I really like it. I'm still trying to figure out where you're coming from plotwise, but it's reay well written.

really liked !! go airin !! hope you post soon :D

awesome

amazing. far better than a lot of others ive read. my only problem was it was really bothering me how u kept calling the ball point pen a "ballpen" i dunno why.

that was amazing!!! i loved it and it was amazing really good ! are you sure its your first time cause it really good !!:DD cant wait till you post again !!:DDD

Nice. I dont really know about all minerva/Athena children having blonde hair and grey eyes, but I don't have any criticism about your writing.
Ps. Just curious, what country are you from where they call it a ballpen?

great

AMAZING

that was very good! Sorry i would have normallly said more, but i am a person jackson fan, so i only read fanfics that are about percy!

You weren't kidding about it being long, but I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!! It was way better than anything else I've ever read. I didn't see any flaws in this. None whatsoever. I loved it, and I can't wait to read more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :) :) :)

that was so good!!!! so um post soon!

i loved it post soon!!

Please post soon !!!

kay....

i love the chapters sorry i have not commented i would have but when you changed titles i got confused and thought it was something else anyway cant wait till you post your chapters have been really good !!!:DDDDDDDD