음악 Article: At the edge of Dawn-Lyrics to a song i wrote myself.

3

At the edge of Dawn-Lyrics to a song i wrote myself.

posted by LeoValdez101

Walking down the pathway
Running towards the door,
its closed now----,
Listen to the Voices ,Calling to be heard agian,
Agian.

Pathway made of stone,
River full of Blood,
The Royal Throne,made of bone
Forest Full of darkness,
And above be the Starless----
Night!

(softer)
Can 당신 hear the echoe ,of your footsteps on the Stone?
Can 당신 hear the splatter,of your blood upon the Throne?

Can 당신 hear the clash,of steel apon steel,can 당신 haer the warcrys,of those on the battlefield?

Can 당신 feel the darkness ,at the Edge of-_---_- Dawn---??

reneemonique, dia_alam and 1 other like this

cute20k Hey, this is really good. I think you have potential. I'm not very good at critiquing, but I could hang you over to the guys at songstuff. Songstuff is a site where musicians post their works. There's a forum for everything, from each instrument, to lyrics. I post a lot of my stuff there, and let them eat it up and see what they can get out of it. Most people on the site are very informed, so their critiquing is constructive. If you wanna get some responses from people who know what they're talking about, check out this site and post this. http://forums.songstuff.com/forum/13-lyrics-critique/

dia_alam it's really very nice ....................did u sing it..................i mean did u gave any music in it...................

LeoValdez101 ?? sry dia_alam what??

LeoValdez101 and thanks for the info cute20k!!

dia_alam means did u gave any music 2 it............means did u sing it by urself yet..........................

LeoValdez101 i just sing i cant write music with real notes and such lol

dia_alam ...................

3

음악

added by IamKyon

within temptation

added by nikibella

1

피아노 바탕화면

added by namelessbastard

Kailee Spark Takes Over the Indie 음악 and Pop Scene with her Breakout Song, "Passageways"

posted by whitedarts

Indie and Pop 팬 are ecstatic to be discovering the up and coming musician, Kailee Spark. Spark’s first single and 음악 video, ‘Passageways’, was released on April 19 of this 년 and perfectly captures the road-trip indie vibes we all love, along with the pop sounds that we can’t get enough of. This amazing track can be heard on Spotify here!

A beautiful blue-eyed California baby of the late 80’s, Kailee Spark started taking 피아노 lessons at 8 years old and became forever intrigued with the idea of expressing herself through songwriting. She showcases her passion for the art in...