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It turns out that one of 당신 lucky readers got the judges correct. I won't say who got it right, but all of 당신 get the 설명 along with the 다음 chapter YAY! Does this make up for not 글쓰기 for a couple of days? I hope so. Oh BTW: Happy Birthday to Just_bella yesterday on August 27. Hope 당신 had fun. ^_^

Jacob turned around and saw me. He automaically smiled and walked towards me.
"Is that 당신 Bella?" he asked.
I stood there frozen, not sure what to say. He laughed.
"Yup, she's Bella alright." he laughed.
"What are 당신 doing here? I didn't expect to see 당신 again until I finish college!" I said, excited to see an old friend.
"My 프렌즈 are here before for a little vacation for the weekend. So how's college?" he asked.
"Just here with some friends." I said causually gesturing to Alice.

Alice only glared at Jacob and Jacob was glaring at her. I was about to ask what they were doing but Jacob was faster.
"Er.. it's nice to see 당신 again. Please be careful." he warned.
"What-"
"Just please be careful, for everything 당신 do." he said and walked out of my sight.
My confusion made me feel frustrated.
"He getting to sound like my mom..." I muttered under my breath while turning to Alice.
"Why were 당신 glaring at him like that Alice? That's not nice." I said.

She groaned and looked at me with a serious expression.
"You know him?" she started.
"Jake's my best friend since I was little. I was upset when I had to 옮기기 here for college. I would miss him." I said.
"You had him as a friend?" she nearly shreaked.
"What are 당신 talking about Alice?" I asked.
"Just eat your 피자 first, I'll explain later." she assured me.
I ate slowly thinking about Alice and Jake. What made them look like enemies? They just met!

I didn't bother to ask again once I was done, because everytime I ask, Alice seem to change the subject 또는 run to a store. I sighed.
"Which top? This?" she said while showing me a babydoll white sweater. "Or this?" showing me a long-sleeved mini-dress.
"I don't care." I simply said.
"You don't have a sense of style at all Bella!" Alice pouted.
"Look, 당신 have a better sense of fashion than I do so just pick whatever 당신 like." I said while walking out of the clothing store.

"Where are 당신 going?" Alice asked.
"I'll be in the electronic store right 다음 door. I need to get some batteries for my 책상, 데스크 light." I said.
"Sure thing..." Alice said while walking deeper into the store.
I walked into the electronic store and began looking around. I just lied to Alice so I wouldn't have to be around her and the designing clothings.
Then I passed 의해 some other electronics including phones, laptops, cameras, camcorders and much more.

I should get a camcorder I said in my mind. Mom would like to see what I'm up to during college and it'll be fun. I got enough money with me..... when I pulled out my wallet in my bag, I accidentally dropped my phone. I groaned, and apparenly it broke.
"Cheap phone" I muttered under my breath.
As I said that, Alice walked into the store.
"Just saw your phone fall." she explained.
"So why are 당신 here?" I asked, a little annoyed.
"I'll get 당신 a phone!" she squealed.
"No thanks." I said.
"Come on Bella! I have the perfect phone for 당신 to buy."
"Which is?" I said.
"iPhone! Duh! They are soo cool, it's like a small version of a computer." she said.

"Isn't the monthly price expenive? I can't afford it, and the phone itself is over $300. I don't have that type of money." I argued.
"Like I said Bella, don't worry about the money. I'll buy the phone and I'll pay the monthly for you." she said while already asking the employee for an iPhone.
"Alice.." I whined, feeling guilty for her to pay everything.
"Hush Bella. Money is no object when it comes to the Cullen family."
I sighed, knowing I won't win this battle.
Once she paid, we headed back to the car. I admit that using the phone is addicting. Alice already uploaded everything in less than 5 minutes, with her speed and because she already has one for herself.

Once we shut the car doors and Alice started driving back to campus, I asked the 질문 that had been eating me alive the whole time.
"Just tell me Alice! Why were 당신 two looking at each other so wierd?!?" I said, frustrated.
"You already know that we are vampires...." Alice began.
"JACOB IS A VAMPIRE!?!?!" I yelled.
"Let me finish Bella! Gosh! Jacob is not a vampire, but our mortal enemy along with others his kind."
I gave her a glance, waiting anxiously for her to continue.
"Bella, Jacob is a werewolf."
Then everything turned black.

Jacob: Ok, I'm GLAD that one of 당신 did it!!!!

patrisha727: *sighs* Fine, I'll write the desccription....

