Is It BAd?????????

글쓰기 itself should have some purpose. 당신 open your soul 의해 putting all these feelings on the paper 또는 당신 release some bad, dark thoughts.
The deepest feelings inside your heart, written with passion, 사랑 and depth as well will make 시 blazing.

시 is meant to flow as the 심장 beats, 당신 cannot follow a drum if 당신 do not beat one yourself. 시 has a soul, it thrives only if 당신 thrive.

well 시 doesnt have to necesssarily have a concrete 글쓰기 style. u seem like u write in a stream of conciousness, which is good. some of the best thoughts come out that way. the people that tell u that u arent really poet becuse u dont have deeper meaning are wrong. poems can be straightforward as well as abstract. u can try to write with deeper meaning but i say just stick to the way u feel most comfortable.