what do 당신 guys tk about this first line of this new poem that i'm writing?

당신 tell me that 당신
are forever haunted
의해 the memories that
controls every-part of
your, body, mind, and heart.
 eriemorgan posted over a year ago
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MidnightTokyo47 said:
I think it's beautiful!
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Kat-chan said:
That is absolutely deep and gorgeous.
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FlyWithMeNickJ said:
i like it it's deep i'd like to hear the rest when it is done
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