Jacob: *Makes an evil grin*

patrisha727: *sticks her tounge out and writes*

Jacob Black

Is an old friend of Bella's since preschool. He is now 17 years old. He lives in La Push. He's a werewolf. He has the same features from the Twilight Saga. He is not dangerous werewolf since he learned to control himself since he was first changed (when he was 13 years old). He used to be Bella's boyfriend for about a year, but broke up because Bella had to go to college. (Bella chose to break up). He was somewhat depressed over the bad break up, but is cheered up when he was Bella again at the mall. Oh yeah, he's the alpha in the pack and hold a HUGE grudge against vampires, esprecially against the Cullens. Is somewhat a protector of Bella, and 당신 will not know why...... (until the 다음 few chapters) ^_^

PLEASE tell me 당신 guys are satisfied now!!!!! Ok? Great, now I gotta do some homework.....
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I 사랑 THIS SONG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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It's an old song, but my whole school and I 사랑 it! ^_^
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Thanks for all of the 코멘트 so far. I hope 당신 guys will enjoy this story, as much as I 사랑 to write it! ^_^

Bella's POV


I woke up to a pair of cold lips on my own, with enthusiasm and impatience. I smiled.
"That's great way to wake up in the morning." I mumbled, opening my eyes slowly. Edward chuckled. "Good Morning, Love."
"Morning, Edward." I said while hopping out of the 침대 with sudden eagerness.
"May I have a human minute?" I asked Edward.
"Go ahead love."

As I head to the bathroom and got into the shower, I suddenly thought of Tray, Penny, and Drake. They were my 프렌즈 from my past life,...
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I DIDN'T WRITE THIS STORY FOR A MONTH!?!?! Ok, that's just... sad. I'm sorry for the long wait. School and writer's block aren't a great combonation. Thanks for being patient and here's your reward for it. PS: Thanks for the help from my writer's block, that was a huge favor for me. :)

Bella's POV

The family came in slowly. I first see the blonde beautiful one, who I assume is Rosalie. Then came along Emmett who had a huge grin on his face. I held back the urge to roll my eyes. Then I see Alice's mate, Jasper along with Edward. The last two couples, who I assume are the parents came in showing...
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Ok here's the 다음 chapter :)


Bella's POV


I continued to glare at Edward while the rest of the band besides me did the exact same thing. They were loyal friends, they knew what Edward have done to me. Edward just stood there speechless.

I let out a cold laugh. "Apperently Edward here needs to sit down 또는 something." I said. Everyone turned their attention to me.
"Let me guess, time for 20 questions?" Rebecca asked.
They nodded.

"How were 당신 changed Bella?" Carlisle asked. I saw that their was sadness in his eyes. I didn't bother to pay attention.
"Victoria." I sneered.

The whole Cullen family flinched....
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My mind is catonic. I admit it ok? Switched is getting nowhere and I'm stuck on Amore, so my true main stories now are Evening Star, Incarnate, and now Unreal if 당신 want it. Please tell me what 당신 think.

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This is just a 미리 보기 for your information. I won't actually start the story until I get your feedbacks ^_^


I have never felt so alive. Isabella Swan's life is perfect. But just in one day, it suddenly disappears right in front of my mind. It's catonic! Another life have yet gone to hell. I want an easy life, not a complicated...
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Look, I know some of 당신 want Amore. I'm sorry! I'm OFFICIALLY stuck on that story. I gotta think. Plz be patient with me.

Bella's POV


As I walked off the stage for intermission, I heard Love Agony playing their all-time hit. It's actually one of my 가장 좋아하는 songs of all time...

I watched them play, and I know I had to do a duet on this song as well, with the lead singer, Matt.

Matt came onto the 피아노 that was on the stage and signaled me to come. Sigh. Here we go. I walked onto the stage staring at the ground, trying to not see the Cullens. I heard Matt starting to play on the piano, and soon...
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Alright, there 당신 guys have it.


All of your stories are AMAZING! And as I said before, 당신 should continue the stories. As a judge, I can't be going personal and make my BFFs have the highest points. So these are the results of the 상단, 맨 위로 three winners.

Third place cici1264's story Bella's Secret Sister

Second Place Nikkytwilight12's story Renesmee Life

FIRST PLACE _madz_'s story!!!!


All of those who have participated will get a letter of appreciation for EVEN making this contest even happen

I have to thank all of the judges who gave pointers, and gave the final results.

Thanks to the judges:
ashesandwine...
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