Well I promised this tomorrow but I finished it and well here it is. It's Bree tanner in diegos point of view. Going from where he left her his final night with her. I wrote this fir fun and have only wrote this one. Here's the link about me explaining what I am doing: link
And all that I am also continuing midnight sun 당신 first timers 읽기 my 팬 fiction. Umm...what next? Oh yeah no copyright intended just free weighting. Oh yeah one side note this is a rough draft. It is not edited of anything. I just wrote it for kicks and it is my 다음 project I am working on. So 당신 will see this draft again at the end of his story I will write so many moons from now. But 다음 time it will be very different. I am ninety six percent sure of that. Diego is one of my 가장 좋아하는 characters of the twilight saga and I thought he deserved his own story and hopefully 당신 can relate to him and learn to 사랑 him as much as I do. Well sorry for the long introduction. Umm please 코멘트 and critique I like that stuff well thanks for 읽기 here's the story. Please remember not edited and I am sure it will be different the 다음 time I put it up. So please don't be too harsh. Here it is
I frowned as I turned around an ran from Bree. I felt bad about tricking her, but I did know if this turned badly...well Riley wouldn't hurt me, but I didn't know about Bree. Riley trusted me. I would make it up to her later. I was about to turn around and maybe talk to Riley tomorrow. I thought about our new hand shake all 일 and couldn't wait to show her tomorrow...- "Diego?" Riley asked, interrupting my thoughts. Crap! He was with her. I looked in her deep red eyes, her expression menacing "I knew someone was spying on us! 당신 there!-" she grabbed my 셔츠 with her fist and yanked me up to her, her eyes only inches from mine-"What did 당신 hear?! What did 당신 see?!" she growled, her voice was still, high. Almost a shriek "n-nothing, I just wanted to ask Riley about some theories" I said, for the first time truly terrified, but she could tell I was lying. My voice was so shaken it gave away my lie. She threw me on the ground and turned on Riley "So, tell me Riley, 당신 can always really distract them with thirst?" she growled. He looked at me quickly, then back at Victoria "umm..." he said ,dumbfounded. I guessed "I thought he was, but he is almost a year...he-" "I guess 당신 thought wrong" she said interrupting him "you" she said "get up!" she yelled and grabbed me again "your coming with us, 당신 are going to tell me everything, and I will find out one way 또는 another!" she said.
We walked...Until we got to the log 선실, 캐빈 then we stopped inside, she slammed the door behind her. Then the lights came on, she glared at me for a long 분 "what all did 당신 hear?" she said, I thought about all the things we saw and what I was going to tell her. She slammed me in the wall, hard "what did 당신 hear!?" she yelled. I looked at Riley, betrayed. He looked at me apologetically while he did nothing to stop her "umm...well I saw those people in the dark cloaks. I was following Riley to tell him that I found out the sun didn't hurt. I didn't mean to" I said. She smiled at me, her grin harsh. She wasn't happy, she was menacing "oh...I think 당신 did, and 당신 will pay! Riley!" she yelled. She startled Riley "hold him down, I am going to get the truth" she said. Riley hesitated for a moment "fine then, but 당신 either lose him, 또는 me" she snapped. Then he slowly closed his eyes for a long minute. In that one minute, he turned to stone. He wasn't the Riley I knew anymore. He opened his eyes and they looked like actual rubies, hard and cold? Yes. The Riley I knew and trusted was gone.
He walked sullenly toward me. For one brief 초 his eyes looked apollogetic, but then went hard again. He held my arms down, pinned against the 벽 "now,what were your theories?" she asked "we-we can go out in the sun, w-without being burned...the sun doesn't hurt" I said "but it does burn" she hissed picking up my leg with one arm, with the other she slammed her elbow into it hard. It felt like she set it on 불, 화재 Riley shuddered, as I saw my unattached leg get thrown into another 벽 I screamed. "Riley" I screamed, why was he doing this. I struggled to get out of his grasp. He did not look at me. He looked at the ground while holding me. He did not react to my voice "was anyone with you, while 당신 were listening?" she asked. I would not tell her about Bree, I would be killed a thousand times before, SHE knew. I shook my head "wait" Riley said, his voice cold "he was with one girl yesterday, all day. In one of his hideouts. I think her name was Bree" Riley said "oh, well who is that? And what is this hideout?" she said looking in my eyes for 답변 "it's a cave, the sun was coming up, and I was trying to be responsible. I took her with me. She doesn't know about the sun, she doesn't know that I was listening. All we did that 일 was talk...about our walt life, before now. We became 프렌즈 and that's all. I even finished making our hand shake. But we decided to keep our distance when we got back and would want to hunt together. I even really, really like her. I have no clue about her but that's all. She doesn't know anything" I said really fast.
