Sonic 팬 Characters Article: Weeding out Gary Sue's- 타코 Test I

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posted by thetacoman

Tell me if 당신 see MS qualities in this new character.
Name-Festus Pyre
Age-28
Birth date-796 6CE*(1996)
*aging increased due to interdimensional travel*
Birthplace- San Fransisco, California
Eyes- brown
Hair- red
FATAL FLAWS-
is considered an outcast. Has ADHD and can rarely focus, and has shattered personalities due to a car crash when he was young.
Talents-
none of relevance to society. Can smith metal, but is mediocre at best.
Friends-
his only friend died in the car crash aforementioned.
Enemies-
most of the school. Most notable are the snooty twins "Maryland and Danithan Suella" the two have supposedly nothing wrong with their life.
Family- adoptive parent Robyn Nera. Did I mention the car crash? It was bad.
Other Notes- has created a 판타지 world called "Nimea", often wishes it was true. Has suspicions, but cannot prove it. Robyn is very lazy and forces him to do everything for her. His old family was abusive too.

DID 타코 MAKE GARY SUE?
TELL MEEEE!

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The Rasoul Saga: Chapter 7 (Part 2)

posted by mephiles97

As soon as Kyle turned his head, Casey had already thrown the door open. Ira stood there a bit stunned, holding a large plastic bag with a warm Italian scent inside. “List-“

Ira walked passed Casey before the ticked girlfriend could continue and quickly sat the bag on the Dining Room Table. She then turned around and gave Kyle a large hug. “Hey.” She greeted. Kyle was a little stunned and dared not hug back, but was able to reply with “H-h-hi, Ira…”

“Who’s your friend?” Ira asked, turning to Casey.

“I’m his GIRLFRIEND…” Casey growled.

As soon as the sound echoed...

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:::Character Quick-looks: Trisell Chronos:::

posted by TakTheFox

So who’s Trisell Chronos?
FLASHBACKS AND SPOILERS OF DOOM!!!!

Back in A VERY LONG TIME 이전 IN THE PAST SOMEWHERE, there was the Zonac Council, of which only one person survived, to later be known as The Hidden (this is not Trisell Chronos). But before they… disappeared, the Seven Servers were created.

~Mistrum Pyro
~Trixin Lighten
~Tearence Aguan
~Luner (yes that’s how I spell it) Herban
~Midnight Psych
~Revten Crystiline (who would later become Revten Tess)
~And Trisell Chronos

There were other servers who were meant to be brought through as well, but sadly the council was unable to do this before...

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What if BATTLE: Friz vs. Torch Part 2

posted by FrizTHedgehog

Torch: Ah, Friz I've been expecting you, What are 당신 here for!
Friz: Quit the small talk I'm here to dethrone you.
Torch: Oh really?!
Friz: *draws Katana* Yes
Torch: *draws Flaming Broadsword* Then let's see if that's true
Friz: *comes at Torch with the sword*
*Torch blocks* *Friz punches Torch while he's blocking*
Torch: AGH!
Friz: 당신 have to be faster to get a hit on me!
Torch: But Friz, 당신 forget you're in my castle! *Uses flame around him to grow (fire control enhances 의해 x5)*
Friz: Chaos Spear! *lauches chaos spears at Torch*
*Torch dodges*
Torch: I may not be the fastest, but I have brains!...

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Blood Doll's Story

posted by ShadowWolf337

Okay before I get to the story I'm gonna tell 당신 what Blood Doll is. Blood Doll is just as the name states Blood but as a plushie. Like the "cursed" Tails Doll, Blood Doll is a cursed toy. Blood Doll kills ONLY the one who treats him badly, but he is really nice and will play games with anyone who takes him as a toy. Now onward to the story!

Its a sunny 일 on Mobius the kids are outside playing. A young hedgehog 의해 the name of Shift sits in a 나무, 트리 with a plushie sitting 의해 him. The plushie looks up at him "Lets play something Shift!" said the plushie said "Okay B" Shift said grabing Blood...

