The first 팬 Fiction story I ever wrote...PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE commit...ID care if the 코멘트 is good 또는 bad i need to know, i can handle it. :)
Rosalie's POV
I was in my room sobbing over my old life and the the fact I will be cold and hard forever. A knock at my door broke my thoughts. I quickly pulled myself together and said, "come in." The door opened wide enough to revel Edward, my brother for all intensive purposes. Edward was tall and always looked to have a sadden, i'm going to hurt 당신 if 당신 say the wrong thing to melook on his face. His hair stuck up every which a way, people we went to school with here in Astoria say he has hair like Elvis. He slowly stepped through the doorway I looked at him and said "Yes Edward, is anything wrong?"
He looked at me for a 분 and said, "you need to hunt, your eyes are starting to get dark and everyone's worried because 당신 haven't been in a while."
"Ok Edward, I will go hunting." I told him getting off my 침대 and following him down stairs.
When I got down stairs I saw Esme, my mother, she has light brown hair that hung in curls just below her shoulders. I call her my mother because that is what she is, she is a better mother than my old one, not that I didn't 사랑 her though. "We are going hunting, we will be back soon." I said grabbing my 재킷, 자 켓 out of the closet.
"Alright, Carlisle should be returning from hunting himself." Esme said in return.
I smiled at her and followed Edward out the door. As soon as we reached the edge of the woods we both began to run. Edward stopped suddenly. What could possibly be wrong i thought.
"A herd of deer." he answered the thought that was in my head. It gets really annoy that he can read my every thoughts. "Tell me about." He said as he went after the buck that just emerged into the clearing in front of us.
A smaller female emerged behind it and I ran after. I put broke its neck so it can't fight and it won't feel anymore pain and slowly sank my teeth into its neck. The warm blood trickled out of the wound my teeth created and down my throat.
"I'm going back home." Edward said as I rose from the deer.
"Ok, I'm going to hunt a little longer." I responded.
Edward started running towards home, at that time, I had no idea of the tragedy of my decision.
Rosalie's POV
I was in my room sobbing over my old life and the the fact I will be cold and hard forever. A knock at my door broke my thoughts. I quickly pulled myself together and said, "come in." The door opened wide enough to revel Edward, my brother for all intensive purposes. Edward was tall and always looked to have a sadden, i'm going to hurt 당신 if 당신 say the wrong thing to melook on his face. His hair stuck up every which a way, people we went to school with here in Astoria say he has hair like Elvis. He slowly stepped through the doorway I looked at him and said "Yes Edward, is anything wrong?"
He looked at me for a 분 and said, "you need to hunt, your eyes are starting to get dark and everyone's worried because 당신 haven't been in a while."
"Ok Edward, I will go hunting." I told him getting off my 침대 and following him down stairs.
When I got down stairs I saw Esme, my mother, she has light brown hair that hung in curls just below her shoulders. I call her my mother because that is what she is, she is a better mother than my old one, not that I didn't 사랑 her though. "We are going hunting, we will be back soon." I said grabbing my 재킷, 자 켓 out of the closet.
"Alright, Carlisle should be returning from hunting himself." Esme said in return.
I smiled at her and followed Edward out the door. As soon as we reached the edge of the woods we both began to run. Edward stopped suddenly. What could possibly be wrong i thought.
"A herd of deer." he answered the thought that was in my head. It gets really annoy that he can read my every thoughts. "Tell me about." He said as he went after the buck that just emerged into the clearing in front of us.
A smaller female emerged behind it and I ran after. I put broke its neck so it can't fight and it won't feel anymore pain and slowly sank my teeth into its neck. The warm blood trickled out of the wound my teeth created and down my throat.
"I'm going back home." Edward said as I rose from the deer.
"Ok, I'm going to hunt a little longer." I responded.
Edward started running towards home, at that time, I had no idea of the tragedy of my decision.
~~Unthinkable~~(Alec Voluri Story)
Characters
Name:Scarlett Rosalia Brandon aka Meckie
Age: 15
Hair: Black, Wavy and Shoulder length
Eyes: A 제비꽃, 바이올렛 beautiful colour..but hides them with contacts.
Race: Human(later changed)
Powers: Can control a person/vampire’s mind
Extra: Is moving to her Aunt’s place in Forks, Washington
Name: Alec ( Volturi)
Age: 375 years (looks 16-ish)
Hair: Brown, Short, Shaggy.
Eyes: Mesmerizing Scarlett ( I know its her name)
Race: Vampire
Powers: Can cut off anyone’s senses.
All the other characters are known: The Volturi, The Cullens,The Pack(two packs). They all belong to Stephanie Meyer. I own Scarlett aka Meckie and others related to her. Some of them are real. They are my friends. I LUUURRRVVVEEE <3 <3 <3 them!!
Characters
Name:Scarlett Rosalia Brandon aka Meckie
Age: 15
Hair: Black, Wavy and Shoulder length
Eyes: A 제비꽃, 바이올렛 beautiful colour..but hides them with contacts.
Race: Human(later changed)
Powers: Can control a person/vampire’s mind
Extra: Is moving to her Aunt’s place in Forks, Washington
Name: Alec ( Volturi)
Age: 375 years (looks 16-ish)
Hair: Brown, Short, Shaggy.
Eyes: Mesmerizing Scarlett ( I know its her name)
Race: Vampire
Powers: Can cut off anyone’s senses.
All the other characters are known: The Volturi, The Cullens,The Pack(two packs). They all belong to Stephanie Meyer. I own Scarlett aka Meckie and others related to her. Some of them are real. They are my friends. I LUUURRRVVVEEE <3 <3 <3 them!!
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The Twilight Saga: Breaking Dawn - Part 2 will be released into theaters on November 16, 2012, a full 년 after Part 1, according to Variety!
It was announced back in June that the film will be 스플릿, 분할 into two parts, which will be shot simultaneously starting this fall in Vancouver, Canada and Baton Rouge, Louisiana.
Bill Condon (Dreamgirls) will direct both films with Kristen Stewart, Robert Pattinson, and Taylor Lautner reprising their roles in the hit series
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It was announced back in June that the film will be 스플릿, 분할 into two parts, which will be shot simultaneously starting this fall in Vancouver, Canada and Baton Rouge, Louisiana.
Bill Condon (Dreamgirls) will direct both films with Kristen Stewart, Robert Pattinson, and Taylor Lautner reprising their roles in the hit series
link
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