I waited as she took that in slowly. She pulled off my other leg and threw it to another 벽 "what did 당신 hear tonight?" she said calmly, but the calm didn't touch her eyes "I heard everything the people in cloaks said, and before that. Nothing else. I was wanting to tell Riley about the sun, that's all" I said but she didn't believe that I wasn't trying to spy she grabbed my forefinger and moved it around "and 당신 weren't trying to spy on us?" she asked "no" I said. She ripped it off, the pain, the 불, 화재 burning stronger. "Are 당신 sure?" she asked "no" I said again. She ripped off another one. I screamed and struggled. I needed to leave now, but Riley was stronger. Especially since I was weak. She ripped off three 더 많이 "you were spying on us weren't you?!" she yelled and ripped off my other hand. I screamed and confessed "yes, I was curious" I screamed some more. She smiled "I knew it." she grinned bigger. Riley let me fall. I screamed in pain, she walked slowly closer to me and from the corner of my eyes I saw Riley mouth "I am sorry". She stopped less than an inch from me and said "your services are no longer needed. Thanks for everything" she said. Then put both hands on the side of my head. Ready to rip my head off.The last thing I saw when I closed my eyes...before the blackness came over was Bree. I closed my eyes and waited for the final fire, the large amount of pain and burning to come to end. Along with my short 초 life as Diego.
Again not edited and please 코멘트 I hope 당신 enjoyed this. Umm see 당신 friday for those of 당신 who read a lot of my writings
And all that I am also continuing midnight sun 당신 first timers 읽기 my 팬 fiction. Umm...what next? Oh yeah no copyright intended just free weighting. Oh yeah one side note this is a rough draft. It is not edited of anything. I just wrote it for kicks and it is my 다음 project I am working on. So 당신 will see this draft again at the end of his story I will write so many moons from now. But 다음 time it will be very different. I am ninety six percent sure of that. Diego is one of my 가장 좋아하는 characters of the twilight saga and I thought he deserved his own story and hopefully 당신 can relate to him and learn to 사랑 him as much as I do. Well sorry for the long introduction. Umm please 코멘트 and critique I like that stuff well thanks for 읽기 here's the story. Please remember not edited and I am sure it will be different the 다음 time I put it up. So please don't be too harsh. Here it is
I frowned as I turned around an ran from Bree. I felt bad about tricking her, but I did know if this turned badly...well Riley wouldn't hurt me, but I didn't know about Bree. Riley trusted me. I would make it up to her later. I was about to turn around and maybe talk to Riley tomorrow. I thought about our new hand shake all 일 and couldn't wait to show her tomorrow...- "Diego?" Riley asked, interrupting my thoughts. Crap! He was with her. I looked in her deep red eyes, her expression menacing "I knew someone was spying on us! 당신 there!-" she grabbed my 셔츠 with her fist and yanked me up to her, her eyes only inches from mine-"What did 당신 hear?! What did 당신 see?!" she growled, her voice was still, high. Almost a shriek "n-nothing, I just wanted to ask Riley about some theories" I said, for the first time truly terrified, but she could tell I was lying. My voice was so shaken it gave away my lie. She threw me on the ground and turned on Riley "So, tell me Riley, 당신 can always really distract them with thirst?" she growled. He looked at me quickly, then back at Victoria "umm..." he said ,dumbfounded. I guessed "I thought he was, but he is almost a year...he-" "I guess 당신 thought wrong" she said interrupting him "you" she said "get up!" she yelled and grabbed me again "your coming with us, 당신 are going to tell me everything, and I will find out one way 또는 another!" she said.