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Guardien 앤젤

posted by TakTheFox

Guardian Angel

“So much has happened. Such… terrible things. First Commander St. John… betrayed the Freedom Fighters, and helped Ixis Naugus take control, AS KING! How could everyone be so gullible? Did they forget all the terrible things that Naugus had done before? I haven’t. I just came back from seeing Commander D’coolette. He’s… very hurt. I only got a glimpse, because the nurse said that she didn’t want any 더 많이 people crashing their heads into his bed… which was kind of weird. The time-traveling hedgehog was here a little bit ago. Silver is what I think they called him....

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Gracie the hedgehog

posted by snootygirl50701

Gracie the hedgehog

Grace the hedgehog
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Species: hedgehog/ under ground
Name: Grace Nokia Dash(or Gracie)
Genre: female
Things she loves to do: date,hack into things,dump boys hearts,gymnastics, and many more....
Things she hates: Shadow the hedgehog (when bossy 또는 naggy), Silver the hedgehog ( she has a crush on him that's why and she thinks that he is her 로스트 boyfriend : Spike), Her father ( most of all), and many more...
Details of past: she is the princess of an 언더월드 of evil with her father (king) as a evil bastard! She continuosly was beatened...

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Being dead aint easy. Part 1

posted by CosmoLuvsTails

Gwen Prower woke up one morning...hang on...when was she last awake?...5 years ago, as long as she remembered. She rubbed her eyes and it looked that she had been buried alive. She tried to bang against the wood of the coffin, but her arm went through it.

'...That's not supposed to happen!...' The 여우 said to herself. She put her other arm through, and sat up. She got out and it was like she was swimming through the dirt to the surface of the grass. She breathed in the fresh air. It was so relaxing. A kid nearby saw her and ran away, screaming. Gwen chose to ignore her.

Gwen thought to herself....

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랜덤 Fanfiction :D (can't come up with a title)

posted by NyoHetaliaCreed

Cora has always had one hell of a set of ears.

Though it was rather obvious she'd have a good sense of hearing, being a chincilla. She always preferred using them for rather undesirable uses. Eavesdropping, her common hobby involving her large ears. They were always alert for something to drop in on, no matter what the topic was, as long as it caught her interest. Even when already in conversation with another, her brain seemed to able to multi-task. One half of her brain listening to the current conversation, the other half listening in on another. Only people who knew her well and were extremely...

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I Miss 당신 xX Safaia Sky's Tale Xx

posted by Akiko_the_Cagon

The fall air was quickly turning into frost bitten, I had not long before my clan mates would start passing from diseases from the white season. The wind chill made it seem like -60 degrees, but I had to help. I just had to. My body ached to be sandwhiched between two deer furs and near an open fire. I heard a gun shot ring through the snow. Dragon hunters. I had to get back before they found me, 또는 either way, somebody'd die.
Too late. A couple of dragon hunters armed with almost every gun, 십자가, 크로스 bow and sword weapon imaginable. I tried flying off with my ice blue wings, but I failed, a hunter shot at my left wing with a midnight black 십자가, 크로스 bow. I started to fall, but I started running as soon as I hit the snow, carrying a 물고기 between my fangs. How the clan leader would be so unpleased frightened me, but not as much as the hunters.

