this is my first MLP fanfic.Tell me if I do good
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무지개, 레인 보우 심장 was trotting around town looking for her best 프렌즈 담홍색, 핑크 Rose and Appletini.Those three were -as Dimond Tiara would say- blank flanks.She gave up and trotted into Sugercube Cornor,and sure enough Pinkie Pie was there "Haiii 무지개, 레인 보우 Heart!What'cha doin' here?" asked the giddy 담홍색, 핑크 pony."I'm lookin' for 담홍색, 핑크 Rose and Appletini.Have 당신 seen em'?"."Yes I did!I think they said they were going to the clubhouse." Pinkie Pie said smileing."Thanks Pinkie!" said 무지개, 레인 보우 behind her shoulder as she raced out."No problem!" shouted Pinkie Pie.Rainbow 심장 got to the 나무, 트리 house and sure enough they were there."Is bout' time 당신 showed up." re-marked Appletini."Well 당신 could told me 당신 were comeing here!" chucked 무지개, 레인 보우 Heart."Sorry.We forgot to." said 담홍색, 핑크 Rose in a sweet voice."Its ok guys." She 무지개, 레인 보우 sitting in her beanbag 다음 to 담홍색, 핑크 Rose."I think we should think of ways to earn are cutie marks." siad Appletini."I have the best idea!" shouted 무지개, 레인 보우 Heart!"What?" said 담홍색, 핑크 Rose and Appletini.......
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to be countinued!
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무지개, 레인 보우 심장 was trotting around town looking for her best 프렌즈 담홍색, 핑크 Rose and Appletini.Those three were -as Dimond Tiara would say- blank flanks.She gave up and trotted into Sugercube Cornor,and sure enough Pinkie Pie was there "Haiii 무지개, 레인 보우 Heart!What'cha doin' here?" asked the giddy 담홍색, 핑크 pony."I'm lookin' for 담홍색, 핑크 Rose and Appletini.Have 당신 seen em'?"."Yes I did!I think they said they were going to the clubhouse." Pinkie Pie said smileing."Thanks Pinkie!" said 무지개, 레인 보우 behind her shoulder as she raced out."No problem!" shouted Pinkie Pie.Rainbow 심장 got to the 나무, 트리 house and sure enough they were there."Is bout' time 당신 showed up." re-marked Appletini."Well 당신 could told me 당신 were comeing here!" chucked 무지개, 레인 보우 Heart."Sorry.We forgot to." said 담홍색, 핑크 Rose in a sweet voice."Its ok guys." She 무지개, 레인 보우 sitting in her beanbag 다음 to 담홍색, 핑크 Rose."I think we should think of ways to earn are cutie marks." siad Appletini."I have the best idea!" shouted 무지개, 레인 보우 Heart!"What?" said 담홍색, 핑크 Rose and Appletini.......
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to be countinued!
this is my first MLP fanfic.Tell me if I do good
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무지개, 레인 보우 심장 was trotting around town looking for her best 프렌즈 담홍색, 핑크 Rose and Appletini.Those three were -as Dimond Tiara would say- blank flanks.She gave up and trotted into Sugercube Cornor,and sure enough Pinkie Pie was there "Haiii 무지개, 레인 보우 Heart!What'cha doin' here?" asked the giddy 담홍색, 핑크 pony."I'm lookin' for 담홍색, 핑크 Rose and Appletini.Have 당신 seen em'?"."Yes I did!I think they said they were going to the clubhouse." Pinkie Pie said smileing."Thanks Pinkie!" said 무지개, 레인 보우 behind her shoulder as she raced out."No problem!" shouted Pinkie Pie.Rainbow 심장 got to the 나무, 트리 house and sure enough they were there."Is bout' time 당신 showed up." re-marked Appletini."Well 당신 could told me 당신 were comeing here!" chucked 무지개, 레인 보우 Heart."Sorry.We forgot to." said 담홍색, 핑크 Rose in a sweet voice."Its ok guys." She 무지개, 레인 보우 sitting in her beanbag 다음 to 담홍색, 핑크 Rose."I think we should think of ways to earn are cutie marks." siad Appletini."I have the best idea!" shouted 무지개, 레인 보우 Heart!"What?" said 담홍색, 핑크 Rose and Appletini.......
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to be countinued!
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무지개, 레인 보우 심장 was trotting around town looking for her best 프렌즈 담홍색, 핑크 Rose and Appletini.Those three were -as Dimond Tiara would say- blank flanks.She gave up and trotted into Sugercube Cornor,and sure enough Pinkie Pie was there "Haiii 무지개, 레인 보우 Heart!What'cha doin' here?" asked the giddy 담홍색, 핑크 pony."I'm lookin' for 담홍색, 핑크 Rose and Appletini.Have 당신 seen em'?"."Yes I did!I think they said they were going to the clubhouse." Pinkie Pie said smileing."Thanks Pinkie!" said 무지개, 레인 보우 behind her shoulder as she raced out."No problem!" shouted Pinkie Pie.Rainbow 심장 got to the 나무, 트리 house and sure enough they were there."Is bout' time 당신 showed up." re-marked Appletini."Well 당신 could told me 당신 were comeing here!" chucked 무지개, 레인 보우 Heart."Sorry.We forgot to." said 담홍색, 핑크 Rose in a sweet voice."Its ok guys." She 무지개, 레인 보우 sitting in her beanbag 다음 to 담홍색, 핑크 Rose."I think we should think of ways to earn are cutie marks." siad Appletini."I have the best idea!" shouted 무지개, 레인 보우 Heart!"What?" said 담홍색, 핑크 Rose and Appletini.......
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to be countinued!