closing my computer.
"I don't know." She smiled. "I just wanted someone to come with me."
I smiled and rolled my eyes.
She went back to bobbing her foot up and down to the 음악 on her 아이팟 through one 담홍색, 핑크 headphone.
I got up and looked out the window at all the students bustling around campus on a late Saturday morning. Guys were throwing footballs while girls were laying in the sun gushing over magazines.
I was pulled away 의해 my cell phone ringing. I picked it up off the 침대 and saw it was Emmett. "Are 당신 really awake at 11 am on a Saturday?!"
"Har har." He scoffed. "Come down here. I got someone I want 당신 and Alice to meet."
"Kay. Be down in a sec." I hit end and opened my closet. "Alice!"
"Yeah?"
"Emmett wants us to meet someone down at his room. Get some clothes on."
"Kay." She smiled and skipped to her closet.
I put on a pair of short jean shorts with little rips and a loose white tank with sliver beading all over the front. I pulled on my gray ankle boots and turned to see if Alice was ready.
She was wearing 담홍색, 핑크 jean shorts, a white loose tank with 담홍색, 핑크 beading and her white ankle boots.
We both let out a laugh before grabbing our phones and keys to go down to Emmett's.
"After we get out of here, let's go get lunch. I'm starting to get hungry." Alice hit the elevatore button.
"You're always hungry." I laughed and hit the 3.
"Hold the doors!"
Both mine and Alice's hands flew out to stop the closing doors, forcing them back open.
"Thanks." The guy walked into the little room, running his hand through his bronze hair. It was the most stunning shade I had ever seen. It was red with a tent of brown and gold. His eyes caught mine and I had to remind myself to breath. His eyes were the color of spring. I could dround in the green abyss.
Alice nugged me with her elbow. "Y-You're welcome."
He smiled at me, causing me to unwillingly smile back.
"Alice. Alice Brandon." She reached her arm around me and shook his hand.
"Edward. Edward Cullen."
"Bella. Swan." I smiled and nodded.
"Swan? As in Emmett Swan?" He asked.
I rolled my eyes. "As long as you're not compairing, yes."
"I wouldn't think 당신 were a man whore." He chuckled.
"Well, thanks." I laughed.
The ding signaled we were at our floor and the doors opened.
"You live on this floor?" He asked.
"No." I shook my head. "The fifth floor."
"Ah. What are 당신 doing down here?"
"Beller!" Emmett's booming voice kept me from answering. "I thought I heard you."
"Hi, Emmett." I laughed.
"Hey, Em." Alice smiled.
"Hey, Squirt." Emmett's eyes wondered over to Edward. "Cullen. Step away from my sister."
Edward grined and brought his hand his. "I didn't touch her." He turned to me and smiled. "See ya' 'round?"
"Yeah." I smiled bit my lips.
He slapped Emmett on the back before dissapearing into the 3rd floor lounge.
"So." ALice piped in. "Who are we here to meet?"
i was in the car fast alseep. when Phil and Renee were in the front. i was going to meet my sister Bella and her husband Edward also Renessmen. i woke up "hey Karina were almost there" said Phil. I rolled my eyes. i saw a white house. i saw Bella and Edward there i got out of the car and ran to them "BELLA EDWARD!!!" i scream. i ran to them and gave them a hug. i saw a girl with brown hair "renessmen." i said "yes" she said i gave her a hug. "wow you're so grown up are 당신 like 13 또는 what?" "i'm 17" she said "come one the rest are dying to see you" she said."hi hi" i said "AHHH KARINA" yelled Alice "hi" i gave them a hug
Okay so I'm not one of those 팬 who wants the film to be exactly like the book-no offence to anyone- because I know thats just not going to happen.
But I was watching the new Twilight trailer and saw this:
Don't 당신 think it's a little weird that all three cars are there, I thought the Cullens didn't want to bring any attention to themselves.Now I know all 영화 aren't like the 책 they're based on, Harry Potter is a great example of that. But I thought the Cullens wanting to keep themselves inconspicuous was an obvious fact that ran through the book.
I know other people have noticed changes in the movie too- like Bella having her 재킷, 자 켓 at the restaurant, and that they've changed the name of the restaurant.
I just wanted to know what other people felt about this. Either way I'm still going to see the movie, I can't wait. But does anyone think these changes will affect the experience?
But I was watching the new Twilight trailer and saw this:
Don't 당신 think it's a little weird that all three cars are there, I thought the Cullens didn't want to bring any attention to themselves.Now I know all 영화 aren't like the 책 they're based on, Harry Potter is a great example of that. But I thought the Cullens wanting to keep themselves inconspicuous was an obvious fact that ran through the book.
I know other people have noticed changes in the movie too- like Bella having her 재킷, 자 켓 at the restaurant, and that they've changed the name of the restaurant.
I just wanted to know what other people felt about this. Either way I'm still going to see the movie, I can't wait. But does anyone think these changes will affect the experience?
So Like now EVERYONE in my school is 읽기 twilight when I read it like before they even started to film the movie. So what what's my point? Well, my point is that before before Breaking Dawn came out, when some was 읽기 the 책 it was like 당신 would talk to them and 당신 would talk like you've been 프렌즈 forever when you've just meet the person. Now I see someone 읽기 twilight and I eathier get tried of seeing them 또는 get sick. Ok maybe not get sick but still 당신 can't talk to the person like 당신 used to talk to them, all enthusiastic and excited! And for me most of the time the real exciting stuff is in the movie and the people who read the 책 nowa days don't know alot stuff about the movie. I believe that the people on the fansites are the REAL CRAZY fans, because if 당신 ask anybody else what Spunk Randsom means, they wouldn't know. Anyway i just feel like it's so not exciting anymore....