We walked...Until we got to the log 선실, 캐빈 then we stopped inside, she slammed the door behind her. Then the lights came on, she glared at me for a long 분 "what all did 당신 hear?" she said, I thought about all the things we saw and what I was going to tell her. She slammed me in the wall, hard "what did 당신 hear!?" she yelled. I looked at Riley, betrayed. He looked at me apologetically while he did nothing to stop her "umm...well I saw those people in the dark cloaks. I was following Riley to tell him that I found out the sun didn't hurt. I didn't mean to" I said. She smiled at me, her grin harsh. She wasn't happy, she was menacing "oh...I think 당신 did, and 당신 will pay! Riley!" she yelled. She startled Riley "hold him down, I am going to get the truth" she said. Riley hesitated for a moment "fine then, but 당신 either lose him, 또는 me" she snapped. Then he slowly closed his eyes for a long minute. In that one minute, he turned to stone. He wasn't the Riley I knew anymore. He opened his eyes and they looked like actual rubies, hard and cold? Yes. The Riley I knew and trusted was gone.
He walked sullenly toward me. For one brief 초 his eyes looked apollogetic, but then went hard again. He held my arms down, pinned against the 벽 "now,what were your theories?" she asked "we-we can go out in the sun, w-without being burned...the sun doesn't hurt" I said "but it does burn" she hissed picking up my leg with one arm, with the other she slammed her elbow into it hard. It felt like she set it on 불, 화재 Riley shuddered, as I saw my unattached leg get thrown into another 벽 I screamed. "Riley" I screamed, why was he doing this. I struggled to get out of his grasp. He did not look at me. He looked at the ground while holding me. He did not react to my voice "was anyone with you, while 당신 were listening?" she asked. I would not tell her about Bree, I would be killed a thousand times before, SHE knew. I shook my head "wait" Riley said, his voice cold "he was with one girl yesterday, all day. In one of his hideouts. I think her name was Bree" Riley said "oh, well who is that? And what is this hideout?" she said looking in my eyes for 답변 "it's a cave, the sun was coming up, and I was trying to be responsible. I took her with me. She doesn't know about the sun, she doesn't know that I was listening. All we did that 일 was talk...about our walt life, before now. We became 프렌즈 and that's all. I even finished making our hand shake. But we decided to keep our distance when we got back and would want to hunt together. I even really, really like her. I have no clue about her but that's all. She doesn't know anything" I said really fast.
I waited as she took that in slowly. She pulled off my other leg and threw it to another 벽 "what did 당신 hear tonight?" she said calmly, but the calm didn't touch her eyes "I heard everything the people in cloaks said, and before that. Nothing else. I was wanting to tell Riley about the sun, that's all" I said but she didn't believe that I wasn't trying to spy she grabbed my forefinger and moved it around "and 당신 weren't trying to spy on us?" she asked "no" I said. She ripped it off, the pain, the 불, 화재 burning stronger. "Are 당신 sure?" she asked "no" I said again. She ripped off another one. I screamed and struggled. I needed to leave now, but Riley was stronger. Especially since I was weak. She ripped off three 더 많이 "you were spying on us weren't you?!" she yelled and ripped off my other hand. I screamed and confessed "yes, I was curious" I screamed some more. She smiled "I knew it." she grinned bigger. Riley let me fall. I screamed in pain, she walked slowly closer to me and from the corner of my eyes I saw Riley mouth "I am sorry". She stopped less than an inch from me and said "your services are no longer needed. Thanks for everything" she said. Then put both hands on the side of my head. Ready to rip my head off.The last thing I saw when I closed my eyes...before the blackness came over was Bree. I closed my eyes and waited for the final fire, the large amount of pain and burning to come to end. Along with my short 초 life as Diego.
Again not edited and please 코멘트 I hope 당신 enjoyed this. Umm see 당신 friday for those of 당신 who read a lot of my writings
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Stop looking at the abs n stare at the talent!!!!!!
As soon as 당신 hear Twilight 당신 think "OoOoohh Jacob the hot guy" and dont lie and said u never thought of that
He didnt get in the movie becuase hes HOOOT!!! He got there becuase he was the best resemblance to the T.S Jacob, He also got there becuase he worked in many good 영화 like Sharkboy&Lavagirl & Cheaper 의해 the Dozen,He also is a ver good actor for the age of 16
So 다음 time 당신 hear "Jacob" Dont think of the abs just stare right into the god-given talent
With the most respect & 사랑 for twilight fans=^_^=
LOVE,PEACE,HAPPINESS
SARITASWIMS AKA SARA