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Update for The Quest for Power

posted by aly001

Ok ppl I'm going to Chang the whole story and put it on a another club called "Emily the hegcat and other 팬 charaters" ok. And also I need help on it so help me please! So just go to "Emily the hegcat and other 팬 charaters".
link so please be nice and do not quisons Please! Thax for reading!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Now I'm going to put/say 랜덤 shit!$&()-$;&£,!+,! n njshejnsjn!-!!boanN!in njkJ$€&&:&:!!.! -! Nnnzn!!nn!!nNnjj&jNn£&&€$$$$€$$$$€$!€$€!$€$$$€$$$$€$€$$€$€$$€$&&&&$€€$€$!!€$€_€€$£&£&£&&££&&jajjjJ$n j nN!£&&££&$$$:;$'-hbwjjdjjJ£~€£.£€~€~€<€£€{*|€€€~!><!~>€€~€€|€€€~€€€\€~£€|€|€|€€|++[£+==[+€^<*<€£¥|££|£~££~€£~¥]•[=[¥€*|•[=[¥££~'fheniiwkkajjfhdjjfhrjjfjjq. Thax for waching!=D

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LOLXD MYYY TUUUUUURN!!! A gift to four people I like.

posted by ripperoo1

Alright, this is just a gift to four people I like on fanpop. But I'm not telling who they are. 당신 gotta geuss. LET DA GAMES BEGIN!

1. 당신 were the first person who supported me on fanpop. We wee good friends, and your character was in a lot of my stories. Unfortunately, 당신 left fanpop. MAH FIRST FRIEND. I hope 당신 come back. *Starts singing* BABEH, COME BACK!!

2. 당신 were also one of the first people to support Invader ZIM the Hedgehog. However, i learned 더 많이 about your characters and found that your characters might just be a little bit too overpowered sometimes. Eventually I got over that...

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Rainy Days Chapter 11: Sea of despair

posted by -Wednesday-

{u r now 읽기 the worst fanfic in the history of terrible fanfic overjoy!}
DONT NOT READ THIS IF U HAVE NOT READ CHAPTER 1-10

the sea of despair was a dreadful place. it had black sand and the water was black too. and it had huts where the sand ended with long uncut grass. we walk down from our place where we were looking at the 바닷가, 비치 and looked out over the sea. "a storm is coming" said arc. "well we all know wat that means" i said. u could see the dark 구름, 클라우드 miles away at sea, those clouds were most likey filled with lightning. the thought of all that wonderful electricity made sparks come...

Meet Up Roleplay 설명

posted by TakTheFox

So we’ve gotten about five 또는 so new users on the club recently, and that’s great. Ever since the big explosion months back things were rather quiet, but it looks like they’re picking up. I’m hoping to keep the new guys around, and that everyone gets to know each other well enough, as well as their characters and such, so this roleplay is mainly for the people new to our club.

Basically 당신 can choose which character to meet of mine and a story will occur depending on the character 당신 choose. Again this is mainly for people new to our club, but if 당신 have not met these characters you...

Tryvor's Character Bio (update 24/06/2014)

posted by Rachel_Savaya

(okay, so....thought i had one 더 많이 일 of school to play with 당신 guys, but evidently not. -.-* someone always has to ruin my plans..... unbelievable....anyways, awhile back i 게시됨 a mystery person picture. I 게시됨 the coloured ID verson of him, so now here's the bio that goes with him. He's my newest, and I'm actually really happy to how he turned out. He's gonna be really useful in the Parue/Kayverian war.)

Tryvor's Character Bio:
Name: Tryvor Jallen

Age: 18

Birthday: December 18th

Species: Kayverian.

Height: 3'5.7"

Weight: 119lbs

Powers/Abilities: Originating from the crescent moon, Tryvor's...

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SlenderFox and the infinty tree:Part 2

posted by Mapware3640

The madness...The madness.Ⓧ

Journeying through the woods in 검색 of notes on the fixed time limit,MTL came across a corpse hanging in the tree...the corpse was holding a note...but it would be disrespect to the dead to remove the note.MTL took the note(1/8Ⓧ)...Then suddenly the owl returned...it said "Who-who,to survive in these woods,you must make the right choices,one little slip up spells your demise...here,take this." the owl gave MTL a shed key.the owl said "That is all the help I can give you,good luck...and watch out for "him".Ⓧ"...the owl flew away.

MTL went to the shed,it was...